Spiritual by Top Critiquers Poems
#spiritual
spiritual by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
a return sacrosanct of whispering.
Take my grace
and bend me
to thy will
Surely
you know
It's of yours.
That
desire's
hands
b e c k o n
Thoughts
and wants
traveling
racing
beating
faster
and
faster
still
Anticipation
becomes religion
as
I
kneel before
anxiously
illuminated
in pure
need
Coveting
stolen...
and bend me
to thy will
Surely
you know
It's of yours.
That
desire's
hands
b e c k o n
Thoughts
and wants
traveling
racing
beating
faster
and
faster
still
Anticipation
becomes religion
as
I
kneel before
anxiously
illuminated
in pure
need
Coveting
stolen...
#lust
#erotic
#spiritual
#sensual
#sexy
130 reads
42 Comments
Planetary Alignment
In the quiet temple of time I close my eyes
Full Lotus style in sitting acceptance
Closing my eyes
Elevating my mind, relaxing my heartrates
Transcending to the evolution realm of my Crown Charka
Slowing opening the portal of my Chi
Revealing the doorway to the passage of enlightment
The comforting insignia of my Dragon’s Blood incense sailing
Inhaling the aroma of my foreign allegiance to my ancestral greatness
Conjoining the positive momentum
Purging the unconstructiveness
Allying the spirit of my mind...
Full Lotus style in sitting acceptance
Closing my eyes
Elevating my mind, relaxing my heartrates
Transcending to the evolution realm of my Crown Charka
Slowing opening the portal of my Chi
Revealing the doorway to the passage of enlightment
The comforting insignia of my Dragon’s Blood incense sailing
Inhaling the aroma of my foreign allegiance to my ancestral greatness
Conjoining the positive momentum
Purging the unconstructiveness
Allying the spirit of my mind...
#Buddhist
#spiritual
65 reads
6 Comments
He Stares into Her Eyes
Getting her to believe
A stranger knows
What she can't necessarily see
He stares into her eyes
Strokes the side of her face
Shares coffee
Buys her something sweet
Basks in the moment
Shining in her glow
A stranger knows
What she can't necessarily see
He stares into her eyes
Strokes the side of her face
Shares coffee
Buys her something sweet
Basks in the moment
Shining in her glow
#spiritual
75 reads
6 Comments
Heart of Ruby
I open my heart
to the woman
Who ask me how do I write
My emotion poems
I tell her that I
read romantic novels
watch tv and watch
romantic movies to get into
my emotional state
To the woman who
is wearing a ruby
Thank you for you
have awaken my
Freaking Soul
to the woman
Who ask me how do I write
My emotion poems
I tell her that I
read romantic novels
watch tv and watch
romantic movies to get into
my emotional state
To the woman who
is wearing a ruby
Thank you for you
have awaken my
Freaking Soul
#love
#inspirational
#spiritual
#emotional
#emotions
161 reads
2 Comments
Blueprint
I am the architect of my life
I build the foundation
and choose its contents
Etched into the blueprint
of our birth is knowhow;
routes to overcome experiences
we set forth to conquer
By our own design
our fate was fashioned—
by sheer determination
it will be mastered
if not during this life
then the next—
by our own choice
until we choose rest
~
I build the foundation
and choose its contents
Etched into the blueprint
of our birth is knowhow;
routes to overcome experiences
we set forth to conquer
By our own design
our fate was fashioned—
by sheer determination
it will be mastered
if not during this life
then the next—
by our own choice
until we choose rest
~
#universe
#rebirth
#spiritual #LifeCycle
#spiritual #LifeCycle
134 reads
32 Comments
Dream Quest
Dream Quest
My pilgrimage into deep forest green
over crest of hill into sunken monastery
I follow the circular path
where ascetic monks
greet my world weary soul
Gray bearded sages smile
under darkening sky
on shore of crystal stream
which rolls past rickety shacks
Spring water flows pure from rocky hillside
My heart feels the flow of happiness
yet my feet tread onward
The path to heaven before me
goddess sings to me of home
My pilgrimage into deep forest green
over crest of hill into sunken monastery
I follow the circular path
where ascetic monks
greet my world weary soul
Gray bearded sages smile
under darkening sky
on shore of crystal stream
which rolls past rickety shacks
Spring water flows pure from rocky hillside
My heart feels the flow of happiness
yet my feet tread onward
The path to heaven before me
goddess sings to me of home
#dreams
#nature
#spiritual
20 reads
0 Comments
fragrant infusion art
Ceremoniously
predominantly
male rite
chaste hands cupped
into humming prayer
Berber rugs
hang
transformed
through
leafing
bundled into
a silvery kettle
he pours water
slowly a haze stream
is running free
upon spearmint
inhaling
mystic
aura
preparing
the pot
with first
brew
imbue
your tea
by keeping
the first
glass
aside
cook
burnt
caramel ...
predominantly
male rite
chaste hands cupped
into humming prayer
Berber rugs
hang
transformed
through
leafing
bundled into
a silvery kettle
he pours water
slowly a haze stream
is running free
upon spearmint
inhaling
mystic
aura
preparing
the pot
with first
brew
imbue
your tea
by keeping
the first
glass
aside
cook
burnt
caramel ...
