Poems About Courage Seeking Honest Critique
#courage
Poems about courage seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Juicy Fighter
what are you waiting for?
Come on, go fight...
if life only gives you lemons
squeeze them into other people's eyes...
Come on, go fight...
if life only gives you lemons
squeeze them into other people's eyes...
#courage
#LifeStruggles
#SelfDiscovery
#rebellion
#wisdom
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Ever-changing
Strength
You are enough you always were , and always will be, you were just a heart block trying to contort yourself into a square hole . giving the wrong people far too much ammo , and then acting surprised when they shot you square in the chest. Living truly becomes worth it when you stop trying to fit where you don't belong .I am so proud of you .Look how far you have come my dear , color now dances across your cheeks , life flows through your veins. You are so healthy now my love . That scared 90 pound ghost is no longer you , with bleeding veins , aching bones and empty eyes ....
You are enough you always were , and always will be, you were just a heart block trying to contort yourself into a square hole . giving the wrong people far too much ammo , and then acting surprised when they shot you square in the chest. Living truly becomes worth it when you stop trying to fit where you don't belong .I am so proud of you .Look how far you have come my dear , color now dances across your cheeks , life flows through your veins. You are so healthy now my love . That scared 90 pound ghost is no longer you , with bleeding veins , aching bones and empty eyes ....
#strength
#hope
#courage
#gratitude
#redemption
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Verity
Twas a wear'in O the green and gold
upon Saint Patty's Day
that broke me old thought process mold
on nature and fair play
for when an ancient truth be told,
as then as well as now,
ya blow a breath both sweet and bold
as manners will allow.
Cuz after that it's off your back,
that duty to the truth,
and you can get your life on track
to never be uncouth...
since couth becomes its own reward,
(and ladies dig it too),
which even paupers can afford...
when they're not sniffing glue!
upon Saint Patty's Day
that broke me old thought process mold
on nature and fair play
for when an ancient truth be told,
as then as well as now,
ya blow a breath both sweet and bold
as manners will allow.
Cuz after that it's off your back,
that duty to the truth,
and you can get your life on track
to never be uncouth...
since couth becomes its own reward,
(and ladies dig it too),
which even paupers can afford...
when they're not sniffing glue!
#happiness
#hope
#courage #redemption
#courage #redemption
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6 Comments
Anabasis
No victory is victory
without some type of loss;
a cost too often some won't see,
like a greedy boss.
He knows the bucks that he must spend
and those that must stop here,
but all the rest will be his friend
much more than any peer.
And so in effort he must win
come hell or water high,
where freedom lets his greed begin,
and warriors to die.
And that's why payoff needs to be
where only colleagues tread
into a future, equally,
so no one winds up dead.
without some type of loss;
a cost too often some won't see,
like a greedy boss.
He knows the bucks that he must spend
and those that must stop here,
but all the rest will be his friend
much more than any peer.
And so in effort he must win
come hell or water high,
where freedom lets his greed begin,
and warriors to die.
And that's why payoff needs to be
where only colleagues tread
into a future, equally,
so no one winds up dead.
#courage
#friendship
#success
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frankie is a heartbreaker; respectfully of course
Frankie loves rainbows, glitter, sunshine, and flowers.
Frankie cries and feels immense grief.
Frankie embraces her anger for the answers it gives.
Frankie leans into the doom spiral to better dissect it.
Frankie boldly walks in her truth.
Franke lives, where Liv functioned.
Frankie flies free in the face of fear.
Frankie is the one true Supreme, matched only by the G.O.A.T.
allow me to introduce myself,
i am Frankie.
Frankie cries and feels immense grief.
Frankie embraces her anger for the answers it gives.
Frankie leans into the doom spiral to better dissect it.
Frankie boldly walks in her truth.
Franke lives, where Liv functioned.
Frankie flies free in the face of fear.
Frankie is the one true Supreme, matched only by the G.O.A.T.
allow me to introduce myself,
i am Frankie.
#happiness
#courage
#motivational
#inspirational
#uplifting
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5 Comments
Seasons Of The Heart
Waste no time gaping, staring into empty dark void, crying over your lot.
Has any bird tired on seeking warmth southward heading, has any whale lost compass seeking direction when and where he can spawn. And while you seek a turn or a path to start from your long journey, just keep faith in the bird you grasp in hand, and know how to spend it the better way..before it flies away from your hands..
Waste no effort, and come read White Whale and captain Ahab resistance, and monomaniacal desire to catch the ocean beast, while , or far from the madding crowd.to be a loser...
Has any bird tired on seeking warmth southward heading, has any whale lost compass seeking direction when and where he can spawn. And while you seek a turn or a path to start from your long journey, just keep faith in the bird you grasp in hand, and know how to spend it the better way..before it flies away from your hands..
Waste no effort, and come read White Whale and captain Ahab resistance, and monomaniacal desire to catch the ocean beast, while , or far from the madding crowd.to be a loser...
