Poems About Music Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about music seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
9th Sep 2024 3:06am
9th Sep 2024 3:06am
My Answer To Your Little Challenge
If I'm not mistaken, the name
of that singer is Gary Puckett
whose band happens to be
"Gary Puckett & The Union Gap".
of that singer is Gary Puckett
whose band happens to be
"Gary Puckett & The Union Gap".
#dialogue
#FreeVerse
#music
#nonfiction
#nostalgia
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
2nd Sep 2024 12:00pm
2nd Sep 2024 12:00pm
A Metallic Vision
Long long ago before I became a SCATTERBRAIN watching EVIL DEAD movies repeatedly, I was ACCUSED of VIOLENCE on HALLOWS EVE. The DIRTY ROTTEN IMBECILES (D.R.I.) who always needed an ATTITUDE ADJUSTMENT lived near the WATCHTOWER. They agreed with my METHOD OF DESTRUCTION (M.O.D.). We were SICK OF IT ALL, POSSESSED in bringing this faction down to their knees. A CORROSION OF CONFORMITY was happening in our towns and on our streets. If any DEFIANCE came their way, you were FORBIDDEN to enter their SACRED REICH. There needed to be LETHAL AGGRESSION. A FORCED ENTRY into their METAL CHURCH. We knew...
#dystopian
#music
#peace
#scifi
#war
48 reads
6 Comments
xthan
Poem Published
28th Aug 2024 10:29pm
28th Aug 2024 10:29pm
Body music
There's something
in the streets
that give you free
lessons unfound
in public schools
and rustic old
textbooks,
where neon lights
baptise your face
in different colours
as night skies
weave it's own
attitude from
pinned up
stars.
There's something
in the streets
where you meet
those rare few angels
wearing filthy wings
and dark halos round
their sunken eyelids
entering small pubs,
adandoned buildings
that...
in the streets
that give you free
lessons unfound
in public schools
and rustic old
textbooks,
where neon lights
baptise your face
in different colours
as night skies
weave it's own
attitude from
pinned up
stars.
There's something
in the streets
where you meet
those rare few angels
wearing filthy wings
and dark halos round
their sunken eyelids
entering small pubs,
adandoned buildings
that...
#city
#dance
#dark
#gothic
#music
65 reads
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Roguenarak
Poem Published
25th Aug 2024 2:26pm
25th Aug 2024 2:26pm
Rememberance of the Four, Act One
O, it has been sung five times before
And it shall resonate in the future forever more
But for the Four I will repeat, in the rememberance of their name
Picture a land of beautiful peace, fabled and forgotten
One where sins were so few, and no ill men yet lived
Creatures both bird and serpent, standing on two legs
Praying to violent Gods, terrified of the world beyond
Stood hidden on this continent they called Firavon
There, from dirt came the humans
So innocent and childish
Toiling in the mud in survival
Their segmented hands...
And it shall resonate in the future forever more
But for the Four I will repeat, in the rememberance of their name
Picture a land of beautiful peace, fabled and forgotten
One where sins were so few, and no ill men yet lived
Creatures both bird and serpent, standing on two legs
Praying to violent Gods, terrified of the world beyond
Stood hidden on this continent they called Firavon
There, from dirt came the humans
So innocent and childish
Toiling in the mud in survival
Their segmented hands...
#fiction
#music
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ExercisingDemons
Poem Published
22nd Aug 2024 8:13pm
22nd Aug 2024 8:13pm
Back to The Back of the Bus
Move me back to the back of the bus
where the cool kids be
no muss no fuss, just booze and weed
and firecrackers
aimed at tires and seats of open jeeps
move me please
too much heat on the front where a rear view sees
and I am doomed to please
by having all my human cease
let me be as scum and sleaze
cough and wheeze
in the back of the back of the back of the bus
rum and heathens
run your thumb above where drunk chum is sleeping
to find gum...
where the cool kids be
no muss no fuss, just booze and weed
and firecrackers
aimed at tires and seats of open jeeps
move me please
too much heat on the front where a rear view sees
and I am doomed to please
by having all my human cease
let me be as scum and sleaze
cough and wheeze
in the back of the back of the back of the bus
rum and heathens
run your thumb above where drunk chum is sleeping
to find gum...
#consumerism
#music
#nostalgia #school
#nostalgia #school
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DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
20th Aug 2024 4:59am
20th Aug 2024 4:59am
Proud
You’ll always be my little brother
A man who toured the States
Dropping bass lines like no other
It’s your presence that resonates
Getting choked up by memories
Crying while laughing out loud
Music gifted us social remedies
Most of all you made me proud
A man who toured the States
Dropping bass lines like no other
It’s your presence that resonates
Getting choked up by memories
Crying while laughing out loud
Music gifted us social remedies
Most of all you made me proud
#brother
#family
#love #music
#love #music
86 reads
8 Comments
ExercisingDemons
Poem Published
18th Aug 2024 11:56pm
18th Aug 2024 11:56pm
The Many Seated Vehicle Song
Can someone help me?
I need a song that starts off slow
and slowly turns fast
One that grows in tempo
the longer it lasts,
and by the end
has gravitational mass
when it picks up
and the singer gets mad
then the song gets calm again
and it ends
as it started
Like if it was a song about a car
it would start with something simple
like
Someone humming
and strumming a guitar ...
