Poems About Dating by Top Critiquers
#dating
Poems about dating by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Haunting My Mind
Mmmmm
Ahhh
Misty-colored memories
Rise to the surface
Sexy saxophone offerings
You’re haunting
My mind again
Mmmm
Mmmm
Boardwalk cafe
Fingertips talk
Lips brush softly
Voices soft
Promises made
Dreams take flight
Sacred bonds
Two hearts unite
Mmmm
Mmmm
Waves roll in
Salt scents the air
She quietly sighs
As he caresses her hair
Windswept platform
Hollow sounds
Scattered leaves
Memories...
Ahhh
Misty-colored memories
Rise to the surface
Sexy saxophone offerings
You’re haunting
My mind again
Mmmm
Mmmm
Boardwalk cafe
Fingertips talk
Lips brush softly
Voices soft
Promises made
Dreams take flight
Sacred bonds
Two hearts unite
Mmmm
Mmmm
Waves roll in
Salt scents the air
She quietly sighs
As he caresses her hair
Windswept platform
Hollow sounds
Scattered leaves
Memories...
#dating
#heartbroken
#love
#lyrics
#marriage
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One Nervous Teenager
He would go to those dances
He could never get the nerve to ask a girl to dance
Like he would really know what to do when he got out on the floor
He had tried dancing alone in his room and had gotten so embarrassed that he just had to stop
He watched men & woman dancing on TV & movies
They made it look so easy
Women were so mysterious and full of shit
He wouldn't have a clue what to say to one if he ever got the chance
The dances went by and he went to almost all of them
He would find the darkest part of the gym and watch them with his back...
He could never get the nerve to ask a girl to dance
Like he would really know what to do when he got out on the floor
He had tried dancing alone in his room and had gotten so embarrassed that he just had to stop
He watched men & woman dancing on TV & movies
They made it look so easy
Women were so mysterious and full of shit
He wouldn't have a clue what to say to one if he ever got the chance
The dances went by and he went to almost all of them
He would find the darkest part of the gym and watch them with his back...
#dance
#dating
#fiction
#school
#ShortStory
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6 Comments
YOU FIRE MY END
You're so naughty
when out with me.
You fire my end
when down you bend
with legs upright
within my sight,
your minidress
showing bareness -
because you go
so commando
when on a date
to snare your mate,
tempt him inside
on homeward ride.
when out with me.
You fire my end
when down you bend
with legs upright
within my sight,
your minidress
showing bareness -
because you go
so commando
when on a date
to snare your mate,
tempt him inside
on homeward ride.
#erotic
#rhyming
#dating #temptation
#dating #temptation
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My Niece and Her Coffee Date
So so afraid of love
Fearful of feeling
What that would mean
What would be the expectation
He just wanted coffee with you
Was that so hard
Her Uncle asked her
She pondered
Like always smiled and said
The coffee was good
Her uncle then asked about him
She looked up with a twinkle
We'll see ....
Fearful of feeling
What that would mean
What would be the expectation
He just wanted coffee with you
Was that so hard
Her Uncle asked her
She pondered
Like always smiled and said
The coffee was good
Her uncle then asked about him
She looked up with a twinkle
We'll see ....
#coffee
#WritingPoetry
#philosophical
#dating
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
438 reads
28 Comments
What will it take
For sure what I'm saying might be, happening in someone's own personal life, For sometimes down the very roads of our lives, that we will shed some tears in the silent of the darkness of our lives. But yet it's not over when you cry out in silence, while you are trying desperately not to cry. But instead you chose to fight back, the deepness of the truth of the fears that will haunts, you mostly in the wee hours of the night. For always remember that what doesn't kill you, only makes you that much stronger than you think. 🤔 For sure it's gonna be hard just to forget, about that part...
