Poems About Magic Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about magic seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Dirtshirt
(or "The Necromancy Blues")
The dead shall live and their bodies will break
these blue remains from the nameless crave
bears a graceful pain in gunmetal quake -
braced for the wake of an early grave
the whippoorwill cries from a lonesome ledge
the killdeer shrieks in protective feign
hinterland magic past the greenway's edge
ensorcelled brain at sauntering reign
black goat of the wood with a thousand young
gibbering pact along drooling path ...
The dead shall live and their bodies will break
these blue remains from the nameless crave
bears a graceful pain in gunmetal quake -
braced for the wake of an early grave
the whippoorwill cries from a lonesome ledge
the killdeer shrieks in protective feign
hinterland magic past the greenway's edge
ensorcelled brain at sauntering reign
black goat of the wood with a thousand young
gibbering pact along drooling path ...
#death
#Easter
#hope
#magic
#nature
21 reads
0 Comments
Evil Empire
I’m an advocate for compassion and empathy
But the recent political results left me disappointed
Now the world is lacking even more sympathy
While several leaders are illogical and disjointed
But I remember that before all this came to pass
I thought maybe we should let crazy take the wheel
I mean how often do you see a vehicle driven by an ass?
Spellbound by some witchcraft in the art of the steal
I think I wished for this so that all would be revealed
So that even the most blind would eventually learn
Thou shall fucketh...
But the recent political results left me disappointed
Now the world is lacking even more sympathy
While several leaders are illogical and disjointed
But I remember that before all this came to pass
I thought maybe we should let crazy take the wheel
I mean how often do you see a vehicle driven by an ass?
Spellbound by some witchcraft in the art of the steal
I think I wished for this so that all would be revealed
So that even the most blind would eventually learn
Thou shall fucketh...
#LifeStruggles
#magic
#philosophical
86 reads
1 Comment
Witch Love

#lust
#magic
#sex #witches
#sex #witches
200 reads
2 Comments
The Man Selling Black Balloons
No one remembers the first time he came.
Or perhaps, they only remember after.
A shape at the edge of the street,
standing where the streetlights flicker.
A man, if man is the word—
his face a wet smear in the fog,
his suit darker than the night itself,
tailored from something too still to be fabric.
In his hands, the strings—
thin, trembling veins
that stretch upward,
vanishing into ink-dark orbs,
swollen, pulsing, breathing.
He does not speak.
He does not call out.
And yet, the children go to him. ...
Or perhaps, they only remember after.
A shape at the edge of the street,
standing where the streetlights flicker.
A man, if man is the word—
his face a wet smear in the fog,
his suit darker than the night itself,
tailored from something too still to be fabric.
In his hands, the strings—
thin, trembling veins
that stretch upward,
vanishing into ink-dark orbs,
swollen, pulsing, breathing.
He does not speak.
He does not call out.
And yet, the children go to him. ...
#devil
#ghosts
#magic
#monsters
#mythology
101 reads
1 Comment
Writing Books
When you write a book using the feather of a hen.
Dip it in ink or use a fountain pen.
You can write whole new worlds.
Like magic,fantasize.
With your pure imagination.
And before your eyes.
The words begin to come alive and dance.
Like a romance novel with a chance.
An adventure plot in advance.
Or a comedy with a glance.
It's like your pen holds power.
As beautiful as a freshly bloomed flower.
The smell of a new book is one you cannot resist.
With a new plot,a new cover.
And the memory of the plot...
Dip it in ink or use a fountain pen.
You can write whole new worlds.
Like magic,fantasize.
With your pure imagination.
And before your eyes.
The words begin to come alive and dance.
Like a romance novel with a chance.
An adventure plot in advance.
Or a comedy with a glance.
It's like your pen holds power.
As beautiful as a freshly bloomed flower.
The smell of a new book is one you cannot resist.
With a new plot,a new cover.
And the memory of the plot...
#books
#hope
#magic #motivational
#magic #motivational
61 reads
0 Comments
Goddesses
Voodoo is the strongest type of magic done with sex and smoke
I've been quietly observing
never ran from a dick I can say I have
a dude pulled out a baseball bat
wanted it handled
I said I can do that from here
came right then and there
it's an old heady magic
code name brown sugar
these women aren't playing
they turn the man himself on
anti up immortal wife swap
she calls the shots
don't get it confused
what I know is under wraps
don't fuck around
and catch a case of I love you
The men...
