Poems About Rainbows Seeking Honest Critique
#rainbow
Poems about rainbows seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Tame Machine
I've been there tomorrow.
Footsteps echo
all through the void.
Future whispers past.
I've been there tomorrow.
Scarlet dreams
through violet hues.
Hope bends in the light.
I've been there tomorrow.
Grease-stained dreams
and crispy fries.
Future tastes like snacks.
All through the void
and crispy fries.
Footsteps echo
all through the void.
Future whispers past.
I've been there tomorrow.
Scarlet dreams
through violet hues.
Hope bends in the light.
I've been there tomorrow.
Grease-stained dreams
and crispy fries.
Future tastes like snacks.
All through the void
and crispy fries.
#mirror
#rain
#rainbow
#silence
#strength
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Unicorn Gasoline
Taurine,
creatine,
unicorn-
gasoline.
Ball peen
to the spleen.
Nineteen-ounce
in fûck machine.
G-spot-
torn jeans,
OBG my needs
obscene.
Charlie Sheen
runnin' lean,
you're my queen
amphetamine.
Spill the bean,
I'm Mr. Clean.
I'll shine you like
the last latrine.
My d¡ck's a fiend,
it can't be weened.
Incubus,
the demon king.
creatine,
unicorn-
gasoline.
Ball peen
to the spleen.
Nineteen-ounce
in fûck machine.
G-spot-
torn jeans,
OBG my needs
obscene.
Charlie Sheen
runnin' lean,
you're my queen
amphetamine.
Spill the bean,
I'm Mr. Clean.
I'll shine you like
the last latrine.
My d¡ck's a fiend,
it can't be weened.
Incubus,
the demon king.
#monsters
#rainbow
#unicorns #zombies
#unicorns #zombies
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Mauwin' Down Maui
Rollin' through the gears
with my friend's friend, Holly.
Panigale haulin' tears.
Is she stolen? Well, prolly.
No helmet. No fears.
Missionary on molly.
Wally side-swipin' mirrors,
shearin' off a Bugatti.
Better down another beer;
Cali Sol, not sorry.
Goin' off the fuckin' rails
on a red Ducati.
Sun melanin our rears,
set back and do a stoppie.
Marley mellowin' my ears;
Holly wailin' melancholy.
Playin' slalom, duck, and cheers!
Sparkin' rings around the trolley. ...
with my friend's friend, Holly.
Panigale haulin' tears.
Is she stolen? Well, prolly.
No helmet. No fears.
Missionary on molly.
Wally side-swipin' mirrors,
shearin' off a Bugatti.
Better down another beer;
Cali Sol, not sorry.
Goin' off the fuckin' rails
on a red Ducati.
Sun melanin our rears,
set back and do a stoppie.
Marley mellowin' my ears;
Holly wailin' melancholy.
Playin' slalom, duck, and cheers!
Sparkin' rings around the trolley. ...
#monsters
#rainbow
#unicorns #zombies
#unicorns #zombies
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Fool Pharaoh
Fool
Pharoah
Fare Farrfair
felt fucking awful
for filling flat falafels
from Farrah's faucet air.
It should be unlawful to
flatulate falafels from
faulty derrieres!
Pharoah
Fare Farrfair
felt fucking awful
for filling flat falafels
from Farrah's faucet air.
It should be unlawful to
flatulate falafels from
faulty derrieres!
#monsters
#rainbow
#unicorns #zombies
#unicorns #zombies
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If Turnin' Trix Were Politics, I'd be a...
Flix & chill?🍿❤️
This girl's a crusher!
Couch-cushion clutch,
X-billboard buster. 😎
Trill-to-the-touch,
tight tushy gusher.
Bum so flush, 🍑🤯
I hadta bum-rush her.
Philly likes to bleat;👄🎠
hella hadta hush her.
High-heeled heat,💗👠
fibrillatin' flustered!
Jillin' her to sleep, 🥵🐑
up the hill, I tossed her.
Heart skippin' beats,🩺
thought I almost lost her!
Drip, drip, drip, 🔩 ...
This girl's a crusher!
Couch-cushion clutch,
X-billboard buster. 😎
Trill-to-the-touch,
tight tushy gusher.
Bum so flush, 🍑🤯
I hadta bum-rush her.
Philly likes to bleat;👄🎠
hella hadta hush her.
High-heeled heat,💗👠
fibrillatin' flustered!
Jillin' her to sleep, 🥵🐑
up the hill, I tossed her.
Heart skippin' beats,🩺
thought I almost lost her!
Drip, drip, drip, 🔩 ...
#monsters
#rainbow
#unicorns #zombies
#unicorns #zombies
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when it rains
mixed feelings
“Life isn’t about waiting for the storm to pass…It’s about learning
to dance in the rain.”—Vivian Greene
when it rains, i have mixed feelings
of the deluge i must face,
for some showers leave me reeling,
and some raindrops ruin my base.
when it rains a rainbow harvest,
all my life soars on a cloud;
but the rains that hit me hardest
are the ones that hope enshroud.
when it rains harsh disillusion,
stirring dregs long put to sleep,
earth and heav’n weigh my confusion ...
“Life isn’t about waiting for the storm to pass…It’s about learning
to dance in the rain.”—Vivian Greene
when it rains, i have mixed feelings
of the deluge i must face,
for some showers leave me reeling,
and some raindrops ruin my base.
when it rains a rainbow harvest,
all my life soars on a cloud;
but the rains that hit me hardest
are the ones that hope enshroud.
when it rains harsh disillusion,
stirring dregs long put to sleep,
earth and heav’n weigh my confusion ...
#clouds
#faith
#rain
#rainbow
#sea
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Alpha b'Tism
Hungry like a pelican,
ṭẏpickle ụḥ'merican,
Hung-Ċ Ḛlegạns
out to do ṣhenạnigans.
