Bisexual Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#bisexual
bisexual seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Meeting Sarah
The dimly lit bar carried an air of nostalgia for Sarah. It was a place where she and David had shared countless memories before their marriage crumbled under the weight of infidelity. Now, as she nervously sipped her drink, Sarah couldn't shake the feeling of anticipation and uncertainty that hung in the air.
Across the room, Lauryn anxiously glanced around until her eyes met Sarah's. There was an unspoken understanding between them, a shared history forged by the mistakes of a man they had both loved. Lauryn approached the table, a mix of gratitude and trepidation in her eyes. ...
Across the room, Lauryn anxiously glanced around until her eyes met Sarah's. There was an unspoken understanding between them, a shared history forged by the mistakes of a man they had both loved. Lauryn approached the table, a mix of gratitude and trepidation in her eyes. ...
#erotic
#FallingInLove
#bisexual
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Socrates’ chalice
I sit in a throne room,
a sea of maggots
writhe in the congealed
drippings from the
syncophants who thought
my sex toys made them
good in bed.
The bodies so infested
they seemed to jitter
on the
ground,
and I envy their movement.
Until the next man grabs
a chalice from the
bargain-sized bin at the door,
and advances, unseeing,
waist-deep through
my sea of blue-lipped corpses.
I like the arrogant sacrifice.
...
a sea of maggots
writhe in the congealed
drippings from the
syncophants who thought
my sex toys made them
good in bed.
The bodies so infested
they seemed to jitter
on the
ground,
and I envy their movement.
Until the next man grabs
a chalice from the
bargain-sized bin at the door,
and advances, unseeing,
waist-deep through
my sea of blue-lipped corpses.
I like the arrogant sacrifice.
...
#lust
#honesty
#bisexual
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Intertwined
Intertwined
She runs her finger
over the tempestuous edge of the Moon,
callous pad turn to nail,
the residue effect
seeks out to surface skin raw
remind it we're alive,
and I
lick the pain from her collarbones,
dance over bone,
linger where her flesh has gains,
spiral on her grace,
spine elevated, my gaze,
hungered and magnified,
this laced web
of our interweaved space.
I call back
the miles between this place
where we'd been
emerging as individuals,
filled elements of not enough ...
She runs her finger
over the tempestuous edge of the Moon,
callous pad turn to nail,
the residue effect
seeks out to surface skin raw
remind it we're alive,
and I
lick the pain from her collarbones,
dance over bone,
linger where her flesh has gains,
spiral on her grace,
spine elevated, my gaze,
hungered and magnified,
this laced web
of our interweaved space.
I call back
the miles between this place
where we'd been
emerging as individuals,
filled elements of not enough ...
#love
#lust
#bisexual
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Explorations of Pleasure: Lily's Journey of Self-Discovery

#erotic
#porn
#dirty
#bisexual
#sexy
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The Straight People Express
We’re boarding an exclusive automobile.
This transport doesn’t carry LGBT people.
If homosexuals are waiting on the road,
We’ll pass them and we won’t look back.
If we see any lesbians hitchhiking,
We won’t stop and give them a lift.
If stranded bisexuals flag down the vehicle,
We’ll just pretend not to see them.
If transgender people ask for a ride,
We won’t let them travel with us.
But if we meet heterosexuals along the wayside,
We’ll stop and say, “Welcome aboard.”
This transport doesn’t carry LGBT people.
If homosexuals are waiting on the road,
We’ll pass them and we won’t look back.
If we see any lesbians hitchhiking,
We won’t stop and give them a lift.
If stranded bisexuals flag down the vehicle,
We’ll just pretend not to see them.
If transgender people ask for a ride,
We won’t let them travel with us.
But if we meet heterosexuals along the wayside,
We’ll stop and say, “Welcome aboard.”
#lesbian
#gay
#LGBT
#transgender
#bisexual
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Which One Of Us

#porn
#beach
#summer
#water
#bisexual
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How Do You Like It, Baby?

#lesbian
#porn
#fiction
#dialogue
#bisexual
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Gays Want a Free Ride
The author has something to say about LGBT people especially homosexuals and lesbians.
What exactly are they contributing to the current development of humankind?
How will they help the world to survive with sodomy and sapphic practices?
The future generation cannot come from anal sex and same-sex marriage.
LGBT people would become extinct if they were living in a place by themselves.
Some bisexuals have biological children; we cannot say the same for transgender people.
Gays do not produce offspring, but they want to adopt the children of...
What exactly are they contributing to the current development of humankind?
How will they help the world to survive with sodomy and sapphic practices?
The future generation cannot come from anal sex and same-sex marriage.
LGBT people would become extinct if they were living in a place by themselves.
Some bisexuals have biological children; we cannot say the same for transgender people.
Gays do not produce offspring, but they want to adopt the children of...
#children
#gay
#LGBT
#transgender
#bisexual
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Mad Jasmine
- Mad Jasmine -
I wear my blue harem pants, and I can really dance,
With a sword in my hand, I’m like a warrior princess.
I will not wait for some hero to come save the day…
My heart is hungry for romance, and when I prance,
The desert blazes hot; I am not, a damsel in distress!
All the people know my name, and I like it that way.
Mad Jasmine they call me, and I steal the show well,
You won’t take my kingdom; I will see you in Hell…
Evil wizards can’t match, the spell my eyes can cast!
I’m like a warrior princess from out the ancient...
I wear my blue harem pants, and I can really dance,
With a sword in my hand, I’m like a warrior princess.
I will not wait for some hero to come save the day…
My heart is hungry for romance, and when I prance,
The desert blazes hot; I am not, a damsel in distress!
All the people know my name, and I like it that way.
Mad Jasmine they call me, and I steal the show well,
You won’t take my kingdom; I will see you in Hell…
Evil wizards can’t match, the spell my eyes can cast!
I’m like a warrior princess from out the ancient...
#strength
#courage
#bisexual
#desert
#determination
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Not all straight people have white picket fences
We’ve also faced discrimination
from indignant condemnation
Labels are a funny thing
as though others can’t understand
the ingredients of injustice
toward those who are different
You see, hate works both ways
Just because I’ve never back-flipped
off an experience doesn’t mean shit
I’ve swallowed the pain of prejudice
so deep it took decades to mend
It’s all born of blatant ignorance
It’s like telling an adoptive mother
that she can’t understand how to love
a child she...
from indignant condemnation
Labels are a funny thing
as though others can’t understand
the ingredients of injustice
toward those who are different
You see, hate works both ways
Just because I’ve never back-flipped
off an experience doesn’t mean shit
I’ve swallowed the pain of prejudice
so deep it took decades to mend
It’s all born of blatant ignorance
It’s like telling an adoptive mother
that she can’t understand how to love
a child she...
#gay
#LGBT
#bisexual
566 reads
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This is Not a Poem About Cocks

#lust
#sex
#dirty #bisexual
#dirty #bisexual
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I could be a better boyfriend than him

#lust
#lesbian
#erotic
#bisexual
#crush
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DU Poetry : Bisexual Seeking Honest Critique Poems