Poems About Magic by Top Critiquers
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Poems about magic by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Haunting Magic
The veiled moon emits
the strangest obscure light.
Silently awakening
the secret world
of my dark delights.
Yet the tide twinkles,
blinding bright,
on the ancient shore
of my mind tonight.
Mysterious memories swirl
that have haunted me before.
As a dark euphoria sedates my core.
In the center of the soul
exists a vaulted door,
where the ghosts of the heart reside.
To go inside exposes
every secret you ache to confide.
Whoever told me there is no magic
lied to my seeking, searching eyes.
The...
the strangest obscure light.
Silently awakening
the secret world
of my dark delights.
Yet the tide twinkles,
blinding bright,
on the ancient shore
of my mind tonight.
Mysterious memories swirl
that have haunted me before.
As a dark euphoria sedates my core.
In the center of the soul
exists a vaulted door,
where the ghosts of the heart reside.
To go inside exposes
every secret you ache to confide.
Whoever told me there is no magic
lied to my seeking, searching eyes.
The...
#dark
#ghosts
#magic
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Sitr
in my chambers you do creep
vexing my vision with your speech
darkness dear won't you speak in metaphor
the poetry sewn into your heart
it is a private language
that of screams
terror knows what I mean
in the halls that grows thick with shadows
silently observe terror
in the onyx kingdom from which I originate
you stir my loins frustrating me
legion do my bidding
seduce the man of my choosing
cultivate lust where there is none
seep into his loins and make him rise to greet me
tender fascination with our...
vexing my vision with your speech
darkness dear won't you speak in metaphor
the poetry sewn into your heart
it is a private language
that of screams
terror knows what I mean
in the halls that grows thick with shadows
silently observe terror
in the onyx kingdom from which I originate
you stir my loins frustrating me
legion do my bidding
seduce the man of my choosing
cultivate lust where there is none
seep into his loins and make him rise to greet me
tender fascination with our...
#dark
#magic
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My Magic Bag
I cannot see you
Though I know you're there
I feel your words
You pen with flair
It makes it seem
As though you're here
All of your positive vibes
Are most welcome here
Let me make myself
Perfectly clear
I have a magic bag
That I keep near
Just look inside
You will find them there
Though I know you're there
I feel your words
You pen with flair
It makes it seem
As though you're here
All of your positive vibes
Are most welcome here
Let me make myself
Perfectly clear
I have a magic bag
That I keep near
Just look inside
You will find them there
#magic
#relationships
#uplifting
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The Divination of Bubbles
descending into clarity
warmth hugs every crevice
an exhale of certainty
tension at ease; I now focus
on this moment, just the one
where time stands motionless
pastel bubbles foretell my fortune
and I sink below the surface
tingles creep up my spine
follicles sway at the indulgence
tip back my glass of fine wine
and know: my future is limitless
warmth hugs every crevice
an exhale of certainty
tension at ease; I now focus
on this moment, just the one
where time stands motionless
pastel bubbles foretell my fortune
and I sink below the surface
tingles creep up my spine
follicles sway at the indulgence
tip back my glass of fine wine
and know: my future is limitless
#happiness
#TimeHeals
#magic
#water
#inspirational
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Concept 47 X - Gouache in Progress
It's real
No tricks
Still in progress
Trying to find magic
No tricks
Still in progress
Trying to find magic
#LifeStruggles
#honesty
#art
#magic
#philosophical
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The Magnificent
Walternate Universe – MAGS-94
The portal opened in the mezzanine of an empty old style theater
From there I could hear someone working over by the stage floor
As I walked down the isle between the seats I could see my brace blinking
My parallel self here was the likes of something I’d never seen before
“Hold it right there!” I heard his voice echoing across the ceiling
I had a feeling this alternate of mine was going to blow my mind
He was floating in mid-air about twenty feet over my head revealing
No wires, no harness, no...
The portal opened in the mezzanine of an empty old style theater
From there I could hear someone working over by the stage floor
As I walked down the isle between the seats I could see my brace blinking
My parallel self here was the likes of something I’d never seen before
“Hold it right there!” I heard his voice echoing across the ceiling
I had a feeling this alternate of mine was going to blow my mind
He was floating in mid-air about twenty feet over my head revealing
No wires, no harness, no...
#magic
#NaPoWriMo2023
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super power: part 2
it's like she's gazing through otherworldly eyes
sees things beyond ordinary sight
it's not just the panorama displayed by her lens
it's like she's seeing something...
...from within
a communion of sorts
with the textures, shadows & shapes
something in the way her mind & the image communicates
and she shows me the results of her endeavors
frustrated
because it didn't appear as she saw it
like her magic isn't as strong as she expected
I tell her...
...sometimes it's better to just take it all in
accept that there's...
sees things beyond ordinary sight
it's not just the panorama displayed by her lens
it's like she's seeing something...
