Poems About Pollution Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about pollution seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Not All Poetry Is Pretty
.. and it shouldn't be
throwing ourselves
at descriptive ways
of making a
flower
sound
more beautiful than
the sight of it
or making our
depression
seem more serious
than the next bloke
blinding ourselves ...
throwing ourselves
at descriptive ways
of making a
flower
sound
more beautiful than
the sight of it
or making our
depression
seem more serious
than the next bloke
blinding ourselves ...
#murder
#war
#environment
#pollution
#pandemic
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The Ones on Top Crush The Underlings as the Former Fall
Prepare for Humanity's Annihilation,
We won't be present for Earth's Reincarnation.
Fire in the Sky, Acid in The Sea;
It's time for our apocalyptic Inundation.
As Gold lines their Pockets and Machines fire Rockets;
As Disease ravages just as War does for Savages,
So do Gales blow, toppling All from their moon-high Egos.
They will gasp for Air in an Atmosphere bare,
Caused by their own lack of Care;
Sure, they care now, yet 'tis too late.
They had many a Chance,
But now, they've sealed their Fate.
All that Debating...
We won't be present for Earth's Reincarnation.
Fire in the Sky, Acid in The Sea;
It's time for our apocalyptic Inundation.
As Gold lines their Pockets and Machines fire Rockets;
As Disease ravages just as War does for Savages,
So do Gales blow, toppling All from their moon-high Egos.
They will gasp for Air in an Atmosphere bare,
Caused by their own lack of Care;
Sure, they care now, yet 'tis too late.
They had many a Chance,
But now, they've sealed their Fate.
All that Debating...
#war
#environment
#pollution
#nature
#greed
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2/19/22
Accounting visual poem]
#children
#environment
#pollution #cars
#pollution #cars
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The End Is Nigh
The rainforest is dead
that's what the paper said
As the old folks said you make your own bed
and that idea fills my heart with dread
The bell tolls for you and me
but we are too blind to see
Human life will soon never be the same
in my mind echo's that sad refrain
In the wings
the fat lady sings
It is too late to ask why
bc, The End Is Nigh
that's what the paper said
As the old folks said you make your own bed
and that idea fills my heart with dread
The bell tolls for you and me
but we are too blind to see
Human life will soon never be the same
in my mind echo's that sad refrain
In the wings
the fat lady sings
It is too late to ask why
bc, The End Is Nigh
#politics
#LifeStruggles
#pollution
#ignorance
#vulnerability
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the earth convalescent
that the earth could be depleted,
like a seething crucible;
that mankind could be defeated,
how incomprehensible!
when God called light out of darkness
and commanded sky and sea,
who could fathom human starkness
earth's new vile reality?
while the...
like a seething crucible;
that mankind could be defeated,
how incomprehensible!
when God called light out of darkness
and commanded sky and sea,
who could fathom human starkness
earth's new vile reality?
while the...
#earth
#environment
#pollution #God
#pollution #God
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4 Comments
Maybe
There is no representation
for the Four-Footed
at any sovereign table;
neither is there a place
for the Feathered-Wing
to perch, void from bullet;
nor Finned-Fish to swim
free of baited hooks;
or, Earthen-Heartbeat
to drum her voice
Man considers himself
superior, but we are not
separate from Nature
One day we'll understand
that we occupy space
as everything in Creation
And, as everything in Creation
are just as susceptible
to...
for the Four-Footed
at any sovereign table;
neither is there a place
for the Feathered-Wing
to perch, void from bullet;
nor Finned-Fish to swim
free of baited hooks;
or, Earthen-Heartbeat
to drum her voice
Man considers himself
superior, but we are not
separate from Nature
One day we'll understand
that we occupy space
as everything in Creation
And, as everything in Creation
are just as susceptible
to...
#earth
#universe
#environment
#pollution
#nature
1089 reads
34 Comments
What She Really Got From Smoking
She thought that smoking
would make her look cool but that
was before she got cancer.
would make her look cool but that
was before she got cancer.
