Poems About Fate by Top Critiquers
#fate
Poems about fate by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
The Mother He Loved
Born and raised under her wings
Protection and care, has always been
Everything his mother said he believed
Mother encouraged him, she was often pleased
A few times, he would get himself into a jam
She would always solve it, lend him a hand
As he grew older, he had a successful career
Living across the country, he wasn't so near
One day he received a call, it was from his Aunt
He was told to come back home, she began to rant
She told him that his mother is hospitalized and she's very sick
He took the next flight out, losing his job was a...
Protection and care, has always been
Everything his mother said he believed
Mother encouraged him, she was often pleased
A few times, he would get himself into a jam
She would always solve it, lend him a hand
As he grew older, he had a successful career
Living across the country, he wasn't so near
One day he received a call, it was from his Aunt
He was told to come back home, she began to rant
She told him that his mother is hospitalized and she's very sick
He took the next flight out, losing his job was a...
#fate
#love
#mother
#rhyming
#son
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somber
somber melancholy plays a deep cello within me
my sadness grows when I am away too long
withdrawn into a different realm
curtains are drawn and I am in my chambers
lamenting your love
it hurts, my lover over eternities
to be without your touch
intimate need, inflects on your subtle thoughts, cueing my lusts
subtle at first glance
but with a powerful pull I am swept under
where I drown in sorrow
yearning what isn't mine to keep
my mind wildly explores you
taking time to note the intricacies that you are made of
...
my sadness grows when I am away too long
withdrawn into a different realm
curtains are drawn and I am in my chambers
lamenting your love
it hurts, my lover over eternities
to be without your touch
intimate need, inflects on your subtle thoughts, cueing my lusts
subtle at first glance
but with a powerful pull I am swept under
where I drown in sorrow
yearning what isn't mine to keep
my mind wildly explores you
taking time to note the intricacies that you are made of
...
#fate
#love
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Source of my pain
It is a furnace inside I ran outside...
I am freezing while being outside..
Seizing of my breathe..
An ice house while am outside..
I sighted a funeral just far away..
Guess I am going out of my range..
In my whole life I've never been this cold..
Come and get me.. mama!
All I need is your comfort..
Put me in shape..
I need only your guidance..
Source of my pain..
Is not the source of my gain..
All I need is aiming..
I still rotate..
In this I find solace..
I see me a chance..
Even in no...
I am freezing while being outside..
Seizing of my breathe..
An ice house while am outside..
I sighted a funeral just far away..
Guess I am going out of my range..
In my whole life I've never been this cold..
Come and get me.. mama!
All I need is your comfort..
Put me in shape..
I need only your guidance..
Source of my pain..
Is not the source of my gain..
All I need is aiming..
I still rotate..
In this I find solace..
I see me a chance..
Even in no...
#fate
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6 Comments
Benevolent Benefactor
There is no energy
except what you extend
via action or thought
The Universe
is a benevolent benefactor
who returns only
what you emit
No more
No less
except what you extend
via action or thought
The Universe
is a benevolent benefactor
who returns only
what you emit
No more
No less
#fate
#learning
#wisdom #karma
#wisdom #karma
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28 Comments
Precious Stone
Have you ever had a sacred moment in your life, that changes even your thoughts of your own personal thoughts. THAT are involved in creating your most important moment of your own life. For sure have you ever had someone, who came into your life and world. 🌎 THAT seems to become more than what you never thought, that you would be involved with someone who has the ability, to understand what they want and need not what they don't need or want, in there life and love and happiness and dreams. For sure we've had bad yet we had good as well, with some relationships, for sure they say that...
#angels
#faith
#fate
#StreamOfConsciousness
#TruthOfLife
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MY MUSE RESURRECTED ME
My heart was bound
in chains feeling the
pains of losing you.
The attention given
by others didn't heal;
only served as a reminder.
Offers of endless pleasure
by the Nymphs on Erotic
shorelines were futile..
THEN!
OH THEN!
CLIO, the daughter
of Zeus, the
Muse of History; one
of the nine Muses,
came to me in a vision
and beautiful poetry;
with a message of hope..
I came alive as she rang
my doorbell. OMG! MY
Muse resurrected me back
to erotic adventures never
dreamed of. I bow daily...
in chains feeling the
pains of losing you.
The attention given
by others didn't heal;
only served as a reminder.
Offers of endless pleasure
by the Nymphs on Erotic
shorelines were futile..
THEN!
OH THEN!
CLIO, the daughter
of Zeus, the
Muse of History; one
of the nine Muses,
came to me in a vision
and beautiful poetry;
with a message of hope..
I came alive as she rang
my doorbell. OMG! MY
Muse resurrected me back
to erotic adventures never
dreamed of. I bow daily...
#fate
#mythology
#luck
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Life's Ride
How many hungering heartbeats
until your life has flown bye?
