Poems About Music by Top Critiquers
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Poems about music by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
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Broomie
Broomie
Poem Published
20th Dec 2017 6:13pm
20th Dec 2017 6:13pm
End Games
Funky music in the background,
it's subtle but relentless.
been living life in a slow hell,
the only die hard consistency.
There is no healing without the pain that's guaranteed from the fallout...
it's subtle but relentless.
been living life in a slow hell,
the only die hard consistency.
There is no healing without the pain that's guaranteed from the fallout...
#identity
#music
#marijuana #freedom
#marijuana #freedom
798 reads
5 Comments
InDreamz
Poem Published
23rd Sep 2024 9:23pm
23rd Sep 2024 9:23pm
maestro
the moon gently descended
on the roof of the earth,
the stars glistened with glee
as the maestro
orchestrated the cosmic
symphony
and the stars sang in
synchronicity.
the moon followed
the notes
of the shooting stars
darting across the skies,
thus creating a
beautiful rhapsody
to which the sea danced
in rhythmic low and highs...
as if in trance,
bewitched by the moonlight,
the wind whispered love tunes...
as the music reached ...
on the roof of the earth,
the stars glistened with glee
as the maestro
orchestrated the cosmic
symphony
and the stars sang in
synchronicity.
the moon followed
the notes
of the shooting stars
darting across the skies,
thus creating a
beautiful rhapsody
to which the sea danced
in rhythmic low and highs...
as if in trance,
bewitched by the moonlight,
the wind whispered love tunes...
as the music reached ...
#love
#moon
#music
#sea
#stars
208 reads
19 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
13th Oct 2024 8:37pm
13th Oct 2024 8:37pm
...down Time
I could see every note
Every rudiment down to the last beat
Sticks bouncing smoothly on the snare
As I marked time with my feet
I remember bullets whizzing by
Amid vociferous explosions and screams
A deafening quiet for a second
When soldiers saw me running in the street
I still recall the loud thunder
When lightning hit that tree behind our home
Me, sprinting fast and scared
Feeling a chill down to my bones
But now when I run, I hear my breath
With a steady rhythm in my mind
Every pulse perfectly played ...
Every rudiment down to the last beat
Sticks bouncing smoothly on the snare
As I marked time with my feet
I remember bullets whizzing by
Amid vociferous explosions and screams
A deafening quiet for a second
When soldiers saw me running in the street
I still recall the loud thunder
When lightning hit that tree behind our home
Me, sprinting fast and scared
Feeling a chill down to my bones
But now when I run, I hear my breath
With a steady rhythm in my mind
Every pulse perfectly played ...
#escape
#memories
#music
128 reads
2 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
5th Jan 2020 8:42pm
5th Jan 2020 8:42pm
yo! Americana #7
1935
Tupelo,
Mississippi
another dirt
manger
a different kind
of king was
born
swaddled in blue
suede
all across the south,
hound dogs bayed
at the stars
pompadour
hair,
guitar,
hips swinging
like sin
adolescent girls
orgasming,
fainting
a new temple
to
worship
in
Tupelo,
Mississippi
another dirt
manger
a different kind
of king was
born
swaddled in blue
suede
all across the south,
hound dogs bayed
at the stars
pompadour
hair,
guitar,
hips swinging
like sin
adolescent girls
orgasming,
fainting
a new temple
to
worship
in
#music
#freedom
#culture
525 reads
9 Comments
RyanBlackborough
Poem Published
15th Jun 2024 5:02am
15th Jun 2024 5:02am
Twisted tongue
Melancholy melody of mania and madness. Ceaseless Swan song a symphony of sadness.
Counter to composure comes cacophony of chorus.
Oscillating operatic overture of Opus.
Counter to composure comes cacophony of chorus.
Oscillating operatic overture of Opus.
#music
102 reads
0 Comments
KristinaX
Poem Published
13th Jun 2022 11:00pm
13th Jun 2022 11:00pm
Ruined
You seduced me so cruelly
Your gaze hypnotized
While your touch paralyzed
And I was powerless to run
Saying not to be afraid
How sweet the poison is
Right in front of me
You took over my body
Now I cannot say no to you
Your every word, my command
I am lost in submission
Subservient to your desires
I cannot say no to you
Your desires are my pleasure
I lost myself in you
Who am I? I am only yours
And you make me ask
Then you make me beg
Your fingers jammed...
Your gaze hypnotized
While your touch paralyzed
And I was powerless to run
Saying not to be afraid
How sweet the poison is
Right in front of me
You took over my body
Now I cannot say no to you
Your every word, my command
I am lost in submission
Subservient to your desires
I cannot say no to you
Your desires are my pleasure
I lost myself in you
Who am I? I am only yours
And you make me ask
Then you make me beg
Your fingers jammed...
#lust
#BDSM
#music
#passion
#seductive
1012 reads
37 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
23rd Sep 2020 2:27am
23rd Sep 2020 2:27am
Unity and Equity
Am I the only one
who really believed in Punk rock,
Hardcore metal and rap?
I cannot be the only one who
actually believed
in the political messages within punk rock
Hardcore metal and rap!
who really believed in Punk rock,
Hardcore metal and rap?
I cannot be the only one who
actually believed
in the political messages within punk rock
Hardcore metal and rap!
