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Salt of Life

still remember
the day i arrived

silenced bird with

disfigured wings
insecure about

everything but
willing to evolve

you came my way
spoke of sound

enjambment

onomatopoeia
rhythm and flow

showed me how
to cut & prune

paved the way
to better writes

but the thing that
inspires me most is

your brutal honesty
and steadfastness

to not withhold

thanks Todski

because of you

and your support
iíve found my voice

and sing my own song
Author's Note
Dedicated to Todski
*title comes from his page
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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