Poems About Courage Seeking Honest Critique
#courage
Poems about courage seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Her
Poem Published
25th Jan 2025 3:22pm
25th Jan 2025 3:22pm
The Rising Sun
The rising sun
Whispers of a slow and steady defeat
Shadows crept on my lonely street
But as the dawn begins to creep
A promise stirs beneath my feet
Mmmmm
Darkness fading as a new day awakes
(a new day awakes)
Hope finds the fear it breaks
In strength my heart is unchained
No more sorrow, no more pain
No more pain
Mmmmm
No more pain
Mmmmm
My nights were long and filled with doubt
How many echoes screamed, I lost count
Morning light has shown my pain a new route ...
Whispers of a slow and steady defeat
Shadows crept on my lonely street
But as the dawn begins to creep
A promise stirs beneath my feet
Mmmmm
Darkness fading as a new day awakes
(a new day awakes)
Hope finds the fear it breaks
In strength my heart is unchained
No more sorrow, no more pain
No more pain
Mmmmm
No more pain
Mmmmm
My nights were long and filled with doubt
How many echoes screamed, I lost count
Morning light has shown my pain a new route ...
#courage
#hope
#lyrics #TimeHeals
#lyrics #TimeHeals
94 reads
8 Comments
56ApacheLove
Poem Published
25th Jan 2025 1:37pm
25th Jan 2025 1:37pm
This Ain't No Bull
I had a dream once, I was in this building full of rooms and people, then all of the sudden I hear folk screaming and running, and as I turn around, here is this red bull charging through everyone. I take off running for my life when I realized he had his sights set on me only. I ran into one of the rooms trying to hide behind crates and stuff the rooms were filled with, but the bull knew exactly where I was, as he horned the goods tossing them about until he was in range of me by two or three feet, and as we locked eyes, all the sudden he turned into a black bull, and I took the pause as an...
#courage
#forgiveness
#love
#redemption
#strength
69 reads
2 Comments
poeticdelight
Hamid
Hamid
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2025 1:49pm
23rd Jan 2025 1:49pm
At The Crossroads Of Life
Waiting For a New Day
Still i am a constant faithful
To the river, forest and mountain
To the route i ever take,
Winding pathways, daily trodden
And where the herds hit the road
When dawn slowly begins to heave
The dew then glistens in the light
Life awakes and stands once again
How can the mundane then understand?
Too long sleeping in the rotten bed
And the bustle-assaulted poor citizen
Feel my words while glued in his den???
Come up now, make your days fine
Make hay while the...
Still i am a constant faithful
To the river, forest and mountain
To the route i ever take,
Winding pathways, daily trodden
And where the herds hit the road
When dawn slowly begins to heave
The dew then glistens in the light
Life awakes and stands once again
How can the mundane then understand?
Too long sleeping in the rotten bed
And the bustle-assaulted poor citizen
Feel my words while glued in his den???
Come up now, make your days fine
Make hay while the...
#courage
#hope
#inspirational
#motivational
#TimeHeals
76 reads
0 Comments
Pete_25
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2025 8:11am
22nd Jan 2025 8:11am
Walls
Take your
Judgement
Let it rest
My heart
On sleeve
Represents
Drink my flaws
Here right now
I'll break
These walls
Someway
Somehow
Judgement
Let it rest
My heart
On sleeve
Represents
Drink my flaws
Here right now
I'll break
These walls
Someway
Somehow
#courage
#emotions
#inspirational
#motivational
#strength
91 reads
12 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 1:05pm
19th Jan 2025 1:05pm
The spirit of the soul
As a writer of spoken words ✍️ we have the ability to manifest thoughts and insight, into the deepness of the imagination of those things that are involved, in creating a different kind of perspective on life and love. For sure we can unlock 🔓 your own thoughts that were once, hidden behind the curtains of your own thoughts, and insight and spiritually awaken your own deepest thoughts, that slowly becomes more than just words. But yet thoughts and feelings of emotionally tasty, bits of consciousness of the truth of a passion fruit 🍓 THAT leaves a taste of...
#courage
#fear
#heartbroken
#loneliness
#strength
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0 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
16th Jan 2025 12:37pm
16th Jan 2025 12:37pm
Insanity a la carte
Glimmering beneath a sheen,
where shadows dance in whispers, unseen.
Veiled chaos, finely painted dreams,
in the cracks madness gleams.
Fragile echoes in twilight's embrace,
haunting glimpses of a fractured face.
Silent screams, behind polished walls,
in the stillness a storm calls.
Beneath the surface, turmoil brews.
Masked by a gloss of tranquil hues.
In the heart, a restless fire,
burning with unspoken desire.
Mirrored reflections, distorted and clear,
a dance with demons ever near.
Eyes that...
where shadows dance in whispers, unseen.
Veiled chaos, finely painted dreams,
in the cracks madness gleams.
Fragile echoes in twilight's embrace,
haunting glimpses of a fractured face.
Silent screams, behind polished walls,
in the stillness a storm calls.
Beneath the surface, turmoil brews.
Masked by a gloss of tranquil hues.
In the heart, a restless fire,
burning with unspoken desire.
Mirrored reflections, distorted and clear,
a dance with demons ever near.
Eyes that...
#anxiety
#art
#courage
#insomnia
#mirror
69 reads
6 Comments
oskar
Poem Published
14th Jan 2025 10:13am
14th Jan 2025 10:13am
Sweden tody
Sweden today
What happened to Sweden throwing off her neutrality like it was an old overcoat and to make matters worse joining old NATO, that is a moribund military organization.
