Breakup by Top Critiquers Poems
#breakup
breakup by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
7th Feb 2025 10:54am
7th Feb 2025 10:54am
The pain that is love
Love is all around us
Like a serial killer
At least the killer kills you
Love just bleeds you slow
A slow, painful torture
You'll wish for death
Like a serial killer
At least the killer kills you
Love just bleeds you slow
A slow, painful torture
You'll wish for death
#breakup
#love
#minimalist #philosophical
#minimalist #philosophical
219 reads
24 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
12th Oct 2018 3:17pm
12th Oct 2018 3:17pm
nicotine
the death of polluted
phases of the moon
saw you weep
I wore a nicotine halo
stained my pale lips blue
while you watched on fooled
by my midnight sun
I captured your tears
inside a whiskey bottle
got drunk off the pain
peeing in an alley at dawn
it smelled of regret
summer saw an end
of smiles in your skies
where my love light shone
in red neon
disaster was spelled
a strobe light of warning blared
still, you...
phases of the moon
saw you weep
I wore a nicotine halo
stained my pale lips blue
while you watched on fooled
by my midnight sun
I captured your tears
inside a whiskey bottle
got drunk off the pain
peeing in an alley at dawn
it smelled of regret
summer saw an end
of smiles in your skies
where my love light shone
in red neon
disaster was spelled
a strobe light of warning blared
still, you...
#love
#breakup
719 reads
22 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
23rd Mar 2025 3:17am
23rd Mar 2025 3:17am
I’ll meet you there
my tears burn
your mangled
thumb as you
gently cup
my cheeck this
last time
last
time
our foreheads pressed,
eyes closed
whispering
I’m sorry
like a mantra from
both mouths
my hands are fists
in your shirt
deformed to the
taste of holding on
to something
we let die
a few times back
and I’m sorry
this time
because I want to
fold in your arms
like a...
your mangled
thumb as you
gently cup
my cheeck this
last time
last
time
our foreheads pressed,
eyes closed
whispering
I’m sorry
like a mantra from
both mouths
my hands are fists
in your shirt
deformed to the
taste of holding on
to something
we let die
a few times back
and I’m sorry
this time
because I want to
fold in your arms
like a...
#breakup
#love
#obsession
#passion
#sadness
289 reads
15 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
19th Jun 2024 7:59pm
19th Jun 2024 7:59pm
THINGS WE CAN'T CONTROL
They say that in our lives we as man's and woman's will be face, with many of those obstacles, that we can't really control in our lives. But yet there are somethings we can control, 🤔 one is our own emotions and our own true personal, thoughts of what we want and need in our lives🪬 For let's take a moment to analyze, our own trials and tribulation, that has altered the decisions of what we have done.🤔 For sure there was things and people's that we wish, hadn't come into our lives for it was at that time in our lowest point in our lives 😔 We decided really just...
#betrayal
#breakup
#deception
#disappointment
#heartbroken
285 reads
0 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
14th Nov 2023 9:08pm
14th Nov 2023 9:08pm
The Long and Cold
I had to talk a man down away from the edge
The precipice below is dark and dangerous
I had to take some harmful things away
Now the descent feels every bit as lonely
The long and cold night send shivers up the spine
All the unknowns play a daring game of chess
Calculations can’t be made until the day breaks
And even then, the risks seem impossible to take
But love sometimes makes the mind go numb and blind
How far can one tread the path without sound logic?
Will emotions cloud the ability to make clear decisions?
Will they...
The precipice below is dark and dangerous
I had to take some harmful things away
Now the descent feels every bit as lonely
The long and cold night send shivers up the spine
All the unknowns play a daring game of chess
Calculations can’t be made until the day breaks
And even then, the risks seem impossible to take
But love sometimes makes the mind go numb and blind
How far can one tread the path without sound logic?
Will emotions cloud the ability to make clear decisions?
Will they...
#heartbroken
#breakup
228 reads
3 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
Yesterday 3:41pm
Yesterday 3:41pm
Frontlines
I was enlisted in a battle
I should have never fought
This war was created by you
Over silly insecurities and for what
I told you to bring the pain
Bring the tears
Bring the joys
Bring all the fears
You added to this list I must fight
You brought anger into this plight
I was on the front lines
Doing what I needed to do
Throwing every arsenal, I have
Just to get through to you
If I had already lost this war
Why even walk across my line
If there is someone else out there
Willing to...
I should have never fought
This war was created by you
Over silly insecurities and for what
I told you to bring the pain
Bring the tears
Bring the joys
Bring all the fears
You added to this list I must fight
You brought anger into this plight
I was on the front lines
Doing what I needed to do
Throwing every arsenal, I have
Just to get through to you
If I had already lost this war
Why even walk across my line
If there is someone else out there
Willing to...
