Poems About Love by Top Critiquers
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Poems about love by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Though my love's Gone
Though my lover's gone
When these frames are but dust or ash in the wind,
Our love will keep working right to the end.
Our love was everything,
An unseen force
Holding our universe together.
In our love we were stronger than the tide
Fear had no hold with you by my side
You were always there:
To pick me up
To dust me off
To give me courage
To make me feel alive
Our love was a primal source:
Older than mountains,
More durable than rocks,
More inviting than
The fragile smile of a kiss. ...
When these frames are but dust or ash in the wind,
Our love will keep working right to the end.
Our love was everything,
An unseen force
Holding our universe together.
In our love we were stronger than the tide
Fear had no hold with you by my side
You were always there:
To pick me up
To dust me off
To give me courage
To make me feel alive
Our love was a primal source:
Older than mountains,
More durable than rocks,
More inviting than
The fragile smile of a kiss. ...
#gratitude
#love
#relationships #TimeHeals
#relationships #TimeHeals
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Cupid Multi-Lingual
If there has been an oversight and you have not been wished a Happy Valentines' Day, may one of the wishes below, in a tongue you understand, find its mark like cupid's arrow. I correct the oversight and wish you a [ Insert applicable line from below ].
If you have been wished already, in addition, please accept my wish for a Happy Valentines' Day.
And, as a lovely lady of DUP, if ok with you, consider yourself given by me a COVID safe virtual hug and kiss; a small, gift-wrapped box of your favorite chocolates / candy; a red rose; and a champagne toast. ...
If you have been wished already, in addition, please accept my wish for a Happy Valentines' Day.
And, as a lovely lady of DUP, if ok with you, consider yourself given by me a COVID safe virtual hug and kiss; a small, gift-wrapped box of your favorite chocolates / candy; a red rose; and a champagne toast. ...
#love
#relationships
#romantic
#admiration
#ValentinesDay
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Exquisite
Our personal activities have been in full effect all day
Now evening is upon us as we continue to play,
“From our romantic shower until it’s time to get dressed
Complimenting each other, because we want to be at our best,
“The ultimate goal is to be the sharpest ones on the scene
Movie star status, that causes anyone to have an erotic pleasant dream,
“Double checking in the mirror to make sure things are right
Before heading out into the darkness of night,
“As the city lights roll off the windshield
It amplifies my...
Now evening is upon us as we continue to play,
“From our romantic shower until it’s time to get dressed
Complimenting each other, because we want to be at our best,
“The ultimate goal is to be the sharpest ones on the scene
Movie star status, that causes anyone to have an erotic pleasant dream,
“Double checking in the mirror to make sure things are right
Before heading out into the darkness of night,
“As the city lights roll off the windshield
It amplifies my...
#love
#strength
#relationships
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4 Comments
When I Was Naked
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#love
#marriage
#sex
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4 Comments
Get Outta My Head
A decade ago unexpectedly I had miracle vision
Heaven opened serendipitous and ornate walked her by decision
Not just any but her specially given entrusted to me
This woman submitted to love a good man who yearns reciprocity
Both have big ideas and long for family shared
She embodied me in essence all ten years and genuinely cares
Meeting was not by chance but so godly ordained
In five days strangers became bound she would share his last name
Its puzzling how two weeks fused both uniquely fit
By three months two souls were inseparable and could...
Heaven opened serendipitous and ornate walked her by decision
Not just any but her specially given entrusted to me
This woman submitted to love a good man who yearns reciprocity
Both have big ideas and long for family shared
She embodied me in essence all ten years and genuinely cares
Meeting was not by chance but so godly ordained
In five days strangers became bound she would share his last name
Its puzzling how two weeks fused both uniquely fit
By three months two souls were inseparable and could...
#nostalgia
#breakup
#heartbroken
#love
#peace
255 reads
10 Comments
Sing a song of Taj Mahal
Sing a song of Tajmahal
a fine nazm or a ghazal
Of this landmark for lovers
Ah, a lover's edifice
Complete with medieval bowers
It's a Mecca for tourists!
Tis sensational, tis exceptional
tis truly a touristy place.
Watch the shimmer of its magnificent marbled dome
Moonlight or sunlight, it glimmers of imperial chrome
It's ironical then
that though Indian-Arabian I am
I haven't yet been to this touristy place
It is truly as they must say, a lover's shrine
a place...
a fine nazm or a ghazal
Of this landmark for lovers
Ah, a lover's edifice
Complete with medieval bowers
It's a Mecca for tourists!
