Poems About Love by Top Critiquers
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Poems about love by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
The pain that is love
Love is all around us
Like a serial killer
At least the killer kills you
Love just bleeds you slow
A slow, painful torture
You'll wish for death
Like a serial killer
At least the killer kills you
Love just bleeds you slow
A slow, painful torture
You'll wish for death
#breakup
#love
#minimalist #philosophical
#minimalist #philosophical
64 reads
22 Comments
Proud
You’ll always be my little brother
A man who toured the States
Dropping bass lines like no other
It’s your presence that resonates
Getting choked up by memories
Crying while laughing out loud
Music gifted us social remedies
Most of all you made me proud
A man who toured the States
Dropping bass lines like no other
It’s your presence that resonates
Getting choked up by memories
Crying while laughing out loud
Music gifted us social remedies
Most of all you made me proud
#brother
#family
#love #music
#love #music
181 reads
8 Comments
Mother Natures Last Walk
Walking in the soft white
With no direction
All I know is my heart is cold
The air freezes with every exhale
Creating intriguing flakes that drift
What have you done?
Some mistakes cannot be repaired
I gave you a home
Nurtured you
Now
I will walk the path to my end
What can a mother do to show her love?
I gave you me
Once the last bloom on the tree of life blooms
Remember how I once was.
Remember the soft summer nights.
When the rose and the orchids perfumed the air
Remember the sweet fruits...
With no direction
All I know is my heart is cold
The air freezes with every exhale
Creating intriguing flakes that drift
What have you done?
Some mistakes cannot be repaired
I gave you a home
Nurtured you
Now
I will walk the path to my end
What can a mother do to show her love?
I gave you me
Once the last bloom on the tree of life blooms
Remember how I once was.
Remember the soft summer nights.
When the rose and the orchids perfumed the air
Remember the sweet fruits...
#grief
#love
#regret #sadness
#regret #sadness
79 reads
8 Comments
psycho
a fascination with the darkness
sometimes the psycho comes out of me
seriously demented, I know chaos is a part of my brain matter
my tastes are extreme
you play the game well
my soul noticed you right away
manuevering in the background
hitting tension points and getting what you want from people
my mind wasn't in focus yet
my vixen came at you right away with my go to
did you really think that was me?
well, it is a little bit
testing the waters I wanted to know you
you didn't take the bait. impressive
my...
sometimes the psycho comes out of me
seriously demented, I know chaos is a part of my brain matter
my tastes are extreme
you play the game well
my soul noticed you right away
manuevering in the background
hitting tension points and getting what you want from people
my mind wasn't in focus yet
my vixen came at you right away with my go to
did you really think that was me?
well, it is a little bit
testing the waters I wanted to know you
you didn't take the bait. impressive
my...
#love
#lust
41 reads
3 Comments
Offering Myself To You
You can have me begging
And nasty on my knees
But not tonight, baby
Tonight I’m gonna be
The gift you give yourself
When no one’s watching
When shadows pirouette
And marionettes sacrifice their strings
I’m the peace love brings
Mmmmm
Lips searching, our bodies entwined
My fingers trace your skin, making crazy designs
The world outside our window is burning and crashing
But nothing ever felt so right
And here
On this apocalyptic night
I give myself to...
And nasty on my knees
But not tonight, baby
Tonight I’m gonna be
The gift you give yourself
When no one’s watching
When shadows pirouette
And marionettes sacrifice their strings
I’m the peace love brings
Mmmmm
Lips searching, our bodies entwined
My fingers trace your skin, making crazy designs
The world outside our window is burning and crashing
But nothing ever felt so right
And here
On this apocalyptic night
I give myself to...
#erotic
#love
#lyrics
#passion
#seductive
182 reads
4 Comments
Deeper Underground I Go
I can’t count the number
of poems I’ve expelled
beyond the busted seams
of experience
As if those seams could keep
the poems from my voice
How many emotions
were galactic tapestries
unraveling from a solar plexus
storing so many lives
How many verses reflect
the present
versus the ghosts
of a former century
And yet,
deeper underground
I go
The trick to navigating
the bowels of the beast
is not succumbing
to illusion over...
of poems I’ve expelled
beyond the busted seams
of experience
As if those seams could keep
the poems from my voice
How many emotions
were galactic tapestries
unraveling from a solar plexus
storing so many lives
How many verses reflect
the present
versus the ghosts
of a former century
And yet,
deeper underground
I go
The trick to navigating
the bowels of the beast
is not succumbing
to illusion over...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#love
#SelfWorth #WritingPoetry
#SelfWorth #WritingPoetry
371 reads
17 Comments
For Don Juan
Chanting towards
seraphim kites
soaring upwards
vowels vortexed
into quivers
it is time
sequence
scent descend
pheromone
in transmuted droplets
jubilant singular stars
awakened me
linger now against beguiled breath
lean towards my silhouette
enclose me
a gentle
chest
fluttering
our hands
become ten petaled
flowers
speaking
through
weeping
fingertips
canvassed
we will remember
what skin...
seraphim kites
soaring upwards
vowels vortexed
into quivers
it is time
sequence
scent descend
pheromone
in transmuted droplets
jubilant singular stars
awakened me
linger now against beguiled breath
lean towards my silhouette
enclose me
a gentle
chest
fluttering
our hands
become ten petaled
flowers
speaking
through
weeping
fingertips
canvassed
we will remember
what skin...