I need a song that starts off slow
and slowly turns fast
One that grows in tempo
the longer it lasts,
and by the end
has gravitational mass
when it picks up
and the singer gets mad
then the song gets calm again
and it ends
as it started
Like if it was a song about a car
it would start with something simple
like
Someone humming
and strumming a guitar ...
#cars
#LifeAsAWriter
#lyrics
#metaphor
#music
112 reads
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
18th Aug 2024 3:29pm
18th Aug 2024 3:29pm
Mr. Zomb
a hard-hitting base with sexually charged lyrics
I lick them like they're candy
the witch I am can't resist
seductive intent has me purring
he must be talking about me
pulsing in the energy
he enters my sanctuary
I'm leery of this magician
toxic for sure
practitioner of occult visions I watch him work
a spell on the air
he intends the zombies to disrobe
feeling the vibrations
coming off those conjuring a response
pussy pleaser I want him the most
conjuring Mr. Zomb for the fun of it
...
I lick them like they're candy
the witch I am can't resist
seductive intent has me purring
he must be talking about me
pulsing in the energy
he enters my sanctuary
I'm leery of this magician
toxic for sure
practitioner of occult visions I watch him work
a spell on the air
he intends the zombies to disrobe
feeling the vibrations
coming off those conjuring a response
pussy pleaser I want him the most
conjuring Mr. Zomb for the fun of it
...
#music
113 reads
7 Comments
rainwriter
Poem Published
18th Aug 2024 8:37am
18th Aug 2024 8:37am
Girls
I never though I'm into girls
Until that dumb Billie Eilish song
Until I watched my friend too long
And wanted to be hers
I never thought I'd fall
For my ex-best friends ex
For the beauty of my sex
Just to be crushed against a wall
Being "cool" is just the same as nice
And I wanted you for every price
Wanted to change just to get a happy-end
But you said no and that's okay
Now I feel bad because I'm gay
And after all, we just remain "friends"
Until that dumb Billie Eilish song
Until I watched my friend too long
And wanted to be hers
I never thought I'd fall
For my ex-best friends ex
For the beauty of my sex
Just to be crushed against a wall
Being "cool" is just the same as nice
And I wanted you for every price
Wanted to change just to get a happy-end
But you said no and that's okay
Now I feel bad because I'm gay
And after all, we just remain "friends"
#bisexual
#hurt
#love
#music
#rejection
84 reads
1 Comment
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
18th Aug 2024 4:20am
18th Aug 2024 4:20am
Music Stories Episode 9 (The Guess Who - No Sugar Tonight/New Mother Nature)
Welcome to music stories. I’m your host, Damian DeadLove. Tonights band is another that calls Canada home. I’m talking about, The Guess Who. Huge fan of this band as well. I’ve been listening to them a lot lately, and realized there is a pretty good story about them.
The Guess Who are: Burton Cummings - Lead Vocals, and Keyboards, Randy Bachman - Guitar, and Backing Vocals, Jim Kale - Bass, and Garry Peterson - Drums. This was the most popular line up of the band from, 1968 to 1970. By the way that is the same, Randy Bachman that would later start the band, Bachman-Turner...
The Guess Who are: Burton Cummings - Lead Vocals, and Keyboards, Randy Bachman - Guitar, and Backing Vocals, Jim Kale - Bass, and Garry Peterson - Drums. This was the most popular line up of the band from, 1968 to 1970. By the way that is the same, Randy Bachman that would later start the band, Bachman-Turner...
#music
#prose
95 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
17th Aug 2024 8:18pm
17th Aug 2024 8:18pm
Before the Show
The Crimson Ghost assisting Marilyn Monroe
Getting herself dolled up, right before the show
Horror-Punk icons The Misfits will take the stage
Props and actors are ready, the crowd will soon rage
Where punk, horror, sexploitation & sci-fi unite as one
Creating a unique blend of music & imagery that is second to none
Getting herself dolled up, right before the show
Horror-Punk icons The Misfits will take the stage
Props and actors are ready, the crowd will soon rage
Where punk, horror, sexploitation & sci-fi unite as one
Creating a unique blend of music & imagery that is second to none
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#music
#PopCulture #rhyming
#PopCulture #rhyming
54 reads
6 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
16th Aug 2024 7:04pm
16th Aug 2024 7:04pm
music
to kiss the morning and open my soul
the coming of serenity equals a love over the way
wayward in my becoming
a beautiful awkwardness in the way I present myself
an oddling of faith
with a duality of personality
very dark and sweetly gentle
hold my hand and caress my shade
my blush is for you alone
I feel you deeply
i sing within when you are near
an immortal ballad for my brokenness
endearing me to you
your powerful presence
fights past all of my insecurities
boldly you walk past the cold dark...
the coming of serenity equals a love over the way
wayward in my becoming
a beautiful awkwardness in the way I present myself
an oddling of faith
with a duality of personality
very dark and sweetly gentle
hold my hand and caress my shade
my blush is for you alone
I feel you deeply
i sing within when you are near
an immortal ballad for my brokenness
endearing me to you
your powerful presence
fights past all of my insecurities
boldly you walk past the cold dark...
#love
#music
62 reads
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