Tis sensational, tis exceptional
tis truly a touristy place.
Watch the shimmer of its magnificent marbled dome
Moonlight or sunlight, it glimmers of imperial chrome
It's ironical then
that though Indian-Arabian I am
I haven't yet been to this touristy place
It is truly as they must say, a lover's shrine
a place...
#love
#romantic
649 reads
42 Comments
The engines
The engines…
They wiped him away!
They erased his heart!
They deleted his mind!
They sucked his soul!
They wiped him away!
They erased his heart!
They deleted his mind!
They sucked his soul!
#love
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Fairy Tales
Fairy tales are airy tales.
Would that they’d be true.
But hap’ly ever after
is a lie.
Ask Goldman, author of
_The Princess Bride_,
to tell you what he knew
became of Buttercup
and her lovely Wesley lad
before they died.
Would that they’d be true.
But hap’ly ever after
is a lie.
Ask Goldman, author of
_The Princess Bride_,
to tell you what he knew
became of Buttercup
and her lovely Wesley lad
before they died.
#love
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5 Comments
Appreciation
Just by being
you induce the want in me
And isn't that the way
it should be?
We jump through hoops
to impress
to convince
often it feels like a sales pitch
to be loved or admired
And it is complete bullshit
If you can't be enjoyed
as you are,
you are not truly being seen
you induce the want in me
And isn't that the way
it should be?
We jump through hoops
to impress
to convince
often it feels like a sales pitch
to be loved or admired
And it is complete bullshit
If you can't be enjoyed
as you are,
you are not truly being seen
#admiration
#love
#respect #TruthOfLife
#respect #TruthOfLife
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4 Comments
FRAGMENTS
I try to recall your voice, but it's a whisper,
Fading like mist in the cold dawn air.
Your face dissolves in the ripples of memory,
A reflection trembling on water’s skin.
I reach for the past, but my hands grasp shadows,
And love lingers only as an aching ghost.
How cruel that time turns love into a ghost,
A presence that lingers but speaks in whispers.
I search for your warmth, find only shadows,
Moments unravel like dust in the air.
I chase the outline of your touch on my skin,
But the years have stolen my memory.
Or...
Fading like mist in the cold dawn air.
Your face dissolves in the ripples of memory,
A reflection trembling on water’s skin.
I reach for the past, but my hands grasp shadows,
And love lingers only as an aching ghost.
How cruel that time turns love into a ghost,
A presence that lingers but speaks in whispers.
I search for your warmth, find only shadows,
Moments unravel like dust in the air.
I chase the outline of your touch on my skin,
But the years have stolen my memory.
Or...
#FeelingLost
#love
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Conflagration
I am only the wood,
and you are everything else.
You are the air that feeds the fire and the wind that stokes it.
You are the combustion, the opening and the process that unites the air and wood.
You are the light and the heat.
You are the Agni, the disintegrator, transforming just wood into the divine.
We are a conflagration...How warm can we be?
and you are everything else.
You are the air that feeds the fire and the wind that stokes it.
You are the combustion, the opening and the process that unites the air and wood.
You are the light and the heat.
You are the Agni, the disintegrator, transforming just wood into the divine.
We are a conflagration...How warm can we be?
#love
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5 Comments
Love Rots
Love, my friends, is overrated.
Be compassionate, have empathy instead.
And not always regard yourself
as Tristan or Isolde,
the Lochinvar who came
to overturn the bridal feast.
Kindness,
when done with earnestness
and not as trickery,
is what disperses clouds
to give the withered crops fresh light.
Where love can be selfish, needful,
a passion rushing forth
as much to solder cracks
in one's own soul.
Love pressed the pillow down
on Desdemona's face,
or so Othello might have claimed.
Love...
Be compassionate, have empathy instead.
And not always regard yourself
as Tristan or Isolde,
the Lochinvar who came
to overturn the bridal feast.
Kindness,
when done with earnestness
and not as trickery,
is what disperses clouds
to give the withered crops fresh light.
Where love can be selfish, needful,
a passion rushing forth
as much to solder cracks
in one's own soul.
Love pressed the pillow down
on Desdemona's face,
or so Othello might have claimed.
Love...
#culture
#kindness
#love #mythology
#love #mythology
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3 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Love by Top Critiquers