Birthday by Top Critiquers Poems
#birthday
TheOralizer
Poem Published
15th Jan 2021 9:29pm
15th Jan 2021 9:29pm
WHAT REALLY MATTERS IN THE END?
I have walked on all
the Continents in
the world, all 50 States,
and lost count of the
countries I have visited.
I say this not to impress
but to share what I, not
anyone else, have learned.
It hit me right between
the eyes a few years ago
as I heard what a group
of wealthy men said in the
last days in the terminal ward;
soon to face death.
They were all rich and
among the who's who
in society. In their last days
they were asked what,
when looking back really
mattered?
Was it their yachts,...
the Continents in
the world, all 50 States,
and lost count of the
countries I have visited.
I say this not to impress
but to share what I, not
anyone else, have learned.
It hit me right between
the eyes a few years ago
as I heard what a group
of wealthy men said in the
last days in the terminal ward;
soon to face death.
They were all rich and
among the who's who
in society. In their last days
they were asked what,
when looking back really
mattered?
Was it their yachts,...
#death
#birthday
#fate
#aging
#responsibility
492 reads
4 Comments
dimpy
dimpsmoon
dimpsmoon
Poem Published
9th Apr 2024 6:29pm
9th Apr 2024 6:29pm
on my birthday...
my clitoris started singing a birthday song
his hard cock was staring at me
N the sky lit up with an explosion...
his hard cock was staring at me
N the sky lit up with an explosion...
#sex
#erotic
#birthday
778 reads
27 Comments
NANCY_RDZ_STORIES
Poem Published
4th Feb 2020 8:32am
4th Feb 2020 8:32am
MY EARLY BIRTHDAY GIFT
#anger
#dark
#birthday
#frustration
#disappointment
668 reads
12 Comments
goldenmyst
Poem Published
20th Mar 2019 1:08am
20th Mar 2019 1:08am
Feminist Fable
#women
#men
#BDSM
#birthday
#feminism
648 reads
4 Comments
Wafflenose
Ellie
Ellie
Poem Published
22nd Sep 2022 3:13pm
22nd Sep 2022 3:13pm
Dear B
It's your birthday today!
I'm sorry I'm late.
I have no excuse—
just a lot on my plate.
I hope you don't think
that your birthday's forgotten;
until I can find
some fresh paper to jot on...
I'm texting your mum to say:
hope that you've had
a wonderful day
(and I hope you're not mad).
Your card will arrive
in a day, maybe two.
Until then, from us all,
Happy Birthday to you!
I'm sorry I'm late.
I have no excuse—
just a lot on my plate.
I hope you don't think
that your birthday's forgotten;
until I can find
some fresh paper to jot on...
I'm texting your mum to say:
hope that you've had
a wonderful day
(and I hope you're not mad).
Your card will arrive
in a day, maybe two.
Until then, from us all,
Happy Birthday to you!
#birthday
543 reads
3 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
3rd Apr 2025 2:46am
3rd Apr 2025 2:46am
Let's Call It A Little Incentive
Are you almost done, Markie?
Just about, Erin. Why the big rush?
Simple. Tomorrow is Greg's birthday.
Really? You sure it's not something else?
Okay. Let's call it a little incentive.
Just about, Erin. Why the big rush?
Simple. Tomorrow is Greg's birthday.
Really? You sure it's not something else?
Okay. Let's call it a little incentive.
#birthday
#dialogue
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
125 reads
2 Comments
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