Poems About Friendship by Top Critiquers
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Poems about friendship by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
And now a true story
My childhood friend Kirby and I once hypnotized a frog in the summer of 88. We found a rock on the lake's shoreline that looked like an emerald. We believed the rock had super powers. An hour later, we found the frog. We began rubbing the rock on the top of it's forehead. It was amazing. The frog was hypnotized. (We thought) We weren't sure though on how to unhyptnotize the frog. Instead, we kept the frog and fed it to Kirby's German Sheppard, named Bear. That was the 1st time his dog tasted frog! 'oui oui'
After Bear had lunch, we went inside to see Kirby's Grandma. This old...
After Bear had lunch, we went inside to see Kirby's Grandma. This old...
#childhood
#friendship
#memories
#ShortStory
#summer
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Keith (Vision_of_insanity)
Not afraid to cut people with his ink
Often saying the quiet part out loud
Throwing barbs from the kitchen sink
He knows how to provoke the proud
Underneath the darkness there is light
Hidden in metaphor or lurking in humor
Doesn’t pull punches or throw the fight
A warning to the fainthearted consumer
Sticks and stones often break bones
While words bring out honest results
So put down the fucking smartphones
He’s taking down cults and weak adults
His visions are packed full of insanity
It’s just the world as...
Often saying the quiet part out loud
Throwing barbs from the kitchen sink
He knows how to provoke the proud
Underneath the darkness there is light
Hidden in metaphor or lurking in humor
Doesn’t pull punches or throw the fight
A warning to the fainthearted consumer
Sticks and stones often break bones
While words bring out honest results
So put down the fucking smartphones
He’s taking down cults and weak adults
His visions are packed full of insanity
It’s just the world as...
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#friendship
#gratitude #LifeAsAWriter
#gratitude #LifeAsAWriter
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19 Comments
Cold Meat
There is an art to the charcuterie board.
Charcuterie board
Soft cheese
Hard cheese
In between cheese
Three types of olive
Crackers
Jam
Meat
Malbec
Lol, yes...
You offer plenty of meat but it's cold!
Don't you wanna feel the heat, baby?
I can take all of your meat.
Soon it'll be the hot hard kind I'm swallowing.
So what if I bend the rules?
That's what the chilled wine's for -
To cool things down a little. ...
Charcuterie board
Soft cheese
Hard cheese
In between cheese
Three types of olive
Crackers
Jam
Meat
Malbec
Lol, yes...
You offer plenty of meat but it's cold!
Don't you wanna feel the heat, baby?
I can take all of your meat.
Soon it'll be the hot hard kind I'm swallowing.
So what if I bend the rules?
That's what the chilled wine's for -
To cool things down a little. ...
#friendship
#passion
#sensual
244 reads
19 Comments
starlight
in a moment blink back your tears
be strong in your bare state
swaying in the pain
with the knowledge, they are your savior
quietly save your visions and dreams
what a wonderful day
where you can wander among the tear-stained murals
art born of your sorrow
differing in color and shade
the shadows of hurt surround you
clothing you in wisdom spun from your doubt
a patchwork dress each patch a day in your life
splendid in color and design
your gentleness of thought glows in your solitude
in your reverie, you...
be strong in your bare state
swaying in the pain
with the knowledge, they are your savior
quietly save your visions and dreams
what a wonderful day
where you can wander among the tear-stained murals
art born of your sorrow
differing in color and shade
the shadows of hurt surround you
clothing you in wisdom spun from your doubt
a patchwork dress each patch a day in your life
splendid in color and design
your gentleness of thought glows in your solitude
in your reverie, you...
#friendship
#stars
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0 Comments
This is Me
This is me, Louise
For those who knew me
Call me Missy
Remember me
In conversations and smiles
Remember me in memories
Make ‘em funny
Cat momma
Osie and Salem, my joy
After my cat babies…
Cigarettes and casinos
Classic rock and roll
Wheel of Fortune
Kohl’s, Aldi’s and The Dollar Store
Those were my jams
Lalalalalalalala
I can’t hear you
Those head phones weren’t just for my music
I didn’t need to hear your...
For those who knew me
Call me Missy
Remember me
In conversations and smiles
Remember me in memories
Make ‘em funny
Cat momma
Osie and Salem, my joy
After my cat babies…
Cigarettes and casinos
Classic rock and roll
Wheel of Fortune
Kohl’s, Aldi’s and The Dollar Store
Those were my jams
Lalalalalalalala
I can’t hear you
Those head phones weren’t just for my music
I didn’t need to hear your...
#death
#friendship
#illness
103 reads
17 Comments
Kiss the Breeze
This afternoon I felt fragile
So fragile the gentle breeze could have sliced me in half
But it didn't
Maybe that's just not what breezes do
Or perhaps the breeze took pity on me for the days events
On most other days a breeze is a delight but
Today my friend died
Cancer took a lovely man
Last time i saw him we went to shake hands but
I kissed his cheek instead
I'm so glad i did
He smiled a broad toothy smile and we said goodbye
I'd see him again or so i thought
But i didn't
I'm so glad I kissed his cheek.