The ecstatic events are just
a flash in time.
And the painful days
compose an immortal rhyme.
Let me ask you.
Did you take life's ride?
Don't lie.
In defiance of gravity,
to fill your cavity,
and feel acutely alive.
In the heat of my mind,
memories swelter.
Begging for the heart's tender shelter.
Destiny's fragments fall from a starry sky
Learn to live without the stalking question why.
Your evolution wants a surprise.
until your life has flown bye?
The ecstatic events are just
a flash in time.
And the painful days
compose an immortal rhyme.
Let me ask you.
Did you take life's ride?
Don't lie.
In defiance of gravity,
to fill your cavity,
and feel acutely alive.
In the heat of my mind,
memories swelter.
Begging for the heart's tender shelter.
Destiny's fragments fall from a starry sky
Learn to live without the stalking question why.
Your evolution wants a surprise.
#fate
#TruthOfLife
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15 Comments
This Life
In spite of all the danger
Pray to the Heaven's above
Packed in life's container
What's the meaning of?
Applause the final curtain
Taking your final puff
Spectators serving sermons
All in the name of love
Pray to the Heaven's above
Packed in life's container
What's the meaning of?
Applause the final curtain
Taking your final puff
Spectators serving sermons
All in the name of love
#fate
#philosophical
#spiritual
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... Table for One - Rebirth and Redux
I went into the restaurant
Requested a booth for one
I'll be here for awhile I said
Flipped the owner a $20
He set me up with a great table
My afternoon began with this write
Even in good company
The best days are a float
Weaving in and out of people traffic
I need dialog and can be open
Yet writing verse is my voice
Somber and reflective at twilight
Quiet and ominous at dusk
Keep the chemicals away from me
I've danced and twisted fate
Piecing myself back together again
Going it alone ...
Requested a booth for one
I'll be here for awhile I said
Flipped the owner a $20
He set me up with a great table
My afternoon began with this write
Even in good company
The best days are a float
Weaving in and out of people traffic
I need dialog and can be open
Yet writing verse is my voice
Somber and reflective at twilight
Quiet and ominous at dusk
Keep the chemicals away from me
I've danced and twisted fate
Piecing myself back together again
Going it alone ...
#confessional
#fate
#karma
#loneliness
#WritingPoetry
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22 Comments
Madness
All it took was
a huge blunder
at the air-port
for devices to
finally explode
just one bleep
beam of light
all was gone
& those at the
place too the
fake agitator
plastic parrot
the hothead
with the frost
and fast teeth
and its blemish
oh the baloney
of the paradox
crack ballerina
earthborn entity
a servant to this
endless conflict
ballistic addict
passing in the
murky thick of
...
a huge blunder
at the air-port
for devices to
finally explode
just one bleep
beam of light
all was gone
& those at the
place too the
fake agitator
plastic parrot
the hothead
with the frost
and fast teeth
and its blemish
oh the baloney
of the paradox
crack ballerina
earthborn entity
a servant to this
endless conflict
ballistic addict
passing in the
murky thick of
...
#dark
#fate
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16 Comments
Crossbones
The ages haunt the bookworm brain
with letters in a torrent blast
no concentration might sustain
into a resurrected past.
No measure of nostalgia dust,
to which some potion we might add
to magically reverse the rust,
for glory once more to be had
among all sorts of ancient things
that once upon a time were grand
where now only ruination sings
to cover pride in heaping sand,
taming ambition's eager dare...
into extinction's stale air!
with letters in a torrent blast
no concentration might sustain
into a resurrected past.
No measure of nostalgia dust,
to which some potion we might add
to magically reverse the rust,
for glory once more to be had
among all sorts of ancient things
that once upon a time were grand
where now only ruination sings
to cover pride in heaping sand,
taming ambition's eager dare...
into extinction's stale air!
#universe
#fate
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6 Comments
Dead Man's Hand
Sparks into the dark illuminated by frozen shards
The death hand has been dealt and I'm counting the cards
Aces, clubs upon spades riding eights with backs to the door
Hades dealt the last card an ace instead of a five of diamond settling all scores
The minotaur is no longer lost within a maze of our mind
Ariadne gave us just enough thread to keep us all in line
Only we wont be needing no Hercules to a appear and release us
Four years of fucking Persephone's cold pussy and the dead was more then enough
I wrote the Voynich Manuscript while...
The death hand has been dealt and I'm counting the cards
Aces, clubs upon spades riding eights with backs to the door
Hades dealt the last card an ace instead of a five of diamond settling all scores
The minotaur is no longer lost within a maze of our mind
Ariadne gave us just enough thread to keep us all in line
Only we wont be needing no Hercules to a appear and release us
Four years of fucking Persephone's cold pussy and the dead was more then enough
I wrote the Voynich Manuscript while...
#dark
#fate
#historical
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