Rap by Top Critiquers Poems
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rap by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
9th Nov 2019 1:53pm
9th Nov 2019 1:53pm
In The Game~with the Badass DevilsChild
#dark
#evil
#rap
618 reads
7 Comments
nightbirdblue
enbyblue
enbyblue
Poem Published
29th Mar 2022 1:10am
29th Mar 2022 1:10am
Sick Schket
i jus keep rappin n writin it all down
spillin my guts like i’ma bout to skip town
makin plans dreamin bout the west coast
so see ya later but then again maybe i won’t
obsessin over voices spillin outa my head
can’t fkn focus on my work for more thana min
tryna rhyme everythin like a neurotic compulsion my own predispositions are fkn revolting
like who do i think i am, somethin fkn holy
that’s laughable when i’m so fkn toxic n lonely
bored with this life n can’t stop yappin about it
wanna tell them all to fuck off n get fkn violent...
spillin my guts like i’ma bout to skip town
makin plans dreamin bout the west coast
so see ya later but then again maybe i won’t
obsessin over voices spillin outa my head
can’t fkn focus on my work for more thana min
tryna rhyme everythin like a neurotic compulsion my own predispositions are fkn revolting
like who do i think i am, somethin fkn holy
that’s laughable when i’m so fkn toxic n lonely
bored with this life n can’t stop yappin about it
wanna tell them all to fuck off n get fkn violent...
#loneliness
#violence
#MentalHealth
#rap
#responsibility
928 reads
8 Comments
Connotation
Poem Published
1st Apr 2024 1:15am
1st Apr 2024 1:15am
Practice Bars
Ya neck snaps as I grab your attention.
A head bang and a graphic direction.
My "techs clap" like an Apple convention.
Connects "hang" like a dangling necklace.
Some lawn work - "move green" like Hulk.
Got all the blue dream in bulk.
The chakra, Scooby in jolts.
Them kinds of clues lead to coke.
I'm "on the blocks" like a gutted Deville.
Still forming plots of the thuggery thrill.
My quarry rocks pay me utmost in bills.
Mind more to guap than a couple of pills.
...
A head bang and a graphic direction.
My "techs clap" like an Apple convention.
Connects "hang" like a dangling necklace.
Some lawn work - "move green" like Hulk.
Got all the blue dream in bulk.
The chakra, Scooby in jolts.
Them kinds of clues lead to coke.
I'm "on the blocks" like a gutted Deville.
Still forming plots of the thuggery thrill.
My quarry rocks pay me utmost in bills.
Mind more to guap than a couple of pills.
...
#rhyming
#lyrics
#myself
#rap
#metaphor
136 reads
5 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
11th May 2020 6:02pm
11th May 2020 6:02pm
Damn These Bars
Freeze! Please don’t light that match or I’ll call dispatch
These bars may catch ire fire and there is no escape hatch
Watch out for the flames when I aim to tame then proclaim -
It’s my turn to burn because I yearn to play this rapping game
My vocabulary can be very hairy so be wary of how I spill
Still my quill is chill with a thrill when I dig and run this drill
Is just that the word stirs and spurs running like herds grazing
But writing rhymes is like fighting crimes with all guns blazing
Don’t blink because this ink will sync in with...
These bars may catch ire fire and there is no escape hatch
Watch out for the flames when I aim to tame then proclaim -
It’s my turn to burn because I yearn to play this rapping game
My vocabulary can be very hairy so be wary of how I spill
Still my quill is chill with a thrill when I dig and run this drill
Is just that the word stirs and spurs running like herds grazing
But writing rhymes is like fighting crimes with all guns blazing
Don’t blink because this ink will sync in with...
#funny
#LifeAsAWriter
#WritingPoetry #rap
#WritingPoetry #rap
1013 reads
10 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
17th Feb 2022 7:24pm
17th Feb 2022 7:24pm
Honoring The Legends Of Gangsta’s Paradise
These motherfuckas must don’t know who they are fucking with
What, you think a sista can’t have an education, and still roll up on some good hard dick
Taking you down with a head shot hit
Making it happen when you come taking that yang in my hood
I will fuck you up without recognition so don’t get my mission misunderstood
You know how I represent myself, flying bullets have no names on them once felt
Moving the coke, bitches, and gun whipping a snitch, cementing his shoes so his crew know his ass been straight...
