Poems About the Morning by Top Critiquers
#morning
Coffee & Pancakes
I.
We reached that Dead End
the one that pointed and said:
You, Right
and. . .
You, Left.
Scared Us senseless
but we bagged ego
submitted despite what we wanted
Because Love
isn't always grasping for happiness
On the contrary;
it's often a self-sacrifice
for the one you love's benefit
Those who've truly Loved
understand this
II.
A timing belt of dynamics
churns for our experience
Infinite are intersecting...
We reached that Dead End
the one that pointed and said:
You, Right
and. . .
You, Left.
Scared Us senseless
but we bagged ego
submitted despite what we wanted
Because Love
isn't always grasping for happiness
On the contrary;
it's often a self-sacrifice
for the one you love's benefit
Those who've truly Loved
understand this
II.
A timing belt of dynamics
churns for our experience
Infinite are intersecting...
#love
#anniversary
#morning #coffee
#morning #coffee
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The Days of the Week
The Days of the Week
Each
Calendar
Starts
On its very
Own day.
Mine
Just
Begins
In its very
Own way.
Two
Taco
Tuesdays
For chicken
Take outs,
Two to
Eat there
And one
That just
Shouts.
Wednesdays
It's clear
That it's
All
My fault,
All my fault
Wednesdays
Is when
All wounds
Get salt.
Thursdays
It's back up
And all
Is
Reverse,
And then...
Each
Calendar
Starts
On its very
Own day.
Mine
Just
Begins
In its very
Own way.
Two
Taco
Tuesdays
For chicken
Take outs,
Two to
Eat there
And one
That just
Shouts.
Wednesdays
It's clear
That it's
All
My fault,
All my fault
Wednesdays
Is when
All wounds
Get salt.
Thursdays
It's back up
And all
Is
Reverse,
And then...
#morning
#night
#dawn
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Tayassuidae Family, Visits
12/30
Tayassuidae Family, Visits
it’s 3am
the Squadron’s musty scent persists
7 adults, 2 of which Parents of
two cute foot-long “Reds”
no idea why
Javelinas congregate
just outside my front door
Perhaps it’s an Empath gig
natural attraction
Flora, Fauna…..Fae?
Whatever their reasons
a wee bit annoying
when I am ready to
start my day or
awaiting a
grocery delivery
53 unique words
Tayassuidae Family, Visits
it’s 3am
the Squadron’s musty scent persists
7 adults, 2 of which Parents of
two cute foot-long “Reds”
no idea why
Javelinas congregate
just outside my front door
Perhaps it’s an Empath gig
natural attraction
Flora, Fauna…..Fae?
Whatever their reasons
a wee bit annoying
when I am ready to
start my day or
awaiting a
grocery delivery
53 unique words
#animals
#morning
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so what to do, silly ..
no milk in the fridge
so no tea
sugar
I’m not your sugar
honey
we could always have coffee
hate coffee
in my tea
so no tea
sugar
I’m not your sugar
honey
we could always have coffee
hate coffee
in my tea
#morning
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4 Comments
Not Quite Haiku
I
June
opens her
eyes...
butterfly
wings
fluttering...
scenting
the breeze
with summer
II
Tide of
stars
in sky
She/he is
a bottle
of saki...
her/his plums
intoxicate
June
opens her
eyes...
butterfly
wings
fluttering...
scenting
the breeze
with summer
II
Tide of
stars
in sky
She/he is
a bottle
of saki...
her/his plums
intoxicate
#summer
#fall
#spring
#morning
#night
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Sunday
let's do
a meet and greet
somewhere quaint..quiet
away from the riot of
restless souls
let's
undress egos
over the wafting redolence
of chamomile tea and
black coffee
let's engage
human tangibles
folding fingers..unfolding soft smiles
trade knowing glances of
our secret foreplay
let's converse
of miscellaneous happenings
do some people watching
as a slumbering neighborhood
slowly comes to life
let's soak in
the easy moments of this
Sunday...
a meet and greet
somewhere quaint..quiet
away from the riot of
restless souls
let's
undress egos
over the wafting redolence
of chamomile tea and
black coffee
let's engage
human tangibles
folding fingers..unfolding soft smiles
trade knowing glances of
our secret foreplay
let's converse
of miscellaneous happenings
do some people watching
as a slumbering neighborhood
slowly comes to life
let's soak in
the easy moments of this
Sunday...
#love
#morning
#lover
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HASTE THE SEASON
Autumn's nature comes
Warm colors that wakes trees trunks
Fallen leaves some runs
Months prepare they care
The sun torments against flesh
Humanity's bare
Enjoying summer
Ready for a cool calmer
To glimpse Falls primer
Traditional trees
That gently root to leaves
Transitions tinges
Orange-yellow browns
I love how each leaf falls down
Ecstatic around
God a true artist
knows his hues earthy...
Warm colors that wakes trees trunks
Fallen leaves some runs
Months prepare they care
The sun torments against flesh
Humanity's bare
Enjoying summer
Ready for a cool calmer
To glimpse Falls primer
Traditional trees
That gently root to leaves
Transitions tinges
Orange-yellow browns
I love how each leaf falls down
Ecstatic around
God a true artist
knows his hues earthy...
#summer
#fall
#morning #night
#morning #night
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Caffeine Lass
Caffeine Lass
Purple caffeine girl
Is jogging suit espresso
Become my morning coffee
That awakens my senses
To her azalea stroll
Purple caffeine girl
Is jogging suit espresso
Become my morning coffee
That awakens my senses
To her azalea stroll
#women
#flowers
#morning
#nature
#sensual
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The Portrait Of One So Ticklish
Julie smiled big at Tori.
Julie's modeling for Tori's art class project.
That's before Mark walked in.
He sat on top of Julie's back.
Then, he started tickling her all over.
Julie's modeling for Tori's art class project.
That's before Mark walked in.
He sat on top of Julie's back.
Then, he started tickling her all over.
#art
#fiction
#friendship
#morning
#relationships
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DU Poetry : Poems About the Morning by Top Critiquers