#dating
#FallingInLove
#honesty
#LifeCycle
#StreamOfConsciousness
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I WISH YOU KNEW
#FallingInLove
#admiration
#dating #crush
#dating #crush
222 reads
4 Comments
His Voice
when i hear his
voice penetrate
my brain i get
wet instantly
it makes my
thighs quiver
my pussy drip
like putty in his
hands in a sec
his baritone is
my aphrodisiac
my Kryptonite
and soft spot
i wanna drink
it from his lips
breathe it like
melodic poetry
i save his apps
to have him close
when he's not here
if only i could bottle it
voice penetrate
my brain i get
wet instantly
it makes my
thighs quiver
my pussy drip
like putty in his
hands in a sec
his baritone is
my aphrodisiac
my Kryptonite
and soft spot
i wanna drink
it from his lips
breathe it like
melodic poetry
i save his apps
to have him close
when he's not here
if only i could bottle it
#dating
#lover
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26 Comments
Homo Authentithicus
Tragic indeed is the state of a man
that will not search for a good lady's touch.
Wisdom tells us to date outside the clan
and to never let her think that it's Dutch.
Such trouble is never too much to ask
and may result in a pleasant outing
as long as you wear sincerity's mask
and never speak of internet routing;
for unmanned are they that at keyboards poke,
or potentially, may be spasmodic...
and such a lover would be a bad joke.
Oh, there's a chance they might be rhapsodic,
but nevertheless, I'm inclined to...
that will not search for a good lady's touch.
Wisdom tells us to date outside the clan
and to never let her think that it's Dutch.
Such trouble is never too much to ask
and may result in a pleasant outing
as long as you wear sincerity's mask
and never speak of internet routing;
for unmanned are they that at keyboards poke,
or potentially, may be spasmodic...
and such a lover would be a bad joke.
Oh, there's a chance they might be rhapsodic,
but nevertheless, I'm inclined to...
#technology
#dating
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0 Comments
To be a dude for 3 days...
#dating
#men
#sex #women
#sex #women
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7 Comments
Glancing at me
Your look shatters all the mirrors
hanging on the walls
of my labyrinth...
mystical!
Your look makes me feel
like a bacteria under a microscope.
Your gaze does not
fall asleep
when the moon comes
and reflects the sun.
Your gaze brings danger
on black wings.
The danger of your gaze
keeps hovering
over the curtains, the sheets,
the lamps.
The danger of you in me.
In you floating on the skin,
in the hair, in the gums...
The danger of being followed ...
hanging on the walls
of my labyrinth...
mystical!
Your look makes me feel
like a bacteria under a microscope.
Your gaze does not
fall asleep
when the moon comes
and reflects the sun.
Your gaze brings danger
on black wings.
The danger of your gaze
keeps hovering
over the curtains, the sheets,
the lamps.
The danger of you in me.
In you floating on the skin,
in the hair, in the gums...
The danger of being followed ...
#mirror
#myself
#FallingInLove
#dating
#crush
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3 Comments
Reassembly Required
It's not that I don't have the ingredients
to be a proper man.
A curious-worthy man.
It's that so much is scattered.
How much time do you have...
At the dining table,
forking around with our
April thanksgiving.
Our third date;
No more napkins
covering our laps.
Seems more like the twentieth,
as our disclosures are shared,
consumed with of course's.
Yet one, covered, stainless domed lid;
Do you know I fell in love with you
during...
to be a proper man.
A curious-worthy man.
It's that so much is scattered.
How much time do you have...
At the dining table,
forking around with our
April thanksgiving.
Our third date;
No more napkins
covering our laps.
Seems more like the twentieth,
as our disclosures are shared,
consumed with of course's.
Yet one, covered, stainless domed lid;
Do you know I fell in love with you
during...
#honesty
#dating
539 reads
19 Comments
First Date
To have tried so many times
To satisfy both your heart and mind
And for every time to had been wrong
You feel as if I'm the same old song
Instead of feeling the pains of new found love
The kind displayed by someone sacrificing the great above
And all the promises that it has been made
I'm totally satisfied to die in your shade
The first signs of love is unselfish truth
Looking no farther than our hearts for the proof
Never daring to ever compare
For what's in the past let it remain there
But everyone...
To satisfy both your heart and mind
And for every time to had been wrong
You feel as if I'm the same old song
Instead of feeling the pains of new found love
The kind displayed by someone sacrificing the great above
And all the promises that it has been made
I'm totally satisfied to die in your shade
The first signs of love is unselfish truth
Looking no farther than our hearts for the proof
Never daring to ever compare
For what's in the past let it remain there
But everyone...
#FallingInLove
#dating
#crush #LookingForLove
#crush #LookingForLove
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2 Comments
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