Poems About Manipulation Seeking Honest Critique
#manipulation
Poems about manipulation seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
16th Dec 2022 12:27pm
16th Dec 2022 12:27pm
Encounter With A Dangerous Incubus
#gothic
#fiction
#vampires
#sensual
#manipulation
321 reads
0 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
8th Nov 2022 12:00pm
8th Nov 2022 12:00pm
Like a dog
You break an egg and there's nothing inside,
between lack of will and surprise
you decide to become a vegetarian and send
an ovo-lacto contempt for everyone.
Animal protein consumers
who might want to find something
inside the shell of an egg
and they think the watermelon's red
is good because it could be blood, but it's not!
Bloody-Mary at five o'clock
like a tea for an Englishman who says he knows
but he never goes there to confirm
and after others say they don't want to
go there and say it should have been...
between lack of will and surprise
you decide to become a vegetarian and send
an ovo-lacto contempt for everyone.
Animal protein consumers
who might want to find something
inside the shell of an egg
and they think the watermelon's red
is good because it could be blood, but it's not!
Bloody-Mary at five o'clock
like a tea for an Englishman who says he knows
but he never goes there to confirm
and after others say they don't want to
go there and say it should have been...
#anger
#disappointment
#emptiness #manipulation
#emptiness #manipulation
229 reads
3 Comments
Quizzy29
Tanzo Ellis
Tanzo Ellis
Poem Published
5th Nov 2022 1:47am
5th Nov 2022 1:47am
Different concept of understanding
We talked the same language but had two different understandings
You were so quick to go left when I always tried to guide us right
Loyalty was needed to help us stick you used it to make me sick
I was the joke & we had a laugh now you wake & walk your own path
The times were good on mistake remember skipping rocks cross the lake
Those thoughts will be in your bed with hopes of a future in your head
(The important ingredient)
You were so quick to go left when I always tried to guide us right
Loyalty was needed to help us stick you used it to make me sick
I was the joke & we had a laugh now you wake & walk your own path
The times were good on mistake remember skipping rocks cross the lake
Those thoughts will be in your bed with hopes of a future in your head
(The important ingredient)
#gratitude
#respect
#manipulation #deception
#manipulation #deception
284 reads
2 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
24th Oct 2022 11:07pm
24th Oct 2022 11:07pm
Where Man is Beast and You are Prey
6am
Still dark
Spooning
My cock hard with morning light
Insistent against your ass
Don't push me away
You know I'm not leaving
I take your hand
And make you feel the throb
The heartbeat of my lower brain
Precum forming
Your legs opening
You're going to take it
And take it hard
Strategic morning fucking
Where man is beast
and you are prey
Still dark
Spooning
My cock hard with morning light
Insistent against your ass
Don't push me away
You know I'm not leaving
I take your hand
And make you feel the throb
The heartbeat of my lower brain
Precum forming
Your legs opening
You're going to take it
And take it hard
Strategic morning fucking
Where man is beast
and you are prey
#sex
#power
#morning
#greed
#manipulation
575 reads
19 Comments
jrc2006
J Rae
J Rae
Poem Published
13th Oct 2022 5:18pm
13th Oct 2022 5:18pm
if you hated me
it’d be easier if you hated me.
if you didn’t hold me closer as i’m breaking down inside
if you didn’t kiss me and tell me it would be okay.
to hate me
to walk away from me and not speak again
to throw rocks at the mirror in my heart till it breaks
but that’s far from you.
even when i try to hate you instead
i feel those hands that wrap around me getting tighter as my tears fall onto that black sweatshirt
as my throat clenches trying not to let it all out onto you.
as those lips fall onto my forehead
my mind disconnects from my heart ...
if you didn’t hold me closer as i’m breaking down inside
if you didn’t kiss me and tell me it would be okay.
to hate me
to walk away from me and not speak again
to throw rocks at the mirror in my heart till it breaks
but that’s far from you.
even when i try to hate you instead
i feel those hands that wrap around me getting tighter as my tears fall onto that black sweatshirt
as my throat clenches trying not to let it all out onto you.
as those lips fall onto my forehead
my mind disconnects from my heart ...
#love
#hurt
#manipulation
415 reads
4 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
8th Oct 2022 3:17pm
8th Oct 2022 3:17pm
Silence Makes People Uneasy
I'm always in control
Business and life run the same
Learned how to win saying little
State my case and then clamp down
Silence makes people uneasy
I wait them out
They can't stand it
Then they tell you everything you want
Taught by my mentor
Ex-CIA guy
I love silence
Beautiful nuance
Sign here ...
Business and life run the same
Learned how to win saying little
State my case and then clamp down
Silence makes people uneasy
I wait them out
They can't stand it
Then they tell you everything you want
Taught by my mentor
Ex-CIA guy
I love silence
Beautiful nuance
Sign here ...
#silence
#confessional
#TruthOfLife
#philosophical
#manipulation
408 reads
24 Comments
joegracegrace
Joe Grace
Joe Grace
Poem Published
13th Sep 2022 10:32am
13th Sep 2022 10:32am
What RUSSIA Is Going To Do Next
I'm 100% sure that Russia will invade Western Europe.
Russia can't beat NATO - true.
But Russia BOMBS America first.
Then the Kremlin calls all the leaders of NATO nations on the phone,
telling them "order your soldiers to lay down their arms OR ELSE WE WILL BOMB U LIKE WE DID THE USA !!"
So the only reason Russia wins against NATO in Europe is this:
if NATO fights back, those nations will get BOMBED !!
Daniel 7.8 adds that only 3 nations ("3 horns") get bombed ("uprooted").
Apparently the 7 other nations agree to surrender without a fight - to...
Russia can't beat NATO - true.
