Senryu Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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BenjaminEC
BenjaminEC
Poem Published
11th Apr 2025 11:44pm
11th Apr 2025 11:44pm
One Last Requiem for the Hill Folk
Just like the mountains,
you never fully notice
until they are gone.
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#minimalist
#sadness #senryu
#sadness #senryu
131 reads
3 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
29th Mar 2025 10:02pm
29th Mar 2025 10:02pm
A genuine smile?
My smile hides me
I can mislead all of you
Hurt, a distant tear
I can mislead all of you
Hurt, a distant tear
#hurt
#sadness
#senryu
76 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
29th Mar 2025 9:56pm
29th Mar 2025 9:56pm
The lying truth
I have lied through life
I've been caught dozens of times
My life's a facade
I've been caught dozens of times
My life's a facade
#hypocrisy
#lies
#senryu
80 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
26th Mar 2025 10:02am
26th Mar 2025 10:02am
Wednesday Wisdom
Create is to live
Feelings can tangle with words
Restrict is to die
Feelings can tangle with words
Restrict is to die
#philosophical
#senryu
76 reads
4 Comments
AspergerPoet56
Poem Published
17th Mar 2025 10:30am
17th Mar 2025 10:30am
Vision of Beauty (A Soul's Illumination)
eyes of love ~ have faith
in the vision of beauty
that lights up their soul
in the vision of beauty
that lights up their soul
#crush
#love
#senryu
127 reads
3 Comments
AspergerPoet56
Poem Published
16th Mar 2025 5:59pm
16th Mar 2025 5:59pm
Wide Open
little dignity
left ~ leaving my heart open
to love's destruction
left ~ leaving my heart open
to love's destruction
#love
#senryu
#UnrequitedLove
85 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th Mar 2025 9:27am
14th Mar 2025 9:27am
Don't think about it, do it!
The weekend is here
Let's get out, and have some fun
Stop waiting around
Get up and do it!
Before you know it, life's over
Let's make memories
Let's get out, and have some fun
Stop waiting around
Get up and do it!
Before you know it, life's over
Let's make memories
#happiness
#inspirational
#motivational
#senryu
#uplifting
120 reads
10 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
10th Mar 2025 9:11pm
10th Mar 2025 9:11pm
Success!
Three hours ago
She tried to take her own life
I'll help her succeed
She tried to take her own life
I'll help her succeed
#dark
#murder
#satirical
#senryu
#suicide
176 reads
15 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
9th Mar 2025 5:33pm
9th Mar 2025 5:33pm
Less is Happiness
As if I should care
The less I can understand
Makes me feel joyful
The less I can understand
Makes me feel joyful
#happiness
#ignorance
#senryu
139 reads
16 Comments
Ljdynamic
Poem Published
9th Mar 2025 00:31am
9th Mar 2025 00:31am
Just Love
Hey, Jigg82,
I love you so freaking much.
Just letting you know.
I love you so freaking much.
Just letting you know.
#boyfriend
#ILoveYou
#senryu
28 reads
6 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
7th Mar 2025 11:33am
7th Mar 2025 11:33am
Imagine
If Lennon was here,
Would he still minister peace?
Our world's in danger
Would he still minister peace?
Our world's in danger
#earth
#happiness
#music
#peace
#senryu
112 reads
10 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
6th Mar 2025 10:35am
6th Mar 2025 10:35am
random 3 (spirited) senryus ~of & ~from the day
viz: 3 senryu
#love
#minimalist
#senryu #spiritual
#senryu #spiritual
149 reads
2 Comments
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