Rap Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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LibraSoul96
Poem Published
2nd Sep 2021 6:41pm
2nd Sep 2021 6:41pm
Talk my Shit
Road running to the money trying not to crash out like bandicoot
I refuse to settle for a spiritually broken man, so you better scoot
I lay all my cards out on the line like a game of spades
You cannot break me down manipulate me for your own sick kicks,
So no I cannot be swayed
Trying to put your creme in my oreos
I taste like honey nut, but to bad you can't stick your cock in my cheerios
Feeding me bullshit talking about you gone break me off like a kit kat bar.
Saying you a freak, how you gone hop on top and ride me like a stolen car ...
I refuse to settle for a spiritually broken man, so you better scoot
I lay all my cards out on the line like a game of spades
You cannot break me down manipulate me for your own sick kicks,
So no I cannot be swayed
Trying to put your creme in my oreos
I taste like honey nut, but to bad you can't stick your cock in my cheerios
Feeding me bullshit talking about you gone break me off like a kit kat bar.
Saying you a freak, how you gone hop on top and ride me like a stolen car ...
#SelfReflection
#rap
#SelfWorth
914 reads
22 Comments
LokiOfLiterati
Poem Published
13th Aug 2021 7:26am
13th Aug 2021 7:26am
Just a f**king joke, yo
No preamble, fuck it / Teach your kids: This used to be a republic / Blame The Usual Suspects / Conveniently they always stay around / Is the world still our American playground? / Reagan babies / Raised by punk rock used to salute when they hung the flag upside down / Now we approve of puppets and clowns / Geriatric prop up wearing the crown / Bounds of Seers / Digital towns and tiers / Sounds so much nearer / Being clearer / Like peering at a mirror / And only seeing a sheet of glass peering back / Adapt up / Stack the touch / Fast luck route / “Fuck!” is the plural of “Ouch” / The...
#rap
#nostalgia
#philosophical
463 reads
0 Comments
da_poetic-edifier
Damon
Damon
Poem Published
11th Aug 2021 3:55am
11th Aug 2021 3:55am
2pac Apocalypse
He had premonitions of being hit by ammunition on All Eyez
Gave a visual depiction of the transition of him meeting his demise
On I Ain't Mad At U he provided a preview of what came to fruition
He creatively spoke of death frequently with clairvoyance vision
Sometimes contradiction entered the equation of what he devised
Trying to balance the division of the two sides inside of a Gemini
He'd ride on his enemies lyrically then intelligently transition
To convey messages about subjugation and other deplorable conditions
The...
Gave a visual depiction of the transition of him meeting his demise
On I Ain't Mad At U he provided a preview of what came to fruition
He creatively spoke of death frequently with clairvoyance vision
Sometimes contradiction entered the equation of what he devised
Trying to balance the division of the two sides inside of a Gemini
He'd ride on his enemies lyrically then intelligently transition
To convey messages about subjugation and other deplorable conditions
The...
#death
#music
#apocalypse
#rap
#admiration
586 reads
9 Comments
da_poetic-edifier
Damon
Damon
Poem Published
6th Jul 2021 10:29am
6th Jul 2021 10:29am
THE M YOU SIC
I admire wordplay but admonish gun play
It's bigger than HipHop so watch what you say
Today, lines of reality & fallacy are irreparably blurred
And my perception of the melodic weapon is disturbed
Over a billion served under its big, golden arches
The M u sic on the airwaves is landing fatal punches
No amount of crunches can prepare the GOD body
To handle blows that flow outta barrels of shotties
Bodies are dropping left and right, day and night
Yet, the steel is still glamorized under bright lights
We're losing the...
It's bigger than HipHop so watch what you say
Today, lines of reality & fallacy are irreparably blurred
And my perception of the melodic weapon is disturbed
Over a billion served under its big, golden arches
The M u sic on the airwaves is landing fatal punches
No amount of crunches can prepare the GOD body
To handle blows that flow outta barrels of shotties
Bodies are dropping left and right, day and night
Yet, the steel is still glamorized under bright lights
We're losing the...
