Your Hands

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Such a sweet write- full of love, yearning, and great intent.
I understand these feelings. They can consume one's thoughts for moments at a time.
A perfect flow of expression. 💓

Thank you so much for your comment, dear Heart ♥

You make me smile by calling this a sweet write :-)

I really appreciate your visit and words!

The ache of missing someone dear...it can consume a heart. You have an incredible way of shaping your words. It's amazing! Many hugs...
Willow

Thank you so much for your comment, dear Willow

The ache comes and goes... I guess it's the time of the year...
To be honest... it was an accidental heart (don't know if you saw that) but yes... I pay a lot of attention to the shape, so you make me happy by mentioning that :-)

Beautiful write D so much feeling and passion! love it! 💜

So glad to hear you love it :-)

Thank you so much for your comment, lady ♥

To read this was a thing of beauty and splendor...emotions again whispered and yet deafening...love the way you write Dear Duende...iiiiiiiiiiiiit's a keep[h]er!

xoxo Taryn

Wow... that's a great compliment @ love the way you write!

I'm honored by the reading list add, didn't expect that... I even hesitated about posting this one! Thank you so much for your enthusiastic comment, dear Taryn! You made my day :-)

Beautiful in every way. Even the bold words, so awesome.

You're kind of good at this poetry thing ;-)

Yay... I got another awesome :-)

Great to hear you like this one... thank you for your comment!

Poetic origami? Now that's an amazing compliment :-)

Thank you so much for your smile inducing words, Aemelia!

You're the beauty that got away and he'll come to rue the day.   I love the way you express desire, emotionally, physically and carnally.

to be wrapped in
your warmth, your
arms around me

to feel you
inside
me

to
be
yours

You're the kind of gift that should be handled with tender, loving care.  Once delivered I'm sure you're a joy, Duende.  Excellent work!

That's an amazing comment!

Thank you so much... I really appreciate your words, Crowfly!

Beautiful longing and loving write with an erotic touch. Really enjoyed the visual format. Excellent ink

Keith

Thank you so much for your comment, Keith

Great to hear you enjoyed this one!

Craving that caress the eyes...
This was such a lovely image of love and yearning, Duende.   :)

Thank you so much, dear Rain!

Logic knows it isn't possible, but sometimes the longing takes over...
I'm glad to hear you love this one, I'm pretty fond of it myself :-)

Honey every since we howled together
on your Wolf piece.. .I've rolling with you
every since and your taste in musique
is exquisitely a treat for one me.

Now, on to this one. I would say that this
is one your strongest. (Note) yes just
_one_ of your most penetrating writes.
My emotions got the best of me..

So intricate too!, because I love me
some figurine poetry  ;) miss'd ya
my love.



-Howlings

Thanks so much for your words, darling!

I'm glad to hear you love my figurine poem and that you think it's one of my best! I wasn't sure about this experimental one, so it means a lot to me that you felt it!

Missed you too, love!

Your poem really got me, I can easily relate.. 'twas a great piece, followed hoping to see more like it. <3

That's an amazing comment, thank you so much!

Always nice to see a new face on my page... welcome :-)

In the palm of your hand, huh? That's another bold statement that reads of surrender almost. I have a similar poem, though not quite as detailed as yours, in a similar vein & it's called, 'One More Time...'

You got that right... I consider myself submissive on certain aspects ;-)    
 
This particular man taught me how to surrender...    
 
Thank you for another amazing comment!

Duende.. very nice.. truly dig this..




Dave

Sometimes I like to experiment a bit, I'm so glad like this one! Thanks for your comment!

Man. this was beautiful. I love the sense of longing here and the way you laid out the piece. The heart shape is one of the most incredible things i've ever seen. Sensual and amazing to read as a whole. Thank you for sharing.

Thank you so much for your enthusiastic comment! You made me smile by mentioning the heart shape... for me the visual aspect of a poem is important (I wrote two shape poems) so it means a lot to me when someone mentions it :-)

Absolutely love this poem. I felt this the whole way through. Also reading this poem slower than usual makes it so much more vivid and colorful.  Great Poem!

That you could feel my words is the best compliment you can give me! Great to hear you love this poem... thank you so much for sharing your thoughts, I really appreciate it!

Deep truth, inside and out; I enjoy the cutbacks on the length of lines, feels like shortness of breath; from crying or from sex, depending.

I also like the experimentation with layout and holding words for focus, feels cinematic. Keep playing, I’ll keep reading...

Cinematic is a huge compliment, so thank you!

Writing this piece was indeed about playing and experimenting, for me that's sometimes a way to cope with the pain, the longing... trying to make something artful out of it.

Thanks heaps for another comment... truly means a lot!

A write of yearning for physical attentions. Favourite set of verses:

if it’s just  
one last time  

to be wrapped in  
your warmth, your  
arms around me  

to feel you  
inside  
me  

to  
be  
yours  

down on all fours  
slave to your force  
safe and secure  
small for a  
while  

It's been a while since I have read this piece (well, it's been a while since I was here)

Thanks for commenting.