Poems About Courage Seeking Honest Critique
#courage
Poems about courage seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Mstrmnd1923
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 10:04pm
6th Dec 2024 10:04pm
Baby Sloth
Baby
Without mother
Hoping for a rescue
And finding a new loving home
The sloth
Without mother
Hoping for a rescue
And finding a new loving home
The sloth
#courage
#hope
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2 Comments
Maya404
Maya545
Maya545
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 7:02am
6th Dec 2024 7:02am
Six feet under
Not a good start
Certainely not a good one.
Didn’t end well too.
But it’s fine
I loved the moments with you.
Even if they were not made with me,
She was here before me.
she’s pretty, smart and kind too
if one of dies, i hope it’s me
coz i dont wanna be here without you.
Maybe that’s my core.
Making my life about someone else.
Darling, still remember,
even if I’m six feet under,
I’d listen to you talk about your day.
Certainely not a good one.
Didn’t end well too.
But it’s fine
I loved the moments with you.
Even if they were not made with me,
She was here before me.
she’s pretty, smart and kind too
if one of dies, i hope it’s me
coz i dont wanna be here without you.
Maybe that’s my core.
Making my life about someone else.
Darling, still remember,
even if I’m six feet under,
I’d listen to you talk about your day.
#courage
#forgiveness
#respect #strength
#respect #strength
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MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
5th Dec 2024 2:46pm
5th Dec 2024 2:46pm
Mindful
Mindful
To each moment
Stay awake, be alive
Meet inner Self and touch its heart
When caught in mundane maze holy bonds lost
Pin the spirit to peace, breed thought
Mind your mind and lull strain
Expand and be
Mindful
To each moment
Stay awake, be alive
Meet inner Self and touch its heart
When caught in mundane maze holy bonds lost
Pin the spirit to peace, breed thought
Mind your mind and lull strain
Expand and be
Mindful
#courage
#forgiveness
#hope
#kindness
#WritingPoetry
80 reads
4 Comments
KendalM
Poem Published
4th Dec 2024 6:10pm
4th Dec 2024 6:10pm
Hurt
The weather was cold and brisk, streams of sun bursting through grey clouds, a contrast my soul could relate to.
A place I always go to when I need to feel close to you. I know Lord you are not there in the physical, but visiting this spot gives me comfort in my spirit when I feel like dying, when the broken is just too much. How do we even know what you look like really, as your statue stands there, arms stretched out, the steps to you cascading. Its harder to go up than down, yet as I was sitting there, praying to your concrete memorial, because it's something tangible when I feel so...
A place I always go to when I need to feel close to you. I know Lord you are not there in the physical, but visiting this spot gives me comfort in my spirit when I feel like dying, when the broken is just too much. How do we even know what you look like really, as your statue stands there, arms stretched out, the steps to you cascading. Its harder to go up than down, yet as I was sitting there, praying to your concrete memorial, because it's something tangible when I feel so...
#courage
#emotions
#hope #strength
#hope #strength
80 reads
3 Comments
VeronikaB
Poem Published
4th Dec 2024 6:01pm
4th Dec 2024 6:01pm
The Wild Courage of Despair
WHEN VULTURES OF HOPE
close in on my field of vision
in a man-made desert
parched by the gods
of money tech and power
inner wisdom beckons
the afore-bidden Fruit
of Knowledge to pick
out forlorn esperance
as an obsolete mirage
to forsake futile
hope and expectation
and dowse a hidden well
WHEN SNAKES OF DESPAIR
slither around my heels
sink me to my knees
tempt me to drink the divine
will to live my life
every drop of clarity
quenches the thirst
of my soul to summon ...
close in on my field of vision
in a man-made desert
parched by the gods
of money tech and power
inner wisdom beckons
the afore-bidden Fruit
of Knowledge to pick
out forlorn esperance
as an obsolete mirage
to forsake futile
hope and expectation
and dowse a hidden well
WHEN SNAKES OF DESPAIR
slither around my heels
sink me to my knees
tempt me to drink the divine
will to live my life
every drop of clarity
quenches the thirst
of my soul to summon ...
#courage
#desert
#despair
#emotions
#hope
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0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
4th Dec 2024 10:39am
4th Dec 2024 10:39am
The Painful Train Ride
On the LIRR to Penn Station
Hot
Thick
I can smell myself
The floor is covered with garbage
I see a girl on the platform when we stop at the next town
I wish
I wish I could lift myself from this seat and touch her
I don't want to break her arm though
Do you want to know me?
My pain would crush your rib cage
I could love you
I wish I could stop running
Hot
Thick
I can smell myself
The floor is covered with garbage
I see a girl on the platform when we stop at the next town
I wish
I wish I could lift myself from this seat and touch her
I don't want to break her arm though
Do you want to know me?
My pain would crush your rib cage
I could love you
I wish I could stop running
#anxiety
#courage
#fear
#love
#suffering
106 reads
6 Comments
cheesa
Poem Published
3rd Dec 2024 6:55am
3rd Dec 2024 6:55am
Somewhere out there
I know somewhere I mean something to someone
And in they're eyes
I mean more than anyone
Because somewhere there's a place out there for everyone
And someday I know we'll all meet that someone
Somewhere you mean something to someone
And in they're eyes
You're worth more than anyone
Someplace you'll find the glow back in you're face
Someday not today all these feelings will go away
Somehow maybe soon maybe now
Somewhere you will mean something to someone and in they're eyes
You'll mean more than anyone
Somewhere somewhere...
