Poems About Deception by Top Critiquers
#deception
Poems about deception by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
Yesterday 10:47am
Yesterday 10:47am
The Life Of A Rockstar
Love call for Rockstars:
Define
Confine
Enshrine
Then:
Dethrone
Disown
Bemoan
After ten years:
Exhume
Resume
Consume
Baby, you're gonna be ok.
Define
Confine
Enshrine
Then:
Dethrone
Disown
Bemoan
After ten years:
Exhume
Resume
Consume
Baby, you're gonna be ok.
#deception
#manipulation
#minimalist
#music
#PopCulture
57 reads
16 Comments
DamianDeadLove
Poem Published
24th Jun 2024 5:23am
24th Jun 2024 5:23am
Waiting For News
Driven by foggy elements tonight
Fundamental chaos feels so right
On the brink of perpetual rage
Been living in this virtual stone age
Love is dying in fields of death
Strung out on cosmic angel breath
Figure out where the line ends
Manipulating light with subtle bends
Selling promises to achieve faith
Visited by another shady wraith
About to turn off this tired engine
While the world continues to spin
Murder committed by random design
Stay tuned for the story on channel nine
Where...
Fundamental chaos feels so right
On the brink of perpetual rage
Been living in this virtual stone age
Love is dying in fields of death
Strung out on cosmic angel breath
Figure out where the line ends
Manipulating light with subtle bends
Selling promises to achieve faith
Visited by another shady wraith
About to turn off this tired engine
While the world continues to spin
Murder committed by random design
Stay tuned for the story on channel nine
Where...
#deception
145 reads
8 Comments
Her
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 10:26am
19th Jan 2025 10:26am
Edit Me? Edit You
Edit me? Edit you
with your incorrigible grammar
your misspelled lullabies
your untrue truths
as you make yourself look pretty
I've already seen who may be the real you
corrected and helped you
you and I don't need to discuss anything
creativity can be stolen or mimicked any day
creators are born
I will always sit back and watch you
warn my family
but I refuse to engage with you
sooner or later
it won’t matter to anyone what you do
that's how karma works
Perhaps you're a clever bot
the new-fangled...
with your incorrigible grammar
your misspelled lullabies
your untrue truths
as you make yourself look pretty
I've already seen who may be the real you
corrected and helped you
you and I don't need to discuss anything
creativity can be stolen or mimicked any day
creators are born
I will always sit back and watch you
warn my family
but I refuse to engage with you
sooner or later
it won’t matter to anyone what you do
that's how karma works
Perhaps you're a clever bot
the new-fangled...
#dark
#deception
#frustration
#lies
#LifeAsAWriter
182 reads
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
17th Sep 2024 3:12pm
17th Sep 2024 3:12pm
gulible
vicious invitation black is the way morbid spirits
they can see your intentions
already in line to rectify the wrongs
growing tired of being amis
letting go of my need
the Grigori watch carefully
i've intervened on their behalf
turn time's attention forward
be kind to my heart
suffering the red walls of denial
a maze I'm lost in
ultimately growing is the point
won't you grow a thousand poppies
so I can sleep my mind veiled
I'm frightened, a soul so cold is on the hunt
devastating the way my...
they can see your intentions
already in line to rectify the wrongs
growing tired of being amis
letting go of my need
the Grigori watch carefully
i've intervened on their behalf
turn time's attention forward
be kind to my heart
suffering the red walls of denial
a maze I'm lost in
ultimately growing is the point
won't you grow a thousand poppies
so I can sleep my mind veiled
I'm frightened, a soul so cold is on the hunt
devastating the way my...
#betrayal
#deception
83 reads
0 Comments
backdeckbenny
Poem Published
6th Nov 2024 7:23pm
6th Nov 2024 7:23pm
Everythings Fine
There are bigger things to worry about than politics or the death of democracy.
Worry about the death of kindness.
Worry about the death of compassion.
Worry about the death of decency.
Worry about the death of yourself.
Or
Don't worry at all.
Look up to the sky
Be amazed and cry.
Isn't that all we've ever wanted
To be amazed.
Worry about the death of kindness.
Worry about the death of compassion.
Worry about the death of decency.
Worry about the death of yourself.
Or
Don't worry at all.
Look up to the sky
Be amazed and cry.
Isn't that all we've ever wanted
To be amazed.
#corruption
#deception
#freedom
#homelessness
#ignorance
90 reads
1 Comment
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
14th Sep 2020 2:03pm
14th Sep 2020 2:03pm
Like Water for Chocolate*
In the movie, after a life of cruelty
Evil Mama Elena's ghost
struck out one last time
against Love after death
That's what evil does
when it's exposed;
it plays the victim
to garner sympathetic attention—
attempts to destroy Light
strikes below the belt
with inuendo on its way out
rather than admit
its own wrong doings
( or alternate accounts )
SPOILER ALERT:
Truth overcomes—
so forgive yourself first
for years of deception ...
Evil Mama Elena's ghost
struck out one last time
against Love after death
That's what evil does
when it's exposed;
it plays the victim
to garner sympathetic attention—
attempts to destroy Light
strikes below the belt
with inuendo on its way out
rather than admit
its own wrong doings
( or alternate accounts )
SPOILER ALERT:
Truth overcomes—
so forgive yourself first
for years of deception ...
