Poems About Magic Seeking Honest Critique
#magic
Poems about magic seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
occult magic
innuendos of the witchcraft faith
the book is blazing
it speaks double talk
and in strict metaphor
it will not reveal its language to a novice
who should not be troubling the waters
incarnate divinity there is more than one eye upon me
sacred silence gives me pause
I am to learn occult magic
Glory be I have avoided it
my darkness is heavy
and it is a big responsibility
ignorance is not an excuse
it has called upon me
it's my very own darkness
who I have channeled here
I excite the spirits ...
the book is blazing
it speaks double talk
and in strict metaphor
it will not reveal its language to a novice
who should not be troubling the waters
incarnate divinity there is more than one eye upon me
sacred silence gives me pause
I am to learn occult magic
Glory be I have avoided it
my darkness is heavy
and it is a big responsibility
ignorance is not an excuse
it has called upon me
it's my very own darkness
who I have channeled here
I excite the spirits ...
#magic
#witches
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magic tomes
my life in a moment
loneliness empties my days
going through the days in slow motion
I wonder are these my last moments I'm not embracing
I'm fully awake within my sadness
is it selfish to want more days in the sun
shadows crowd me they say I'm of the darkness
it is as it will be maybe I never had a choice
burns the wick
as the sage smokes
rising to the heavens
I beseech you Lord
accept my offering
a child of mercy
swimming in the abyss
the dark is charming
maybe I was always a strange brew ...
loneliness empties my days
going through the days in slow motion
I wonder are these my last moments I'm not embracing
I'm fully awake within my sadness
is it selfish to want more days in the sun
shadows crowd me they say I'm of the darkness
it is as it will be maybe I never had a choice
burns the wick
as the sage smokes
rising to the heavens
I beseech you Lord
accept my offering
a child of mercy
swimming in the abyss
the dark is charming
maybe I was always a strange brew ...
#magic
#witches
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magically yours
the anatomy of two wrapped around each other
desperately fighting the outside world
clinging to what is true
the feeling rising in our souls
caressing sorrow we come closer
facing our fears one at a time
shutting everyone out
we silently hold on
the dark moves quietly inside
waking up to the honesty of the moment
shared dreams open to us
kiss the night and the skies blush
we drift through doubt
and enter urgency
feeding the fire we succumb
shutting out the naysayers
our love is stunning ...
desperately fighting the outside world
clinging to what is true
the feeling rising in our souls
caressing sorrow we come closer
facing our fears one at a time
shutting everyone out
we silently hold on
the dark moves quietly inside
waking up to the honesty of the moment
shared dreams open to us
kiss the night and the skies blush
we drift through doubt
and enter urgency
feeding the fire we succumb
shutting out the naysayers
our love is stunning ...
#love
#magic
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Draugr
Held tight by midnight's grip
Rotted flesh packs long ships
Coming from where frost bites
Storied bones lost to light
Yggdrasil’s root to Hel’s dark gate
Bound by wyrd, the Norns' cruel fate
Runes adorn the burial stone
Heralding a trove of restless bones
Tattered banners and olden grounds
What lurks beneath the mounds?
Empty eyes devoid of Niflheim’s mist
Jormungandr's venom kissed
Desecrate Asgard's hallowed halls
Death of worlds the gods...
Rotted flesh packs long ships
Coming from where frost bites
Storied bones lost to light
Yggdrasil’s root to Hel’s dark gate
Bound by wyrd, the Norns' cruel fate
Runes adorn the burial stone
Heralding a trove of restless bones
Tattered banners and olden grounds
What lurks beneath the mounds?
Empty eyes devoid of Niflheim’s mist
Jormungandr's venom kissed
Desecrate Asgard's hallowed halls
Death of worlds the gods...
#curse
#magic
#mythology
#narrative
#pagan
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sisters
uniquely open and vulnerable
seeking what is
taking my time testing what is right
reverse the curse of my bloodline
a natural witch I have no ill intent
but there is magic employed just by speaking
it is incessant, the charm is I love not hate
a darkling who doesn't care for occult magic
I conjure the winds it is a part of me
the elements feel my unease
I don't take note of my spells
better not to some witches copy
I will never have a trace of the potions for healing
spread the day she's getting too thin ...
seeking what is
taking my time testing what is right
reverse the curse of my bloodline
a natural witch I have no ill intent
but there is magic employed just by speaking
it is incessant, the charm is I love not hate
a darkling who doesn't care for occult magic
I conjure the winds it is a part of me
the elements feel my unease
I don't take note of my spells
better not to some witches copy
I will never have a trace of the potions for healing
spread the day she's getting too thin ...
#magic
#witches
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Husks In the Sand
I call upon thee for thy sphere
Sacred salts invoke the occult and fear
Five skulls and seven towers
Grant me thy seraphic powers
Seek the triads of umbral plains
Seventy two angles all in vain
Chaldee come forth with sacred flame
Induct I into thy holy name
Auroral orbs illuminate my path
Sfirot shows me the way to amaranthine wrath
Embrace thy dark archetype
A pungency thick and ripe
A wisdom from long dried lips
To sail with the dead...
Sacred salts invoke the occult and fear
Five skulls and seven towers
Grant me thy seraphic powers
Seek the triads of umbral plains
Seventy two angles all in vain
Chaldee come forth with sacred flame
Induct I into thy holy name
Auroral orbs illuminate my path
Sfirot shows me the way to amaranthine wrath
Embrace thy dark archetype
A pungency thick and ripe
A wisdom from long dried lips
To sail with the dead...
