Senryu Seeking Honest Critique Poems

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senryu seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
AspergerPoet56
AspergerPoet56
Poem Published
17th Dec 2024 4:41am

The Ink Stained Mirror

self critical poet
writing mediocre poetry
never be published
 #identity   #LifeAsAWriter 
 #senryu   #WritingPoetry 
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Vision_of_insanity
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
12th Dec 2024 11:14am

Surreal

Her body can't move
Running thoughts create panic
Hallucination
 #confusion   #senryu 
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Vision_of_insanity
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
29th Nov 2024 10:25pm

To Create

Surrounded by words,
Darkness overtakes my light
Interminable
 #LifeAsAWriter   #senryu 
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XiaoLong
XiaoLong
Poem Published
26th Nov 2024 1:38pm

My Delirium

Lavender gardens
scent, an alluring woman
her twilight moments

a seductive bed
her rainbows of carnal thoughts
wanting of all sorts

her blessed desires
Sensually undressing
sexily teasing

she’s proudly lusty
soft fingers definitely
sticky so truly

she is sensitive
her musical melody
her damn hot body

touch of fantasy
delightfully feminine
tasteful dopamine

poetic panties
pleasantly it’s for gifting
hopefully starts fucking

divine nakedness ...
 #erotic   #haiku   #passion   #senryu   #sexy 
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Green_Arrow
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
17th Nov 2024 8:09pm

Enjoyed Him Entering Her

Celeste sat naked
on Russell's lap and enjoyed
him entering her.
 #fiction   #friendship   #lover   #senryu   #sex 
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Vision_of_insanity
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
16th Nov 2024 7:47pm

My heart that cries

Rain hits the window
There's more water in my eyes
I long for your love
 #loneliness   #love 
 #sadness   #senryu 
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Vision_of_insanity
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
16th Nov 2024 7:46pm

Infinite

Let's count all the stars
They tell me how small we are
Fragile existence
 #senryu   #TruthOfLife   #universe 
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Vision_of_insanity
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
16th Nov 2024 10:48am

Possibilities around every corner

I found a way here
Led me to another view
Love gave me a clue
 #happiness   #love   #motivational   #senryu   #uplifting 
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Vision_of_insanity
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
16th Nov 2024 10:34am

Dreaming of Love

Sitting here alone
Waiting for someone to love
How long will I wait?
 #loneliness   #love 
 #sadness   #senryu 
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slipalong
slipalong
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 2:43pm

Overflowing

Bubbles foam and rise
Champers corks, they fill the skies
Bride and Groom, betrothed.
 #senryu 
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Green_Arrow
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 2:29pm

When One Gets Drunk At A Bar

Josh gulped a few beers.
He saw Kate's dress sliding off.
Josh woke up naked.
 #addiction   #alcohol   #fiction   #senryu   #sex 
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SonderNinja
SonderNinja
BenjaminEC
Poem Published
27th Oct 2024 9:13pm

Body Horror

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Neck and shoulders groan    
when my back acts like a prick.    
     
Brain is an asshole.    
     
     
     
     
     
     
     
     
     
     
     
 
 #aging   #senryu 
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