Poems About Honesty Seeking Honest Critique
#honesty
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Leon
Leon
Poem Published
13th Oct 2019 6:14pm
13th Oct 2019 6:14pm
I AM A PASSIONATE PAINTER !!
I strive to be a painter,
Of love and feelings told.
My lips and hands are brushes,
My canvas is your soul.
Your body mesmerizes,
It speaks of love to be.
A masterpiece of colors,
I need no light to see.
With each stroke, comes a feeling,
A sense of what's in store.
And when the painting's over,
You'll only want for more.
A never-ending journey,
To where you've never been.
But once it's been completed,
You'll go there once again.
To see the pretty colors,
To feel their soft caress. ...
Of love and feelings told.
My lips and hands are brushes,
My canvas is your soul.
Your body mesmerizes,
It speaks of love to be.
A masterpiece of colors,
I need no light to see.
With each stroke, comes a feeling,
A sense of what's in store.
And when the painting's over,
You'll only want for more.
A never-ending journey,
To where you've never been.
But once it's been completed,
You'll go there once again.
To see the pretty colors,
To feel their soft caress. ...
#love
#honesty
#sensual
#ForbiddenLove
#passion
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drone
Poem Published
12th Oct 2019 11:26am
12th Oct 2019 11:26am
Fool
Do you
bide your time
waiting
for your pain
to recede
between the hard desert cracks
of your fears
between the shame
that keeps claiming
your tears
between the fool
and the mirror
that reflects a face
that pretends
bide your time
waiting
for your pain
to recede
between the hard desert cracks
of your fears
between the shame
that keeps claiming
your tears
between the fool
and the mirror
that reflects a face
that pretends
#LifeStruggles
#honesty
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drone
Poem Published
12th Oct 2019 11:10am
12th Oct 2019 11:10am
Sneak Attack
Tell me
does one remember
when ones opinion
became ones belief
Carved in Stone
to be
Defended
No Matter the Cost
Dreading the day
when one might
become weak
a sneak attack
From those thoughts
that begin to use
the weapons
of mass destruction
a little
common sense
logical reasoning
that will darken your skys
That will
kick your arse
up to quantum logical reasoning
where one is forced to Consider
what are
the Probabilities
the ...
does one remember
when ones opinion
became ones belief
Carved in Stone
to be
Defended
No Matter the Cost
Dreading the day
when one might
become weak
a sneak attack
From those thoughts
that begin to use
the weapons
of mass destruction
a little
common sense
logical reasoning
that will darken your skys
That will
kick your arse
up to quantum logical reasoning
where one is forced to Consider
what are
the Probabilities
the ...
#LifeStruggles
#honesty
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Guts
Poem Published
11th Oct 2019 10:48pm
11th Oct 2019 10:48pm
Let's meet again
Maybe you're right and I'm wrong,
But I can't move further along
These shackles hide my destination
But if I leave them, i become broken.
So what's the point of lies, The lonely stays up all night
Never talks to anyone,
But still tries to confuse his mind.
Happy smiles mean nothing to me, it just shows i tricked you with my story
Do you really care about the truth, if you don't want to ruin your mood
How can I hear your opinion, when you only listen.
Honest people are not born, but made
Made by fake people, lying...
But I can't move further along
These shackles hide my destination
But if I leave them, i become broken.
So what's the point of lies, The lonely stays up all night
Never talks to anyone,
But still tries to confuse his mind.
Happy smiles mean nothing to me, it just shows i tricked you with my story
Do you really care about the truth, if you don't want to ruin your mood
How can I hear your opinion, when you only listen.
Honest people are not born, but made
Made by fake people, lying...