#spiritual
#culture
#tradition
35 reads
6 Comments
Lighthouse Keeper
No matter
how stormy life
or the world
may become,
even when life
becomes dark,
causing panic
causing pain,
there will
always be
a lighthouse,
a tower
of strength
watching
over you,
protecting you,
I am patient
I am the keeper,
and I will
always shine
the light
you need
to give you
safe passage
home.
how stormy life
or the world
may become,
even when life
becomes dark,
causing panic
causing pain,
there will
always be
a lighthouse,
a tower
of strength
watching
over you,
protecting you,
I am patient
I am the keeper,
and I will
always shine
the light
you need
to give you
safe passage
home.
#religion
#faith
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
#redemption
44 reads
16 Comments
IMPOTENCY OF LIES
TRUTH
I've never forgotten
the lessons I learned from
the Dharma taught by
Tibetan Buddist priests
in my quest for enlightenment
and reality.
I've recently been resurrecting
and meditating on a principle
related to Yin-Yang, the power
and role of opposites:
There is light and darkness,
Day and night,
Good and evil.
Truth and lies.
Etched in my cranium
are the words from a
teacher:
"A lie has never liberated
anyone, it may make it seem
to be so for a moment, but
in the end, will be...
I've never forgotten
the lessons I learned from
the Dharma taught by
Tibetan Buddist priests
in my quest for enlightenment
and reality.
I've recently been resurrecting
and meditating on a principle
related to Yin-Yang, the power
and role of opposites:
There is light and darkness,
Day and night,
Good and evil.
Truth and lies.
Etched in my cranium
are the words from a
teacher:
"A lie has never liberated
anyone, it may make it seem
to be so for a moment, but
in the end, will be...
#rebirth
#spiritual
#philosophical
#sacrifice
#tradition
133 reads
7 Comments
No need
No need to go on a long
Pilgrimage to find solace
Long and convoluted
Spiritual tour
No need to go to that
World famous cathedral
In some foreign land
To try to find inner peace
No need for external stimulus.
You need only the peace and quiet
Of that small refuge
Of your own choosing.
Pilgrimage to find solace
Long and convoluted
Spiritual tour
No need to go to that
World famous cathedral
In some foreign land
To try to find inner peace
No need for external stimulus.
You need only the peace and quiet
Of that small refuge
Of your own choosing.
#spiritual
#karma
67 reads
5 Comments
Nameless Gods
The days clouds creating shattering, shadowing furnaces,
None of us could stand so close
To your ceiling an ocean, eyes of a lid in glowing coal
Tempering a fragile strange stare, an old awe,
Glassware that was passed to us
When we were young,
Looking up so frail,
They rise to their grave,
Harbour in the sky
In the bolt of an eye
The godly sins where sunshine ends,
The things you say with the fury you took in the fall
Nameless gods put up your road block,
Play your show and roar
How could we kneel?
How...
None of us could stand so close
To your ceiling an ocean, eyes of a lid in glowing coal
Tempering a fragile strange stare, an old awe,
Glassware that was passed to us
When we were young,
Looking up so frail,
They rise to their grave,
Harbour in the sky
In the bolt of an eye
The godly sins where sunshine ends,
The things you say with the fury you took in the fall
Nameless gods put up your road block,
Play your show and roar
How could we kneel?
How...
#nature
#spiritual
245 reads
12 Comments
Senryu - 12/2/2020 Triptych (Kinda rolls off the tongue)
Stop, remove ear buds
orchestra no tuning needs
natures symphony
Avian choir sings
soft rain peacefully plummets
soul cleansing morning
Throw open windows
whisper cool breeze, circulate
home-bound working joys
orchestra no tuning needs
natures symphony
Avian choir sings
soft rain peacefully plummets
soul cleansing morning
Throw open windows
whisper cool breeze, circulate
home-bound working joys
#love
#silence
#nature
#peace
#spiritual
105 reads
12 Comments
DU Poetry : Spiritual by Top Critiquers Poems