Poems About Fate Seeking Honest Critique
#fate
Poems about fate seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
DO YOU BELIEVE
Do you believe that there is nothing in this space and time, and world 🌍 that you can't escape from, for sure it's in your hands and mind to manifest. YOUR own thoughts and insight into your dreams. For let's take a moment to analyze, the very deepness of the truth that you try to hide, behind a mask as a disguise.
But what I know now, is that you look kind of confused about, what I just said for sure we as human creatures of habits. For sometimes we have to block out the negativity and replace it that stops us from having to learn to walk away from, the negativity in...
But what I know now, is that you look kind of confused about, what I just said for sure we as human creatures of habits. For sometimes we have to block out the negativity and replace it that stops us from having to learn to walk away from, the negativity in...
#courage
#fate
#hope
#strength
#TimeHeals
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Cursed
I don't know where I am
I don't know where I've been
What is this that surrounds me?
I see darkness
I see my fate
I start to panic
Is it all too late?
I cannot breathe
I cannot see
I cannot break this curse
There is no way out
There is little light
This curse takes me tonight
I will never lie
I know I will die
Give me one more chance
Oh mighty Lucifer, praise my last words
I don't know where I've been
What is this that surrounds me?
I see darkness
I see my fate
I start to panic
Is it all too late?
I cannot breathe
I cannot see
I cannot break this curse
There is no way out
There is little light
This curse takes me tonight
I will never lie
I know I will die
Give me one more chance
Oh mighty Lucifer, praise my last words
#curse
#dark
#evil #fate
#evil #fate
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From a different set of eyes
They say that knowone is sent to you by chance or accident. 😞 YET it happens sometimes in our own personal lives, putting us up against things that we will never, completely understand. 🤨 For sure that is what life is all about, the challenges that you must have to learn to face. 😞 But yet we must never look upon the things, that changes our life. For sure we can focus our thoughts on what, we must do to make a wrong RIGHT. Before we become drawn into a situation being blind to the truth. For sure sometimes we have, to learn to walk away from the negativity. 😔...
#faith
#fate
#karma
#redemption
#TruthOfLife
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This Life
In spite of all the danger
Pray to the Heaven's above
Packed in life's container
What's the meaning of?
Applause the final curtain
Taking your final puff
Spectators serving sermons
All in the name of love
Pray to the Heaven's above
Packed in life's container
What's the meaning of?
Applause the final curtain
Taking your final puff
Spectators serving sermons
All in the name of love
#fate
#philosophical
#spiritual
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el Corrido de una joven Pendejo
A hurricane of hatred;
naïve, indignant rebellion left
what's left
high and
dry— stranded on a foggy
sea.
An all consuming misery
without vector.
barely surviving on a
dwindling,
rationed hope of concinnity.
I lie asleep yet in ever crescendoing
conscious agony.
Head now spinning,
ensnared in a web of my own
spinning.
Refuges of repose turned stale;
sterile with the spinning of the
world.
Warm, disorienting prison
edified upon shifting sands stands,
still.
...
naïve, indignant rebellion left
what's left
high and
dry— stranded on a foggy
sea.
An all consuming misery
without vector.
barely surviving on a
dwindling,
rationed hope of concinnity.
I lie asleep yet in ever crescendoing
conscious agony.
Head now spinning,
ensnared in a web of my own
spinning.
Refuges of repose turned stale;
sterile with the spinning of the
world.
Warm, disorienting prison
edified upon shifting sands stands,
still.
...
#bittersweet
#escape
#fate #temptation
#fate #temptation
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Fear holds in the rest
Humans shuffling past me like corpses to stupid to die
Their clothes hold their guts in
Fear holds in the rest
Running like rats
Scurrying through waste paper and filth to their holes before the sun goes down
They have umbilical cords of sewage wrapped around their throats
Choking on life, nursing their wounds
They'll tell you that they're loving every second of it
Just like prisoners come to love their captors
Just like roaches in a roach motel
Tasting the poison, telling you it's wine
Their clothes hold their guts in
Fear holds in the rest
Running like rats
Scurrying through waste paper and filth to their holes before the sun goes down
They have umbilical cords of sewage wrapped around their throats
Choking on life, nursing their wounds
They'll tell you that they're loving every second of it
Just like prisoners come to love their captors
Just like roaches in a roach motel
Tasting the poison, telling you it's wine
#fate
#fear
#humankind
#ignorance
#illness
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3 wishes
blood drips
cuts hurt
memories
come and go
be strong
be weak
arms hurt
shoulders ache
i can't carry
no more
let go
i try
but glue sticks
life spins
cars speed
time never
stands still
3 wishes
1-2-3
they never
came true
wish i had
a genies lamp
but they're not real
this is...
