Breakup by Top Critiquers Poems
#breakup
breakup by top critiquers poems. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
31st Dec 2024 11:05am
31st Dec 2024 11:05am
You always will be
You know I can't stop thinking about you
For the last three nights I've been dreaming about you
It's always the same dream, you don't want me
This morning I woke up and I swore it was real
I lay there for a while and thought about all the things that I had to do in the dream
How fucked up it was and it took me that long to figure out it was a dream
I thought I had it beat
I thought I had you out of my head for good
I must have slid back because now you're all I think about
I was so proud of myself
I was actually healing
But now I'm back...
For the last three nights I've been dreaming about you
It's always the same dream, you don't want me
This morning I woke up and I swore it was real
I lay there for a while and thought about all the things that I had to do in the dream
How fucked up it was and it took me that long to figure out it was a dream
I thought I had it beat
I thought I had you out of my head for good
I must have slid back because now you're all I think about
I was so proud of myself
I was actually healing
But now I'm back...
#breakup
#deception
#dreams
#heartbroken
#IMissYou
147 reads
10 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
14th Nov 2024 11:13pm
14th Nov 2024 11:13pm
No Church Bells
We need to talk
Why do I feel my chest tighten or, like every nerve ending is firing at once
We need to talk
Nothing ever goes well with those types of words
I know what I told you
I should stop this. I know exactly where it's going, and my heart is slowly ripping apart.
I told you everything was over with me and her, but I also told you I would try to make it work.
Why is he still talking? I got it. I'm gone
I would like if we could still be friends
He would like it if we could...
Why do I feel my chest tighten or, like every nerve ending is firing at once
We need to talk
Nothing ever goes well with those types of words
I know what I told you
I should stop this. I know exactly where it's going, and my heart is slowly ripping apart.
I told you everything was over with me and her, but I also told you I would try to make it work.
Why is he still talking? I got it. I'm gone
I would like if we could still be friends
He would like it if we could...
#breakup
#heartbroken
#rejection #sadness
#rejection #sadness
280 reads
26 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
12th Oct 2018 3:17pm
12th Oct 2018 3:17pm
nicotine
the death of polluted
phases of the moon
saw you weep
I wore a nicotine halo
stained my pale lips blue
while you watched on fooled
by my midnight sun
I captured your tears
inside a whiskey bottle
got drunk off the pain
peeing in an alley at dawn
it smelled of regret
summer saw an end
of smiles in your skies
where my love light shone
in red neon
disaster was spelled
a strobe light of warning blared
still, you...
phases of the moon
saw you weep
I wore a nicotine halo
stained my pale lips blue
while you watched on fooled
by my midnight sun
I captured your tears
inside a whiskey bottle
got drunk off the pain
peeing in an alley at dawn
it smelled of regret
summer saw an end
of smiles in your skies
where my love light shone
in red neon
disaster was spelled
a strobe light of warning blared
still, you...
#love
#breakup
683 reads
22 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
19th Jun 2024 7:59pm
19th Jun 2024 7:59pm
THINGS WE CAN'T CONTROL
They say that in our lives we as man's and woman's will be face, with many of those obstacles, that we can't really control in our lives. But yet there are somethings we can control, 🤔 one is our own emotions and our own true personal, thoughts of what we want and need in our lives🪬 For let's take a moment to analyze, our own trials and tribulation, that has altered the decisions of what we have done.🤔 For sure there was things and people's that we wish, hadn't come into our lives for it was at that time in our lowest point in our lives 😔 We decided really just...
#betrayal
#breakup
#deception
#disappointment
#heartbroken
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0 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
29th Dec 2021 7:19am
29th Dec 2021 7:19am
HE NEVER KNEW (INSPIRED BY NIZANA'S POEM)
He never knew
the 'I love you'
I may have said
to him in bed
meant 'Stay with me,
please' inwardly.
All he just heard
was thought, 'I scored!'
He now sleeps round
with others found
who cross his path
and raise his laugh.
the 'I love you'
I may have said
to him in bed
meant 'Stay with me,
please' inwardly.
All he just heard
was thought, 'I scored!'
He now sleeps round
with others found
who cross his path
and raise his laugh.
#teens
#relationships
#breakup
#sex
#rhyming
461 reads
4 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
6th Mar 2023 8:36pm
6th Mar 2023 8:36pm
Tears Tears Dystopia
Rip your tampon out
Blood smear
Ashen swollen face
You left me
Tears tears dystopia
Blood smear
Ashen swollen face
You left me
Tears tears dystopia
#dark
#breakup
#violence #dystopian
#violence #dystopian
398 reads
33 Comments
deliabear
Debbie
Debbie
Poem Published
23rd May 2024 7:38pm
23rd May 2024 7:38pm
Discarded Parts
Broken pieces of desire
rusted with pain.
Clawed with your name.
Tears drown your corroded remains.
Even the trees wearing their pink bouquets,
could no longer extract the dark decay.
Of the day your eyes coldly looked away.
You were there but you were gone.
It's the mind that wanders further than the body.
At first.
And then it's the absence of your body
that blows up my heart.
An explosion raining rejection's shards.
Upon my discarded parts.
rusted with pain.
Clawed with your name.
Tears drown your corroded remains.
