Poems About Love by Top Critiquers
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Poems about love by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Snail Mom?
She loves fiercely and with abandon
No favorites, they’re all adored
Big or small each one has their own special place in her heart
Treading lovingly, collecting shells
Natures fuel and healing power
Earth mother gently nourishing her offspring with such tenderness
Wait!
What?
She said, “I’m a Snail mom”
I said, “Huh?”
🐌
No favorites, they’re all adored
Big or small each one has their own special place in her heart
Treading lovingly, collecting shells
Natures fuel and healing power
Earth mother gently nourishing her offspring with such tenderness
Wait!
What?
She said, “I’m a Snail mom”
I said, “Huh?”
🐌
#friendship
#healing
#love #nature
#love #nature
382 reads
38 Comments
LA
Two dykes who lived in LA...
Their passion got hotter each day...
Such flaming desire...
Set the city on fire...
Burning all...so they couldn't stay!
Their passion got hotter each day...
Such flaming desire...
Set the city on fire...
Burning all...so they couldn't stay!
#love
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0 Comments
Warmth of Kiss
The sweet force of each gentle kiss,
bestows a longing warmth in my deepest deep.
A dark gloss lacquers my mind,.
as pleading pleasure seeps
Into holes I was blindly unaware existed.
The flavor of your lips
absolutely cannot be resisted.
The warmth spread.
Awakening my dead.
Infusing my veins.
Caressing the skin of my bones.
An invite for my soul to never exist alone.
bestows a longing warmth in my deepest deep.
A dark gloss lacquers my mind,.
as pleading pleasure seeps
Into holes I was blindly unaware existed.
The flavor of your lips
absolutely cannot be resisted.
The warmth spread.
Awakening my dead.
Infusing my veins.
Caressing the skin of my bones.
An invite for my soul to never exist alone.
#love
#sensual
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14 Comments
David Lewis and the concept of bearded men
The concept
of us in all time
and in no time
at the same time
a bitch-baby concept
to grasp.
Because the multiverse theory
says there are
infinite worlds,
and we exist
in some form
in each
So I assume rather
arrogantly
that a version of
Me
You
Us
wafts through all
space and time
in a philosophical
reduction
that we call:
quantitative parsimony
Each thing is a thing. ...
of us in all time
and in no time
at the same time
a bitch-baby concept
to grasp.
Because the multiverse theory
says there are
infinite worlds,
and we exist
in some form
in each
So I assume rather
arrogantly
that a version of
Me
You
Us
wafts through all
space and time
in a philosophical
reduction
that we call:
quantitative parsimony
Each thing is a thing. ...
#love
#lover
#passion
#philosophical
#romantic
156 reads
27 Comments
Excursions
Life's excursion
The ocean wave
Some perversion...
Another day!
The wind, it calls
When ink runs dry
And I'm drifting
But flying high
I know my place
When lost at sea
It could be anywhere
Or Tennessee!
Don't tie me up
Or put me down
I'm just not ready
To be your clown!
Onwards I travel
Sweetly sublime
Until I find...
The perfect rhyme
The ocean wave
Some perversion...
Another day!
The wind, it calls
When ink runs dry
And I'm drifting
But flying high
I know my place
When lost at sea
It could be anywhere
Or Tennessee!
Don't tie me up
Or put me down
I'm just not ready
To be your clown!
Onwards I travel
Sweetly sublime
Until I find...
The perfect rhyme
#love
212 reads
20 Comments
Deeper Underground I Go
I can’t count the number
of poems I’ve expelled
beyond the busted seams
of experience
As if those seams could keep
the poems from my voice
How many emotions
were galactic tapestries
unraveling from a solar plexus
storing so many lives
How many verses reflect
the present
versus the ghosts
of a former century
And yet,
deeper underground
I go
The trick to navigating
the bowels of the beast
is not succumbing
to illusion over...
of poems I’ve expelled
beyond the busted seams
of experience
As if those seams could keep
the poems from my voice
How many emotions
were galactic tapestries
unraveling from a solar plexus
storing so many lives
How many verses reflect
the present
versus the ghosts
of a former century
And yet,
deeper underground
I go
The trick to navigating
the bowels of the beast
is not succumbing
to illusion over...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#love
#SelfWorth #WritingPoetry
#SelfWorth #WritingPoetry
286 reads
15 Comments
be the fire
in the early hours of morning
as dawn warmed the darkened sky
I stood transfixed
when a single star flashed brightly
lighting up a fading night
leaving me deeply moved
thoughts whispering softly
stirring in my mind
what would I say to you
if this was my last day
what wishes would I cast your way
what images would I press into your upturned palms
kissing & imbuing them with all my hopes
infusing your dreams
willing them into being
and then it occurred to me
I don't want you reading an unsent...
as dawn warmed the darkened sky
I stood transfixed
when a single star flashed brightly
lighting up a fading night
leaving me deeply moved
thoughts whispering softly
stirring in my mind
what would I say to you
if this was my last day
what wishes would I cast your way
what images would I press into your upturned palms
kissing & imbuing them with all my hopes
infusing your dreams
willing them into being
and then it occurred to me
I don't want you reading an unsent...
