Poems About Honesty Seeking Honest Critique
#honesty
0UTPUT_a_AURA
Poem Published
Today 2:26am
Today 2:26am
Killing time
not prepared
For the, future
Wanna be kid again
Wake up Christmas
Unwrap presents
Papercut panic attack
Bleed out to Reality
I’m fine
But Sometimes
I’m actually Not
————chorus—————————————
Think too much
maybe
Procrastinate, Almost Daily
day dream, wake up
Knock knock, anxiety
So I’m
I’m just
killing—-Time
Wasting —-Life
Just killing —-Time
Wasting —my-Life
————verse 2—————————————
need ToGrow up
Have goals
High interest loans
Big...
For the, future
Wanna be kid again
Wake up Christmas
Unwrap presents
Papercut panic attack
Bleed out to Reality
I’m fine
But Sometimes
I’m actually Not
————chorus—————————————
Think too much
maybe
Procrastinate, Almost Daily
day dream, wake up
Knock knock, anxiety
So I’m
I’m just
killing—-Time
Wasting —-Life
Just killing —-Time
Wasting —my-Life
————verse 2—————————————
need ToGrow up
Have goals
High interest loans
Big...
#anxiety
#shame
#honesty
#FeelingLost
#emptiness
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eljustignoreyou
John Daliva
John Daliva
Poem Published
Yesterday 6:08pm
Yesterday 6:08pm
About last night
A 10 mile ride in a restless city,
An hour of distance of you and me maybe.
Regardless of how long it took,
It's all worth it with just one look.
As I found a warm embrace,
That let's me feel through my surface.
Longing by then begone,
For myself is beside the one.
In every second that I have with you,
My weary soul uplifts itself.
In every instance that I can do no more,
I'd still fight till nothings left.
An hour of distance of you and me maybe.
Regardless of how long it took,
It's all worth it with just one look.
As I found a warm embrace,
That let's me feel through my surface.
Longing by then begone,
For myself is beside the one.
In every second that I have with you,
My weary soul uplifts itself.
In every instance that I can do no more,
I'd still fight till nothings left.
#lover
#honesty
#FallingInLove
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Vamps
Poem Published
Yesterday 3:34pm
Yesterday 3:34pm
Truth Teller
What to believe in
If not to thyself
When down and outed
Left on last shelf
To love in all that
You gave and received
Letting go of the struggle
To be believed
They call you a giver
Of false and of doubt
When all your truth
Lay scattered about
A code they do follow
Disjointed and warped
Perpetual disagreement
Hypocrisy and humbug talked
When all the dust settled
Your grave stone shall tell
"Here lies an honest Man"
Where truth and
authenticity...
If not to thyself
When down and outed
Left on last shelf
To love in all that
You gave and received
Letting go of the struggle
To be believed
They call you a giver
Of false and of doubt
When all your truth
Lay scattered about
A code they do follow
Disjointed and warped
Perpetual disagreement
Hypocrisy and humbug talked
When all the dust settled
Your grave stone shall tell
"Here lies an honest Man"
Where truth and
authenticity...
#LifeStruggles
#honesty
#WritingPoetry
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2 Comments
Ahavati
Poem Published
Yesterday 2:54pm
Yesterday 2:54pm
Spiritology
When I was young, I wondered
why the crucifixion was depicted
behind the altar of a church;
or, worn around the neck—
Jesus agonizingly wrenched, looking up
or down as if in eternal rest
I thought to myself, what is my purpose;
how would I want to be remembered
should I meet a violent end—
not in the agony of the moment:
even in youth, I knew that much—
but, sharing life and love...
why the crucifixion was depicted
behind the altar of a church;
or, worn around the neck—
Jesus agonizingly wrenched, looking up
or down as if in eternal rest
I thought to myself, what is my purpose;
how would I want to be remembered
should I meet a violent end—
not in the agony of the moment:
even in youth, I knew that much—
but, sharing life and love...
#religion
#spiritual
#honesty
#philosophical
#wisdom
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drone
Poem Published
Yesterday 9:35am
Yesterday 9:35am
Control
If one does not
even try
to master them self's
to control
their chipanzee minded
mentality
to keep trying
to enforce
a human minded
mentality
how can one
even begin to try
to contol
the suffering
of ones life
in these lands
of confusion
where everybody is told
you need
a psychological crutch
when in truth
the only crutch you need
is the hardest thing to achive
is to control
Your Mind
even try
to master them self's
to control
their chipanzee minded
mentality
to keep trying
to enforce
a human minded
mentality
how can one
even begin to try
to contol
the suffering
of ones life
in these lands
of confusion
where everybody is told
you need
a psychological crutch
when in truth
the only crutch you need
is the hardest thing to achive
is to control
Your Mind
#LifeStruggles
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
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Shiva_143
Poem Published
Yesterday 3:08am
Yesterday 3:08am
In a Moment’s Notice
Once aloof, I took notice of
A focused gaze in my direction;
The attention I’d been aching for,
Pouring into me from gentle eyes.