#music
306 reads
5 Comments
goldenmyst
Poem Published
13th Jan 2025 11:50pm
13th Jan 2025 11:50pm
Her Orinoco Delta Blues
Her Orinoco Delta Blues
Her smile is a rose blossoming
In the hothouse of my heart
She is the tropical heat of a rainforest
With the misty eyes
Of a smoking volcano
Whose caldera is her lipstick
That glows with the fire of creation
On the morning
When single cells first waltzed
And double helixes linked
In an ancient sea
The steam from my espresso
Is the fragrance
Of her Columbian coffee triangle
And I long to play her Latin guitar
And hear the moans
From her strings
When she sings
Her...
Her smile is a rose blossoming
In the hothouse of my heart
She is the tropical heat of a rainforest
With the misty eyes
Of a smoking volcano
Whose caldera is her lipstick
That glows with the fire of creation
On the morning
When single cells first waltzed
And double helixes linked
In an ancient sea
The steam from my espresso
Is the fragrance
Of her Columbian coffee triangle
And I long to play her Latin guitar
And hear the moans
From her strings
When she sings
Her...
#beauty
#coffee
#music
#seductive
#sensual
46 reads
0 Comments
a_methyste
hlightdroid
hlightdroid
Poem Published
2nd Oct 2024 8:25pm
2nd Oct 2024 8:25pm
Tune
The music in tune
I like the beat
There is nobody here
But I got them in the corner of my mind
Girls smoking cigarettes
Kissing on the cheeks
As I see
And see
How they tune in
Move their arms and legs.
I like the beat
There is nobody here
But I got them in the corner of my mind
Girls smoking cigarettes
Kissing on the cheeks
As I see
And see
How they tune in
Move their arms and legs.
#music
72 reads
0 Comments
Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
2nd Nov 2024 10:54am
2nd Nov 2024 10:54am
Meditation on Disorder
Fourteen in 1970,
reared in the blackstuff and the piss,
and gone before the concrete gave
to bad fashions and closed coal pits.
You feel as though a prophet out of time
has raised his head to talk not Godly things,
but sanctified despair, disorder beautiful, a bird that sings
of coffins and of crime.
About you films and plays and shows have been made,
I'd like it if you stayed
in only those disordered sounds
that so clearly evoke
a car that hurtles down the M1 late at night,
a walk home through the darkness rent ...
reared in the blackstuff and the piss,
and gone before the concrete gave
to bad fashions and closed coal pits.
You feel as though a prophet out of time
has raised his head to talk not Godly things,
but sanctified despair, disorder beautiful, a bird that sings
of coffins and of crime.
About you films and plays and shows have been made,
I'd like it if you stayed
in only those disordered sounds
that so clearly evoke
a car that hurtles down the M1 late at night,
a walk home through the darkness rent ...
#dark
#depression
#love #music
#love #music
117 reads
2 Comments
Connotation
Poem Published
28th May 2023 00:44am
28th May 2023 00:44am
Fluent Lyricism
Fluent lyricism.
Fluid spirit's vision.
You can hear the rhythm.
Grooving, sheer precision.
Music's rearing system.
Moving gears and prisms.
Viewing veers condition.
Proven, peered positions.
New experiences.
True in real existence.
Human query listens.
Blueprints, dear, official.
Lucid feelings, symptoms.
Used appearance, symbols.
Pulling nears provision.
Muse or seriousness.
Due mysteriousness.
Strewn, is steering within.
Cue then pierces wisdom.
Dual, endearing dictions. ...
Fluid spirit's vision.
You can hear the rhythm.
Grooving, sheer precision.
Music's rearing system.
Moving gears and prisms.
Viewing veers condition.
Proven, peered positions.
New experiences.
True in real existence.
Human query listens.
Blueprints, dear, official.
Lucid feelings, symptoms.
Used appearance, symbols.
Pulling nears provision.
Muse or seriousness.
Due mysteriousness.
Strewn, is steering within.
Cue then pierces wisdom.
Dual, endearing dictions. ...
#identity
#inspirational
#music
#rhyming
#lyrics
160 reads
0 Comments
MalcolmG
Poem Published
5th Jan 2025 11:00pm
5th Jan 2025 11:00pm
HoW YoU WaNt It ToDaY - RAP POETRY
I don’t really vibe with old tunes
Find them tired,
stuck inside closed room
Chasing shadows of a dying old moon
Tired of pretending they’re still shining
Stuck rewinding
That's how You Want it today
Gotta Hall pass , to walk past
recycled tunes that won't last
Old grooves, old moves
I’m creating somethin new,
sparks feel true,
You got me wrong if you think I'm fake it, rather struggle until I make it,
excuse me, while I take it
I’ll break it then make it new ...
Find them tired,
stuck inside closed room
Chasing shadows of a dying old moon
Tired of pretending they’re still shining
Stuck rewinding
That's how You Want it today
Gotta Hall pass , to walk past
recycled tunes that won't last
Old grooves, old moves
I’m creating somethin new,
sparks feel true,
You got me wrong if you think I'm fake it, rather struggle until I make it,
excuse me, while I take it
I’ll break it then make it new ...
#LifeGoals
#LifeStruggles
#music #myself
#music #myself
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0 Comments
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