Birthday by Top Critiquers Poems
#birthday
wallyroo92
Poem Published
16th May 2024 1:35am
16th May 2024 1:35am
Birthday Prose
I’m sorry I didn’t write you a verse for your birthday, because unlike pros today I chose to compose and expose my verbose prose which feels like it goes all the way up to the elbows. So, pardon my slippery delivery if it makes you feel a little quivery, but I’mma try to give you some lines that will make you crinkle your nose and maybe even curl your toes.
I didn’t get you a hallmark card ‘cause you know how hard it is for me to spit some barred rhymes in such a tight space, but you’ve seen my face and heard my grammar even though I stammer when I try to enunciate. Theoretically...
I didn’t get you a hallmark card ‘cause you know how hard it is for me to spit some barred rhymes in such a tight space, but you’ve seen my face and heard my grammar even though I stammer when I try to enunciate. Theoretically...
#birthday
#funny
#wife
306 reads
0 Comments
goldenmyst
Poem Published
20th Mar 2019 1:08am
20th Mar 2019 1:08am
Feminist Fable
#women
#men
#BDSM
#birthday
#feminism
611 reads
4 Comments
eightmore
Poem Published
16th Nov 2021 1:02pm
16th Nov 2021 1:02pm
Birthday Present
#sex
#birthday
481 reads
9 Comments
runningturtle87
Poem Published
18th Oct 2021 8:12pm
18th Oct 2021 8:12pm
In the Sorrow of Your Arms
In the Sorrow of Your Arms
Plans are made
To be broken,
And no charms
Can break
That spell.
Our destiny
May be a token
Of those
Dreams
We know so well.
There
In the sorrow
Of your arms
I still can
Hear them tell,
Every thing
We thought
We knew
In the end
Unwound,
And at last
Oh so so fast
Became....
The echo
Of our sound.
Plans are made
To be broken,
And no charms
Can break
That spell.
Our destiny
May be a token
Of those
Dreams
We know so well.
There
In the sorrow
Of your arms
I still can
Hear them tell,
Every thing
We thought
We knew
In the end
Unwound,
And at last
Oh so so fast
Became....
The echo
Of our sound.
#marriage
#death
#birthday #anniversary
#birthday #anniversary
393 reads
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Strangeways_Rob
Poem Published
12th Jun 2020 10:54pm
12th Jun 2020 10:54pm
Penblwydd Hapus My Love & Other Things
The world will one day fade
Skies be packed away
Assembled in some other universe.
The last bell will clink off a cliff;
Chime (kneeled) knell in cup of sea.
On oak shelves
Libraries will borrow time
From a circle of trees.
In the beginning was all things wood.
It was silence, mountain rain
Siren song timbres, poetry
Which brought us here.
Point on the horizon, so distance
Fathomed unimaginable, until
The sun cut through the ocean.
We sail our ship o’er dry land.
Love wears jewels
Over its...
Skies be packed away
Assembled in some other universe.
The last bell will clink off a cliff;
Chime (kneeled) knell in cup of sea.
On oak shelves
Libraries will borrow time
From a circle of trees.
In the beginning was all things wood.
It was silence, mountain rain
Siren song timbres, poetry
Which brought us here.
Point on the horizon, so distance
Fathomed unimaginable, until
The sun cut through the ocean.
We sail our ship o’er dry land.
Love wears jewels
Over its...
#love
#birthday
#MyInspiration
501 reads
5 Comments
Zazzles
Broomie
Broomie
Poem Published
3rd Feb 2021 8:33pm
3rd Feb 2021 8:33pm
Happy Birthday Bluevelvete
🎈🎈Happy Birthday 🎈🎈
🎈🎈♥️Susan♥️🎈🎈
🎈🎈I hope today’s a good one! 🎈🎈
🌹🌹♥️Love Jackie♥️🌹🌹
🎈🎈♥️Susan♥️🎈🎈
🎈🎈I hope today’s a good one! 🎈🎈
🌹🌹♥️Love Jackie♥️🌹🌹
#love
#birthday
#respect
602 reads
13 Comments
Grace
IDryad
IDryad
Poem Published
23rd Oct 2023 11:38pm
23rd Oct 2023 11:38pm
It was my Birthday
In this kaleidoscope of vibrant hues
a season of transformation as autumn
the keen eye beholds what others may miss
revealing truths that the heart cannot ignore
Memories flow like ethereal apparitions
as my mind ascends to distant memories
unraveling the depths of my existence
engulfed in waves lost in a sea of thoughts
No solace found its a distant shore
only frigid waters icy to the core
fire burns within while ice caresses my skin
haunted dreams persist pushing away peace
the candles on the cake burns ...