#FallingInLove
#love
118 reads
6 Comments
She's gone
It was cold, very very cold.
I went for a walk with misery in one pocket.
In the other, my dead wife's golden locket.
How confused I felt
holding sunlight in one hand
and darkness in the other.
Onwards I walked.
Fists clenched against the truth or the cold or both.
" It will do you good " they said.
But it didn't
for I wished that I was dead.
But I wasn't
I had a life to live instead.
I went for a walk with misery in one pocket.
In the other, my dead wife's golden locket.
How confused I felt
holding sunlight in one hand
and darkness in the other.
Onwards I walked.
Fists clenched against the truth or the cold or both.
" It will do you good " they said.
But it didn't
for I wished that I was dead.
But I wasn't
I had a life to live instead.
#death
#love
#sadness #uplifting
#sadness #uplifting
66 reads
2 Comments
Property Of A Lady
Loud and clear
Can you hear me?
I am not but your property
You have possessed all my body
Oh! You Lady..
If you feel like
Seek or hide me
I'll take a stand for you all night in an alley
Unconditionally, you can trust me
I'm a weapon in your armoury..
Come to test me
I'm your honey
Spend me lavishly
I'm your money..
Come near me not afar me
Sit beside me hey you buddy
Where to find me?
Hills or valleys..
Pick up your pen little baby
With love and harmony
Make me a...
Can you hear me?
I am not but your property
You have possessed all my body
Oh! You Lady..
If you feel like
Seek or hide me
I'll take a stand for you all night in an alley
Unconditionally, you can trust me
I'm a weapon in your armoury..
Come to test me
I'm your honey
Spend me lavishly
I'm your money..
Come near me not afar me
Sit beside me hey you buddy
Where to find me?
Hills or valleys..
Pick up your pen little baby
With love and harmony
Make me a...
#love
#admiration
#respect
294 reads
4 Comments
How deep is your love
How deep is your love when it concerns the deepness of your heart, for how deep is your spiritual faith, when it concerns the situations that you had to endure. Were you felt that you were unloved and unappreciated, by just the kindness of your heart when you did something, just because you thought about them in a special way. For how deep is your love, when all you ever really wanted was to be with someone, who has a sense of real commitment and consistency. For sure how deep is your love when you have a sense of what, it means to be able to share your communication skills to articulate....
#friendship
#kindness
#love
#lover
#relationships
42 reads
0 Comments
Intertwined
The vast stars shine
ever so, ravenous
for lover's wishes.
Our lips were starved
for deep velvet kisses.
Craving further passage
to a blast of bliss.
Flesh, muscle and bone
clash and intertwine.
Desire climbing the heart
with it's yearning whine.
In adamant refusal
to be denied.
We made lust drenched love
beneath the shiny black
sequin sky.
The sweet stains of ecstasy
made it feel like
a hundred million times.
ever so, ravenous
for lover's wishes.
Our lips were starved
for deep velvet kisses.
Craving further passage
to a blast of bliss.
Flesh, muscle and bone
clash and intertwine.
Desire climbing the heart
with it's yearning whine.
In adamant refusal
to be denied.
We made lust drenched love
beneath the shiny black
sequin sky.
The sweet stains of ecstasy
made it feel like
a hundred million times.
#love
#lust
#stars
202 reads
12 Comments
MAY I? (2)
MY
perfect one
and only YOU.
MAY I
have permission to
place you on a
throne and bow
in adoration, worship,
and respect for YOU.
I
know I could rush in
the heat of the moment
and have your favorable
response.
BUT
there is an extra moment
of passion when I hear
your eager response to
may I?
EACH
MAY I is a soft
whisper and each
response is so exciting
and filled with verbal
permission as you passionately
reply:
"YES! PLEASE AND HURRY!"
May I... may I...
perfect one
and only YOU.
MAY I
have permission to
place you on a
throne and bow
in adoration, worship,
and respect for YOU.
I
know I could rush in
the heat of the moment
and have your favorable
response.
BUT
there is an extra moment
of passion when I hear
your eager response to
may I?
EACH
MAY I is a soft
whisper and each
response is so exciting
and filled with verbal
permission as you passionately
reply:
"YES! PLEASE AND HURRY!"
May I... may I...
#admiration
#emotions
#happiness
#inspirational
#love
38 reads
11 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Love by Top Critiquers