Senryu Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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senryu seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
26th Jan 2025 1:07pm
26th Jan 2025 1:07pm
The Wish
My heart is for you
When I opened up my eyes
I wish you were mine
When I opened up my eyes
I wish you were mine
#dreams
#love
#mystery
#sadness
#senryu
95 reads
16 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
26th Jan 2025 1:05pm
26th Jan 2025 1:05pm
Broken Hearts
I sail the seas with pride
You can't hide your heart
You shouldn't deny your love
You can't hide your heart
You shouldn't deny your love
#love
#sea
#senryu
#shadows
#vulnerability
85 reads
14 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
24th Jan 2025 2:02pm
24th Jan 2025 2:02pm
No boundries
White sand is nonstop
The hourglass will betray
We'll forever love
The hourglass will betray
We'll forever love
#aging
#LifeCycle
#love #senryu
#love #senryu
64 reads
14 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
17th Jan 2025 9:20pm
17th Jan 2025 9:20pm
Keep trying until you get it right
Two hours ago
I tried to take my own life
I'll try again soon
I tried to take my own life
I'll try again soon
#satirical
#senryu
#suicide
77 reads
13 Comments
Roadisattva
Ian Kenney
Ian Kenney
Poem Published
16th Jan 2025 1:59pm
16th Jan 2025 1:59pm
Tight Connections
tight connections
one last round
at the airport bar
one last round
at the airport bar
#senryu
41 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
16th Jan 2025 11:25am
16th Jan 2025 11:25am
A Slow Demise
Like old photographs,
memories fade over time
Part of me has died
memories fade over time
Part of me has died
#aging
#memories
#senryu
93 reads
8 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
15th Jan 2025 7:38pm
15th Jan 2025 7:38pm
Here We Are. Your Favorite Christmas Presents.
#Christmas
#fiction
#friendship
#senryu
#sex
100 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 10:14am
8th Jan 2025 10:14am
The Assist
Hurt creates anger
Anger triggers oppressed thoughts
Lend someone a hand
Anger triggers oppressed thoughts
Lend someone a hand
#friendship
#hurt
#oppression
#senryu
#support
69 reads
13 Comments
Roadisattva
Ian Kenney
Ian Kenney
Poem Published
6th Jan 2025 6:46pm
6th Jan 2025 6:46pm
Winter's Chill
winter's chill
the barista draws a heart
after my name
the barista draws a heart
after my name
#senryu
69 reads
2 Comments
Roadisattva
Ian Kenney
Ian Kenney
Poem Published
5th Jan 2025 2:10pm
5th Jan 2025 2:10pm
Neon Carnival
neon carnival
of shattered souls
midweek mall
of shattered souls
midweek mall
#senryu
76 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
30th Dec 2024 8:08pm
30th Dec 2024 8:08pm
Heads your dead
I have two choices
Should I pull the plug or not?
I should flip a coin
Should I pull the plug or not?
I should flip a coin
#choices
#LifeChangingMoment
#senryu
69 reads
10 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
27th Dec 2024 8:27pm
27th Dec 2024 8:27pm
Have you smiled today?
Smiling for myself
Pleasure is what you create
Just one life to give
Pleasure is what you create
Just one life to give
#happiness
#senryu
#uplifting
113 reads
10 Comments
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