#daughter
#love
141 reads
5 Comments
Demon Slayer
Ooh I could never be that way again
Tender morsels of us became nothing but pain
Do you still think of us as if we had been trained
Or do you consider what we both have shared as something strange
I've pictured words known only to you and I as life
Yeah, bitch check that fuck shit and roll the dam dice
Tumbles started rumbling, hell our destinies may have been spliced
Just tell me how much misery it takes for orphans of pain to survive
We've done as we thought, endured what was brought
Although we bot fought, it was the demons that you...
Tender morsels of us became nothing but pain
Do you still think of us as if we had been trained
Or do you consider what we both have shared as something strange
I've pictured words known only to you and I as life
Yeah, bitch check that fuck shit and roll the dam dice
Tumbles started rumbling, hell our destinies may have been spliced
Just tell me how much misery it takes for orphans of pain to survive
We've done as we thought, endured what was brought
Although we bot fought, it was the demons that you...
#dark
#love
70 reads
6 Comments
Bespoken
She always fit like a tailored suit
whenever amour became acute,
enough to try her on
from afternoon till dawn...
as her custom trim bore heaven fruit.
whenever amour became acute,
enough to try her on
from afternoon till dawn...
as her custom trim bore heaven fruit.
#love
173 reads
8 Comments
Property Of A Lady
Loud and clear
Can you hear me?
I am not but your property
You have possessed all my body
Oh! You Lady..
If you feel like
Seek or hide me
I'll take a stand for you all night in an alley
Unconditionally, you can trust me
I'm a weapon in your armoury..
Come to test me
I'm your honey
Spend me lavishly
I'm your money..
Come near me not afar me
Sit beside me hey you buddy
Where to find me?
Hills or valleys..
Pick up your pen little baby
With love and harmony
Make me a...
Can you hear me?
I am not but your property
You have possessed all my body
Oh! You Lady..
If you feel like
Seek or hide me
I'll take a stand for you all night in an alley
Unconditionally, you can trust me
I'm a weapon in your armoury..
Come to test me
I'm your honey
Spend me lavishly
I'm your money..
Come near me not afar me
Sit beside me hey you buddy
Where to find me?
Hills or valleys..
Pick up your pen little baby
With love and harmony
Make me a...
#love
#admiration
#respect
268 reads
4 Comments
~of the cacao & the chaos
blushing ruby red
cacao buds studded
firm with a seducingly
corner bitten, an
astringent loaded
fleshy nascence
tempers
in a vehemently
stringing stream of
viscous springs
becomes
frailty flushed- a
desiccation out
of it’s succulence- as an
impoverished layering
of papery nibs that’s
broken unto
million liberating
shards of ecstasy.. in
punctures of a pain~
pleasuring abrasion… until
that monumentally
incremental- a peak
almost yet
...
cacao buds studded
firm with a seducingly
corner bitten, an
astringent loaded
fleshy nascence
tempers
in a vehemently
stringing stream of
viscous springs
becomes
frailty flushed- a
desiccation out
of it’s succulence- as an
impoverished layering
of papery nibs that’s
broken unto
million liberating
shards of ecstasy.. in
punctures of a pain~
pleasuring abrasion… until
that monumentally
incremental- a peak
almost yet
...
#love
#metaphor
#orgasm
#seductive
#sensual
73 reads
4 Comments
She Speaks
in warm metaphors
from the heart for it's
what she knows
a way to survive
she's a true fighter
exposing her soul
the agony of her past
shamelessly despite her
fears and insecurities
yet do not ever let
her softness fool you
she is fiercely protective
of the ones she loves
razor sharp in her
smart observance
sensually seductive
in her erotic ink
as she breathes
new life into her fire
worn-out & weary
taking us with her
our precious...
from the heart for it's
what she knows
a way to survive
she's a true fighter
exposing her soul
the agony of her past
shamelessly despite her
fears and insecurities
yet do not ever let
her softness fool you
she is fiercely protective
of the ones she loves
razor sharp in her
smart observance
sensually seductive
in her erotic ink
as she breathes
new life into her fire
worn-out & weary
taking us with her
our precious...
#gratitude
#love
#sister
295 reads
21 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Love by Top Critiquers