#dark
#environment
#pollution
#cancer
#nonfiction
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Legacy
Give your collective heads a shake
Shoehorn them out of your arse
Greed is a deadly mistake
Grandchildren will suffer your farce
You'll leave them fancy cars
And a house too big to clean
But if they can't see the stars
What will your possessions mean
They'll mean you're a selfish twit
They'll mean you've gone to hell
Your legacy of destructive shit
Gives off a bitter smell
Your cars burn, or rust away
The house will be ransacked
The wild west will have its day
As outlaws plan attack
And...
Shoehorn them out of your arse
Greed is a deadly mistake
Grandchildren will suffer your farce
You'll leave them fancy cars
And a house too big to clean
But if they can't see the stars
What will your possessions mean
They'll mean you're a selfish twit
They'll mean you've gone to hell
Your legacy of destructive shit
Gives off a bitter smell
Your cars burn, or rust away
The house will be ransacked
The wild west will have its day
As outlaws plan attack
And...
#pollution
#greed
#suffering
#revenge
#rebellion
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.. terrestrial abuse
in earth’s existence,
where it’s not
life resistant,
a cosmos wink of an eye,
just a flash in the pan,
the “big time of man”,
in a millennium
do we try or do we die
carbons in the air,
fracking the ground,
drink and breath
if you dare,
the people hypnotized,
by political lies,
all looking around
with blank stares,
oceans choked with plastic,
forest abuse gone drastic,
as sea and wildlife
shamelessly die,
environmentally weakened,
domestically...
where it’s not
life resistant,
a cosmos wink of an eye,
just a flash in the pan,
the “big time of man”,
in a millennium
do we try or do we die
carbons in the air,
fracking the ground,
drink and breath
if you dare,
the people hypnotized,
by political lies,
all looking around
with blank stares,
oceans choked with plastic,
forest abuse gone drastic,
as sea and wildlife
shamelessly die,
environmentally weakened,
domestically...
#corruption
#environment
#pollution
#greed
#ignorance
487 reads
10 Comments
Chaos Is More Than A Theory
The same old refrain
more misery and pain
Satanic seduction
equals more death and destruction
Polar ice melting by the tons
more people shot with guns
Everyday more hate anger and fear
along with pollution is being released in our atmosphere
I submit to you all of the above makes me weary
and that-Chaos Is More Than A Theory
more misery and pain
Satanic seduction
equals more death and destruction
Polar ice melting by the tons
more people shot with guns
Everyday more hate anger and fear
along with pollution is being released in our atmosphere
I submit to you all of the above makes me weary
and that-Chaos Is More Than A Theory
#violence
#oppression
#LifeStruggles
#pollution
#HumanRights
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wind-song
a rhymed, mirrored octet
earth
a s k e w,
shadows fall;
vile men, trifling,
selfish ends to please,
e c o s y s t e m s h a r m i n g,
leaving but f o r b i d d e n fruits
where have dried up hope’s lush fountains.
on fresh sunshine-covered mountains,
let the birds rehearse their flutes
with the wind-song, charming
in its treetop tease.
then the rippling
river s h a l l
bring new
birth.
©...
earth
a s k e w,
shadows fall;
vile men, trifling,
selfish ends to please,
e c o s y s t e m s h a r m i n g,
leaving but f o r b i d d e n fruits
where have dried up hope’s lush fountains.
on fresh sunshine-covered mountains,
let the birds rehearse their flutes
with the wind-song, charming
in its treetop tease.
then the rippling
river s h a l l
bring new
birth.
©...
#earth
#environment
#pollution #nature
#pollution #nature
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2 Comments
Sing Louder. Buy cheaper.
I bought myself a new solar panel
to try to save the world.
It said, 'Made in China' on it.
Probably produced in a coal powered
solar panel factory
But it was cheap, and convenient.
I didn't sleep well last night
The road traffic kept me awake.
The birds must have a similar problem.
Do they now sing louder to each other?
...
to try to save the world.
It said, 'Made in China' on it.
Probably produced in a coal powered
solar panel factory
But it was cheap, and convenient.
I didn't sleep well last night
The road traffic kept me awake.
The birds must have a similar problem.
Do they now sing louder to each other?
...
#pollution
#birds
#nature
#peace
#humankind
485 reads
3 Comments
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