#strength
#courage
#inspirational
#TimeHeals
#emotions
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Flowers Ever and Forever
Sadly, most poets are depressed
Self destroying, the hopes regressed
Spending the rest of sacred lives
In Hells, their own-selves created
Born in perfect shape for a reason
heaven's pure spirit to you inspired
Earth, its air, its fruits, its water
Just enough to be satisfied
This dismal atmosphere that widely reigns
Surely will it bring much more acid rains
Instead of boon and good prospects
Woes will multiply, more than worms
Dear poet,...
Self destroying, the hopes regressed
Spending the rest of sacred lives
In Hells, their own-selves created
Born in perfect shape for a reason
heaven's pure spirit to you inspired
Earth, its air, its fruits, its water
Just enough to be satisfied
This dismal atmosphere that widely reigns
Surely will it bring much more acid rains
Instead of boon and good prospects
Woes will multiply, more than worms
Dear poet,...
#happiness
#courage
#inspirational
#respect
#emotions
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This sham, self-serving and unending cry of anti-Semitism should be firmly and contemptibly ignored!
By Stanley Collymore
What right did the UK and USA
actually have to distinctively
and literally give someone
else's land quite obviously freely away
to others, who crucially, basically had
no right what ever, to be really there;
and who evidently, if truth be simply
and honestly clearly told neither the
United States nor essentially Britain
effectively, naturally wanted any of
this lot inside their own, respective
lands. And this really 80 years ago! ...
What right did the UK and USA
actually have to distinctively
and literally give someone
else's land quite obviously freely away
to others, who crucially, basically had
no right what ever, to be really there;
and who evidently, if truth be simply
and honestly clearly told neither the
United States nor essentially Britain
effectively, naturally wanted any of
this lot inside their own, respective
lands. And this really 80 years ago! ...
#courage
#motivational
#inspirational
#admiration
#respect
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From the Green Lands
from the green lands
in the undergrowth of the green pines
when the morning sun effusively shines
where shadows and lights play turns
shepherds have left beaten pathways
beneath the birds from varied corners
they twitter they shriek they warble
from their low and high pitched voices
a sweet a symphony heavenly created
and out of the thick trees that sway
when the breathing wind starts to sigh
stretch the hills with emerald greens
and curved stones to keep the rains clean
...
in the undergrowth of the green pines
when the morning sun effusively shines
where shadows and lights play turns
shepherds have left beaten pathways
beneath the birds from varied corners
they twitter they shriek they warble
from their low and high pitched voices
a sweet a symphony heavenly created
and out of the thick trees that sway
when the breathing wind starts to sigh
stretch the hills with emerald greens
and curved stones to keep the rains clean
...
#happiness
#kindness
#courage
#redemption
#emotions
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Friendship
If you need to talk
I'll always be there for you
Your special to me
I'll always be there for you
Your special to me
#courage
#friendship
#uplifting
#support
#haiku
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6 Comments
BLACK MAN
Black man...
Black canvas posted on curbsides...
Cope as the murders rise...
Super oppressed we neva did nothing to em...
Why do they hate, they cold, we built everything...
They took our history and our souls, we felt everything...
From the african pits of gold, they loot everything...
We just asking for what they stole...
From the mary bethunes...
To the huey p newtons, imma black panther...
Black anthems, we marched till our shoes had holes in em...
Old figures spoke to the news, we got criricized...
Loathe and pray, we were so...
Black canvas posted on curbsides...
Cope as the murders rise...
Super oppressed we neva did nothing to em...
Why do they hate, they cold, we built everything...
They took our history and our souls, we felt everything...
From the african pits of gold, they loot everything...
We just asking for what they stole...
From the mary bethunes...
To the huey p newtons, imma black panther...
Black anthems, we marched till our shoes had holes in em...
Old figures spoke to the news, we got criricized...
Loathe and pray, we were so...
#strength
#courage
#motivational
#redemption
#respect
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3 Comments
Poeting tragedy
I wish before you could judge
You knew my pain.
That the way I am
It wasn't really my choice
It's how I'm forced to react to the world.
I'm strange.
and that's okay
If you might not understand me
But I wish you knew my pain before you could judge me.
I'm depressed,
I'm anxious
And sometimes I do think my life would be better if I'm dead.
I carry pain
I carry hurt
And carry anger
It's not who I wanted to be,
But that's how my crucible of life made me be.
I wish you knew the weight I'm...
You knew my pain.
That the way I am
It wasn't really my choice
It's how I'm forced to react to the world.
I'm strange.
and that's okay
If you might not understand me
But I wish you knew my pain before you could judge me.
I'm depressed,
I'm anxious
And sometimes I do think my life would be better if I'm dead.
I carry pain
I carry hurt
And carry anger
It's not who I wanted to be,
But that's how my crucible of life made me be.
I wish you knew the weight I'm...
#depression
#courage
#confessional #SelfReflection
#confessional #SelfReflection
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