#murder
#death
#music
#rap
#deception
950 reads
12 Comments
WeesusMadimas
n1lkcj
n1lkcj
Poem Published
1st Jun 2021 5:19am
1st Jun 2021 5:19am
Deadline
Over caffeinated
Feel Exasperated
From the time I've wasted
Feeling so deflated
Under clocks I sit
Times slipping shit
I cant hold on to it
Tik-tok it wont stop
It makes me wonna quit
But for the sake of the next break of dawn
I march on
To brighter days
I keep the light in me
No more: if you, meant to. Wish you woulda did it
Cause you gotta admit it
We all feel this way
Gotta keep our...
Feel Exasperated
From the time I've wasted
Feeling so deflated
Under clocks I sit
Times slipping shit
I cant hold on to it
Tik-tok it wont stop
It makes me wonna quit
But for the sake of the next break of dawn
I march on
To brighter days
I keep the light in me
No more: if you, meant to. Wish you woulda did it
Cause you gotta admit it
We all feel this way
Gotta keep our...
#anxiety
#hope
#rap #passion
#rap #passion
569 reads
5 Comments
WeesusMadimas
n1lkcj
n1lkcj
Poem Published
28th May 2021 7:48am
28th May 2021 7:48am
Adamant
I'm reinventing ascending while gritting my teeth cause, I cant sleep. No not a wink.
These empty halls. crazy thoughts. and white walls. They take it all but never leave me be. Excreting insanity. defecating calamity.
Talking pallbearers with night terrors pushing tongues to the cheek. Facing defeat.
They look at me. with pity. but its me. that can see. That their eyes. yeah they lie. And they hide. Right behind. Poor disguise.
You better step aside. Cause this is me. Picking up speed. Hauling my fruity ass right down the street.
...
These empty halls. crazy thoughts. and white walls. They take it all but never leave me be. Excreting insanity. defecating calamity.
Talking pallbearers with night terrors pushing tongues to the cheek. Facing defeat.
They look at me. with pity. but its me. that can see. That their eyes. yeah they lie. And they hide. Right behind. Poor disguise.
You better step aside. Cause this is me. Picking up speed. Hauling my fruity ass right down the street.
...
#anxiety
#insomnia
#rap #SelfWorth
#rap #SelfWorth
527 reads
4 Comments
DCLXVI_1989
Poem Published
4th May 2021 6:49am
4th May 2021 6:49am
Dick Crack
Bitch
Get
Back
From my
Dick
Crack
Hurtin' from the Squirtin'
Shit'll hit back
Spewin' gettin' loose and
Pull the click clack
Handin' what I'm landin'
From the clit slap
I said ho
Get back
From my dick crack
Addicted so relentless
You can get that
Pipin' while she snipin'
Clear the lint trap
Dialin' while she wildin'
Sippin'my hip flask
A-dick'tid to my give
Move em hips
Slide across your lips
Bend...
Get
Back
From my
Dick
Crack
Hurtin' from the Squirtin'
Shit'll hit back
Spewin' gettin' loose and
Pull the click clack
Handin' what I'm landin'
From the clit slap
I said ho
Get back
From my dick crack
Addicted so relentless
You can get that
Pipin' while she snipin'
Clear the lint trap
Dialin' while she wildin'
Sippin'my hip flask
A-dick'tid to my give
Move em hips
Slide across your lips
Bend...
#rap
808 reads
4 Comments
u53l355
Poem Published
19th Apr 2021 2:44pm
19th Apr 2021 2:44pm
Bully Bait
Why don’t you Hang around for a little while
With ya shoes 2 feet above the kitchen tiles
You think that my life is all rainbows and fucking smiles
Don’t know me from all the other piles
Of people chasing life's happiness
I'm holding a rock at the bottom of the loch ness
Monsters in my head as the hate keeps brewing
Stewing over times where i wanted die chewing
sponges soaked in cyanide
Blood dripping out my fucking eyes
Tryna hide away from the memories
Flash backs of dumb shit thats been said to me
Actions speak louder...