cuts hurt
memories
come and go
be strong
be weak
arms hurt
shoulders ache
i can't carry
no more
let go
i try
but glue sticks
life spins
cars speed
time never
stands still
3 wishes
1-2-3
they never
came true
wish i had
a genies lamp
but they're not real
this is...
#fate
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Blessing from above
As we exchange thoughts and prayers and inspiring words, ✍️ for the betterment of life and love and happiness. As with truth, with all that we shall believe, in our mind and heart and spiritual soul. 🙏 For the things that we have to go through, is a testament of our strength and courage, to with stand against the very evil forces of men. THAT we will never understand why is it that way as It 🤨. Has always been seen through many people's eyes 👁️ 👁️ 🤨 Yet we must never give up, on the power of our faith nor beliefs. 🙏...
#faith
#fate
#morality
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
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Young Man’s Game
Will Mother Maybelle
miss
me
when I’ve
gone?
Perhaps not.
Regardless-
In no more than
twelve
years
Time, there’ll be a
new, fresh-
faced upstart.
and while my hopes so dear
rest neath the willow
as his horizons begin to clear
may no one remember for to shed a
solitary tear.
Still I’ll leave
pieces
of
me
true to a foregone narrative—
long ago
conceived.
Thus, here on my
mind is
ever inscribed this ...
miss
me
when I’ve
gone?
Perhaps not.
Regardless-
In no more than
twelve
years
Time, there’ll be a
new, fresh-
faced upstart.
and while my hopes so dear
rest neath the willow
as his horizons begin to clear
may no one remember for to shed a
solitary tear.
Still I’ll leave
pieces
of
me
true to a foregone narrative—
long ago
conceived.
Thus, here on my
mind is
ever inscribed this ...
#consumerism
#fate
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Ea$y Money (Not so Easy)
Ea$y Money (Not so easy)
Cutting in line
Won’t wait my turn
It’s my money and
I want to collect
But the game ain’t over
There’s still time
For it to fall to pieces
Does it almost every time
Life of a Rider
Comin up short in the end
They say insanity is
When you rinse and repeat
Tryin to make an easy buck
Instead of just being
Losing an easy buck instead
Of pocketing
Life of a Rider
Isn’t an easy path
Want to get rid of this
Insanity not so easy
...
Cutting in line
Won’t wait my turn
It’s my money and
I want to collect
But the game ain’t over
There’s still time
For it to fall to pieces
Does it almost every time
Life of a Rider
Comin up short in the end
They say insanity is
When you rinse and repeat
Tryin to make an easy buck
Instead of just being
Losing an easy buck instead
Of pocketing
Life of a Rider
Isn’t an easy path
Want to get rid of this
Insanity not so easy
...
#addiction
#curse
#fate #luck
#fate #luck
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Kids, don't try this at home
He had seen on TV
An execution by hanging
Curious he was, he tried
How it is to hang
Execution means dying
Hanging is not a game
Execution means dying
He won't do it again
It was just a funny game
This caused his own death
An execution by hanging
Curious he was, he tried
How it is to hang
Execution means dying
Hanging is not a game
Execution means dying
He won't do it again
It was just a funny game
This caused his own death
#children
#death
#fate #TruthOfLife
#fate #TruthOfLife
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Lost Control
Tragic frontal collision
One moment without control
He also lost his life
The accident made a commotion
Rise the number of the dead
Tragic car accident
He crashed the hearse
One dead more
He crashed the hearse
Coffin was not far away
One moment without control
He also lost his life
The accident made a commotion
Rise the number of the dead
Tragic car accident
He crashed the hearse
One dead more
He crashed the hearse
Coffin was not far away
#cars
#death
#fate #TruthOfLife
#fate #TruthOfLife
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