Poems About Fate Seeking Honest Critique
#fate
Poems about fate seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
I am your protector
I am your protector your entity that gives you, the energy and strength that you will need to survive, this cycle of life. For sure life is an never ending cycle of ups and downs, that could make you lose your mind. For I heard you in the silently sounds of whispers, that you cried at night with tears just running, down your gentle face. For I understand your pain, along with your hurt and the silents of your heart, FOR have no fear cause you are not alone in your struggles. For it's in moments like these, I will never forget you nor forsake you, that you do exist even in your time of need,...
#faith
#fate
#morality
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
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Leonard Cohen Afterworld.
Light breaks softly.
Through the cracks.
I was told was in everything.
But I run from it.
Because it ruins the dark.
I will be an addendum.
In the book of life.
A simple caveat.
That the light couldn't reach.
My own personal.
Perpetual.
Darkness.
And you.
Illuminating my disgust.
Through the cracks.
I was told was in everything.
But I run from it.
Because it ruins the dark.
I will be an addendum.
In the book of life.
A simple caveat.
That the light couldn't reach.
My own personal.
Perpetual.
Darkness.
And you.
Illuminating my disgust.
#curse
#fate
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What is your aura saying
Here I am as I am a woman ♀️ in understanding my own beauty and strength and perseverance, along with the ability to have a respectful intellectual conversation. For sure there will be times when you just want to go some place far away from, the chaos of the world. 🌍 For as a woman I find myself feeling trapped, within a vortex that seems, to become more than a place of calmness and tranquility, and peaceful vibes, that I can have a quiet moment alone to breathe. For I am a woman who has fought many of battles, not knowing if I will truly make it through, the very...
#faith
#fate
#spiritual
#TimeHeals
#TruthOfLife
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The Destroyer (Part 5)
Doling excruciating pain is obsession to valiant soldiers
that’ll arm wrestle the very epitome of Death to that
Fighting for infinity wraith on the other dark side
of time and space in stone grip to strike back
Black Panther speaking open heart surgery
to parade of Ancestors razor claws drawn
I do it for Wakanda across the chest
til life RIPs respawn or blood gone
Silver fox too cunning to be meat
in afterlife a simp or devoured
When I die it’ll be sacrificial in stance extinguished
glorious Lamb to awaken bright side empowered ...
that’ll arm wrestle the very epitome of Death to that
Fighting for infinity wraith on the other dark side
of time and space in stone grip to strike back
Black Panther speaking open heart surgery
to parade of Ancestors razor claws drawn
I do it for Wakanda across the chest
til life RIPs respawn or blood gone
Silver fox too cunning to be meat
in afterlife a simp or devoured
When I die it’ll be sacrificial in stance extinguished
glorious Lamb to awaken bright side empowered ...
#faith
#fate
#redemption
#sacrifice
#spiritual
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Game Over
Well as luck would have it
I got the short end of the stick
It could be raining titties
and I'd get hit with a dic
I just broke my last cigarette
and see someone done stole my red bic
Ain't it sick how quick things slip
Into the shadows of the abyss
From this eclipse
From a dub to G then a ball now a
zip
Never should've taken that last hit
or that first sip
or chopped and crossed
That final little fine flat-line
That intertwined into a bind
Being confined behind the...
I got the short end of the stick
It could be raining titties
and I'd get hit with a dic
I just broke my last cigarette
and see someone done stole my red bic
Ain't it sick how quick things slip
Into the shadows of the abyss
From this eclipse
From a dub to G then a ball now a
zip
Never should've taken that last hit
or that first sip
or chopped and crossed
That final little fine flat-line
That intertwined into a bind
Being confined behind the...
#dark
#despair
#drugs
#fate
#luck
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Precious Stone
Have you ever had a sacred moment in your life, that changes even your thoughts of your own personal thoughts. THAT are involved in creating your most important moment of your own life. For sure have you ever had someone, who came into your life and world. 🌎 THAT seems to become more than what you never thought, that you would be involved with someone who has the ability, to understand what they want and need not what they don't need or want, in there life and love and happiness and dreams. For sure we've had bad yet we had good as well, with some relationships, for sure they say that...
