Poems About Magic Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about magic seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
The KinkWizard
The KinkWizard, there she goes
Walking by, in her gown that glows
Her cape awash with spattered blood
Over her a head, a hoarded hood
A mystical being, so warm, so pure
You’re drawn in by her illusive demure
Cosmic qualities, calm and collected
Ensnared by her spell, reality rejected
Who is she, and where is she from
Better be quick, or she’ll catch you, run!
Walking by, in her gown that glows
Her cape awash with spattered blood
Over her a head, a hoarded hood
A mystical being, so warm, so pure
You’re drawn in by her illusive demure
Cosmic qualities, calm and collected
Ensnared by her spell, reality rejected
Who is she, and where is she from
Better be quick, or she’ll catch you, run!
#magic
#myself
#mystery
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My Magic Bag
I cannot see you
Though I know you're there
I feel your words
You pen with flair
It makes it seem
As though you're here
All of your positive vibes
Are most welcome here
Let me make myself
Perfectly clear
I have a magic bag
That I keep near
Just look inside
You will find them there
Though I know you're there
I feel your words
You pen with flair
It makes it seem
As though you're here
All of your positive vibes
Are most welcome here
Let me make myself
Perfectly clear
I have a magic bag
That I keep near
Just look inside
You will find them there
#magic
#relationships
#uplifting
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Hymn to The White Spring
In the beginning I saw nothing
eyes furiously adjusting
between day and night
a woman held my hand down
those gnarled stone steps
as I teetered on the edge
of nerves and darkness
then, as if a dimmer switch
gently illuminated sight:
hundreds of candles
moss covered horns
a huge central pool carved
out of simplistic stone
overflowing with spring water.
I sat a little.
Watched naked humans climb
in and out of that...
eyes furiously adjusting
between day and night
a woman held my hand down
those gnarled stone steps
as I teetered on the edge
of nerves and darkness
then, as if a dimmer switch
gently illuminated sight:
hundreds of candles
moss covered horns
a huge central pool carved
out of simplistic stone
overflowing with spring water.
I sat a little.
Watched naked humans climb
in and out of that...
#God
#pagan
#magic #Britain
#magic #Britain
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Wild wicked witch
I’m a wild wicked witch
That’s right, you heard me bitch
You can poke at me with your sticks
But I’ll never miss a trick
Let me cast a spell
Ensnare you in my hell
You can fight, you can yell
But the magic will always tell
Tell me where you’re hiding
Where you’ve ran, which wall you’re climbing
It’s all just a case of timing
I’m forever learning, forever finding
Finding things I’d left behind
Finding things I’d hidden
Finding things I’d cast aside
To things I’d said good riddance
...
That’s right, you heard me bitch
You can poke at me with your sticks
But I’ll never miss a trick
Let me cast a spell
Ensnare you in my hell
You can fight, you can yell
But the magic will always tell
Tell me where you’re hiding
Where you’ve ran, which wall you’re climbing
It’s all just a case of timing
I’m forever learning, forever finding
Finding things I’d left behind
Finding things I’d hidden
Finding things I’d cast aside
To things I’d said good riddance
...
#fiction
#magic
#witches #NaPoWriMo2024
#witches #NaPoWriMo2024
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Wardruna - Hertan
take me wherever you want
as long as you keep that pace
as if my heart beats
at the center of the universe
repeat the verse to me
talk equitably different to me
about everything I don't see
but that inhabits my skin
take me with you to places
that I only imagined but I know
that are out there waiting for me
free me from the limits that bind
shares my body with the energy
share my energy with life
share my life with everyone
let us all share the light of existence
as long as you keep that pace
as if my heart beats
at the center of the universe
repeat the verse to me
talk equitably different to me
about everything I don't see
but that inhabits my skin
take me with you to places
that I only imagined but I know
that are out there waiting for me
free me from the limits that bind
shares my body with the energy
share my energy with life
share my life with everyone
let us all share the light of existence
#identity
#TruthOfLife
#LifeCycle
#magic
#SelfDiscovery
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Who am I?
Who am I?
Am I even me?
Who is the I that asks the question?
Where am I?
Am I even here?
Who is the I who perceives this space?
What am I?
Am I even alive?
Who is the I who creates this reality?
When am I?
Do I even exist?
Who is the I that perceives time?
How am I?
Can this world be true?
Who defines knowledge and who are you?
Am I even me?
Who is the I that asks the question?
Where am I?
Am I even here?
Who is the I who perceives this space?
What am I?
Am I even alive?
Who is the I who creates this reality?
When am I?
Do I even exist?