Lows became highs, dusk became dawn;
Pawns of the kingdom equipped the crown;
Towns became cities, houses of paper
Into skyscrapers, towers aglow.
All
In a moment’s
Notice.
A focused gaze in my direction;
The attention I’d been aching for,
Pouring into me from gentle eyes.
Lows became highs, dusk became dawn;
Pawns of the kingdom equipped the crown;
Towns became cities, houses of paper
Into skyscrapers, towers aglow.
All
In a moment’s
Notice.
#relationships
#romantic
#spiritual
#honesty
#FallingInLove
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3 Comments
Spikehipwell
Mike Hipwell
Mike Hipwell
Poem Published
24th Feb 2020 9:54pm
24th Feb 2020 9:54pm
This is real
Like how I laugh so much your face bursts with surprise,
Like how you need to brush the hair back from your eyes,
Like how there’s no way I could tell you any lies,
This is real, this is real, this is real.
Like how you sit real close and snuggle into me,
Like how you let me put my hand upon your knee,
Like how you said you’d love another cup of tea,
This is real, this is real, this is real.
Like how I feel so much more calm when you are near,
Like how the morning thought of you brings on a tear,
Like how this song’s for you but I...
Like how you need to brush the hair back from your eyes,
Like how there’s no way I could tell you any lies,
This is real, this is real, this is real.
Like how you sit real close and snuggle into me,
Like how you let me put my hand upon your knee,
Like how you said you’d love another cup of tea,
This is real, this is real, this is real.
Like how I feel so much more calm when you are near,
Like how the morning thought of you brings on a tear,
Like how this song’s for you but I...
#honesty
#FallingInLove
#philosophical
20 reads
2 Comments
AaHarvey
Poem Published
24th Feb 2020 9:07am
24th Feb 2020 9:07am
Here
I will be with you through blood sweat and tears.
I will stick to you like note paper for years and years.
When you need someone to listen to, I will be all ears.
When the end comes and I fade away,
I will never truly leave your side; I will never disappear.
(C)2019 Aa Harvey. All Rights Reserved.
I will stick to you like note paper for years and years.
When you need someone to listen to, I will be all ears.
When the end comes and I fade away,
I will never truly leave your side; I will never disappear.
(C)2019 Aa Harvey. All Rights Reserved.
#love
#death
#lover
#honesty
#aging
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drone
Poem Published
24th Feb 2020 7:50am
24th Feb 2020 7:50am
Equally
Do not your thoughts
become you
do not the waves
of other peoples thoughts
confuse you
within this system
that believes
that only actions
without truely
thinking
can bring you
what you need
without dreaming
of having
an open mind
where you can grow
your own seeds
where your thoughts
can and will
Become You
But without
truely thinking
without
an open mind
you will
there is no doubt
Die
with bitterness
Inside
your own mind
...
become you
do not the waves
of other peoples thoughts
confuse you
within this system
that believes
that only actions
without truely
thinking
can bring you
what you need
without dreaming
of having
an open mind
where you can grow
your own seeds
where your thoughts
can and will
Become You
But without
truely thinking
without
an open mind
you will
there is no doubt
Die
with bitterness
Inside
your own mind
...
#LifeStruggles
#TruthOfLife
#honesty #LifeGoals
#honesty #LifeGoals
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drone
Poem Published
23rd Feb 2020 11:34am
23rd Feb 2020 11:34am
Wounded
Is it not
the little things
in life
that will try you
to your core
knee jerk reactions
Avoidable actions
becoming wounded
by your own arrows
Firing
your resentment
at others
when in truth
it is only you
that feels the pain
the little things
in life
that will try you
to your core
knee jerk reactions
Avoidable actions
becoming wounded
by your own arrows
Firing
your resentment
at others
when in truth
it is only you
that feels the pain
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
24 reads
2 Comments
drone
Poem Published
23rd Feb 2020 7:16am
23rd Feb 2020 7:16am
Relearning
No matter
what they tell you
no matter what
other people say
one should never
even try
to unlearn
what one has been
led to believe
It cannot be done
one should aknowledge
that fact
then put it aside
to begin the process
of relearning
All those things
that they try to hide
within twisted partail
confusing truths
within
out right lies
what they tell you
no matter what
other people say
one should never
even try
to unlearn
what one has been
led to believe
It cannot be done
one should aknowledge
that fact
then put it aside
to begin the process
of relearning
All those things
that they try to hide
within twisted partail
confusing truths
within
out right lies
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
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4 Comments
Silverotter65
Drew1103
Drew1103
Poem Published
22nd Feb 2020 3:35pm
22nd Feb 2020 3:35pm
Saor Alba gu Brath
Saor Alba gu Brath
I dream a dream
A land so free,
No more in need
No more in pain,
Where all are equal
Under one banner,
of peace and love
For one another,
Scotland!
My heart,
A land that I love.
Drew Balfour © 2019
I dream a dream
A land so free,
No more in need
No more in pain,
Where all are equal
Under one banner,
of peace and love
For one another,
Scotland!
My heart,
A land that I love.
Drew Balfour © 2019
#motivational
#inspirational
#honesty #uplifting
#honesty #uplifting
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