Poems About Honesty Seeking Honest Critique
#honesty
Kaylor1967
Ruben
Ruben
Poem Published
Yesterday 1:32pm
Yesterday 1:32pm
I'm really nothing in the whole scheme of things.
Many years.
Enough time to think.
Stretching thoughts.
Love and loss.
Memories bittersweet.
For only dear memory......
Visions of the bygone.
Rusty gates.
Broken earth.
The field of dreams.
Harvests of faith.
Bounties plentiful
Long summer nights.
Short winter days.
A bruising life.
Building character tall.
A love one’s tender kiss.
Never to cease.
Tales of adventure.
Of hidden treasure.
A beautiful life.
In pleasure.
...
Enough time to think.
Stretching thoughts.
Love and loss.
Memories bittersweet.
For only dear memory......
Visions of the bygone.
Rusty gates.
Broken earth.
The field of dreams.
Harvests of faith.
Bounties plentiful
Long summer nights.
Short winter days.
A bruising life.
Building character tall.
A love one’s tender kiss.
Never to cease.
Tales of adventure.
Of hidden treasure.
A beautiful life.
In pleasure.
...
#sadness
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
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2 Comments
BigVirge
Big Virge
Big Virge
Poem Published
Yesterday 7:56am
Yesterday 7:56am
“Simple” ... A Poem written by Big Virge 10/2/2021
I’m NOT Simple Like Simon ... !!!
I’m A Complex Disciple...
of Great Rhyme Recitals ...
And SIMPLY GREAT WRITERS ...
So When I’m Now Rhyming ...
I Believe That It’s ... VITAL ... !!!
To Simplify ...
But To Exercise ...
My Mind To Write ...
The Type of Rhymes ...
That Are Well Defined ...
And Reside At Heights ...
ABOVE Simple Lines ...
That DON’T Feed Minds ...
With Enlightened Vibes ... !!!
It’s A Simple Style ...
That I Employ To Write ...
My Rhymes About Life ...
I...
I’m A Complex Disciple...
of Great Rhyme Recitals ...
And SIMPLY GREAT WRITERS ...
So When I’m Now Rhyming ...
I Believe That It’s ... VITAL ... !!!
To Simplify ...
But To Exercise ...
My Mind To Write ...
The Type of Rhymes ...
That Are Well Defined ...
And Reside At Heights ...
ABOVE Simple Lines ...
That DON’T Feed Minds ...
With Enlightened Vibes ... !!!
It’s A Simple Style ...
That I Employ To Write ...
My Rhymes About Life ...
I...
#LifeStruggles
#honesty
#humankind
#WritingPoetry
#PowerOfWords
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bandit
Poem Published
16th Apr 2021 11:33pm
16th Apr 2021 11:33pm
real men don't cry
this is a truth and a lie
a sign of weakness
a caring heart inside
woman say I want to see him cry
that's the real lie
she needs to know your caring
she need that safety and security more
so I tell you don't do it
you can show that emotion
without weakness being shown
so let a it well up in your eyes
don't let one tear roll
a caring heart no weakness shown
she will respect you even more
a sign of weakness
a caring heart inside
woman say I want to see him cry
that's the real lie
she needs to know your caring
she need that safety and security more
so I tell you don't do it
you can show that emotion
without weakness being shown
so let a it well up in your eyes
don't let one tear roll
a caring heart no weakness shown
she will respect you even more
#relationships
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
#support
#respect
15 reads
1 Comment
bandit
Poem Published
15th Apr 2021 10:16pm
15th Apr 2021 10:16pm
sexiest or nature
why is it so wrong
to open or hold a door
give a lady your set
when did it become so wrong
to treat a woman like a lady
we know you are more than capable
no disrespect intended
it has nothing to do with glass ceilings
we each have our different strengths
we have our different weaknesses
so many thing you lady's can do
multitask better than men ever could do
men have physical strength and one track reasoning
that's why we need you lady's to see other means
no matter how things become twisted
there is no...
to open or hold a door
give a lady your set
when did it become so wrong
to treat a woman like a lady
we know you are more than capable
no disrespect intended
it has nothing to do with glass ceilings
we each have our different strengths
we have our different weaknesses
so many thing you lady's can do
multitask better than men ever could do
men have physical strength and one track reasoning
that's why we need you lady's to see other means
no matter how things become twisted
there is no...
