Poems About Dating by Top Critiquers
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Poems about dating by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
I WISH YOU KNEW
#FallingInLove
#admiration
#dating #crush
#dating #crush
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The Test of Time
Are there really any
Tests for measuring
True love relationships
If so one of them is not
The test of time
That one has failed
For me
Time after time
Tests for measuring
True love relationships
If so one of them is not
The test of time
That one has failed
For me
Time after time
#relationships
#dating
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Butterflies
i am blessed to
have met you
My Lion King
you gorgeous
beautiful being
YOU make the
butterflies in my
belly go crazy
ever since our
very first date
You, yes you
make me feel
like a teenager
at freaking forty 8
have met you
My Lion King
you gorgeous
beautiful being
YOU make the
butterflies in my
belly go crazy
ever since our
very first date
You, yes you
make me feel
like a teenager
at freaking forty 8
#love
#dating
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My Niece and Her Coffee Date
So so afraid of love
Fearful of feeling
What that would mean
What would be the expectation
He just wanted coffee with you
Was that so hard
Her Uncle asked her
She pondered
Like always smiled and said
The coffee was good
Her uncle then asked about him
She looked up with a twinkle
We'll see ....
Fearful of feeling
What that would mean
What would be the expectation
He just wanted coffee with you
Was that so hard
Her Uncle asked her
She pondered
Like always smiled and said
The coffee was good
Her uncle then asked about him
She looked up with a twinkle
We'll see ....
#coffee
#WritingPoetry
#philosophical
#dating
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
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lengthening my vanity
and i
traveled
the distance
of
your kisses,
long, long
ago,
maybe extreme,
too extreme
possible,
such a
natural sweep,
come sit
or straddle
my rambling
stinger,
passionate
like rain,
draping
my lengthening
vanity.
traveled
the distance
of
your kisses,
long, long
ago,
maybe extreme,
too extreme
possible,
such a
natural sweep,
come sit
or straddle
my rambling
stinger,
passionate
like rain,
draping
my lengthening
vanity.
#happiness
#romantic
#dating
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YOU FIRE MY END
You're so naughty
when out with me.
You fire my end
when down you bend
with legs upright
within my sight,
your minidress
showing bareness -
because you go
so commando
when on a date
to snare your mate,
tempt him inside
on homeward ride.
when out with me.
You fire my end
when down you bend
with legs upright
within my sight,
your minidress
showing bareness -
because you go
so commando
when on a date
to snare your mate,
tempt him inside
on homeward ride.
#erotic
#rhyming
#dating #temptation
#dating #temptation
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First Date
To have tried so many times
To satisfy both your heart and mind
And for every time to had been wrong
You feel as if I'm the same old song
Instead of feeling the pains of new found love
The kind displayed by someone sacrificing the great above
And all the promises that it has been made
I'm totally satisfied to die in your shade
The first signs of love is unselfish truth
Looking no farther than our hearts for the proof
Never daring to ever compare
For what's in the past let it remain there
But everyone...
To satisfy both your heart and mind
And for every time to had been wrong
You feel as if I'm the same old song
Instead of feeling the pains of new found love
The kind displayed by someone sacrificing the great above
And all the promises that it has been made
I'm totally satisfied to die in your shade
The first signs of love is unselfish truth
Looking no farther than our hearts for the proof
Never daring to ever compare
For what's in the past let it remain there
But everyone...
#FallingInLove
#dating
#crush #LookingForLove
#crush #LookingForLove
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Homo Authentithicus
Tragic indeed is the state of a man
that will not search for a good lady's touch.
Wisdom tells us to date outside the clan
and to never let her think that it's Dutch.
Such trouble is never too much to ask
and may result in a pleasant outing
as long as you wear sincerity's mask
and never speak of internet routing;
for unmanned are they that at keyboards poke,
or potentially, may be spasmodic...
and such a lover would be a bad joke.
Oh, there's a chance they might be rhapsodic,
but nevertheless, I'm inclined to...
that will not search for a good lady's touch.
Wisdom tells us to date outside the clan
and to never let her think that it's Dutch.