I've been quietly observing
never ran from a dick I can say I have
a dude pulled out a baseball bat
wanted it handled
I said I can do that from here
came right then and there
it's an old heady magic
code name brown sugar
these women aren't playing
they turn the man himself on
anti up immortal wife swap
she calls the shots
don't get it confused
what I know is under wraps
don't fuck around
and catch a case of I love you
The men...
#erotic
#magic
217 reads
1 Comment
~oasis heart
viz: oasis heart
#love
#magic
#minimalist
#rebellion
#TruthOfLife
178 reads
5 Comments
Found Scrawled Across an Instrument of Occultic Practice
This astrolabe has measured out
My days in damned astrology
The turning of its golden hands
Riposte to pure theology
My days in damned astrology
The turning of its golden hands
Riposte to pure theology
#historical
#magic
#pagan #spiritual
#pagan #spiritual
102 reads
3 Comments
Feeling Of A New Book
Not much people talk about the feeling of a new book.
When you open it and travel worlds.
Like a magical adventure with captain Hook.
Not everyone talks about the classic smell.
Of a brand new book,and the story it tell.
Or maybe about the spell it casts.
And while you read it with imagination,it lasts.
Where you travel to different characters'' pasts.
And you travel through their head.
Through their lives,seeing through their eyes.
And practically living their lives.
Opening a new book for the first time. ...
When you open it and travel worlds.
Like a magical adventure with captain Hook.
Not everyone talks about the classic smell.
Of a brand new book,and the story it tell.
Or maybe about the spell it casts.
And while you read it with imagination,it lasts.
Where you travel to different characters'' pasts.
And you travel through their head.
Through their lives,seeing through their eyes.
And practically living their lives.
Opening a new book for the first time. ...
#books
#hope
#magic
#motivational
#prose
51 reads
0 Comments
Via "666"
6 Hour's 6 minutes 6 seconds the witching hour is at hand!!
Warlocks prepared for battle release your battle cry and lay out all your battle plan's!!
Engaged in this eternal warfare mortal combat of the soul our main goal is to overtake and gain all control!
The Mission is clear as we get in gear with no fear, with dominance so overwhelming and bold!
Set for that final judgment hour and day fully equipped to make all our enemies fold!
Moving forward with full force, powerful rituals and spells designed to help all our goals to...
Warlocks prepared for battle release your battle cry and lay out all your battle plan's!!
Engaged in this eternal warfare mortal combat of the soul our main goal is to overtake and gain all control!
The Mission is clear as we get in gear with no fear, with dominance so overwhelming and bold!
Set for that final judgment hour and day fully equipped to make all our enemies fold!
Moving forward with full force, powerful rituals and spells designed to help all our goals to...
#magic
#pagan
#rebirth
#religion
#spiritual
105 reads
0 Comments
An Elementary Rhyme For No Reason
Spitting out vulgarity
When asked for charity
A motionless bird
Is often never heard
Pick up the loose crumbs
Moisten the tips of your thumbs
Remove your ear from the door
Nothing you haven't heard before
Someone's lazy brown eye
Is looking at me below the sky
Beyond the glass
Is a pain in your ass
There's a reason mom hides
That deadly bottle of formaldehyde
If you'd like to catch snowflakes
Keep a pail nearby for heaven sake
Chocolate is man's best friend
Had...
When asked for charity
A motionless bird
Is often never heard
Pick up the loose crumbs
Moisten the tips of your thumbs
Remove your ear from the door
Nothing you haven't heard before
Someone's lazy brown eye
Is looking at me below the sky
Beyond the glass
Is a pain in your ass
There's a reason mom hides
That deadly bottle of formaldehyde
If you'd like to catch snowflakes
Keep a pail nearby for heaven sake
Chocolate is man's best friend
Had...
#dark
#hell
#magic
#rhyming
#tragedy
123 reads
6 Comments
Black Feathers
Black feathers in the breeze
Soaring over mountains seas
Taming wind in perfect ease
He flips in mid-air as a tease
And I wonder if a raven sees
And if perhaps he hears my pleas
I down here and on my knees
Whispering lift me with you please
I'll trade you cheese
Soaring over mountains seas
Taming wind in perfect ease
He flips in mid-air as a tease
And I wonder if a raven sees
And if perhaps he hears my pleas
I down here and on my knees
Whispering lift me with you please
I'll trade you cheese
#admiration
#birds
#freedom
#magic
#wind
92 reads
4 Comments
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