Rap Seeking Honest Critique Poems
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rap seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
19th Apr 2024 8:09pm
19th Apr 2024 8:09pm
Sinister Sins of Poetry
I’m considered by many as half man and half motherfucka
So to you sensitive ass bitches both sides will never love ya’,
“On that starting line so to the disrespectful fucka I’m going in first
Putting in the work so bruh-bruh prepare for the hurt,
“Not only do I have one middle finger, but I have two
No explanation-you know what the sign language translates too,
“So it’s on a motherfucka if they wanna catch a double disrespect
If not take your medicine and go get some uncomfortable rest,
“I send motherfuckas to bed...
So to you sensitive ass bitches both sides will never love ya’,
“On that starting line so to the disrespectful fucka I’m going in first
Putting in the work so bruh-bruh prepare for the hurt,
“Not only do I have one middle finger, but I have two
No explanation-you know what the sign language translates too,
“So it’s on a motherfucka if they wanna catch a double disrespect
If not take your medicine and go get some uncomfortable rest,
“I send motherfuckas to bed...
#rap
80 reads
2 Comments
Drieks
Poem Published
7th Feb 2024 5:36pm
7th Feb 2024 5:36pm
Younique
Near perfect imperfections...
We flop flaccid, snuffed erections.
They bled acid, "clean elections".
Free-bred lectures, ponzi lessons.
I claim full response for the half truth.
See through C4 blends into Beirut.
Plan no manners in the base like Babe Ruth.
Plant 5 hammers to the face?
"Just play dude!"
I call American shenanigan.
Vivacious like a mannequin.
So animated, yet so unrelated
to the sound of 'em.
I'm traveling the phantom-ring.
Continuous unravelment. ...
We flop flaccid, snuffed erections.
They bled acid, "clean elections".
Free-bred lectures, ponzi lessons.
I claim full response for the half truth.
See through C4 blends into Beirut.
Plan no manners in the base like Babe Ruth.
Plant 5 hammers to the face?
"Just play dude!"
I call American shenanigan.
Vivacious like a mannequin.
So animated, yet so unrelated
to the sound of 'em.
I'm traveling the phantom-ring.
Continuous unravelment. ...
#anxiety
#LifeStruggles
#rap
246 reads
2 Comments
Moby_Huge
Poem Published
8th Jan 2024 4:12am
8th Jan 2024 4:12am
Juice Wrld is a pussy
Juice went down
Like a clown
In the dirt
By a perc
He liked weed
but didn't breed
He drinks booze
How could he lose?
He took oxycodone
But music never caught on
He had codeine
Thinking it was morphine
Like a clown
In the dirt
By a perc
He liked weed
but didn't breed
He drinks booze
How could he lose?
He took oxycodone
But music never caught on
He had codeine
Thinking it was morphine
#alcohol
#drugs
#marijuana
#addiction
#rap
320 reads
0 Comments
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
30th Dec 2023 2:34pm
30th Dec 2023 2:34pm
Horny Mamma
She's got gumption, she's got grit,
Preggo queen, gotta love those tits.
Bumpin' belly and her pussy’s tight,
In the game of love, she’s pure delight.
Hot mama got that baby glow,
Love’s so deep, she begins to show.
Her pretty eyes are sayin’ make my day.
Five nights a week, her man gets laid.
Her heart's been thumping a pretty song,
She’ll rock your cock the whole night long.
She’s cravin' pickles and chewing gum,
Give her a chance and she’ll suck your thumb.
Preggo queen, gotta love those tits.
Bumpin' belly and her pussy’s tight,
In the game of love, she’s pure delight.
Hot mama got that baby glow,
Love’s so deep, she begins to show.
Her pretty eyes are sayin’ make my day.
Five nights a week, her man gets laid.
Her heart's been thumping a pretty song,
She’ll rock your cock the whole night long.
She’s cravin' pickles and chewing gum,
Give her a chance and she’ll suck your thumb.
#erotic
#rap
#pregnancy
303 reads
7 Comments
MrDunnePoetry
Poem Published
10th Dec 2023 9:20pm
10th Dec 2023 9:20pm
[My 21 Books]
My 21 Books]
https://www.booksie.com/users/mrdunnepoetry-311259
1. Ars Goetia Poetry (Demonology)
◾https://www.booksie.com/665541-ars-goetia-poetry-demonology
2. Poetic Crime
(Serial Killers & True Crime)
◾https://www.booksie.com/665544-poetic-crime-serial-killers-and-true-crime
3. My Abusive Narcissistic Family
◾https://www.booksie.com/665578-my-abusive-narcissistic-family
4. Poetry & Rap Banned At Crown Court (2009-2014) ...
https://www.booksie.com/users/mrdunnepoetry-311259
1. Ars Goetia Poetry (Demonology)
◾https://www.booksie.com/665541-ars-goetia-poetry-demonology
2. Poetic Crime
(Serial Killers & True Crime)