#friendship
#betrayal
#identity
#honesty
#hypocrisy
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cold_fusion
Poem Published
11th Oct 2019 10:10am
11th Oct 2019 10:10am
when i see
an unforgiving soul
i see more than just
an unjust and a narcissistic
human
i see
a lost one
lost not only
of way home
but also one
that is now a captive
of war
the war no one saw
when the dominant
of the internal fraternal twins
that are the conscience and ego
crushed the other
into little more
than a vegetable state
the latter landing blows
at the feeblest
of sniveling
a sad story walking
a pretty
manicured and landscaped graveyard
i see more than just
an unjust and a narcissistic
human
i see
a lost one
lost not only
of way home
but also one
that is now a captive
of war
the war no one saw
when the dominant
of the internal fraternal twins
that are the conscience and ego
crushed the other
into little more
than a vegetable state
the latter landing blows
at the feeblest
of sniveling
a sad story walking
a pretty
manicured and landscaped graveyard
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
#humankind
#MovingOn
#philosophical
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Trome
Poem Published
11th Oct 2019 4:03am
11th Oct 2019 4:03am
ONE NIGHT STAND
Stay With Me,
' for my miserable pleasure
Please I need to touch you
Butt naked
You're so beautiful
Like diamonds in the sky
,it's easy to put words together
But keeping a long lasting relationship
With my girlfriend
Is like catching a feather
in a cold windy weather
I know in my Latin heart
Her nakedness
Will not last 4 ever
Take advantage
Get super high
Empty my full load
All over her juicy ass cheeks
Lay down
Look up at the ceiling
Smoking a lace cigarette ...
' for my miserable pleasure
Please I need to touch you
Butt naked
You're so beautiful
Like diamonds in the sky
,it's easy to put words together
But keeping a long lasting relationship
With my girlfriend
Is like catching a feather
in a cold windy weather
I know in my Latin heart
Her nakedness
Will not last 4 ever
Take advantage
Get super high
Empty my full load
All over her juicy ass cheeks
Lay down
Look up at the ceiling
Smoking a lace cigarette ...
#women
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
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Joseph-Zenieh
Poem Published
9th Oct 2019 4:52pm
9th Oct 2019 4:52pm
THE TRUTH AND MAN'S VALUE
THE TRUTH AND MAN'S VALUE
He stands so high and not afraid of his viewpoint.
The truth for him appears so dear, a precious stone.
He writes not fearing that his words will make him small
if he describes the others' verse as charming lines.
He looks so proud not fearing thoughts that bloom with facts.
The truth can give his face a tint of splendid shade.
He'll get a mind quite clear of all red-hot remorse,
not fearing that his praise will make him as a dwarf.
Full truth, you dress him in the cuirass of old knights
who fought to get...
He stands so high and not afraid of his viewpoint.
The truth for him appears so dear, a precious stone.
He writes not fearing that his words will make him small
if he describes the others' verse as charming lines.
He looks so proud not fearing thoughts that bloom with facts.
The truth can give his face a tint of splendid shade.
He'll get a mind quite clear of all red-hot remorse,
not fearing that his praise will make him as a dwarf.
Full truth, you dress him in the cuirass of old knights
who fought to get...
#honesty
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wallyroo92
Poem Published
9th Oct 2019 1:14am
9th Oct 2019 1:14am
Active Shooter
But on a serious note,
How sad is it that we now have to have training on this matter…
Let put it out there, I don’t mind dying,
I do mind surviving all kinds of fucked up,
If you know me I’ve seen all types of things,
After all we never know when our time’s up.
It’s not that get really anxious,
But I tend worry for my kids,
It’s a pretty fucked up world,
When someone goes off the skids.
Let me explain in the way my brain can unload (no pun),
We’ve been told to run, hide or fight when we hear shooting,
Especially...
How sad is it that we now have to have training on this matter…
Let put it out there, I don’t mind dying,
I do mind surviving all kinds of fucked up,
If you know me I’ve seen all types of things,
After all we never know when our time’s up.
It’s not that get really anxious,
But I tend worry for my kids,
It’s a pretty fucked up world,
When someone goes off the skids.
