Poems About Friendship Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about friendship seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
Yesterday 3:51pm
Yesterday 3:51pm
GET OUT OF MY LIFE
Let's take a moment to analyze, as we reflect upon the uncrossing, of our history and life 💖 together. 🤔 For sure I have been very grateful enough to know when it's over and done , between us but yet I truly wonder is it really over between us. 🤨. For it is true that we have so much history together, it would be a shame to watch it go away and never truly return. 😔 Yet I know it would be best for me and you, being that we are always fighting and arguing back to back and going at each other like cats and dogs. 🤨 Almost to the point of no return from...
#BestFriend
#friendship
#LifeCycle
#lover
#marriage
22 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
12th Dec 2024 2:31am
12th Dec 2024 2:31am
She's The One Who Tempted Him Into Doing It.
Kevin went to Shawn's house.
Kevin spotted Shawn's mom naked and waiting.
Kevin stripped and humped her.
Kevin spotted Shawn's mom naked and waiting.
Kevin stripped and humped her.
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#mother
#sex
71 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
12th Dec 2024 1:37am
12th Dec 2024 1:37am
I JUST WANT YOU TO THINK
It's me again the story teller of unspoken WORDS ✍️. For sure I just want you to know and think for thyself, 🤔 for what I want to know from you 🤔 do you know what you want and need, 🤔 or do you continue to just settle for what you don't want or need to sustain your own life. 🙏 For sure I see your thoughts process, turning in the deepness of your own SUBCONSCIOUSNESS OF YOUR MIND 🧠 LET'S dive deeper into the deepness of your own thoughts, and insight and feelings 😞 into the outer limits, of your own mind thoughts...
#BestFriend
#fatherhood
#friendship
#LifeCycle
#motherhood
52 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
11th Dec 2024 8:29pm
11th Dec 2024 8:29pm
You Want To Join Us, Yvonne?
Yvonne discovered
Jonathan and Rose naked
and skinny dipping outside.
Jonathan and Rose naked
and skinny dipping outside.
#beach
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
#summer
79 reads
2 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
11th Dec 2024 11:14am
11th Dec 2024 11:14am
~the du alchemist
viz the du alchemist
#admiration
#friendship
#love
#magic
#WritingPoetry
94 reads
5 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
11th Dec 2024 10:45am
11th Dec 2024 10:45am
False Friends
False pictures around my face
False hands around my place
Can't breathe behind this haze
No, this isn't some temporary phase
Enemy or friend
To fall or to stand
Can you tell me when does it end?
Your smiling means to hate
Same words from the same tape
Lying and fake
It's plain to see, but hard to take
Going over the thin ice
Before you speak think twice
You rape my mind with lies
Read the novel, Lord of the Flies
It's kicking me in my head
It's driving me fuckin' mad
I can't believe...
False hands around my place
Can't breathe behind this haze
No, this isn't some temporary phase
Enemy or friend
To fall or to stand
Can you tell me when does it end?
Your smiling means to hate
Same words from the same tape
Lying and fake
It's plain to see, but hard to take
Going over the thin ice
Before you speak think twice
You rape my mind with lies
Read the novel, Lord of the Flies
It's kicking me in my head
It's driving me fuckin' mad
I can't believe...
#anger
#betrayal
#friendship #lies
#friendship #lies
67 reads
14 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
10th Dec 2024 2:32pm
10th Dec 2024 2:32pm
Oh My God! What Have I Been Drinking Last Night?!
Xaviera
was sitting naked on
the foot of the bed and looking scared
before she turned and glanced at Aaron and Skylar
still sleeping until she stood up and
looked at the Las Vegas
skyline there.
was sitting naked on
the foot of the bed and looking scared
before she turned and glanced at Aaron and Skylar
still sleeping until she stood up and
looked at the Las Vegas
skyline there.
#alcohol
#city
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
92 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
9th Dec 2024 10:16pm
9th Dec 2024 10:16pm
SPIRITUAL POWER OF A WOMAN
It's me again the story teller of words ✍️ I would like to take a moment of your time, to give my own utmost respect to all the women's of the world. 🌎 For sure if it wasn't for a strong 💪woman there wouldn't be a strong man. THAT is willing to stand and fight as a strong man. Building a strong relationship with a strong, foundation of steel and stones. 🪨 THAT together they shall always stand side by side. For sure I give them the upmost honor with respect, for if wasn't for a woman we as men could not even EXIST....
#BestFriend
#childhood
#fatherhood
#friendship
#motherhood
42 reads
3 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
9th Dec 2024 7:44pm
9th Dec 2024 7:44pm
Casted _Runes
Expression series VII
#admiration
#friendship
#respect #WritingPoetry
#respect #WritingPoetry
126 reads
6 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
9th Dec 2024 11:27am
9th Dec 2024 11:27am
Some Friends Crashed A Neighbor's New Years Eve Party
Pam
and some
friends crashed a
neighbor's New Years
Eve party because
they figured that nothing
bad would happen to them. But
that was before she woke up the
next day naked, hungover and with
realizing they've gotten in too deep.
and some
friends crashed a
neighbor's New Years
Eve party because
they figured that nothing
bad would happen to them. But
that was before she woke up the
next day naked, hungover and with
realizing they've gotten in too deep.
#alcohol
#fiction
#friendship
#NewYear
#sex
93 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
7th Dec 2024 8:47pm
7th Dec 2024 8:47pm
Look At What He Brought Home With Him
Scott came downstairs and
saw that there was a mermaid
laying on the frat house floor.
Gil told the other
guys that she begged him to help
her escape from Poseidon.
After that, the guys
helped her get into a
bathtub that's filled with water.
They also asked her
to be quiet so that the
house mother does not catch her.
saw that there was a mermaid
laying on the frat house floor.
Gil told the other
guys that she begged him to help
her escape from Poseidon.
After that, the guys
helped her get into a
bathtub that's filled with water.
They also asked her
to be quiet so that the
house mother does not catch her.
#acceptance
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#mermaids
43 reads
2 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 1:04pm
6th Dec 2024 1:04pm
Summultima
Expression Series V
#admiration
#friendship
#respect #spiritual
#respect #spiritual
159 reads
8 Comments
DU Poetry : Poems About Friendship Seeking Honest Critique