#kindness
#strength
#honesty
#misunderstood
#admiration
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drone
Poem Published
15th Apr 2021 8:57am
15th Apr 2021 8:57am
Recognize
Does one
not even try
to know thyself
to acknowledge
to oneself
the lying T.V whispering
Parasitic Cracks
Within
Tell me
How does one
even begin
to heal thyself
how does one
even begin to claim
that one is
open minded
that one is
Free
to Think
For to walk
through your own valley
of shadows
to watch your fears
Burn
is to begin
to be
thyself
and to be thyself
is to be
Fucking Free
not even try
to know thyself
to acknowledge
to oneself
the lying T.V whispering
Parasitic Cracks
Within
Tell me
How does one
even begin
to heal thyself
how does one
even begin to claim
that one is
open minded
that one is
Free
to Think
For to walk
through your own valley
of shadows
to watch your fears
Burn
is to begin
to be
thyself
and to be thyself
is to be
Fucking Free
#identity
#LifeStruggles
#honesty
#learning
#SelfReflection
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1 Comment
Trome
Poem Published
15th Apr 2021 5:20am
15th Apr 2021 5:20am
PLEASE GIRL LET ME BE
#women
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
83 reads
2 Comments
drone
Poem Published
14th Apr 2021 4:35pm
14th Apr 2021 4:35pm
Don't Care
It always comes
as a shock
those feelings
you forgot
that you hide
but once in a while
it leaks
like slow drip
from a tap
as your tears
begin to form
in sympathy
for your pain
as you
replaster the cracks
in your smile
showing your friends
a hollow defiance
of you don't care
if you never touch
caress
smell
hold
someone
who feels
the true colors
of your pain
as a shock
those feelings
you forgot
that you hide
but once in a while
it leaks
like slow drip
from a tap
as your tears
begin to form
in sympathy
for your pain
as you
replaster the cracks
in your smile
showing your friends
a hollow defiance
of you don't care
if you never touch
caress
smell
hold
someone
who feels
the true colors
of your pain
#LifeStruggles
#honesty
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drone
Poem Published
14th Apr 2021 4:13pm
14th Apr 2021 4:13pm
Hairs Breath
When one has had that
Feeling
that deep bone aching
Feeling
of devastation
of total loss
of Everything
One tends to take
another step
to the edge
of what is left
of your sanity
Close to joining
Those Shadows
That Whisper
Within
as Your sanity try's
to hold
the shield wall
the red line
the point
Of No Return
Feeling
that deep bone aching
Feeling
of devastation
of total loss
of Everything
One tends to take
another step
to the edge
of what is left
of your sanity
Close to joining
Those Shadows
That Whisper
Within
as Your sanity try's
to hold
the shield wall
the red line
the point
Of No Return
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
#philosophical
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Absence
Poem Published
13th Apr 2021 10:41pm
13th Apr 2021 10:41pm
Poecstasy
Our poetic love could never die
I daily dream of you being next to me
Whether in words or deed
You are the Muse of my Destiny
The understanding we possess
My love and feeling
Time cannot suppress
Words yet to be invented
For me to express
You’re God’s Gift to poetry
The Goddess!
But I digress...
I’ve never been worthy,
Poetically
But I’m the man of your dreams,
Poexually
(And not to be blunt,
also Sexually)😘
But regardless if I get you here
Next to me... ...
I daily dream of you being next to me
Whether in words or deed
You are the Muse of my Destiny
The understanding we possess
My love and feeling
Time cannot suppress
Words yet to be invented
For me to express
You’re God’s Gift to poetry
The Goddess!
But I digress...
I’ve never been worthy,
Poetically
But I’m the man of your dreams,
Poexually
(And not to be blunt,
also Sexually)😘
But regardless if I get you here
Next to me... ...
#romantic
#honesty
#crush
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drone
Poem Published
13th Apr 2021 11:08am
13th Apr 2021 11:08am
Your Head Is
Up your Arse
In the sand
it's in the telly
lost on pills
and the Guarantee
has run out
that there are
No monsters
Under Your Bed
On Your Streets
In Your Head
In the sand
it's in the telly
lost on pills
and the Guarantee
has run out
that there are
No monsters
Under Your Bed
On Your Streets
In Your Head
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
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drone
Poem Published
13th Apr 2021 10:41am
13th Apr 2021 10:41am
Puberty Blockers
To signify
that you
Identify
yourself
that you could
well regret
in later life
is to live
in confusion
in despair
refusing to ask
The Question
WHY
did I
Believe
That I Was
that you
Identify
yourself
that you could
well regret
in later life
is to live
in confusion
in despair
refusing to ask
The Question
WHY
did I
Believe
That I Was
#identity
#LifeStruggles
#honesty
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BigVirge
Big Virge
Big Virge
Poem Published
10th Apr 2021 10:32pm
10th Apr 2021 10:32pm
“Flows” ... A Poem written by Big Virge 8/9/2020
So It’s Pretty CLEAR Now To Folks ...
Who’ve Read My Form of Prose ...
That My Poetic Quotes ...
Rock The DOPEST FLOWS ... !!!
That Hit Just Like Mike Tyson Blows ... !!!
So Are Showered With POWERS ...
That Have NO Time For Cowards ... !!!
And KNOCK OUT Those ...
Who Use FALSE BRAVADO ... !!!
To Act Like They KNOW ...
How This World REALLY Flows ... ?!?
I Flow With TRUTH That Shows ...
That Governments Are JOKES ... !!!
That Are FILLED With Those Who Roll ...
With...
Who’ve Read My Form of Prose ...
That My Poetic Quotes ...
Rock The DOPEST FLOWS ... !!!
That Hit Just Like Mike Tyson Blows ... !!!
So Are Showered With POWERS ...
That Have NO Time For Cowards ... !!!
And KNOCK OUT Those ...
Who Use FALSE BRAVADO ... !!!
To Act Like They KNOW ...
How This World REALLY Flows ... ?!?
I Flow With TRUTH That Shows ...
That Governments Are JOKES ... !!!
That Are FILLED With Those Who Roll ...
With...
#honesty
#WritingPoetry
#PowerOfWords
#art
#passion
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