Poems About Courage Seeking Honest Critique
#courage
Poems about courage seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
25th Nov 2024 4:53am
25th Nov 2024 4:53am
Do what you say do
There will come a time in each of our lives, when you have to make a decision that will affect the very foundation of our life and lives. 🤔 That will change us in ways that you could never really imagine. 🙏 As it comes in your life as a blessing in disguise, for the elders say that no one is sent to you by chance or Accident. For sure we have to learn to walk away, from someone in order to be with someone who has the same. ENERGY and determination to see it from a different, perspective of our own eyes. To open our eyes and reopen the deepness of the truth of the heart....
#courage
#disappointment
#heartbroken
#respect
#strength
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
24th Nov 2024 10:18pm
24th Nov 2024 10:18pm
DO YOU BELIEVE
Do you believe that there is nothing in this space and time, and world 🌍 that you can't escape from, for sure it's in your hands and mind to manifest. YOUR own thoughts and insight into your dreams. For let's take a moment to analyze, the very deepness of the truth that you try to hide, behind a mask as a disguise.
But what I know now, is that you look kind of confused about, what I just said for sure we as human creatures of habits. For sometimes we have to block out the negativity and replace it that stops us from having to learn to walk away from, the negativity in...
But what I know now, is that you look kind of confused about, what I just said for sure we as human creatures of habits. For sometimes we have to block out the negativity and replace it that stops us from having to learn to walk away from, the negativity in...
#courage
#fate
#hope
#strength
#TimeHeals
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ArnoMalan1
Poem Published
24th Nov 2024 11:14am
24th Nov 2024 11:14am
Dear Lord
Dear Lord
Your promise is my sword
to cut down all my pain
to set free every thought
that's driving me insane
Your grace for me is bigger
than what my mind can see
Your eyes on me forever
untill eternity
Dear Lord
I sometimes take for granted
how steadfast You can be
I hide away in silence
but You still compfort me
I know I don't deserve it
I'm lost in all I do
and though I feel not worthit ...
Your promise is my sword
to cut down all my pain
to set free every thought
that's driving me insane
Your grace for me is bigger
than what my mind can see
Your eyes on me forever
untill eternity
Dear Lord
I sometimes take for granted
how steadfast You can be
I hide away in silence
but You still compfort me
I know I don't deserve it
I'm lost in all I do
and though I feel not worthit ...
#courage
#forgiveness
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BITS
Poem Published
23rd Nov 2024 10:48pm
23rd Nov 2024 10:48pm
Golden Years
Nothing lasts forever,
If you walk away, don’t look back,
The World, it simply turns… Hang on.
Battle-axe smile, don’t forget to wink on impact.
Keep fire enough to burn beacons.
To resist waves of blackness and fear,
There are horizons we have yet to burn,
Dreams to sell, Come on, let’s enter our Golden years.
It’s time to shine, it’s time to explode
Into your Golden Years.
Don’t ever throw in the towel,
Your best days are still ahead,
Persevere, surmount, rebuild,
You are never done, you haven’t peaked yet. ...
If you walk away, don’t look back,
The World, it simply turns… Hang on.
Battle-axe smile, don’t forget to wink on impact.
Keep fire enough to burn beacons.
To resist waves of blackness and fear,
There are horizons we have yet to burn,
Dreams to sell, Come on, let’s enter our Golden years.
It’s time to shine, it’s time to explode
Into your Golden Years.
Don’t ever throw in the towel,
Your best days are still ahead,
Persevere, surmount, rebuild,
You are never done, you haven’t peaked yet. ...
#courage
#inspirational
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9 Comments
Hashman
Poem Published
20th Nov 2024 7:48pm
20th Nov 2024 7:48pm
GREATNESS
Goodness can lead to greatness.
But it can also lead to
"just good enough"
and if that's what you want
that's fine
but for greatness
you have to fight
you have to sacrifice
you have to believe
ya gotta want it
from start to finish
from today till tomorrow
from now till then
it's all possible
it's all positive
no negitive
make it happen.
Good Enough
is not good enough,
Be Great
It's all you.
But it can also lead to
"just good enough"
and if that's what you want
that's fine
but for greatness
you have to fight
you have to sacrifice
you have to believe
ya gotta want it
from start to finish
from today till tomorrow
from now till then
it's all possible
it's all positive
no negitive
make it happen.
Good Enough
is not good enough,
Be Great
It's all you.
#courage
#inspirational
#strength
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poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
18th Nov 2024 7:06pm
18th Nov 2024 7:06pm
Smoke In A Flower Field
write me a poem
that i know you care
for, to give away your word
i think you'll never dare
make me hear your whisper
sense a woman's flair
who recedes like the ebb
from a thirsty sand.
play me a tune
between your closed lips
a perfume aria
floating from tulips
the world is void of romance
haunted with metal needs
abstract on their thoughts
whistling thru' empty reeds
Come pluck a chord.
from my fragile heart
it's what i can afford
i' m poorly...
that i know you care
for, to give away your word
i think you'll never dare
make me hear your whisper
sense a woman's flair
who recedes like the ebb
from a thirsty sand.
play me a tune
between your closed lips
a perfume aria
floating from tulips
the world is void of romance
haunted with metal needs
abstract on their thoughts
whistling thru' empty reeds
Come pluck a chord.
from my fragile heart
it's what i can afford
i' m poorly...