With ya shoes 2 feet above the kitchen tiles
You think that my life is all rainbows and fucking smiles
Don’t know me from all the other piles
Of people chasing life's happiness
I'm holding a rock at the bottom of the loch ness
Monsters in my head as the hate keeps brewing
Stewing over times where i wanted die chewing
sponges soaked in cyanide
Blood dripping out my fucking eyes
Tryna hide away from the memories
Flash backs of dumb shit thats been said to me
Actions speak louder...
#lyrics
#rap
#SelfWorth
641 reads
0 Comments
archie23
Poem Published
12th Apr 2021 8:37am
12th Apr 2021 8:37am
TIPPEDY TIP TAP RAP (English version)
TIPPIDDY TIP TAP RAP (Basic English version)
Tippiddy tip tap rap
tickle my dick back A.S.A.P
Slipped through a sick slick ass crack
and slap a bare unaware nut sack
and feed the need to spread the seed
with diseased ease displeased
Hire us to spread the virus
rewire us, then fire us
Cherish the chair-
Perish fresh air -
Enjoy -
Envoy-
Tippidy tip tap rap
Tippiddy tip tap rap
tickle my dick back A.S.A.P
Slipped through a sick slick ass crack
and slap a bare unaware nut sack
and feed the need to spread the seed
with diseased ease displeased
Hire us to spread the virus
rewire us, then fire us
Cherish the chair-
Perish fresh air -
Enjoy -
Envoy-
Tippidy tip tap rap
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#rap
#steampunk
609 reads
3 Comments
Drieks
Poem Published
9th Apr 2021 11:42pm
9th Apr 2021 11:42pm
Womanizer
I like to think that I’m the better kind of man.
I like to think that I already kinda am.
I know I’m not. Hell, not by a long shot.
I pretend I am so I don’t end up single again.
What is this dance I can’t seem to get out of?
I act so dense, got no plans to be proud of.
Leaving a trail of lost interests that caused many
women to leave their spouse for some dude on the internet.
It’s an addiction.
Breaking up families goes way too smooth.
Zero friction.
I’m the devil’s worst...
I like to think that I already kinda am.
I know I’m not. Hell, not by a long shot.
I pretend I am so I don’t end up single again.
What is this dance I can’t seem to get out of?
I act so dense, got no plans to be proud of.
Leaving a trail of lost interests that caused many
women to leave their spouse for some dude on the internet.
It’s an addiction.
Breaking up families goes way too smooth.
Zero friction.
I’m the devil’s worst...
#lies
#betrayal
#abuse
#rap
#deception
685 reads
8 Comments
LostViking
Lost Viking
Lost Viking
Poem Published
26th Mar 2021 1:03pm
26th Mar 2021 1:03pm
Put My Stick in Overdrive
#sex
#rap
572 reads
2 Comments
anna_grin
ANNAN
ANNAN
Poem Published
14th Mar 2021 10:07pm
14th Mar 2021 10:07pm
im sorry, who?
he flicky the wrong switch
instigate with the wrong bitch
clicky clicky he screenshot the wrong shit
accidentally sent his mum a dick pic
must be sicky his hands are sticky
he sniffy sniffy and licky licky
fuckin hickey thinks he’s slick he
wishes he could fuckin hit me
i could go on but this is bricky
(breakdown)
oh, im sorry
did that not make any fucking sense to you?
my bad
oh, is it? i didn’t know
sorry, it doesn’t rhyme? doesn’t it?
oh well
tell it to your boy slim
(gunshot) ...
instigate with the wrong bitch
clicky clicky he screenshot the wrong shit
accidentally sent his mum a dick pic
must be sicky his hands are sticky
he sniffy sniffy and licky licky
fuckin hickey thinks he’s slick he
wishes he could fuckin hit me
i could go on but this is bricky
(breakdown)
oh, im sorry
did that not make any fucking sense to you?
my bad
oh, is it? i didn’t know
sorry, it doesn’t rhyme? doesn’t it?
oh well
tell it to your boy slim
(gunshot) ...
#rap
1125 reads
8 Comments
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