Who is the I that perceives time?
How am I?
Can this world be true?
Who defines knowledge and who are you?
#identity
#TruthOfLife
#mystery
#magic
#philosophical
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Sex magic
#lust
#sex
#magic
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Esalen
I remember a big room
some central lodge perhaps
empty
a song playing loudly
and not just any song
a song of exquisite joy
Tom Petty's
American Girl
Barely thinking
I step into the song
and I dance
I dance with my long blonde hair flying
l dance like a dervish from a veiled lifetime
I dance with abandon because I'm 22 and want to kill myself
and who cares if I'm foolish
if I don't have to remember it
I dance because I worship music
I dance because I'm a prayer in motion
I dance because...
some central lodge perhaps
empty
a song playing loudly
and not just any song
a song of exquisite joy
Tom Petty's
American Girl
Barely thinking
I step into the song
and I dance
I dance with my long blonde hair flying
l dance like a dervish from a veiled lifetime
I dance with abandon because I'm 22 and want to kill myself
and who cares if I'm foolish
if I don't have to remember it
I dance because I worship music
I dance because I'm a prayer in motion
I dance because...
#music
#magic
#dance
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12 Comments
May the force be with you…
A fine young chap once told me
That I am the bees knees
He told me that I was a dreamer
And an absolute fucking G
He told me to be cautious
Of the fear that haunts the soul
He told me it can even be heard
When you put your head up against a bowl
He told me I was a master
Of sorcery of course
This for a fact I already knew
As I was born with the force ✨
That I am the bees knees
He told me that I was a dreamer
And an absolute fucking G
He told me to be cautious
Of the fear that haunts the soul
He told me it can even be heard
When you put your head up against a bowl
He told me I was a master
Of sorcery of course
This for a fact I already knew
As I was born with the force ✨
#dreams
#magic
#meditation
#philosophical
#SelfDiscovery
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Sitr
in my chambers you do creep
vexing my vision with your speech
darkness dear won't you speak in metaphor
the poetry sewn into your heart
it is a private language
that of screams
terror knows what I mean
in the halls that grows thick with shadows
silently observe terror
in the onyx kingdom from which I originate
you stir my loins frustrating me
legion do my bidding
seduce the man of my choosing
cultivate lust where there is none
seep into his loins and make him rise to greet me
tender fascination with our...
vexing my vision with your speech
darkness dear won't you speak in metaphor
the poetry sewn into your heart
it is a private language
that of screams
terror knows what I mean
in the halls that grows thick with shadows
silently observe terror
in the onyx kingdom from which I originate
you stir my loins frustrating me
legion do my bidding
seduce the man of my choosing
cultivate lust where there is none
seep into his loins and make him rise to greet me
tender fascination with our...
#dark
#magic
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9 Comments
Hektate
Hektate Goddess over magic hear my plea
something is bothering me
I spell on the winds and spin
weaving my words as I go
to catch a spider
venomous little creature
symbolic with an hourglass shape
behold for all women's sake
a metaphor for time
treachery among my own kind
thievery of the soul to snare a man
wickedly she goes
evil manipulations fall from the tongue
pitting one against the other
widow, crone imaginations of taking the throne
delusions of grandeur
sinister telling lets me know ...
something is bothering me
I spell on the winds and spin
weaving my words as I go
to catch a spider
venomous little creature
symbolic with an hourglass shape
behold for all women's sake
a metaphor for time
treachery among my own kind
thievery of the soul to snare a man
wickedly she goes
evil manipulations fall from the tongue
pitting one against the other
widow, crone imaginations of taking the throne
delusions of grandeur
sinister telling lets me know ...
#love
#magic
#witches
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2 Comments
The Art Of Burning
a solitary figure stands lost in thought
shadows cross my path and I usher them on their way
they are part of the scene
talking to my Father I take note of his mastery
I ask what is wrong with me.
we seem flawed or at least I do
nature merrily goes down her path with fangs bared and venom spewing
I follow after the witches before me
knowing I burned for it in days past
you stir inside me
with the need to touch the dark
and I wonder dare I?
you even encourage me to master my skills
I...
shadows cross my path and I usher them on their way
they are part of the scene
talking to my Father I take note of his mastery
I ask what is wrong with me.
we seem flawed or at least I do
nature merrily goes down her path with fangs bared and venom spewing
I follow after the witches before me
knowing I burned for it in days past
you stir inside me
with the need to touch the dark
and I wonder dare I?
you even encourage me to master my skills
I...
#magic
#witches
106 reads
6 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Magic Seeking Honest Critique