Poems About Love by Top Critiquers
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Poems about love by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
8th Mar 2024 12:42pm
8th Mar 2024 12:42pm
SLEEPING NAKED TOGETHER
#love
#erotic
#rhyming
299 reads
1 Comment
Honoria
Poem Published
5th Feb 2024 5:03am
5th Feb 2024 5:03am
I Know Not
The constancy of your love
Has confounded me from the beginning
Having never sought it
Why would you give it so freely
In very small increments
The nature of my thoughts turned
An unrequited love was let go
A new trajectory set its path
Of all the minutes in a day
And all the days in a year
Never did you miss an opportunity
To tell me you loved me
My mind set to wonder
How would I carry on if you left
I know not
Has confounded me from the beginning
Having never sought it
Why would you give it so freely
In very small increments
The nature of my thoughts turned
An unrequited love was let go
A new trajectory set its path
Of all the minutes in a day
And all the days in a year
Never did you miss an opportunity
To tell me you loved me
My mind set to wonder
How would I carry on if you left
I know not
#love
464 reads
71 Comments
wolfatthedoor1966
Poem Published
19th Apr 2024 12:02pm
19th Apr 2024 12:02pm
your kiss (senryu)
i accept the kiss
you sowed into my garden
watch if love will sprout
you sowed into my garden
watch if love will sprout
#admiration
#hope
#kindness
#love
#senryu
65 reads
15 Comments
deadwolf
Poem Published
12th Apr 2024 7:51am
12th Apr 2024 7:51am
Sex an cigarettes
She was someone I didn’t mind stickin my dick in
The beer was somethin I had to drink
She liked to fuk my lungs out
an hear me call her name out loud, over & over again,
Ahhh man, I tell ya… young people…
Since Chloe first found me, passed out drunk,
layin in the ally behind the club;
Every few nights, she would come over,
after workin her midnight shift dancing at Venom
when I would see her
The night smelled like sex an cigarettes,
I had my bourbon, fireball whisky & beer,
The record player was playin Delta blues / blues...
The beer was somethin I had to drink
She liked to fuk my lungs out
an hear me call her name out loud, over & over again,
Ahhh man, I tell ya… young people…
Since Chloe first found me, passed out drunk,
layin in the ally behind the club;
Every few nights, she would come over,
after workin her midnight shift dancing at Venom
when I would see her
The night smelled like sex an cigarettes,
I had my bourbon, fireball whisky & beer,
The record player was playin Delta blues / blues...
#love
#lust
#alcohol
94 reads
10 Comments
monovox128
Poem Published
Today 5:11am
Today 5:11am
WONDERING
I often wonder if you can hear my heart as you fall sleep
recognizing the smell of my skin whenever you dream
caressing me and kissing me until I will finally wake up
whispering softly in my ear telling me of your wants and need
I wonder this as we fell asleep to each others heartbeat
both still breathing heavy since I'm feeling you, and you still me
but when I have pleasure of awakening to your lips
I wonder if this is truly reality or yet again another dream
Decide to declare my unwavering admiration and love
Again feel your...
recognizing the smell of my skin whenever you dream
caressing me and kissing me until I will finally wake up
whispering softly in my ear telling me of your wants and need
I wonder this as we fell asleep to each others heartbeat
both still breathing heavy since I'm feeling you, and you still me
but when I have pleasure of awakening to your lips
I wonder if this is truly reality or yet again another dream
Decide to declare my unwavering admiration and love
Again feel your...
#admiration
#love
#lover #passion
#lover #passion
41 reads
2 Comments
moroccanpoet
Poem Published
11th Apr 2024 4:23am
11th Apr 2024 4:23am
I shall persist
I shall persist, unyielding, in writing my letters,
Though answers elude me, I shall carry on.
For within each message, my soul finds its voice,
Every poem birthed from the depths of my being.
I wield the pen, ink flowing like blood,
Verses etched with longing, a crimson stain.
Words, vessels of passion and tender affection,
Unleashed upon the page, a fervent refrain.
I breathe in the essence of your poetry,
Each stroke of your ink ignites my desire,
Your unique style, a captivating spell,
Imagination enraptured by your fire. ...
Though answers elude me, I shall carry on.
For within each message, my soul finds its voice,
Every poem birthed from the depths of my being.
I wield the pen, ink flowing like blood,
Verses etched with longing, a crimson stain.
Words, vessels of passion and tender affection,
Unleashed upon the page, a fervent refrain.
I breathe in the essence of your poetry,
Each stroke of your ink ignites my desire,
Your unique style, a captivating spell,
Imagination enraptured by your fire. ...
#love
#hope
#romantic
#FallingInLove
#admiration
90 reads
1 Comment
Grace
IDryad
IDryad
Poem Published
8th Mar 2024 6:09am
8th Mar 2024 6:09am
Almost a Love Story
hearts ignited with love's tender flame
coalescing into a love story that unfolded
within the pages of books of poems
feelings and emotions expounded
we didn't know how hot the flame blazed
or how it would consume us alive
believing hearts to be pure enough
to withstand the inferno of emotions
was it love or lust for control
to desire to own to hold tight
the claws of jealous shackles
driving deep into submissive heart
so when interest and love collided
the roar of rage shattered the fragility
of love...
coalescing into a love story that unfolded
within the pages of books of poems
feelings and emotions expounded
we didn't know how hot the flame blazed
or how it would consume us alive
believing hearts to be pure enough
to withstand the inferno of emotions
was it love or lust for control
to desire to own to hold tight
the claws of jealous shackles
driving deep into submissive heart
so when interest and love collided
the roar of rage shattered the fragility
of love...