Hangin' with my hooligans,
hoopṭy honda hoonigans
went to the mall again
swanġin' capʼn mulligan's.
Bullyin' the paladins,
anglicans and booleans,
saw my cosmopolítan
fit like hula hoodíạṇ!
Hot in a cardigan,
water like ạ culligan,
she's ạ neapolitan
froyo eyes ạ froliċkin'.
Ḟrodọ and I'm...
ṭẏpickle ụḥ'merican,
Hung-Ċ Ḛlegạns
out to do ṣhenạnigans.
Hangin' with my hooligans,
hoopṭy honda hoonigans
went to the mall again
swanġin' capʼn mulligan's.
Bullyin' the paladins,
anglicans and booleans,
saw my cosmopolítan
fit like hula hoodíạṇ!
Hot in a cardigan,
water like ạ culligan,
she's ạ neapolitan
froyo eyes ạ froliċkin'.
Ḟrodọ and I'm...
#monsters
#rainbow
#unicorns #zombies
#unicorns #zombies
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Chips Deluxe Rainbow Cookie
So you say
you want to taste
the rainbow
and cherry colored
lips part
to grant wishes
while sunkist
kisses land just below
your cheek bone
and lemons wedges
shoved between
your incisors
cause jade eyes
to shed tears
but not from sorrow
and cerulean
is the outline
of your aura
while your indigo
mind embraces
the idea
that I am royalty
an my cookie
is the stuff of legends
and just one bite
can cause a
diabetic coma.
you want to taste
the rainbow
and cherry colored
lips part
to grant wishes
while sunkist
kisses land just below
your cheek bone
and lemons wedges
shoved between
your incisors
cause jade eyes
to shed tears
but not from sorrow
and cerulean
is the outline
of your aura
while your indigo
mind embraces
the idea
that I am royalty
an my cookie
is the stuff of legends
and just one bite
can cause a
diabetic coma.
#rainbow
#sexy
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Rain in Asian Forests
In the forests of Asia,
where the green unfolds.
The rain dances in leaves,
in a silent ballet,
falling like nature's tears,
mysterious,
a veil that embraces the earth,
a song that echoes.
Under the canopy of trees
the rain persists and sings
washing old logs,
calming the nervous,
the rivers sway, they run free,
impetuous.
And the birds take shelter,
in their nests, for nothing.
On the leaves, drops shine
like rare pearls
and the winds whisper secrets
among the samaras.
And the...
where the green unfolds.
The rain dances in leaves,
in a silent ballet,
falling like nature's tears,
mysterious,
a veil that embraces the earth,
a song that echoes.
Under the canopy of trees
the rain persists and sings
washing old logs,
calming the nervous,
the rivers sway, they run free,
impetuous.
And the birds take shelter,
in their nests, for nothing.
On the leaves, drops shine
like rare pearls
and the winds whisper secrets
among the samaras.
And the...
#happiness
#rain
#storm
#rainbow
#nature
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5 Comments
King of the Road
A traveling wiz kid
Shit kicker
Gathering speed
Push button magic
Cyclone launch
Over the edge
Asphalt rising
Hotdogging
Driving into the interstellar highway
Eatin dust!
Neptune’s convoy or the boogie van
Velvet interior, hell on wheels
His freedom of choice
Picking up his trapeze freak, sea hag
At the space farm
She once owned a Coyote Duster
A super shooter, strato-streak machine
Currently lugs around in a Falcon
White dice
The two are missing links
From a...
Shit kicker
Gathering speed
Push button magic
Cyclone launch
Over the edge
Asphalt rising
Hotdogging
Driving into the interstellar highway
Eatin dust!
Neptune’s convoy or the boogie van
Velvet interior, hell on wheels
His freedom of choice
Picking up his trapeze freak, sea hag
At the space farm
She once owned a Coyote Duster
A super shooter, strato-streak machine
Currently lugs around in a Falcon
White dice
The two are missing links
From a...
#universe
#rainbow
#cars
#ShortStory
#scifi
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African Dreams
I have always had African dreams
planned sub-Saharan schemes
to trek along with the big game
call myself by an older name
One I do choose myself
from all others on the shelf
the lyrics to my own song
within this place I now belong
As I finally can put aside
all these things I once denied
take up a fresher trail
feel cool wind within my sail
Crossing this savannah plain
I follow the path of the rain
going where only it can go
showing only what...
planned sub-Saharan schemes
to trek along with the big game
call myself by an older name
One I do choose myself
from all others on the shelf
the lyrics to my own song
within this place I now belong
As I finally can put aside
all these things I once denied
take up a fresher trail
feel cool wind within my sail
Crossing this savannah plain
I follow the path of the rain
going where only it can go
showing only what...
#LifeStruggles
#Africa
#rainbow
#confessional
#WritingPoetry
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Refractory
Funny how this bright white light
splits within the blackest night
a rainbow of real, raw feeling
paints all over this lonely ceiling
Just the perfect decorum
a most fitting forum
to help me work things out
help me conquer all my doubt
Separating all these strands
I sift while sorting through sands
of a most impatient sort of rhyme
trying to reclaim back lost time
Since tallying up the cost
of everything I have then lost
believing a truth that lied
even in the final rites that died ...
splits within the blackest night
a rainbow of real, raw feeling
paints all over this lonely ceiling
Just the perfect decorum
a most fitting forum
to help me work things out
help me conquer all my doubt
Separating all these strands
I sift while sorting through sands
of a most impatient sort of rhyme
trying to reclaim back lost time
Since tallying up the cost
of everything I have then lost
believing a truth that lied
even in the final rites that died ...
#LifeStruggles
#rainbow
#confessional
#LifeAsAWriter
#WritingPoetry
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