Even the trees wearing their pink bouquets,
could no longer extract the dark decay.
Of the day your eyes coldly looked away.
You were there but you were gone.
It's the mind that wanders further than the body.
At first.
And then it's the absence of your body
that blows up my heart.
An explosion raining rejection's shards.
Upon my discarded parts.
#breakup
#heartbroken
245 reads
18 Comments
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 4:04pm
12th Jan 2025 4:04pm
Shattered Love
You told me that you loved me...
...you gave me everything...
...so much - that it was too much!
I clutched the material things...
...wonderful memories...
...unbelievable feelings...
and the years of safety - so tightly!
I wanted it to be real.
But it was unbelievable...
...it wasn't what I had ever had...
...or ever known - I hesitated!
I tried to return feelings...
...but I hurt us both -
trying too hard to hold on to me...
and be what you deserved.
The weight of my past...
...piled too...
...you gave me everything...
...so much - that it was too much!
I clutched the material things...
...wonderful memories...
...unbelievable feelings...
and the years of safety - so tightly!
I wanted it to be real.
But it was unbelievable...
...it wasn't what I had ever had...
...or ever known - I hesitated!
I tried to return feelings...
...but I hurt us both -
trying too hard to hold on to me...
and be what you deserved.
The weight of my past...
...piled too...
#breakup
#love
55 reads
2 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
9th Dec 2024 2:05am
9th Dec 2024 2:05am
Dying of thirst in my empty Kool-Aid pitcher
Men have begged
for my love
women too,
and I gave it
to him
as easily
as blowing the
fuzz off
a dandelion
and I asked him to
keep me safe
from the head games
I play with myself
Long story short:
He said no.
So I’m drinking a lot.
He said no.
And I want to know what
the actual fuck is
socially wrong
in having
an
inbox
just
for
one
It's like being surrounded
by desperation-fueled
soul-desiccation,
where the...
for my love
women too,
and I gave it
to him
as easily
as blowing the
fuzz off
a dandelion
and I asked him to
keep me safe
from the head games
I play with myself
Long story short:
He said no.
So I’m drinking a lot.
He said no.
And I want to know what
the actual fuck is
socially wrong
in having
an
inbox
just
for
one
It's like being surrounded
by desperation-fueled
soul-desiccation,
where the...
#breakup
#despair
#emptiness #heartbroken
#emptiness #heartbroken
235 reads
20 Comments
WillowsWhimsies
Poem Published
22nd May 2024 4:11pm
22nd May 2024 4:11pm
shattered
I'm looking back
things you said
& what you didn't
realizing
how much more powerful
was your silence
I don't give compliments
but you deserve them
did I
really
they felt so beautiful
caressing my fragility
it was the juxtaposition
that threw me
to be so loved
& so abandoned
shoved into a glass box
dark with self-doubt
clouded with anxiety
while you sat
just beyond reach
swirling the ice in your tumbler
watching me
silently
...
things you said
& what you didn't
realizing
how much more powerful
was your silence
I don't give compliments
but you deserve them
did I
really
they felt so beautiful
caressing my fragility
it was the juxtaposition
that threw me
to be so loved
& so abandoned
shoved into a glass box
dark with self-doubt
clouded with anxiety
while you sat
just beyond reach
swirling the ice in your tumbler
watching me
silently
...
#breakup
#healing
#MovingOn
240 reads
10 Comments
I_IS_ME
Poem Published
2nd Nov 2024 11:09pm
2nd Nov 2024 11:09pm
Beginning To End
I can't stop this fall
Boulders are chasing me down
Our pain is avalanching all around
Hearts are bleeding shattering our sound
I never thought that I'ld feel like this
Less more ever sit down and write this
How I miss your touch and how I miss your kiss
The softness of your body as I pull you through the mist
Cuddled, swaddled, even though we both resist you're in my arms
It's not about astrology, although we're astrological and love astral charm
We're eternal boo because we existed before there was
We brought...
Boulders are chasing me down
Our pain is avalanching all around
Hearts are bleeding shattering our sound
I never thought that I'ld feel like this
Less more ever sit down and write this
How I miss your touch and how I miss your kiss
The softness of your body as I pull you through the mist
Cuddled, swaddled, even though we both resist you're in my arms
It's not about astrology, although we're astrological and love astral charm
We're eternal boo because we existed before there was
We brought...
#breakup
#heartbroken
#love
243 reads
10 Comments
Duende
Poem Published
16th Dec 2016 6:38pm
16th Dec 2016 6:38pm
Your Hands
your hands i miss
them and kiss
them in my mind
your skin
i can taste it
if i close my eyes
your eyes that
look i was hooked
when i saw you
your lips
God your lips
damn i need them
pressed against
mine even
if it’s just
one last time
to be wrapped in
your warmth your
arms around me
to feel you
inside
me
to
be
yours
down on all fours
slave to your force
safe and secure
small...
them and kiss
them in my mind
your skin
i can taste it
if i close my eyes
your eyes that
look i was hooked
when i saw you
your lips
God your lips
damn i need them
pressed against
mine even
if it’s just
one last time
to be wrapped in
your warmth your
arms around me
to feel you
inside
me
to
be
yours
down on all fours
slave to your force
safe and secure
small...
#breakup
#love
1181 reads
35 Comments
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