Such trouble is never too much to ask
and may result in a pleasant outing
as long as you wear sincerity's mask
and never speak of internet routing;
for unmanned are they that at keyboards poke,
or potentially, may be spasmodic...
and such a lover would be a bad joke.
Oh, there's a chance they might be rhapsodic,
but nevertheless, I'm inclined to...
#technology
#dating
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Trolling the Stream
Trolling the stream, watch the yuppies go in circles.
Shallow rollers, biting the cast with the current, turning inward with the tide.
Exposed for catfish, bellies in the waves.
For bottom feeders, down the flow, over rocky terrain, unknown.
They also bite when it rains, or if there's assumed bait.
Skip a rock, watch the ripples, and they look to feed.
Hook, line, and sinker - caught.
Used for bigger fish in deep, still waters.
Shallow rollers, biting the cast with the current, turning inward with the tide.
Exposed for catfish, bellies in the waves.
For bottom feeders, down the flow, over rocky terrain, unknown.
They also bite when it rains, or if there's assumed bait.
Skip a rock, watch the ripples, and they look to feed.
Hook, line, and sinker - caught.
Used for bigger fish in deep, still waters.
#technology
#prose
#metaphor
#philosophical
#dating
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You Got It... It’s Yours
We’re now dancing in the mystic light
Cosmic infused soaring wings taking a Heavenly flight
Down below only hell and fiery blows
Twisted tongues speak ill will, why? Only God truly knows
Touch me gently, mm...oh yes…touch me right there
Caresses my skin so gently as wisps of air
Shh… tonight belongs to us, kisses, one soul now becomes a pair
Spiritually aligned as we inhale celestial scents
Hunger of its vibrancy, in its sensation, bodies spent
Love spells worshiping Kismet karma,...
Cosmic infused soaring wings taking a Heavenly flight
Down below only hell and fiery blows
Twisted tongues speak ill will, why? Only God truly knows
Touch me gently, mm...oh yes…touch me right there
Caresses my skin so gently as wisps of air
Shh… tonight belongs to us, kisses, one soul now becomes a pair
Spiritually aligned as we inhale celestial scents
Hunger of its vibrancy, in its sensation, bodies spent
Love spells worshiping Kismet karma,...
#lover
#dating
#passion
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If I were a tootsie pop
First break my protective shell
Taking me home and unwrapping me
Hard at first, but making you hard too
Softened by your kisses
Eventually yielding
You find the soft and chewy center
Proud of your accomplishment
It's so gratifying
This sweet taste to be savored
While I am taking you in.
So happy for you to be the stick
This Tootsie Pop
that you penetrate and lick.
Melts again and again
As you push in deeper
Until you fill me completely
Making me whole once more...
...
Taking me home and unwrapping me
Hard at first, but making you hard too
Softened by your kisses
Eventually yielding
You find the soft and chewy center
Proud of your accomplishment
It's so gratifying
This sweet taste to be savored
While I am taking you in.
So happy for you to be the stick
This Tootsie Pop
that you penetrate and lick.
Melts again and again
As you push in deeper
Until you fill me completely
Making me whole once more...
...
#romantic
#sex
#FallingInLove #dating
#FallingInLove #dating
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the art of forgetting
couldn't sleep.
chain smoking
Lucky Strikes.
reflecting on
the day.
sitting next to
you at the coffee
shop,
you, showing
pictures of:
sunsets,
sunrises,
storms.
me, sitting so
close to you.
all I could
notice was
the sent of
your hair,
the butterfly
tattoo on your
left shoulder.
God!
who are you
that you can
make me
forget
art.
chain smoking
Lucky Strikes.
reflecting on
the day.
sitting next to
you at the coffee
shop,
you, showing
pictures of:
sunsets,
sunrises,
storms.
me, sitting so
close to you.
all I could
notice was
the sent of
your hair,
the butterfly
tattoo on your
left shoulder.
God!
who are you
that you can
make me
forget
art.
#dating
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DU Poetry : Poems About Dating by Top Critiquers