#courage
#emotions
#hope
#inspirational
#strength
93 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
17th Nov 2024 1:41pm
17th Nov 2024 1:41pm
Have you ever wondered
Have you ever wondered WHY DO SOME PEOPLE 🤨
DO what they do and still be trying to call it love, when in fact it's not real love and support and understanding 😠 Why do some people's pretend to care about you, yet you see no commitment nor a real part of consistency and real communications skills. But yet they don't have the simple sense to understand, that it takes two to build a strong relationship. For we all are seeking a positive, level of substance that can't, be never denied. For sure it's human nature for them to pretend, then to speak with truth and trust and...
DO what they do and still be trying to call it love, when in fact it's not real love and support and understanding 😠 Why do some people's pretend to care about you, yet you see no commitment nor a real part of consistency and real communications skills. But yet they don't have the simple sense to understand, that it takes two to build a strong relationship. For we all are seeking a positive, level of substance that can't, be never denied. For sure it's human nature for them to pretend, then to speak with truth and trust and...
#courage
#disappointment
#heartbroken
#respect
#strength
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drone
Poem Published
17th Nov 2024 9:29am
17th Nov 2024 9:29am
Everyone is Human
Hold on
Your trying to tell me
That all people
Have a heart
That people are
Human
OH I agree
But your talking about
The physical
I'm talking about
The psychological
That means Everything
YER dumb shit
And you go to university
Unbelievable
To have Morals
Controlled Empathy
A little fucking Humanity
These things
Weave a Heart for you
Without these things
You Have No Heart
Your trying to tell me
That all people
Have a heart
That people are
Human
OH I agree
But your talking about
The physical
I'm talking about
The psychological
That means Everything
YER dumb shit
And you go to university
Unbelievable
To have Morals
Controlled Empathy
A little fucking Humanity
These things
Weave a Heart for you
Without these things
You Have No Heart
#confusion
#courage
#inspirational
#sadness
#strength
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drone
Poem Published
17th Nov 2024 9:11am
17th Nov 2024 9:11am
Gurdjieff
There are many ways
One can begin
To wake up
But there is a way
That goes straight
To the heart
The 4th way
NO mass protests
NO sticks and stones
The silent Rebellion Way
One can begin
To wake up
But there is a way
That goes straight
To the heart
The 4th way
NO mass protests
NO sticks and stones
The silent Rebellion Way
#courage
#morality
#motivational
#rebirth
#strength
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Academic
Poem Published
16th Nov 2024 8:07pm
16th Nov 2024 8:07pm
A UFO with strings attached? Could only happen in North America!
By Stanley Collymore
Such an incident would be absolutely
ironic and equally too, belly rolling
seen as hilarious if true! But quite
intelligently to sentient and erudite minds is a
state of affairs that's crucially not true! Since
for a solitary lucid moment, actually logically
consider, this purported scenario. The sheer
irony of these quite alleged Aliens with their
unquestionably, to specifically say the least,
very undoubtedly far superior technology to
what Homo sapiens...
Such an incident would be absolutely
ironic and equally too, belly rolling
seen as hilarious if true! But quite
intelligently to sentient and erudite minds is a
state of affairs that's crucially not true! Since
for a solitary lucid moment, actually logically
consider, this purported scenario. The sheer
irony of these quite alleged Aliens with their
unquestionably, to specifically say the least,
very undoubtedly far superior technology to
what Homo sapiens...
#courage
#gratitude
#inspirational
#motivational
#respect
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MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
15th Nov 2024 10:30pm
15th Nov 2024 10:30pm
Remember
I have been thinking for so long
To write for you and compose my song
So much my fear you got my tune wrong
But relieved you and I well get along
Not important from what I would start
As my words do flow from my very heart
Remember
I am your mum
And you are my daughter and sons
For a few years dating back
I kept to you saying “my life give me back”
Perplexed you looked and could not quite comprehend
That phrase of mine and what of message could send
Though you all proved each single time
You can read my...
To write for you and compose my song
So much my fear you got my tune wrong
But relieved you and I well get along
Not important from what I would start
As my words do flow from my very heart
Remember
I am your mum
And you are my daughter and sons
For a few years dating back
I kept to you saying “my life give me back”
Perplexed you looked and could not quite comprehend
That phrase of mine and what of message could send
Though you all proved each single time
You can read my...
#courage
#gratitude
#hope
#motivational
#strength
118 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
14th Nov 2024 11:49pm
14th Nov 2024 11:49pm
We have so much to lose
We will always have a choice to choose, what we need and want to have in our lives, with a relationship between the lines of uncertainties. For sure we will never know, how things will go down the road of trails and tribulations.
THROUGH this life with the challenges, that could make us or break us up and destroy, the deepness of the truth of the foundation. Built from steel and stones, and the deepness of the love that we shall share, for we have a history together as woman to man and man to woman. For sure let's ask thyself what was the point for do we really want and need, that kind...
THROUGH this life with the challenges, that could make us or break us up and destroy, the deepness of the truth of the foundation. Built from steel and stones, and the deepness of the love that we shall share, for we have a history together as woman to man and man to woman. For sure let's ask thyself what was the point for do we really want and need, that kind...
#anger
#courage
#disappointment
#frustration
#strength
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