And in they're eyes
I mean more than anyone
Because somewhere there's a place out there for everyone
And someday I know we'll all meet that someone
Somewhere you mean something to someone
And in they're eyes
You're worth more than anyone
Someplace you'll find the glow back in you're face
Someday not today all these feelings will go away
Somehow maybe soon maybe now
Somewhere you will mean something to someone and in they're eyes
You'll mean more than anyone
Somewhere somewhere...
#courage
#motivational
#TimeHeals
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
29th Nov 2024 5:31am
29th Nov 2024 5:31am
Do you know your LIMITATIONS
Just when we thought it was over and done 🤨 life, has a way of entering into our lives with raw and uncut emotions, with the deepness of pure energy of positivity and perseverance. Within a solid attitude of determination of a double edge sword that cuts both ways deeper than deep.
🗡️ For sure through this life we all will go through a lot in some ways, that is the truth of somethings, that we all will never truly understand. THE how and why this is really, happening to us. But yet we have to learn more than what you think you know. For it is true everything has...
🗡️ For sure through this life we all will go through a lot in some ways, that is the truth of somethings, that we all will never truly understand. THE how and why this is really, happening to us. But yet we have to learn more than what you think you know. For it is true everything has...
#courage
#kindness
#love
#strength
#TimeHeals
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0 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
29th Nov 2024 00:47am
29th Nov 2024 00:47am
Finally My Dream
Once, I had a dream
That was not my own
I tried so very hard
To nurture the seeds that were sown
As with all dreams
I woke up
Realizing that was not my luck
That was not my drive
That was not at all that kept me alive
I took a breath so deep
That I could feel the ground
Through the concrete on the street
Dreams have come to me and slipped away
I refuse to let go
I command it to stay
If they were not for me
Let them believe I was in the dark
My eyes have adjusted
Yet they still see no...
That was not my own
I tried so very hard
To nurture the seeds that were sown
As with all dreams
I woke up
Realizing that was not my luck
That was not my drive
That was not at all that kept me alive
I took a breath so deep
That I could feel the ground
Through the concrete on the street
Dreams have come to me and slipped away
I refuse to let go
I command it to stay
If they were not for me
Let them believe I was in the dark
My eyes have adjusted
Yet they still see no...
#courage
#motivational
#strength
205 reads
22 Comments
Onyxceila
Poem Published
28th Nov 2024 2:50am
28th Nov 2024 2:50am
Veiled Love
The true depths of selfishness
I had never touched
Until I met you
Never feeling its cuts,
I could never have knew
Just how bladed it was
Victim after victim, a gluttonous lust
Seeming to serve you all that you want
While feeding on your primal thoughts
Stripping the essence from all that you love
Instilling the eternal instinct of one
caught in the grip of sadness
I was dragged into a fiery realm
my tears white with phosphorus
Burning holes through my skin as they fell
These iron chains
Forged...
I had never touched
Until I met you
Never feeling its cuts,
I could never have knew
Just how bladed it was
Victim after victim, a gluttonous lust
Seeming to serve you all that you want
While feeding on your primal thoughts
Stripping the essence from all that you love
Instilling the eternal instinct of one
caught in the grip of sadness
I was dragged into a fiery realm
my tears white with phosphorus
Burning holes through my skin as they fell
These iron chains
Forged...
#bittersweet
#courage
#heartbroken
#nightmares
#suffering
137 reads
0 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
26th Nov 2024 4:46pm
26th Nov 2024 4:46pm
Strength Beyond Strength
I pray that…
You discover your vigor and courage coming from within
That resilience and heart carry you in their eternal wings
That they give you the driving force in those darkest times
And light will shine and steer you pulling at the heartstrings
.
I pray that…
You find solace in knowing you are worthy of love and respect
That no matter how hard the punches have been you can still stand
Even when the pain has been much to bear something is there
And that the fighting spirit will be near giving you a guiding hand
.
I...
You discover your vigor and courage coming from within
That resilience and heart carry you in their eternal wings
That they give you the driving force in those darkest times
And light will shine and steer you pulling at the heartstrings
.
I pray that…
You find solace in knowing you are worthy of love and respect
That no matter how hard the punches have been you can still stand
Even when the pain has been much to bear something is there
And that the fighting spirit will be near giving you a guiding hand
.
I...
#courage
#SelfDiscovery
#strength
188 reads
8 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
25th Nov 2024 4:53am
25th Nov 2024 4:53am
Do what you say do
There will come a time in each of our lives, when you have to make a decision that will affect the very foundation of our life and lives. 🤔 That will change us in ways that you could never really imagine. 🙏 As it comes in your life as a blessing in disguise, for the elders say that no one is sent to you by chance or Accident. For sure we have to learn to walk away, from someone in order to be with someone who has the same. ENERGY and determination to see it from a different, perspective of our own eyes. To open our eyes and reopen the deepness of the truth of the heart....
#courage
#disappointment
#heartbroken
#respect
#strength
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