Rap Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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LibraSoul96
Poem Published
6th Jan 2025 1:41am
6th Jan 2025 1:41am
Spit it out
DOA (Dead on arrival)
Dearly departed to all of my rivals
No one gives a fuck about you
So there will be no ink wasted on heartfelt obituaries
I'm the alpha and the omega, so a real deity knows how to mark all of her territories
Michael Jackson moonwalking in these bloody red bottoms
I know how to aim for my target, call me Mrs. Spot em and got em
Russian Roulette, my words are the bullets that have no name on it
This competition is kind of dry, do you mind if I wet it with the game that I spit ...
Dearly departed to all of my rivals
No one gives a fuck about you
So there will be no ink wasted on heartfelt obituaries
I'm the alpha and the omega, so a real deity knows how to mark all of her territories
Michael Jackson moonwalking in these bloody red bottoms
I know how to aim for my target, call me Mrs. Spot em and got em
Russian Roulette, my words are the bullets that have no name on it
This competition is kind of dry, do you mind if I wet it with the game that I spit ...
#rap
#SelfReflection
#SelfWorth
175 reads
11 Comments
ExercisingDemons
Poem Published
5th Sep 2024 3:30am
5th Sep 2024 3:30am
I Don't Trust My Own 2 Feet Or Know what To Share About Their Steps From Here to There
Goose, moose, loose, noose
spruce, truce, whose line is it?
oh its mine,
ya I'm fine
no I don't dine
or drink wine
or whine except when I stub my toe
or lose my snub nose or miss a bug grow
One in a window, one that I know,
a spider or spider or spider
or a spider, one of those,
one with lots of eyes
and a diet that's gross
I watch them through a haze
of glass uncleaned, ...
spruce, truce, whose line is it?
oh its mine,
ya I'm fine
no I don't dine
or drink wine
or whine except when I stub my toe
or lose my snub nose or miss a bug grow
One in a window, one that I know,
a spider or spider or spider
or a spider, one of those,
one with lots of eyes
and a diet that's gross
I watch them through a haze
of glass uncleaned, ...
#rap
508 reads
0 Comments
Yosef_Amaryahu
Poem Published
11th Jun 2024 7:45am
11th Jun 2024 7:45am
Erupting Storm
Went from bad habits,
To stabbing tablets, of Moses wisdom
Scripts of weed, watch me grab it,
Got damn it,
Potency to strong to be handling it,
Deep up in the mob,
Everyday is like a 9-5 to job to rob,
Souls seeking for riches,
Devil's slick with this,
Loose your grey hairs over a thousand years a stare,
See how the tortoise really beats the hare,
But most don't wanna share,
The personal problems,
Only got evil to resolve em,
It's never too late to reverse the curse,
Dry out the thirst,
Before you...
To stabbing tablets, of Moses wisdom
Scripts of weed, watch me grab it,
Got damn it,
Potency to strong to be handling it,
Deep up in the mob,
Everyday is like a 9-5 to job to rob,
Souls seeking for riches,
Devil's slick with this,
Loose your grey hairs over a thousand years a stare,
See how the tortoise really beats the hare,
But most don't wanna share,
The personal problems,
Only got evil to resolve em,
It's never too late to reverse the curse,
Dry out the thirst,
Before you...
#dark
#rap
#spiritual
532 reads
1 Comment
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
19th Apr 2024 8:09pm
19th Apr 2024 8:09pm
Sinister Sins of Poetry
I’m considered by many as half man and half motherfucka
So to you sensitive ass bitches both sides will never love ya’,
“On that starting line so to the disrespectful fucka I’m going in first
Putting in the work so bruh-bruh prepare for the hurt,
“Not only do I have one middle finger, but I have two
No explanation-you know what the sign language translates too,
“So it’s on a motherfucka if they wanna catch a double disrespect
If not take your medicine and go get some uncomfortable rest,
“I send motherfuckas to bed...
So to you sensitive ass bitches both sides will never love ya’,
“On that starting line so to the disrespectful fucka I’m going in first
Putting in the work so bruh-bruh prepare for the hurt,
“Not only do I have one middle finger, but I have two
No explanation-you know what the sign language translates too,
“So it’s on a motherfucka if they wanna catch a double disrespect
If not take your medicine and go get some uncomfortable rest,
“I send motherfuckas to bed...
#rap
625 reads
4 Comments
Drieks
Poem Published
7th Feb 2024 5:36pm
7th Feb 2024 5:36pm
Younique
Near perfect imperfections...
We flop flaccid, snuffed erections.