What, you think a sista can’t have an education, and still roll up on some good hard dick
Taking you down with a head shot hit
Making it happen when you come taking that yang in my hood
I will fuck you up without recognition so don’t get my mission misunderstood
You know how I represent myself, flying bullets have no names on them once felt
Moving the coke, bitches, and gun whipping a snitch, cementing his shoes so his crew know his ass been straight...
#city
#rap
#culture
611 reads
9 Comments
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
19th Apr 2024 8:09pm
19th Apr 2024 8:09pm
Sinister Sins of Poetry
I’m considered by many as half man and half motherfucka
So to you sensitive ass bitches both sides will never love ya’,
“On that starting line so to the disrespectful fucka I’m going in first
Putting in the work so bruh-bruh prepare for the hurt,
“Not only do I have one middle finger, but I have two
No explanation-you know what the sign language translates too,
“So it’s on a motherfucka if they wanna catch a double disrespect
If not take your medicine and go get some uncomfortable rest,
“I send motherfuckas to bed...
So to you sensitive ass bitches both sides will never love ya’,
“On that starting line so to the disrespectful fucka I’m going in first
Putting in the work so bruh-bruh prepare for the hurt,
“Not only do I have one middle finger, but I have two
No explanation-you know what the sign language translates too,
“So it’s on a motherfucka if they wanna catch a double disrespect
If not take your medicine and go get some uncomfortable rest,
“I send motherfuckas to bed...
#rap
79 reads
2 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
9th Nov 2019 1:17pm
9th Nov 2019 1:17pm
In The Game~with the talented DevilsChild
#dark
#evil
#rap
527 reads
9 Comments
eswaller
Poem Published
15th May 2020 7:08am
15th May 2020 7:08am
Note to Myself
I can never forget where I came from,
Fresh from the womb and 28 years later
I am no longer a tiny or singular crumb
On the horizon. I can never be a traitor
To my parents who gave me life, nor can
I betray my heart that never gave up on
Me. I can never be dependent on a man
To give me happiness or love and gone
Are days of darkness as the light streams
In. People think they can be the ones to
Steer me away from the dreary dreams
Keeping me up late, but I constantly grew
Tired of people thinking they know me ...
Fresh from the womb and 28 years later
I am no longer a tiny or singular crumb
On the horizon. I can never be a traitor
To my parents who gave me life, nor can
I betray my heart that never gave up on
Me. I can never be dependent on a man
To give me happiness or love and gone
Are days of darkness as the light streams
In. People think they can be the ones to
Steer me away from the dreary dreams
Keeping me up late, but I constantly grew
Tired of people thinking they know me ...
#happiness
#uplifting
#SelfReflection #rap
#SelfReflection #rap
553 reads
4 Comments
LibraSoul96
Poem Published
8th Jan 2023 4:47am
8th Jan 2023 4:47am
Disney Things
Just woke up, I was sleeping, like a real beauty
On my Aladdin flow, daddy come ride my magic carpet
Money ain't a issue, I just got that notification
Here comes another deposit
Serving little mermaid baby come and take a tour in my sea
Use the gills if you need to breath into me from down under
Please take a swim into my budding rose, like your name is Flounder
Diamonds sparkle so bright, like Cinderella's slipper
A true Belle of the ball knows how to tame a beast
Step out of line and he will make sure you will lay deceased ...
On my Aladdin flow, daddy come ride my magic carpet
Money ain't a issue, I just got that notification
Here comes another deposit
Serving little mermaid baby come and take a tour in my sea
Use the gills if you need to breath into me from down under
Please take a swim into my budding rose, like your name is Flounder
Diamonds sparkle so bright, like Cinderella's slipper
A true Belle of the ball knows how to tame a beast
Step out of line and he will make sure you will lay deceased ...
#rap
535 reads
4 Comments
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