...
So fragile the gentle breeze could have sliced me in half
But it didn't
Maybe that's just not what breezes do
Or perhaps the breeze took pity on me for the days events
On most other days a breeze is a delight but
Today my friend died
Cancer took a lovely man
Last time i saw him we went to shake hands but
I kissed his cheek instead
I'm so glad i did
He smiled a broad toothy smile and we said goodbye
I'd see him again or so i thought
But i didn't
I'm so glad I kissed his cheek.
...
#death
#friendship
#love
36 reads
Casted _Runes
Expression series VII
#admiration
#friendship
#respect #WritingPoetry
#respect #WritingPoetry
297 reads
8 Comments
How deep is your love
How deep is your love when it concerns the deepness of your heart, for how deep is your spiritual faith, when it concerns the situations that you had to endure. Were you felt that you were unloved and unappreciated, by just the kindness of your heart when you did something, just because you thought about them in a special way. For how deep is your love, when all you ever really wanted was to be with someone, who has a sense of real commitment and consistency. For sure how deep is your love when you have a sense of what, it means to be able to share your communication skills to articulate....
#friendship
#kindness
#love
#lover
#relationships
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The Unexpected Life
The naked moon emits a bold seducing glow.
Bleeding light upon the black glistening sky.
The silent stars were aroused with spectacular shine.
Cradled in craters of my best moments.
Night eloquently falls and peace flourishes.
It no longer matters why.
A wolf's ached howl,
Inviting souls to banish slumber.
And emerge into the dark magic of elder summer
nights.
The mind sparkles with enchantment over the lightning bug's lingering flight.
Expect the unexpected life.
You can never predict what a day holds.
What...
Bleeding light upon the black glistening sky.
The silent stars were aroused with spectacular shine.
Cradled in craters of my best moments.
Night eloquently falls and peace flourishes.
It no longer matters why.
A wolf's ached howl,
Inviting souls to banish slumber.
And emerge into the dark magic of elder summer
nights.
The mind sparkles with enchantment over the lightning bug's lingering flight.
Expect the unexpected life.
You can never predict what a day holds.
What...
#friendship
#moon
#night #memories
#night #memories
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12 Comments
Friends
They're designed to keep you here
You need to reject the fear
That love and acceptance isn't queer
The world is just a little sphere.
A tiny circle in a space.
A worthless moon with a face.
A magic trick without a trace.
An acid trip out of this place.
Friends are people. They are slaves
To God, they make their case.
You're just useless prey.
Ignore the things that they say.
Always turn your back to friends.
Welcome all the fiends.
They will comfort you to the end.
When you choose, not to sin.
...
You need to reject the fear
That love and acceptance isn't queer
The world is just a little sphere.
A tiny circle in a space.
A worthless moon with a face.
A magic trick without a trace.
An acid trip out of this place.
Friends are people. They are slaves
To God, they make their case.
You're just useless prey.
Ignore the things that they say.
Always turn your back to friends.
Welcome all the fiends.
They will comfort you to the end.
When you choose, not to sin.
...
#friendship
157 reads
12 Comments
LONGING TO SHARE
NOW
The hustle and
bustle, pushing
and shoving, pressuring
schedule, and
bumper-to-bumper
traffic ended when
I walked into my haven.
NOW
is my sacred time,
my time to shower,
slowly sip my favorite
wine as candlelights
cascade erotic shadows
dancing on the walls
in sync with my chosen music.
Relaxing,
my body starts to hunger
as movement starts
in my pleasure zone.
AS
I am longing to share,
the doorbell signals
YOU
are here.
Time starts a new world
of...
The hustle and
bustle, pushing
and shoving, pressuring
schedule, and
bumper-to-bumper
traffic ended when
I walked into my haven.
NOW
is my sacred time,
my time to shower,
slowly sip my favorite
wine as candlelights
cascade erotic shadows
dancing on the walls
in sync with my chosen music.
Relaxing,
my body starts to hunger
as movement starts
in my pleasure zone.
AS
I am longing to share,
the doorbell signals
YOU
are here.
Time starts a new world
of...
#friendship
#lover
#UnrequitedLove
#crush
#obsession
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I UNDERSTAND
I understand,
and take your hand.
No words needed,
you are heeded
through eye contact
and the impact
of your embrace
right in this place.
Few tears are shed
when hearts have bled.
And then you say,
hair brushed away,
"I knew you'd be
coming to me.
You've known me long,
you're my heart's song.
"You know, your face
can always chase
away my woes,
because - God knows -
you're an angel
in my trouble.
They broke the mould
of you. You're...
and take your hand.
No words needed,
you are heeded
through eye contact
and the impact
of your embrace
right in this place.
Few tears are shed
when hearts have bled.
And then you say,
hair brushed away,
"I knew you'd be
coming to me.
You've known me long,
you're my heart's song.
"You know, your face
can always chase
away my woes,
because - God knows -
you're an angel
in my trouble.
They broke the mould
of you. You're...
#friendship
#love
#rhyming
#sadness
#support
211 reads
4 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Friendship by Top Critiquers