◾https://www.booksie.com/665544-poetic-crime-serial-killers-and-true-crime
3. My Abusive Narcissistic Family
◾https://www.booksie.com/665578-my-abusive-narcissistic-family
4. Poetry & Rap Banned At Crown Court (2009-2014) ...
#family
#abuse
#LifeAsAWriter
#WritingPoetry
#rap
189 reads
0 Comments
Tutt
Dino Gibson
Dino Gibson
Poem Published
28th Aug 2023 6:50am
28th Aug 2023 6:50am
How To Make Em Happy
#confessional
#rap
215 reads
7 Comments
Breedlove
Poem Published
10th Aug 2023 10:12am
10th Aug 2023 10:12am
Spotlight
#universe
#rap
#suffering
200 reads
0 Comments
ZenmasterE
Poem Published
8th Aug 2023 2:51pm
8th Aug 2023 2:51pm
Homies in the Hood (the Fire Next Time)
#rap
222 reads
0 Comments
DeeTooCold
Poem Published
12th Jun 2023 2:53am
12th Jun 2023 2:53am
Ain’t A Gangsta (with Movie Malik)
Verse:
Y’all niggas ain’t gangsta, out here lying what you rap about
Claiming you’re a demon, but you still staying at ya Mama’s house
Won’t even help ya Mama out, but wanna take the shooter’s route
Never pulled a trigger, yet you screaming you gone air it out
Without your gang and your gun you look helpless huh?
Whole time you’re soft when they believed you were reckless huh?
You think you a stepper huh? Till you get stepped on
Fucked around and stepped wrong, now your name’s getting repped on
Do you wanna get stepped to?
What...
Y’all niggas ain’t gangsta, out here lying what you rap about
Claiming you’re a demon, but you still staying at ya Mama’s house
Won’t even help ya Mama out, but wanna take the shooter’s route
Never pulled a trigger, yet you screaming you gone air it out
Without your gang and your gun you look helpless huh?
Whole time you’re soft when they believed you were reckless huh?
You think you a stepper huh? Till you get stepped on
Fucked around and stepped wrong, now your name’s getting repped on
Do you wanna get stepped to?
What...
#music
#lyrics
#rap
609 reads
2 Comments
bmcmurtrie_94
Poem Published
14th Mar 2023 10:28am
14th Mar 2023 10:28am
Call me bizz (rap machine)
I'm a 90's Baby ,Crazy Smoke Got Me Feeling Hazy,
Because I Put in work while yall haters feeling lazy im my own Man
So These Little Things don't phase me, because I'm a Heart breaker that's why these girls chase me, So Bow down to the king better obey me, When I write I leave
earthquakes like Haiti,
Haters will get plucked like a daisy
Rap Machine, Stacking Green, No Reason To Be Mad At Me, because I Put in
Work And I Just Flip It Like A Magazine,because When I write I Leave The
Whole Scene In A Tragedy, And I Can write Like This For Days No ...
Because I Put in work while yall haters feeling lazy im my own Man
So These Little Things don't phase me, because I'm a Heart breaker that's why these girls chase me, So Bow down to the king better obey me, When I write I leave
earthquakes like Haiti,
Haters will get plucked like a daisy
Rap Machine, Stacking Green, No Reason To Be Mad At Me, because I Put in
Work And I Just Flip It Like A Magazine,because When I write I Leave The
Whole Scene In A Tragedy, And I Can write Like This For Days No ...
#rhyming
#lyrics
#funny #rap
#funny #rap
734 reads
0 Comments
Luvmeh
Dimitris
Dimitris
Poem Published
26th Feb 2023 3:09am
26th Feb 2023 3:09am
Undecided
Living on the edge of time
Poking holes hoping for the light to shine
Theres forks and knives but spoons are all you care
People going in circles you reach out but no one is there
Starstruck fell in love with one stare
Fallen left alone she's always there
True love blinding everything's just
Eyes full of tears and stomach full of lust
Time is messed up all hours are the same
Relentless effort for a prize to claim
Days months years blend in fall like rain
Crawling through a dream denying the...
Poking holes hoping for the light to shine
Theres forks and knives but spoons are all you care
People going in circles you reach out but no one is there
Starstruck fell in love with one stare
Fallen left alone she's always there
True love blinding everything's just
Eyes full of tears and stomach full of lust
Time is messed up all hours are the same
Relentless effort for a prize to claim
Days months years blend in fall like rain
Crawling through a dream denying the...
#hate
#dark
#greed
#rap
#suffering
762 reads
1 Comment
QuinnS
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2023 8:30pm
22nd Jan 2023 8:30pm
Gift From My Dad
Fly under the radar and cover your tracks,
something I didn’t really understand
when I wanted to flaunt like
Eminem, when he started a band.
That sounded like fitting in just like a cog,
no news means that I’m doing my job.
So instead I just opposed it,
I never wanted to go unnoticed.
I saw it in my friends, ‘fore I saw it in me.
People wanna talk, for example Henry:
Said he’s gunna be on the basketball team.
Turns out,
he got cut from the basketball team.
Pretty soon, I began to leave a wake myself,
Their eyes...
something I didn’t really understand
when I wanted to flaunt like
Eminem, when he started a band.
That sounded like fitting in just like a cog,
no news means that I’m doing my job.
So instead I just opposed it,
I never wanted to go unnoticed.
I saw it in my friends, ‘fore I saw it in me.
People wanna talk, for example Henry:
Said he’s gunna be on the basketball team.
Turns out,
he got cut from the basketball team.
Pretty soon, I began to leave a wake myself,
Their eyes...
#love
#secrets
#sports
#rap
#manipulation
456 reads
0 Comments
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