But Russia BOMBS America first.
Then the Kremlin calls all the leaders of NATO nations on the phone,
telling them "order your soldiers to lay down their arms OR ELSE WE WILL BOMB U LIKE WE DID THE USA !!"
So the only reason Russia wins against NATO in Europe is this:
if NATO fights back, those nations will get BOMBED !!
Daniel 7.8 adds that only 3 nations ("3 horns") get bombed ("uprooted").
Apparently the 7 other nations agree to surrender without a fight - to...
#hate
#death
#greed #manipulation
#greed #manipulation
342 reads
0 Comments
chy
Poem Published
10th Sep 2022 00:34am
10th Sep 2022 00:34am
Pepto-Bismol
a sight of pure abysmal
a spoon of Pepto-Bismol
my head is spinning
my eyes are bleeding
i wonder why
we forsake our teaching
our sinful acts
consumed by god
so how come he
remain a fraud
he's pure with life
from up above
but send us down
to empty bouts
although we sinned
from heart within
he forgives
until my end
a spoon of Pepto-Bismol
my head is spinning
my eyes are bleeding
i wonder why
we forsake our teaching
our sinful acts
consumed by god
so how come he
remain a fraud
he's pure with life
from up above
but send us down
to empty bouts
although we sinned
from heart within
he forgives
until my end
#religion
#God
#hypocrisy #manipulation
#hypocrisy #manipulation
360 reads
7 Comments
Bluevelvete
Poem Published
8th Sep 2022 7:46pm
8th Sep 2022 7:46pm
The insipid nature of a lesser poet.
There's softness to the edges
where battered bruises swell
stagnation wreaks of havoc
as bitterness shows it's tell
Fraught of curious cruelties
left strewn all laissez-faire
piercing blistered lashes
wielded sans a thought or care
Cloaked of cursed shadows
casting lines to widely catch
hooking hatred with barbed wire
smallness knowing it's outmatched
Bile sowing discord
becomes urgent breath to bate
sounding off in tempered tantrums
only ends in your own sealed fate
...
where battered bruises swell
stagnation wreaks of havoc
as bitterness shows it's tell
Fraught of curious cruelties
left strewn all laissez-faire
piercing blistered lashes
wielded sans a thought or care
Cloaked of cursed shadows
casting lines to widely catch
hooking hatred with barbed wire
smallness knowing it's outmatched
Bile sowing discord
becomes urgent breath to bate
sounding off in tempered tantrums
only ends in your own sealed fate
...
#lies
#bullying
#MovingOn
#hypocrisy
#manipulation
1028 reads
27 Comments
zinnzinn
ZINNNNIZ
ZINNNNIZ
Poem Published
5th Sep 2022 8:32pm
5th Sep 2022 8:32pm
True or False Witness
I spitter and sputter
With lust for trust a must or bust as the blades in my back they rust My words they flutter and mutter as I stutter to utter
But believe it or not
From haters to lovers
Still I can't believe it no way
To be one or the other
A dead man walking
Like a blind man in the dark
The final act
In the mundane script
In part with the pointless part of the part to impart as I depart
Half bled to death
From my own bleeding heart winded out of breath
With a flickering spark ...
With lust for trust a must or bust as the blades in my back they rust My words they flutter and mutter as I stutter to utter
But believe it or not
From haters to lovers
Still I can't believe it no way
To be one or the other
A dead man walking
Like a blind man in the dark
The final act
In the mundane script
In part with the pointless part of the part to impart as I depart
Half bled to death
From my own bleeding heart winded out of breath
With a flickering spark ...
#secrets
#betrayal
#drugs
#TruthOfLife
#manipulation
691 reads
4 Comments
Sandals
Poem Published
30th Aug 2022 2:43pm
30th Aug 2022 2:43pm
Peace Within The Sheets
I know u wanted peace between the sheets
But realistically I didn't want it to be apart my own hurt
So I left it as cash not to ah bash
U for headlines like that is easy to mash
I went for a different mind state
But it only led me to increase crime rate
Within this thug I ah stayed some more
Implanted for sure without being a bore
Put myself within my own hands
Stayed away from women made own demands
So when I applied this for sure
To me it felt so ah pure
There was nothing but peace at night
Too that so felt...
But realistically I didn't want it to be apart my own hurt
So I left it as cash not to ah bash
U for headlines like that is easy to mash
I went for a different mind state
But it only led me to increase crime rate
Within this thug I ah stayed some more
Implanted for sure without being a bore
Put myself within my own hands
Stayed away from women made own demands
So when I applied this for sure
To me it felt so ah pure
There was nothing but peace at night
Too that so felt...
#anger
#ILoveYou
#identity
#SelfReflection
#manipulation
322 reads
0 Comments
buddhakitty
Poem Published
29th Aug 2022 1:57am
29th Aug 2022 1:57am
myths and vivisection
beauty is in the eye
of a dead fish floating
on it's side on top
of the water
fortune favors the
underhanded and
dishonest
hope springs a leak
and sinks into the depths
of the Marina Trench
no alms for the poor,
just alms for the uber
rich and corporate
America through
sky scaper sized tax
loop holes
myths
fairy
tales
delusions
the end doesn't always
justify the means
last man standing
please shut off the
lights ...
of a dead fish floating
on it's side on top
of the water
fortune favors the
underhanded and
dishonest
hope springs a leak
and sinks into the depths
of the Marina Trench
no alms for the poor,
just alms for the uber
rich and corporate
America through
sky scaper sized tax
loop holes
myths
fairy
tales
delusions
the end doesn't always
justify the means
last man standing
please shut off the
lights ...
#lies
#greed
#hypocrisy
#manipulation
#vulnerability
436 reads
4 Comments
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