They bled acid, "clean elections".
Free-bred lectures, ponzi lessons.
I claim full response for the half truth.
See through C4 blends into Beirut.
Plan no manners in the base like Babe Ruth.
Plant 5 hammers to the face?
"Just play dude!"
I call American shenanigan.
Vivacious like a mannequin.
So animated, yet so unrelated
to the sound of 'em.
I'm traveling the phantom-ring....
We flop flaccid, snuffed erections.
They bled acid, "clean elections".
Free-bred lectures, ponzi lessons.
I claim full response for the half truth.
See through C4 blends into Beirut.
Plan no manners in the base like Babe Ruth.
Plant 5 hammers to the face?
"Just play dude!"
I call American shenanigan.
Vivacious like a mannequin.
So animated, yet so unrelated
to the sound of 'em.
I'm traveling the phantom-ring....
#anxiety
#LifeStruggles
#rap
597 reads
2 Comments
Moby_Huge
Poem Published
8th Jan 2024 4:12am
8th Jan 2024 4:12am
Juice Wrld is a pussy
Juice went down
Like a clown
In the dirt
By a perc
He liked weed
but didn't breed
He drinks booze
How could he lose?
He took oxycodone
But music never caught on
He had codeine
Thinking it was morphine
Like a clown
In the dirt
By a perc
He liked weed
but didn't breed
He drinks booze
How could he lose?
He took oxycodone
But music never caught on
He had codeine
Thinking it was morphine
#alcohol
#drugs
#marijuana
#addiction
#rap
649 reads
0 Comments
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
30th Dec 2023 2:34pm
30th Dec 2023 2:34pm
Horny Mamma
She's got gumption, she's got grit,
Preggo queen, gotta love those tits.
Bumpin' belly and her pussy’s tight,
In the game of love, she’s pure delight.
Hot mama got that baby glow,
Love’s so deep, she begins to show.
Her pretty eyes are sayin’ make my day.
Five nights a week, her man gets laid.
Her heart's been thumping a pretty song,
She’ll rock your cock the whole night long.
She’s cravin' pickles and chewing gum,
Give her a chance and she’ll suck your thumb.
Preggo queen, gotta love those tits.
Bumpin' belly and her pussy’s tight,
In the game of love, she’s pure delight.
Hot mama got that baby glow,
Love’s so deep, she begins to show.
Her pretty eyes are sayin’ make my day.
Five nights a week, her man gets laid.
Her heart's been thumping a pretty song,
She’ll rock your cock the whole night long.
She’s cravin' pickles and chewing gum,
Give her a chance and she’ll suck your thumb.
#erotic
#rap
#pregnancy
585 reads
7 Comments
MrDunnePoetry
Poem Published
10th Dec 2023 9:20pm
10th Dec 2023 9:20pm
[My 21 Books]
My 21 Books]
https://www.booksie.com/users/mrdunnepoetry-311259
1. Ars Goetia Poetry (Demonology)
◾https://www.booksie.com/665541-ars-goetia-poetry-demonology
2. Poetic Crime
(Serial Killers & True Crime)
◾https://www.booksie.com/665544-poetic-crime-serial-killers-and-true-crime
3. My Abusive Narcissistic Family
◾https://www.booksie.com/665578-my-abusive-narcissistic-family
4. Poetry & Rap Banned At Crown Court (2009-2014) ...
https://www.booksie.com/users/mrdunnepoetry-311259
1. Ars Goetia Poetry (Demonology)
◾https://www.booksie.com/665541-ars-goetia-poetry-demonology
2. Poetic Crime
(Serial Killers & True Crime)
◾https://www.booksie.com/665544-poetic-crime-serial-killers-and-true-crime
3. My Abusive Narcissistic Family
◾https://www.booksie.com/665578-my-abusive-narcissistic-family
4. Poetry & Rap Banned At Crown Court (2009-2014) ...
#family
#abuse
#LifeAsAWriter
#WritingPoetry
#rap
315 reads
0 Comments
Tutt
Dino Gibson
Dino Gibson
Poem Published
28th Aug 2023 6:50am
28th Aug 2023 6:50am
How To Make Em Happy
#confessional
#rap
322 reads
7 Comments
Breedlove
Poem Published
10th Aug 2023 10:12am
10th Aug 2023 10:12am
Spotlight
#universe
#rap
#suffering
316 reads
0 Comments
ZenmasterE
Poem Published
8th Aug 2023 2:51pm
8th Aug 2023 2:51pm
Homies in the Hood (the Fire Next Time)
#rap
313 reads
0 Comments
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