Poems About Friendship by Top Critiquers
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Poems about friendship by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
On the way to buy apples - with Ms_LaCarte
My neck broke from trying
to put my head on your shoulder
as the sun set on the last day
of our new beginning
Fuck’s sake, what is she doing?
Not the shoulder, that takes too long.
I’m already late. God damn it.
I need a diversion, shit…and an excuse.
The sun sweat my resolve from the
bottom of my boobs
and today I want to sit and think
and not drive myself insane
...
to put my head on your shoulder
as the sun set on the last day
of our new beginning
Fuck’s sake, what is she doing?
Not the shoulder, that takes too long.
I’m already late. God damn it.
I need a diversion, shit…and an excuse.
The sun sweat my resolve from the
bottom of my boobs
and today I want to sit and think
and not drive myself insane
...
#anxiety
#collaboration
#friendship #sex
#friendship #sex
290 reads
18 Comments
{un}still life study
I want you to know me
in ways no one ever has before
or will again
beyond the weight...
of my breasts cupped in your palms
beyond the curve of my ass in your grasp
as my hips undulate
matching your rhythm
I want you to study me
research my thoughts
my heart
memorize my memorabilia
...for later
learn every contour & scar
immerse yourself in them
into my being
until you feel who I am
at a molecular...spiritual level
just as you bury the heft of your aggression ...
in ways no one ever has before
or will again
beyond the weight...
of my breasts cupped in your palms
beyond the curve of my ass in your grasp
as my hips undulate
matching your rhythm
I want you to study me
research my thoughts
my heart
memorize my memorabilia
...for later
learn every contour & scar
immerse yourself in them
into my being
until you feel who I am
at a molecular...spiritual level
just as you bury the heft of your aggression ...
#admiration
#friendship
#lover #respect
#lover #respect
284 reads
12 Comments
You
Reassuring and safe,
I like how I can come to you -
Knowing you will never judge.
Of course you'll express your view.
But everyone follows their own path,
However stupid, however smart.
Understanding, it's what you do!
I turn to you when I feel stuck,
Cos you always have the answer -
Like someone's beautiful mama would.
You hate that expression,
But I find you endearing.
Showed my own mom your image last night -
Asked her what she thought...
'She's nice, Billy,' she said,
Despite knowing nothing...
I like how I can come to you -
Knowing you will never judge.
Of course you'll express your view.
But everyone follows their own path,
However stupid, however smart.
Understanding, it's what you do!
I turn to you when I feel stuck,
Cos you always have the answer -
Like someone's beautiful mama would.
You hate that expression,
But I find you endearing.
Showed my own mom your image last night -
Asked her what she thought...
'She's nice, Billy,' she said,
Despite knowing nothing...
#kindness
#friendship
#confessional
#support
#wisdom
937 reads
42 Comments
Salt of Life
still remember
the day i arrived
silenced bird with
disfigured wings
insecure about
everything but
willing to evolve
you came my way
spoke of sound
enjambment
onomatopoeia
rhythm and flow
showed me how
to cut & prune
paved the way
to better writes
but the thing that
inspires me most is
your...
the day i arrived
silenced bird with
disfigured wings
insecure about
everything but
willing to evolve
you came my way
spoke of sound
enjambment
onomatopoeia
rhythm and flow
showed me how
to cut & prune
paved the way
to better writes
but the thing that
inspires me most is
your...
#gratitude
#friendship
1124 reads
43 Comments
The Unexpected Life
The naked moon emits a bold seducing glow.
Bleeding light upon the black glistening sky.
The silent stars were aroused with spectacular shine.
Cradled in craters of my best moments.
Night eloquently falls and peace flourishes.
It no longer matters why.
A wolf's ached howl,
Inviting souls to banish slumber.
And emerge into the dark magic of elder summer
nights.
The mind sparkles with enchantment over the lightning bug's lingering flight.
Expect the unexpected life.
You can never predict what a day holds.
What...
Bleeding light upon the black glistening sky.
The silent stars were aroused with spectacular shine.
Cradled in craters of my best moments.
Night eloquently falls and peace flourishes.
It no longer matters why.
A wolf's ached howl,
Inviting souls to banish slumber.
And emerge into the dark magic of elder summer
nights.
The mind sparkles with enchantment over the lightning bug's lingering flight.
Expect the unexpected life.
You can never predict what a day holds.
What...
#friendship
#moon
#night #memories
#night #memories
251 reads
12 Comments
~my poetic prophetess :: Opheliac
viz: ophie
#admiration
#friendship
#love
#minimalist
#wisdom
135 reads
2 Comments
Casted _Runes
Expression series VII
#admiration
#friendship
#respect #WritingPoetry
#respect #WritingPoetry
276 reads
8 Comments
no strangers
each person
walking,
moving
on the
busy
sidewalk,
so many
happy
smiling
faces
in the
bright
morning
sun,
not looking
like
strangers
at all,
coming near,
passing
and then
more new
smiling
happy
faces not
looking like
strangers
at all.
walking,
moving
on the
busy
sidewalk,
so many
happy
smiling
faces
in the
bright
morning
sun,
not looking
like
strangers
at all,
coming near,
passing
and then
more new
smiling
happy
faces not
looking like
strangers
at all.
#friendship
#kindness
#learning
#peace
#tolerance
58 reads
8 Comments
Belonging
Navigating the new and ancient friend zone.
Piloting through skies with flying drones.
Lost in the intrigues of a drama of thrones.
Deflecting the impact of sticks and stones.
Remembering the friends, here and gone,
their laughter echoes, lives like dawn.
In these realms of heart and fantasy
w chart our paths, uniquely our own.
With courage to face what may come
and the strength to turn the unknown into home.
The bonds we share, forever strong.
In our hearts, they forever belong.
Piloting through skies with flying drones.
Lost in the intrigues of a drama of thrones.
Deflecting the impact of sticks and stones.
Remembering the friends, here and gone,
their laughter echoes, lives like dawn.
In these realms of heart and fantasy
w chart our paths, uniquely our own.
With courage to face what may come
and the strength to turn the unknown into home.
The bonds we share, forever strong.
In our hearts, they forever belong.
#BestFriend
#friendship
#honesty
#LifeCycle
#love
56 reads
6 Comments
Leroy Pt. 1
#betrayal
#dirty
#erotic #friendship
#erotic #friendship
162 reads
8 Comments
Crossing Lines (if she knew i'd be f#cked)
dreams of you ~ play like
skin flicks ~ in vivid sinful
detail ~ set ablaze
skin flicks ~ in vivid sinful
detail ~ set ablaze
#erotic
#friendship
#senryu #crush
#senryu #crush
375 reads
5 Comments
Atoms and Eve
i took an old math book from '74
inside cover stamped
by some high school in idaho
back when all counting was done with potatoes
one for dinner and one for town
one for breakfast, one for town
but the plow-man always got
the first bushel
it's in that subtraction
that you always felt
a little hungry
i over-wrote upon the pages
with the fattest marker I could find
my poems weren't ready
for my own title, or my name
so i put that boring book
to a better use
the school boys called me fag ...
inside cover stamped
by some high school in idaho
back when all counting was done with potatoes
one for dinner and one for town
one for breakfast, one for town
but the plow-man always got
the first bushel
it's in that subtraction
that you always felt
a little hungry
i over-wrote upon the pages
with the fattest marker I could find
my poems weren't ready
for my own title, or my name
so i put that boring book
to a better use
the school boys called me fag ...
#friendship
378 reads
23 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Friendship by Top Critiquers