#lies
#evil
#hypocrisy #deception
#hypocrisy #deception
801 reads
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
18th Sep 2024 8:07pm
18th Sep 2024 8:07pm
Littered in Shame but Not Sorry
We did that
It was messy but that's where the lust lay
When the guilt bit hard
You wanted to be friends
We all know that's bullshit
Crash and burn lullaby
Nobody survives that unscathed
Then finally we became nothing
I don't hate you
I don't feel nothing
I don't even want to grudge fuck ya
Remember the old days
Bending you over my work desk
On overtime no less
Getting paid for our sins
That was something
We are a zero sum babe
I don't know if you cheated on me
We were already cheating on...
It was messy but that's where the lust lay
When the guilt bit hard
You wanted to be friends
We all know that's bullshit
Crash and burn lullaby
Nobody survives that unscathed
Then finally we became nothing
I don't hate you
I don't feel nothing
I don't even want to grudge fuck ya
Remember the old days
Bending you over my work desk
On overtime no less
Getting paid for our sins
That was something
We are a zero sum babe
I don't know if you cheated on me
We were already cheating on...
#betrayal
#deception
#dirty
#lies
#lust
219 reads
22 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
28th Jan 2025 5:17am
28th Jan 2025 5:17am
This sounds fishy
It's me again the story teller of unspoken words ✍️ WHAT I would like to do is have a intelligent conversation of right and wrong. For sure how many of us who have known, someone who has been killed by the blue 🧱 of silence over the years. 😔 For isn't it kind of strange, that those who were pardon and released mysteriously come to an unexpected crime of death,🤔 from the January six of the chaos and drama, that became world news around the world. 🌍 For here we go again another person was killed, by the blue wall 🧱 of silence. YET we can't...
#corruption
#deception
#HumanRights
#murder
#violence
48 reads
0 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
15th Aug 2024 11:57pm
15th Aug 2024 11:57pm
Tinseltown (collab with Vision_of_insanity)
Plastic people, faux life
Celebrities shine,
Amongst the pain & strife
An illusion of a directors thoughts
Cesspool in Eden
Pleasing the studio boss
Artificial in everything that's seen
Pictures of beauty
Reality is a dream
Never think more then you know
A testament to your image
Look your best, before the show
Wading in a shallow pool
Drink it up like a fool.
Trees a plenty and lost inside.
A forest, crazies, come to hide.
Hollywood, shining bright.
The stars, flickering, through...
Celebrities shine,
Amongst the pain & strife
An illusion of a directors thoughts
Cesspool in Eden
Pleasing the studio boss
Artificial in everything that's seen
Pictures of beauty
Reality is a dream
Never think more then you know
A testament to your image
Look your best, before the show
Wading in a shallow pool
Drink it up like a fool.
Trees a plenty and lost inside.
A forest, crazies, come to hide.
Hollywood, shining bright.
The stars, flickering, through...
#deception
#lies
#PopCulture
#rhyming
#sadness
158 reads
5 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
12th Jul 2023 6:17am
12th Jul 2023 6:17am
DECEIVER, SEDUCER
He was her deceiver;
she was his believer,
past any retriever,
and became receiver
of seed, then conceiver
She became producer
of child by seducer,
her good name's traducer.
she was his believer,
past any retriever,
and became receiver
of seed, then conceiver
She became producer
of child by seducer,
her good name's traducer.
#sex
#rhyming
#pregnancy #deception
#pregnancy #deception
310 reads
2 Comments
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 9:42am
19th Jan 2025 9:42am
I AM WHO I AM!
I could be a 65 year old dude...
...or an 19 year old college student...
It's the Internet...be careful!
That lovely girl who needs help
paying her phone bill or rent -
she sends you a "not her" nude!
Get out your cash app!
You just got scammed!
Poor little you!
The Nigerian prince is
going to split his inheritance
some time next month, right?
So, you'll be ok! Whew! Just
text your mother's maiden name
and your childhood phone number!
If not...that lottery winner is just ...
...or an 19 year old college student...
It's the Internet...be careful!
That lovely girl who needs help
paying her phone bill or rent -
she sends you a "not her" nude!
Get out your cash app!
You just got scammed!
Poor little you!
The Nigerian prince is
going to split his inheritance
some time next month, right?
So, you'll be ok! Whew! Just
text your mother's maiden name
and your childhood phone number!
If not...that lottery winner is just ...
#deception
#evil
#horror
89 reads
3 Comments
I_IS_ME
Poem Published
12th Nov 2023 8:48pm
12th Nov 2023 8:48pm
Deceivers
Hit me with your worse
While I’m still going strong
Hit me with a love that’s a curse
When life just can’t go wrong
I’ll be there before you can text
Although my phone is never on
Telepathy is how I connect
These feelings are just that strong
And I, I will do, I will do
Everything to and for you
I will wrestle with death
Until he has nothing but good health
Drain you of ego and fill you with myself
Although I’m a thousand miles away, you’ll swear I never left
Destiny says it’s you for...
While I’m still going strong
Hit me with a love that’s a curse
When life just can’t go wrong
I’ll be there before you can text
Although my phone is never on
Telepathy is how I connect
These feelings are just that strong
And I, I will do, I will do
Everything to and for you
I will wrestle with death
Until he has nothing but good health
Drain you of ego and fill you with myself
Although I’m a thousand miles away, you’ll swear I never left
Destiny says it’s you for...
#love
#betrayal
#deception
584 reads
30 Comments
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