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Listen to the silence
Living in the shadows, where there is no place to go
Living in the shadows, where there is no place to dream
Take a deep breath to fight against your fears
Live for the moment to understand your destiny
Listen to the silence to find the way
Do you remember when nothing was everything?
Lies,
Cause what sounded good to you determined your choice
Your knowledge is fading, and this battle is just the beginning
Living in the shadows, where there is no place to dream
Take a deep breath to fight against your fears
Live for the moment to understand your destiny
Listen to the silence to find the way
Do you remember when nothing was everything?
Lies,
Cause what sounded good to you determined your choice
Your knowledge is fading, and this battle is just the beginning
Published 23rd Jan 2025
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23rd Jan 2025 11:33am
23rd Jan 2025 11:40am
Thank you PAR for your knowledge and take on this poem. I appreciate you.
23rd Jan 2025 12:39pm
23rd Jan 2025 1:53pm
23rd Jan 2025 2:57pm
This is written by by a philosopher! Time spent in silence is most important to gain insight and find yourself.
Great work!
Great work!
23rd Jan 2025 5:25pm
23rd Jan 2025 3:02pm
"Do you remember when nothing was everything?" > what a thought-provoking question. It really made me ponder. The silence, to me, is always the place where I find myself. Love this piece of ink 🙏🏻
23rd Jan 2025 5:28pm
Silence is everything. It is needed in life. Without it, life is then chaotic and noisy. Music & film use silence to create atmosphere and a calming presence before the storm.
Appreciate the comments Duende.
Appreciate the comments Duende.
23rd Jan 2025 10:33pm
23rd Jan 2025 11:39pm
24th Jan 2025 2:34am
I enjoyed this one. Silence is scary. Makes me feel like everyone else finally died lol
24th Jan 2025 10:12am
Your mind wonders when there's complete silence. Thanks for the feedback!
24th Jan 2025 4:28pm
highly philosophical n deep in the verses .. amazing how you captured them from all your u shaking meditative silence , that comes from all the chaos n pain shaking n sculpting one within .. silence n truth in here , light love Keith xx
24th Jan 2025 7:00pm