Let me explain in the way my brain can unload (no pun),
We’ve been told to run, hide or fight when we hear shooting,
Especially...
#anxiety
#LifeStruggles
#TruthOfLife #honesty
#TruthOfLife #honesty
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Codex_intelligence
Katie Dykes
Katie Dykes
Poem Published
8th Oct 2019 4:46pm
8th Oct 2019 4:46pm
Nothing Even Matters Here. <3
when you sit back and think about life
you realize it doesnt matter.
all those desicions wont change that youll die
love is a chemical reaction to make us reproduce the human race
poetry doesnt matter
friends dont matter
love doesnt matter
anything you think might remotely make you happy
DOESNT MATTER
you could die right now and no one would care
because our reaction to your death is us just finding
another godamn exuse to care about how we feel
and anyone that tells you otherwise is a fucking liar
trying to defend their sorry...
you realize it doesnt matter.
all those desicions wont change that youll die
love is a chemical reaction to make us reproduce the human race
poetry doesnt matter
friends dont matter
love doesnt matter
anything you think might remotely make you happy
DOESNT MATTER
you could die right now and no one would care
because our reaction to your death is us just finding
another godamn exuse to care about how we feel
and anyone that tells you otherwise is a fucking liar
trying to defend their sorry...
#dark
#LifeStruggles
#funny
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
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Soxy
SoxThePoet
SoxThePoet
Poem Published
8th Oct 2019 4:42pm
8th Oct 2019 4:42pm
i Love U
We could talk of the moon and the stars
Constellations and galaxies far apart
How you outshine even the sun
Angels wishing to be U
how flowers bow in reverence when ever you walk-by
Except the jealous ones,
They envy your scent and wish they had your shine
Yes, if you prefer
We could talk of the rainbows in the sky
Doves sliding through the crescent of the African moon
We could talk of the world as if it belongs to Us
How history and literature
Failed to capture the essence of our love
Romeo and Juliet, Jack and Rose
They...
Constellations and galaxies far apart
How you outshine even the sun
Angels wishing to be U
how flowers bow in reverence when ever you walk-by
Except the jealous ones,
They envy your scent and wish they had your shine
Yes, if you prefer
We could talk of the rainbows in the sky
Doves sliding through the crescent of the African moon
We could talk of the world as if it belongs to Us
How history and literature
Failed to capture the essence of our love
Romeo and Juliet, Jack and Rose
They...
#honesty
#passion
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drone
Poem Published
8th Oct 2019 11:40am
8th Oct 2019 11:40am
Lazy
Are you
one of the woke people
one of those embolden
people
who bark at their own echo
who have no spine
to grow the teeth
that can bite
this you people
deep down inside
Know
yet
you continue
on the same path
because your lazy
it's to hard
because to change
to fight to control
ones thoughts
ones way of thinking
requires one
to grow a spine
inside ones mind
that is the
hardest thing
one can do
when one lives
a life of a slave
to the thoughts ...
one of the woke people
one of those embolden
people
who bark at their own echo
who have no spine
to grow the teeth
that can bite
this you people
deep down inside
Know
yet
you continue
on the same path
because your lazy
it's to hard
because to change
to fight to control
ones thoughts
ones way of thinking
requires one
to grow a spine
inside ones mind
that is the
hardest thing
one can do
when one lives
a life of a slave
to the thoughts ...
#LifeStruggles
#honesty
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drone
Poem Published
6th Oct 2019 1:41pm
6th Oct 2019 1:41pm
The city You Live In
Being
selectively deaf
and being selective
with your
empathys request
to listen
to the fading heart beats
of the raped
beaten
broken
dieing
children
makes one wonder
why you have
any empathy at all
when one
only protests
about the cruelty
against animals
selectively deaf
and being selective
with your
empathys request
to listen
to the fading heart beats
of the raped
beaten
broken
dieing
children
makes one wonder
why you have
any empathy at all
when one
only protests
about the cruelty
against animals
#honesty
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