#love
#WritingPoetry
123 reads
10 Comments
Ambiensse
Richard G
Richard G
Poem Published
21st Jan 2024 7:51pm
21st Jan 2024 7:51pm
Constance Introduction
Constance intro
Dirk had a secret. He was in love with a vampire.
She came to him when he wasn’t looking for anyone but had just left a tempestuous partnership and was feeling at a low ebb. His previous partner just wanted some fun but at his expense and kept him wanting her more but made sure he felt he was being used only when she was going to let him.
He was sitting at a table in a riverside pub when a vision of loveliness came and asked if he minded her joining him. The glass she held looked like a blood red wine but it held a straw which he had never seen unless the...
Dirk had a secret. He was in love with a vampire.
She came to him when he wasn’t looking for anyone but had just left a tempestuous partnership and was feeling at a low ebb. His previous partner just wanted some fun but at his expense and kept him wanting her more but made sure he felt he was being used only when she was going to let him.
He was sitting at a table in a riverside pub when a vision of loveliness came and asked if he minded her joining him. The glass she held looked like a blood red wine but it held a straw which he had never seen unless the...
#love
#lust
#erotic
#vampires
#sexy
83 reads
0 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
15th Apr 2024 1:11am
15th Apr 2024 1:11am
Laughs and Smiles
Sometimes the days feel like they’re dragging
And yet when I look in the mirror the years have passed fast
I may not reach the peak of a mountain to fight a dragon
But I know that after I’m gone my verses are going to last
I may not be popular or reach fame in my time
But the rhymes I leave behind can serve a testament
I’m just a simple man striving to find what’s mine
So that my children will one day share in the sentiment
I’m motivated by their laughs and smiles in their faces
Like photographs of these moments engraved in our hearts ...
And yet when I look in the mirror the years have passed fast
I may not reach the peak of a mountain to fight a dragon
But I know that after I’m gone my verses are going to last
I may not be popular or reach fame in my time
But the rhymes I leave behind can serve a testament
I’m just a simple man striving to find what’s mine
So that my children will one day share in the sentiment
I’m motivated by their laughs and smiles in their faces
Like photographs of these moments engraved in our hearts ...
#love
#children
#family #motivational
#family #motivational
65 reads
4 Comments
Dragonblood
Poem Published
6th Apr 2024 7:46pm
6th Apr 2024 7:46pm
Sex Poem
Indulging in the fire of a kiss
there are no yield signs, no stop signs
Inhabitions break free like a racing pen
across the page
Passions screams without words
The shirt of lust is ripped open
The vest of self-control removed
I love to tease, to tantalize, to satiate,
to satisfy, gratify the space below the mound
Savoring each twist of the tongue
with mesmerizing moans and hums
that vibrate the flowery folds
Abandoning fantasy for flesh
I dive into fervidness, torridness,
indulging in...
there are no yield signs, no stop signs
Inhabitions break free like a racing pen
across the page
Passions screams without words
The shirt of lust is ripped open
The vest of self-control removed
I love to tease, to tantalize, to satiate,
to satisfy, gratify the space below the mound
Savoring each twist of the tongue
with mesmerizing moans and hums
that vibrate the flowery folds
Abandoning fantasy for flesh
I dive into fervidness, torridness,
indulging in...
#love
#lust
#sex
184 reads
22 Comments
Ahavati
Poem Published
6th Feb 2024 00:49am
6th Feb 2024 00:49am
Mass Suicide by Ignorance
I.
We treat symptoms
without discovering their source
and address freedom
justice and liberty
as convenient truths
when it benefits us
II.
A person gets arrested
we blame mental health
the parents, political affiliation
color, race, gender
instead of asking:
why are so many among us sick
The root is ignored
thus, continues to gorge
on our ignorance
or unwillingness to learn
( you choose )
III.
We have so many
brands of band-aids ...
We treat symptoms
without discovering their source
and address freedom
justice and liberty
as convenient truths
when it benefits us
II.
A person gets arrested
we blame mental health
the parents, political affiliation
color, race, gender
instead of asking:
why are so many among us sick
The root is ignored
thus, continues to gorge
on our ignorance
or unwillingness to learn
( you choose )
III.
We have so many
brands of band-aids ...
#love
#earth
270 reads
19 Comments
I_IS_ME
Poem Published
15th Jan 2024 4:47pm
15th Jan 2024 4:47pm
Self-Survival
I am nothing but a piece of cork, bobbing up and down in a sea of darkness
There is absolutely nothing to grab on to and remind me what started this
Unexpected solar winds often sets my mind adrift
I reach for the only line that I cared to know praying for another lift
Just like a boulder falling into still waters there's a splash followed by waves
Each ripple that tosses me about is a denial to me being saved
Farther and farther I'm being moved away from my center, your loving force
And me an abandoned ship at sea continually being blown off course ...
There is absolutely nothing to grab on to and remind me what started this
Unexpected solar winds often sets my mind adrift
I reach for the only line that I cared to know praying for another lift
Just like a boulder falling into still waters there's a splash followed by waves
Each ripple that tosses me about is a denial to me being saved
Farther and farther I'm being moved away from my center, your loving force
And me an abandoned ship at sea continually being blown off course ...
#love
#MentalHealth
278 reads
23 Comments
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