#breakup
#conflict
#sacrifice
40 reads
5 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
6th Mar 2023 8:36pm
6th Mar 2023 8:36pm
Tears Tears Dystopia
Rip your tampon out
Blood smear
Ashen swollen face
You left me
Tears tears dystopia
Blood smear
Ashen swollen face
You left me
Tears tears dystopia
#dark
#breakup
#violence #dystopian
#violence #dystopian
450 reads
33 Comments
WillowsWhimsies
Poem Published
22nd May 2024 4:11pm
22nd May 2024 4:11pm
shattered
I'm looking back
things you said
& what you didn't
realizing
how much more powerful
was your silence
I don't give compliments
but you deserve them
did I
really
they felt so beautiful
caressing my fragility
it was the juxtaposition
that threw me
to be so loved
& so abandoned
shoved into a glass box
dark with self-doubt
clouded with anxiety
while you sat
just beyond reach
swirling the ice in your tumbler
watching me
silently
...
things you said
& what you didn't
realizing
how much more powerful
was your silence
I don't give compliments
but you deserve them
did I
really
they felt so beautiful
caressing my fragility
it was the juxtaposition
that threw me
to be so loved
& so abandoned
shoved into a glass box
dark with self-doubt
clouded with anxiety
while you sat
just beyond reach
swirling the ice in your tumbler
watching me
silently
...
#breakup
#healing
#MovingOn
302 reads
10 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
29th Dec 2021 7:19am
29th Dec 2021 7:19am
HE NEVER KNEW (INSPIRED BY NIZANA'S POEM)
He never knew
the 'I love you'
I may have said
to him in bed
meant 'Stay with me,
please' inwardly.
All he just heard
was thought, 'I scored!'
He now sleeps round
with others found
who cross his path
and raise his laugh.
the 'I love you'
I may have said
to him in bed
meant 'Stay with me,
please' inwardly.
All he just heard
was thought, 'I scored!'
He now sleeps round
with others found
who cross his path
and raise his laugh.
#teens
#relationships
#breakup
#sex
#rhyming
478 reads
4 Comments
Duende
Poem Published
16th Dec 2016 6:38pm
16th Dec 2016 6:38pm
Your Hands
your hands i miss
them and kiss
them in my mind
your skin
i can taste it
if i close my eyes
your eyes that
look i was hooked
when i saw you
your lips
God your lips
damn i need them
pressed against
mine even
if it’s just
one last time
to be wrapped in
your warmth your
arms around me
to feel you
inside
me
to
be
yours
down on all fours
slave to your force
safe and secure
small...
them and kiss
them in my mind
your skin
i can taste it
if i close my eyes
your eyes that
look i was hooked
when i saw you
your lips
God your lips
damn i need them
pressed against
mine even
if it’s just
one last time
to be wrapped in
your warmth your
arms around me
to feel you
inside
me
to
be
yours
down on all fours
slave to your force
safe and secure
small...
#breakup
#love
1230 reads
35 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
29th Dec 2023 11:23am
29th Dec 2023 11:23am
Heavy Cross
was it you
or was it the wind
that turned off
the flame of desire?
who's the one that
by distraction
lost you
was lost from you
never came back
to ask for
forgiveness
I don't even ask you
that much
I just want
half-open mouth
waiting
for forgiveness
for none
of my sins
the hand begging
a solution
that cools me down
the stigmata
You are a crown of thorns
and I don't know where
I left my
sacred Heart...
or was it the wind
that turned off
the flame of desire?
who's the one that
by distraction
lost you
was lost from you
never came back
to ask for
forgiveness
I don't even ask you
that much
I just want
half-open mouth
waiting
for forgiveness
for none
of my sins
the hand begging
a solution
that cools me down
the stigmata
You are a crown of thorns
and I don't know where
I left my
sacred Heart...
#regret
#breakup
#conflict
#mirror
#confessional
209 reads
4 Comments
InDreamz
Poem Published
10th Oct 2024 1:47pm
10th Oct 2024 1:47pm
Crumbling to dust
I feel so empty
without you
like a carcass floating
in memories
tossed n flung
to an island desolate
pecked at by vultures of agony
bit by bit...piece by piece
without you
like a carcass floating
in memories
tossed n flung
to an island desolate
pecked at by vultures of agony
bit by bit...piece by piece
#breakup
#despair
#heartbroken #love
#heartbroken #love
251 reads
23 Comments
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