...from within
a communion of sorts
with the textures, shadows & shapes
something in the way her mind & the image communicates
and she shows me the results of her endeavors
frustrated
because it didn't appear as she saw it
like her magic isn't as strong as she expected
I tell her...
...sometimes it's better to just take it all in
accept that there's...
#love
#beauty
#magic
#admiration
#daughter
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Midnight Conjuring
``~~~...~~~```
Even in death,
dark thoughts rot mine soul
That which I kept inside
has made its way out
that which was hid
among mine seven deadly sins
conjured,
In the midnight sun of the necromancer
vivianite bones
Old and decrepit
darken green blue & black,
```~~~… ...~~~```
That which was hid inside,
has found its way out
And am left as dead things among the living
In the valley of dry bones
```~~~… … ...~~~```
Even in death,
dark thoughts rot mine soul
That which I kept inside
has made its way out
that which was hid
among mine seven deadly sins
conjured,
In the midnight sun of the necromancer
vivianite bones
Old and decrepit
darken green blue & black,
```~~~… ...~~~```
That which was hid inside,
has found its way out
And am left as dead things among the living
In the valley of dry bones
```~~~… … ...~~~```
#rebirth
#TruthOfLife
#magic
#sacrifice
#curse
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FROM TABLE TO BED
At the table we have been well fed,
There remains that need to meet in bed.
The wine we both drank has warmed our hearts,
Descending to the love-making parts.
The uptown girl and downtime guy
Are equalled in each other's eye.
"First we eat, then we make love", I
Share my peasant philosophy.
We feel relaxed and ready to roll
In the hay (with sheath for birth control).
It leaves me to ask this well-worn line:
"Shall we do it at your place, or mine?"
"We can put to the test theories
That the sex act...
There remains that need to meet in bed.
The wine we both drank has warmed our hearts,
Descending to the love-making parts.
The uptown girl and downtime guy
Are equalled in each other's eye.
"First we eat, then we make love", I
Share my peasant philosophy.
We feel relaxed and ready to roll
In the hay (with sheath for birth control).
It leaves me to ask this well-worn line:
"Shall we do it at your place, or mine?"
"We can put to the test theories
That the sex act...
#love
#sex
#dreams
#lover
#magic
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Time to Leave
Facing the moon
silhouetted against grey mountains
a figure alone
without company
the day is done
seasons circle
as in autumn
leaves falling to the ground
tears as dew on leaves
falling, moistening the ground
and memories divine
just fading away
like ghosts departing before dawn
leaving nothing but faint whispers
murmured words breathed on mirrors
heavens don’t ever get dark
leave me a passage
with guiding lights.
silhouetted against grey mountains
a figure alone
without company
the day is done
seasons circle
as in autumn
leaves falling to the ground
tears as dew on leaves
falling, moistening the ground
and memories divine
just fading away
like ghosts departing before dawn
leaving nothing but faint whispers
murmured words breathed on mirrors
heavens don’t ever get dark
leave me a passage
with guiding lights.
#moon
#morning
#nature
#spiritual
#magic
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[ NaPoWriMo - 2023 Collection ] Cosmologically Speaking
In The Beginning
There was a Universal Shroud of Turin
a Matrix of crumbed vertebrate
stained with light and debris:
webbed particles
multicellular life
a mycelium
of unsolved mystery
plaguing humankind with a gravity
they were determined to defy
13.8 billion years of expansion
trillions of galaxies and stars
beyond their comprehension
ungrounded contentment
and magnified desire
Bridges of technological design
are manufactured—
fueled by resources
meant to sustain Life ...
There was a Universal Shroud of Turin
a Matrix of crumbed vertebrate
stained with light and debris:
webbed particles
multicellular life
a mycelium
of unsolved mystery
plaguing humankind with a gravity
they were determined to defy
13.8 billion years of expansion
trillions of galaxies and stars
beyond their comprehension
ungrounded contentment
and magnified desire
Bridges of technological design
are manufactured—
fueled by resources
meant to sustain Life ...
#astrology
#spiritual
#astronomy
#magic
#NaPoWriMo2023
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Feeling Myself
What is there when your energy isn't positive or negative
When your universe doesn't recognize you and there is no take or give
Do you exist in limbo, trapped in the rift
Or do you join the multiverse and open doorways within it's midst
To have seen the things that I have, can boggle the mind
Totally destroying astrophysics, Einstein and the laws of Newton's design
The many worlds where humans aren't the supreme beings
You would be surprised by the peace that I've seen
Reptilians at peace with reptilians, but acknowledging all other species ...
When your universe doesn't recognize you and there is no take or give
Do you exist in limbo, trapped in the rift
Or do you join the multiverse and open doorways within it's midst
To have seen the things that I have, can boggle the mind
Totally destroying astrophysics, Einstein and the laws of Newton's design
The many worlds where humans aren't the supreme beings
You would be surprised by the peace that I've seen
Reptilians at peace with reptilians, but acknowledging all other species ...
#dragons
#magic
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