I remember Ingrid Bergman, a great actress when I see her, I wonder, why Ricky had
a nightclub in Casablanca
There were many famous Swedes, such as Alfred Nobel, and Ingmar Bergman, and not forget Birgitte Nielsen married to an actor named Rocky Stalone, a screen hero
I remember Malmo where I bought coffee cups
With flowers on, now this town is full of angry belligerent Islamists...
What happened to Sweden throwing off her neutrality like it was an old overcoat and to make matters worse joining old NATO, that is a moribund military organization.
I remember Ingrid Bergman, a great actress when I see her, I wonder, why Ricky had
a nightclub in Casablanca
There were many famous Swedes, such as Alfred Nobel, and Ingmar Bergman, and not forget Birgitte Nielsen married to an actor named Rocky Stalone, a screen hero
I remember Malmo where I bought coffee cups
With flowers on, now this town is full of angry belligerent Islamists...
#admiration
#courage
#emotions #forgiveness
#emotions #forgiveness
21 reads
1 Comment
Dan_ONeill
Dan ONeill
Dan ONeill
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 1:01pm
10th Jan 2025 1:01pm
Now
You have a memory to show you who you owe,
Imagination builds the road to follow,
Senses gist you what you think you know,
Drizzles of persuasion soak you to the bone,
But instinct is not yet overthrown.
‘Now’ is just a nearby port,
A lucky harbour where your time is caught,
But like a slackened vessel, soon unmoored,
Then cast and lost to drifting thoughts,
A murky fog from then it haunts.
Beyond the haze, now there to distract,
There’s still exists a muddle of paths,
Trampled down on your behalf.
Now, find the...
Imagination builds the road to follow,
Senses gist you what you think you know,
Drizzles of persuasion soak you to the bone,
But instinct is not yet overthrown.
‘Now’ is just a nearby port,
A lucky harbour where your time is caught,
But like a slackened vessel, soon unmoored,
Then cast and lost to drifting thoughts,
A murky fog from then it haunts.
Beyond the haze, now there to distract,
There’s still exists a muddle of paths,
Trampled down on your behalf.
Now, find the...
#courage
#gratitude
#hope
#inspirational
#redemption
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0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
9th Jan 2025 10:19pm
9th Jan 2025 10:19pm
The gathering of spirits
It is here and now that we gather in this space and time in front of the tree of life, as we speak and exchange thoughts and insight, and spiritual subconsciousness of an awakening, of our lives together as one entity still standing and in the process of peace and tranquility and harmony. For it's true that we as ENTITY'S, that we have been gifted spiritually to be able to be able to bless and to guide you upon this Earthly journey and travel and walk through your lives 🙏 As we shine the heavenly Halo's upon your 🗣️ heads and spiritual shoulders, placing our hands as an...
#courage
#emotional
#StreamOfConsciousness
#strength
#uplifting
92 reads
0 Comments
ArnoMalan1
Poem Published
9th Jan 2025 5:03pm
9th Jan 2025 5:03pm
Worth so much more
I'm worth so much more
I've seen the worst inside
I'm worth so much more
I've beaten myself with pride
There's no turning back
no time to sway off track
I know what's hidden in my core
these lies won't faze me anymore
I'm worth so much more
That face who can't discover
I'll stump that pride to the floor
cause my time for it is over
YEAH I'm worth so much more
this proirity for all to see
I'm worth so much more
the only option is to look at me
There's no turning back
No no no space...
I've seen the worst inside
I'm worth so much more
I've beaten myself with pride
There's no turning back
no time to sway off track
I know what's hidden in my core
these lies won't faze me anymore
I'm worth so much more
That face who can't discover
I'll stump that pride to the floor
cause my time for it is over
YEAH I'm worth so much more
this proirity for all to see
I'm worth so much more
the only option is to look at me
There's no turning back
No no no space...
#courage
#respect
#strength
61 reads
0 Comments
Listentoact
Poem Published
9th Jan 2025 8:02am
9th Jan 2025 8:02am
Unlike words
Unlike words actions tend to stand in stature like the presence you give Is the statue to live by and be a monument of your self to pose for the test of time,
It is not a crime to listen to yourself, this is not a recording being played back of yourself it's a conversation, you have to be able to talk to yourself,
enough with distraction you have to be silent so you can hear questions,
This a one and 2 percussion what you speak is what you hear you have to give yourself attention,
It is for you to be in purpose for yourself
what you bleed for...
It is not a crime to listen to yourself, this is not a recording being played back of yourself it's a conversation, you have to be able to talk to yourself,
enough with distraction you have to be silent so you can hear questions,
This a one and 2 percussion what you speak is what you hear you have to give yourself attention,
It is for you to be in purpose for yourself
what you bleed for...
#courage
#gratitude
#kindness #redemption
#kindness #redemption
69 reads
1 Comment
Sappho
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 2:16pm
8th Jan 2025 2:16pm
Phoenix Rising
Every morning I hear your voice
Mesmerising and enchanting
A testimony to your determination
Confident and expectant
When the sun is higher
Your song sounds sad
You switch the key
From major to minor
You have to they say
You cannot they say
You must not they say
Demands eat you up
You pile up all your projects
Light them and allow the flames
To consume you and your ideas
Rebirth and death begin anew
But you can break this circle
Don't burn your work but all obstacles ,
Rise from...
Mesmerising and enchanting
A testimony to your determination
Confident and expectant
When the sun is higher
Your song sounds sad
You switch the key
From major to minor
You have to they say
You cannot they say
You must not they say
Demands eat you up
You pile up all your projects
Light them and allow the flames
To consume you and your ideas
Rebirth and death begin anew
But you can break this circle
Don't burn your work but all obstacles ,
Rise from...
#courage
#inspirational
#strength
102 reads
6 Comments
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