Poems About Fate Seeking Honest Critique
#fate
Poems about fate seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Tears in my eyes
The elders say that we have the ability to manifest, that which you can see and feel, if you can only believe in your faith. 🙏 THAT we all are connected in one way or another.. 🤨 For sure it's strange how we are connected by a force feeding us emotions, from far away in a destination that we've never been before in our lives. For I woke up this morning 😔 with tears in my own eyes not really knowing WHY... Yet I felt it necessary to write these unspoken words, ✍️ down to someone some where some place needs to hear, these words of encouragement and support...
#fate
#healing
#LifeChangingMoment
#PersonalGrowth
#StreamOfConsciousness
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My life is in your HANDS
From within the very depth of my own thoughts, 🤔 here I am as I am just a mortal man. 💪 Strong in my beliefs of my faith, 🙏 it's that reason I am sitting here watching the world, 🌍 as it changes into a eclipse of a beautiful dream. YET now that is only a illogical illustration of thoughts. 🤔 For the deepness of the mind and heart and soul, can only take so much before it BREAKS. 💔 For it surely goes to the deepness of the feelings and emotions, and the deepness of my thoughts and insight and imagination. For sure I am grateful and thankful and...
#faith
#fate
#rebirth
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
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It's not over when you lose
From within the inner vibes of my life, 🤔 I had to come to accept what my life, has and will become for with each reason. I had to fight back with MY OWN strength and courage as my.personal devil's.😈 Be standing in the darkness, as they hide behind a mask. THAT entered into the deepness of my life, as well as my body and mind. 😞 For sure I remember that day as if it just happen yesterday, 🤔 when my whole life changed right before my own eyes 👁️ 👁️ For I remember that moment when the pain became to hard to 🐻 and sleepless...
#aging
#death
#fate
#SelfReflection
#SelfWorth
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One-way ticket...
Why should I care for the new year?
Another cycle of the same celestial dance
spiraling through familiar constellations.
Same faces in the same places,
their conversations a recitation of a well-worn script.
Why should I care for the new year?
When the clock's hands circle back
to touch the same numbers they brushed a moment ago.
And the calendar's pages, thin and brittle
fall like leaves from the same tree.
Why should I care for the new year...
When the same hues paint the dawn
and...
Another cycle of the same celestial dance
spiraling through familiar constellations.
Same faces in the same places,
their conversations a recitation of a well-worn script.
Why should I care for the new year?
When the clock's hands circle back
to touch the same numbers they brushed a moment ago.
And the calendar's pages, thin and brittle
fall like leaves from the same tree.
Why should I care for the new year...
When the same hues paint the dawn
and...
#fate
#karma
#luck
#mirror
#NewYear
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Say Genius
Say genius
Not a person
But it passes through
When we’re inspired
Strive to be a polymath
Means to give birth
To what’s inside
Genius isn’t a person
But an idea can’t keep to myself
Have to share what I felt
In that moment when a lightbulb goes off
You figured it out but it’s fleeting
Genius goes from one to another
Catch that lightning
Before it’s gone
Soul so expansive
Struck by feelings
Some say there is genius in deity
Not a person
But it passes through
When we’re inspired
Strive to be a polymath
Means to give birth
To what’s inside
Genius isn’t a person
But an idea can’t keep to myself
Have to share what I felt
In that moment when a lightbulb goes off
You figured it out but it’s fleeting
Genius goes from one to another
Catch that lightning
Before it’s gone
Soul so expansive
Struck by feelings
Some say there is genius in deity
#fate
#inspirational
#motivational
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You will never know
It's me again the story teller of words ✍️ they say that we will never know, what is waiting for us that it could change the very outcome, of what is expected that we found it in another person, that happens in time. For sure we can talk about what we know that we want and need, 🤔 to help us navigate through the process, of the ups, Still and yet there will be downs. For sure we will try to create a vision of what we need and want, 🤨 but yet find ourselves involved in a entanglement.🤨 Trying to figure out how did we get here and now. 😞 YET there is...
#faith
#fate
#LookingForLove
#relationships
#TruthOfLife
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I'm not you and you are not me.
