Senryu Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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senryu seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
slipalong
Poem Published
Today 6:53pm
Today 6:53pm
Late poets
Was their last sentence
detrmined by faith or fate
comma, or full stop.
detrmined by faith or fate
comma, or full stop.
#senryu
7 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
29th Nov 2024 10:25pm
29th Nov 2024 10:25pm
To Create
Surrounded by words,
Darkness overtakes my light
Interminable
Darkness overtakes my light
Interminable
#LifeAsAWriter
#senryu
56 reads
6 Comments
XiaoLong
Poem Published
26th Nov 2024 1:38pm
26th Nov 2024 1:38pm
My Delirium
Lavender gardens
scent, an alluring woman
her twilight moments
a seductive bed
her rainbows of carnal thoughts
wanting of all sorts
her blessed desires
Sensually undressing
sexily teasing
she’s proudly lusty
soft fingers definitely
sticky so truly
she is sensitive
her musical melody
her damn hot body
touch of fantasy
delightfully feminine
tasteful dopamine
poetic panties
pleasantly it’s for gifting
hopefully starts fucking
divine nakedness ...
scent, an alluring woman
her twilight moments
a seductive bed
her rainbows of carnal thoughts
wanting of all sorts
her blessed desires
Sensually undressing
sexily teasing
she’s proudly lusty
soft fingers definitely
sticky so truly
she is sensitive
her musical melody
her damn hot body
touch of fantasy
delightfully feminine
tasteful dopamine
poetic panties
pleasantly it’s for gifting
hopefully starts fucking
divine nakedness ...
#erotic
#haiku
#passion
#senryu
#sexy
148 reads
5 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
17th Nov 2024 8:09pm
17th Nov 2024 8:09pm
Enjoyed Him Entering Her
Celeste sat naked
on Russell's lap and enjoyed
him entering her.
on Russell's lap and enjoyed
him entering her.
#fiction
#friendship
#lover
#senryu
#sex
180 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
16th Nov 2024 7:47pm
16th Nov 2024 7:47pm
My heart that cries
Rain hits the window
There's more water in my eyes
I long for your love
There's more water in my eyes
I long for your love
#loneliness
#love
#sadness #senryu
#sadness #senryu
67 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
16th Nov 2024 7:46pm
16th Nov 2024 7:46pm
Infinite
Let's count all the stars
They tell me how small we are
Fragile existence
They tell me how small we are
Fragile existence
#senryu
#TruthOfLife
#universe
58 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
16th Nov 2024 10:48am
16th Nov 2024 10:48am
Possibilities around every corner
I found a way here
Led me to another view
Love gave me a clue
Led me to another view
Love gave me a clue
#happiness
#love
#motivational
#senryu
#uplifting
50 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
16th Nov 2024 10:34am
16th Nov 2024 10:34am
Dreaming of Love
Sitting here alone
Waiting for someone to love
How long will I wait?
Waiting for someone to love
How long will I wait?
#loneliness
#love
#sadness #senryu
#sadness #senryu
51 reads
2 Comments
slipalong
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 2:43pm
7th Nov 2024 2:43pm
Overflowing
Bubbles foam and rise
Champers corks, they fill the skies
Bride and Groom, betrothed.
Champers corks, they fill the skies
Bride and Groom, betrothed.
#senryu
47 reads
1 Comment
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
7th Nov 2024 2:29pm
7th Nov 2024 2:29pm
When One Gets Drunk At A Bar
Josh gulped a few beers.
He saw Kate's dress sliding off.
Josh woke up naked.
He saw Kate's dress sliding off.
Josh woke up naked.
#addiction
#alcohol
#fiction
#senryu
#sex
127 reads
2 Comments
SonderNinja
BenjaminEC
BenjaminEC
Poem Published
27th Oct 2024 9:13pm
27th Oct 2024 9:13pm
Body Horror
..
Neck and shoulders groan
when my back acts like a prick.
Brain is an asshole.
Neck and shoulders groan
when my back acts like a prick.
Brain is an asshole.
#aging
#senryu
83 reads
0 Comments
XiaoLong
Poem Published
27th Oct 2024 1:23am
27th Oct 2024 1:23am
Artwork Sublime
She simply wonders
entire day lost in words
anticipation
Her man awaits her
her nervousness betters her
lost in expression
He greets her with passion
gropes her with an intention
teasing sensations
She embraces him
kissing him at the entrance
sharing her pulsations
In the lift they enter
moaning, she just surrenders
yet an alluring temptress
pantyless she was
blissfully wet without thought
her daddy she sought
mindlessly surrenders
she knew it’s a night...
entire day lost in words
anticipation
Her man awaits her
her nervousness betters her
lost in expression
He greets her with passion
gropes her with an intention
teasing sensations
She embraces him
kissing him at the entrance
sharing her pulsations
In the lift they enter
moaning, she just surrenders
yet an alluring temptress
pantyless she was
blissfully wet without thought
her daddy she sought
mindlessly surrenders
she knew it’s a night...
#haiku
#seductive
#senryu #sensual
#senryu #sensual
134 reads
3 Comments
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