#angels
#faith
#fate
#StreamOfConsciousness
#TruthOfLife
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The Mother He Loved
Born and raised under her wings
Protection and care, has always been
Everything his mother said he believed
Mother encouraged him, she was often pleased
A few times, he would get himself into a jam
She would always solve it, lend him a hand
As he grew older, he had a successful career
Living across the country, he wasn't so near
One day he received a call, it was from his Aunt
He was told to come back home, she began to rant
She told him that his mother is hospitalized and she's very sick
He took the next flight out, losing his job was a...
Protection and care, has always been
Everything his mother said he believed
Mother encouraged him, she was often pleased
A few times, he would get himself into a jam
She would always solve it, lend him a hand
As he grew older, he had a successful career
Living across the country, he wasn't so near
One day he received a call, it was from his Aunt
He was told to come back home, she began to rant
She told him that his mother is hospitalized and she's very sick
He took the next flight out, losing his job was a...
#fate
#love
#mother
#rhyming
#son
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An ode to a friend I never met
The night is cold snow gently falls
The spear in my hand is heavy like the earth
An old voice from long ago calls
I can hear it around the hearth
This ember of the life is not truly mine
Awoke in a black spire to death and decay
The flame gives borrowed time
From someone who's name I will never say
That was your spear stabbed into the dirt
It felt familiar in my hands like an old friend
Then in my heart I began to hurt
The pain I felt I knew it was from your end
You fell next to that spire
Next to the spear was a skull worn...
The spear in my hand is heavy like the earth
An old voice from long ago calls
I can hear it around the hearth
This ember of the life is not truly mine
Awoke in a black spire to death and decay
The flame gives borrowed time
From someone who's name I will never say
That was your spear stabbed into the dirt
It felt familiar in my hands like an old friend
Then in my heart I began to hurt
The pain I felt I knew it was from your end
You fell next to that spire
Next to the spear was a skull worn...
#fate
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When we are shifting energy
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️ what do you believe within your own thoughts and insight and imagination. For do you wish to make your life better than it's ever been, for do you have the ability and power to eliminate the negativity, and replace it with positivity. For sure we all have the ability to manifest that which we pray for in our lives and dreams. For do you believe in your dreams with a want and need, to sustain your own wishes for do you have the perseverance, to meet the challenges that will elevate you to your true spiritual potential. For do you...
#faith
#fate
#rebirth
#redemption
#TruthOfLife
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Listen to the silence
Living in the shadows, where there is no place to go
Living in the shadows, where there is no place to dream
Take a deep breath to fight against your fears
Live for the moment to understand your destiny
Listen to the silence to find the way
Do you remember when nothing was everything?
Lies,
Cause what sounded good to you determined your choice
Your knowledge is fading, and this battle is just the beginning
Living in the shadows, where there is no place to dream
Take a deep breath to fight against your fears
Live for the moment to understand your destiny
Listen to the silence to find the way
Do you remember when nothing was everything?
Lies,
Cause what sounded good to you determined your choice
Your knowledge is fading, and this battle is just the beginning
#fate
#fear
#LifeStruggles
#silence
#wisdom
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Black Raven
Standing before The Gate of Secrets
Full Moon up above
The Red Planet hanging by it's side.
Wonder what they're talking about...
So close yet so far
tell me what you know Mr Moon
tell me your dreams
tell me your secrets...
the raven caws
as Mars falls behind The Moon
it's all a mystery waiting to be sloved
and the moon dances through the clouds
caw caw
says the raven...
Full Moon up above
The Red Planet hanging by it's side.
Wonder what they're talking about...
So close yet so far
tell me what you know Mr Moon
tell me your dreams
tell me your secrets...
the raven caws
as Mars falls behind The Moon
it's all a mystery waiting to be sloved
and the moon dances through the clouds
caw caw
says the raven...
#fate
#shadows
#spiritual
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Echos from the past
Through this life, we all will meet someone who seems to have a good heart and spiritual aura, about themselves that will draw them into your life and world. 🌎 THAT will affect you in ways that we may never truly understand. 🤔 YET that is what makes you feel that you know them, 🤨 but do you really know them as you think you do. BUT yet you have a connection that touches your thoughts and insight and heart, ❤️ to let your guard down and to see where it takes you whether near or far away from the negativity, that makes no sense at all till we begin to...
#faith
#fate
#philosophical
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
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DU Poetry : Poems About Fate Seeking Honest Critique