Sometimes we have to go through somethings, that will affect the very foundation of our lives and life. For sure let us be able to be honest with ourselves, for sure we don't have to prove anything, that we say or do to anyone but ourselves. For sure we will be judge, by what we believe in or say is the truth of my faith. Yet it is my alone my own opinions, for we each are entitled to have our own opinions. YET we be still judge by what other people's say or think. 🤔 But yet it's here and now I still stand firmly, on my decisions base upon my own dreams and life. For sure it's...
#faith
#fate
#philosophical
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
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Searchin for death
Death
I've been looking for you
I have choked life
Shook it by it's scrawny neck
Fucked the taste out of it's mouth
Made it scream
Making it want to die
Now I'm walking alone on the cinder trail
Come on
Show me what you got!
I've been looking for you
I have choked life
Shook it by it's scrawny neck
Fucked the taste out of it's mouth
Made it scream
Making it want to die
Now I'm walking alone on the cinder trail
Come on
Show me what you got!
#conflict
#dark
#death
#fate
#LifeStruggles
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... Table for One - Rebirth and Redux
I went into the restaurant
Requested a booth for one
I'll be here for awhile I said
Flipped the owner a $20
He set me up with a great table
My afternoon began with this write
Even in good company
The best days are a float
Weaving in and out of people traffic
I need dialog and can be open
Yet writing verse is my voice
Somber and reflective at twilight
Quiet and ominous at dusk
Keep the chemicals away from me
I've danced and twisted fate
Piecing myself back together again
Going it alone ...
Requested a booth for one
I'll be here for awhile I said
Flipped the owner a $20
He set me up with a great table
My afternoon began with this write
Even in good company
The best days are a float
Weaving in and out of people traffic
I need dialog and can be open
Yet writing verse is my voice
Somber and reflective at twilight
Quiet and ominous at dusk
Keep the chemicals away from me
I've danced and twisted fate
Piecing myself back together again
Going it alone ...
#confessional
#fate
#karma
#loneliness
#WritingPoetry
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22 Comments
The Journey
You slowly ooze
your sludgy head and foot
out of the hard yet fragile home
you carry on your back.
Eyes cautiously extend,
slimy feelers emerge and reach out
examining the air around:
all is still but the sun softly rising
so you start your long journey
across the walk in search of leafy greens.
Morning dew keeps you wet and content;
golden rays make your trail sparkle.
Thump, thump, the sidewalk shakes;
you feel the pounding getting closer.
A shadow overhead covers you in darkness,
and you crawl as...
your sludgy head and foot
out of the hard yet fragile home
you carry on your back.
Eyes cautiously extend,
slimy feelers emerge and reach out
examining the air around:
all is still but the sun softly rising
so you start your long journey
across the walk in search of leafy greens.
Morning dew keeps you wet and content;
golden rays make your trail sparkle.
Thump, thump, the sidewalk shakes;
you feel the pounding getting closer.
A shadow overhead covers you in darkness,
and you crawl as...
#fate
#fiction
#narrative #nature
#narrative #nature
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LIVING IS A LONG GAME
I can't change body
can't belittle nature
prophets of doom
can't cross rainbow bridge
nor go to underworld
to reach heaven:
water and mountains
I can't negotiate
with my burdens
burial no end
living is a long game
that goes beyond death
--R K Singh
can't belittle nature
prophets of doom
can't cross rainbow bridge
nor go to underworld
to reach heaven:
water and mountains
I can't negotiate
with my burdens
burial no end
living is a long game
that goes beyond death
--R K Singh
#aging
#death
#fate #responsibility
#fate #responsibility
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Over coming your fear
There will be a time ⌚ in each of our lives, 🙏 when we are confused about what is happening, in our lives 😭 THAT will have us all to the breaking point, not really knowing who we are in skin and flesh and blood. 🤔 For sure as we exchange our inner thoughts, and feelings yet it feels like we are going deeper than deep, into the deepness of the darkness. 😞 YET it is necessary to understand, that what you want and need, for thyself 🙏 could be found in what you read. 👁️👁️ FOR when was the last time⌚ you open that...
#faith
#fate
#StreamOfConsciousness
#TruthOfLife
#uplifting
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