#dark
#magic
#narrative #religion
#narrative #religion
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spelling with thoughts
waiting on you I say a spell
a little mischief and something nice to remember me in time
I captured your rain your tears are special
inviting you in it's a gamble but I'm taking it
a hex upon me a heady one
I stir my emotions to see which one surfaces
my reputation as seer is known
but I didn't see you coming
you had a fuck you, glare on your face
I took it as a dare and I love that
spinning in fate
sink in and feel me in the depths
you wanted to attract a witch
I am securing you to me with a glamor ...
a little mischief and something nice to remember me in time
I captured your rain your tears are special
inviting you in it's a gamble but I'm taking it
a hex upon me a heady one
I stir my emotions to see which one surfaces
my reputation as seer is known
but I didn't see you coming
you had a fuck you, glare on your face
I took it as a dare and I love that
spinning in fate
sink in and feel me in the depths
you wanted to attract a witch
I am securing you to me with a glamor ...
#magic
#witches
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Sorcerer
Castle walls surround me,
and starts this magical symphony.
Wand of Sorcery compels me to fulfill this destiny.
Its glow guides me along,
following the trail of the evil
I know.
Evil so vile, so quick,
Its strike will make you deathly sick.
Townsfolk of many have fallen prey to
this sly skinless thing of gray.
Skinless due to shedding away,
leaving all in fear every day.
Onward the sorcerer paces,
with enchanted spells that can erase this.
A smoke like dimmed corridor he
approaches.
Wand at the ready,
keeping...
and starts this magical symphony.
Wand of Sorcery compels me to fulfill this destiny.
Its glow guides me along,
following the trail of the evil
I know.
Evil so vile, so quick,
Its strike will make you deathly sick.
Townsfolk of many have fallen prey to
this sly skinless thing of gray.
Skinless due to shedding away,
leaving all in fear every day.
Onward the sorcerer paces,
with enchanted spells that can erase this.
A smoke like dimmed corridor he
approaches.
Wand at the ready,
keeping...
#dark
#magic
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magic
entertaining the shadows across my mirror
when at first I look I though it was me
but nay it was ringer with an elongated chin
sharp looking eyes and a devilish grin
it was saying something, a chant
then suddenly it was behind me
directly communicating to my mind
it said it will bode well with you not to fight
relax and take a trip with me it's your fate
he moved quickly I was blankly staring
he said over here my dear
then we enter a portal
I felt tingles up my spine
we were time traveling
he said to a...
when at first I look I though it was me
but nay it was ringer with an elongated chin
sharp looking eyes and a devilish grin
it was saying something, a chant
then suddenly it was behind me
directly communicating to my mind
it said it will bode well with you not to fight
relax and take a trip with me it's your fate
he moved quickly I was blankly staring
he said over here my dear
then we enter a portal
I felt tingles up my spine
we were time traveling
he said to a...
#magic
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the pagan way
I'm entering the place of neither here no there
a pugatory of sorts
manifesting my feelings through song
a very personal music heard on the winds
and picked up by muses
they say what I can not
with an aggressive stance, express my bottled up emotions
it is a transference of energies
spoken in a language only for the chosen few
witches of powerful occult magic cast for me
while I spell on the wind
warlocks of renown see I am properly warded
grandfather time comes in he is aware
I have chosen the pagan way
...
a pugatory of sorts
manifesting my feelings through song
a very personal music heard on the winds
and picked up by muses
they say what I can not
with an aggressive stance, express my bottled up emotions
it is a transference of energies
spoken in a language only for the chosen few
witches of powerful occult magic cast for me
while I spell on the wind
warlocks of renown see I am properly warded
grandfather time comes in he is aware
I have chosen the pagan way
...
#magic
#pagan
#witches
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the wrinkles of the wind
my babuska
used to talk to the wind
used words
strange and silent
she asked favors from the wind
she blew in the ears of the wind
things the wind should do
and the wind shook the curtains
threw everything on the floor
the wind was excited
to the sound of my babuska's voice
used to talk to the wind
used words
strange and silent
she asked favors from the wind
she blew in the ears of the wind
things the wind should do
and the wind shook the curtains
threw everything on the floor
the wind was excited
to the sound of my babuska's voice
#aging
#LifeStruggles
#magic
#storm
#wind
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Grand Ball
It was the day of the grand ball.
There was a fancy hall and a golden chandelier.
The hall was full of people of all kinds.
Women in dresses,paper fans.
And gentlemen in fancy suits.
As the music plays,everyone sways.
To the music,to the beat.
Everyone danced with their partners,moving to the beat.
Couples swaying,symphony playing.
And all of the lovely things your lover is saying.
As all couples began to prance.
They swayed and began to dance.
Arriving to the grand ball.
In the fancy,decorated musical...
There was a fancy hall and a golden chandelier.
The hall was full of people of all kinds.
Women in dresses,paper fans.
And gentlemen in fancy suits.
As the music plays,everyone sways.
To the music,to the beat.
Everyone danced with their partners,moving to the beat.
Couples swaying,symphony playing.
And all of the lovely things your lover is saying.
As all couples began to prance.
They swayed and began to dance.
Arriving to the grand ball.
In the fancy,decorated musical...
#hope
#love
#magic
#motivational
#uplifting
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DU Poetry : Poems About Magic Seeking Honest Critique