a season of transformation as autumn
the keen eye beholds what others may miss
revealing truths that the heart cannot ignore
Memories flow like ethereal apparitions
as my mind ascends to distant memories
unraveling the depths of my existence
engulfed in waves lost in a sea of thoughts
No solace found its a distant shore
only frigid waters icy to the core
fire burns within while ice caresses my skin
haunted dreams persist pushing away peace
the candles on the cake burns ...
#birthday
#SelfReflection
268 reads
6 Comments
LunaGreyhawk
Poem Published
31st Mar 2020 5:18pm
31st Mar 2020 5:18pm
Between the Warrior and the Witch
another trip around the sun
my yearly reckoning beckons
groaning, heavy
with unanswered questions,
swirling like distant galaxies
it’s past time to explore
did I love without conditions?
my soul shouts, yes!
but the bodies stacked
out back by the shed
of my selfishness
would speak otherwise
if they could still speak at all
my mother used to say
the heart wants what it wants
but I’m guessing she didn’t know
she’d given birth
to a black hole
did I accept love given to me? ...
my yearly reckoning beckons
groaning, heavy
with unanswered questions,
swirling like distant galaxies
it’s past time to explore
did I love without conditions?
my soul shouts, yes!
but the bodies stacked
out back by the shed
of my selfishness
would speak otherwise
if they could still speak at all
my mother used to say
the heart wants what it wants
but I’m guessing she didn’t know
she’d given birth
to a black hole
did I accept love given to me? ...
#birthday
#aging
#SelfReflection
360 reads
3 Comments
Northern_Soul
Poem Published
1st Mar 2024 8:06pm
1st Mar 2024 8:06pm
Three & Nine
In a box on a book shelf
there’s a picture of me
on my eighteenth birthday,
a champagne bottle pressed
against my lips like a gun
an arm full of bracelets
which looked pretty,
but I knew what they hid
just in the same way
I noted my eyes
as glassed as that weapon
in desperate hands.
I’d like to pretend
I gave a fuck about today
as my calendar celebrated
another safe trip around the sun,
but I didn’t. Not especially so.
I just laughed at the fruit smoothie
I made with...
there’s a picture of me
on my eighteenth birthday,
a champagne bottle pressed
against my lips like a gun
an arm full of bracelets
which looked pretty,
but I knew what they hid
just in the same way
I noted my eyes
as glassed as that weapon
in desperate hands.
I’d like to pretend
I gave a fuck about today
as my calendar celebrated
another safe trip around the sun,
but I didn’t. Not especially so.
I just laughed at the fruit smoothie
I made with...
#birthday
#SelfReflection
241 reads
16 Comments
bcpoet
Lawrence
Lawrence
Poem Published
4th May 2023 8:51pm
4th May 2023 8:51pm
May 4th
Vancouver Island in the distance
in the haze afloat
a distant silhouette that whispers
'get onboard a boat
take the ferry to Nanaimo
across the Salish Sea'
Vancouver Island in the distance
whispers that to me
on a sandy beach before me
where gulls and crows abound
and seals and whales in all their glory
can sometimes here be found...
springtime sunshine, May 4th morning
time to get away
Vancouver Island's hazy dawning
tells me I can't stay
in the always ordinary
every day the same - ...
in the haze afloat
a distant silhouette that whispers
'get onboard a boat
take the ferry to Nanaimo
across the Salish Sea'
Vancouver Island in the distance
whispers that to me
on a sandy beach before me
where gulls and crows abound
and seals and whales in all their glory
can sometimes here be found...
springtime sunshine, May 4th morning
time to get away
Vancouver Island's hazy dawning
tells me I can't stay
in the always ordinary
every day the same - ...
#birthday
195 reads
4 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
25th Nov 2024 2:00am
25th Nov 2024 2:00am
One Way To Surprise Her Man On His Birthday
Debby saw Ryan coming in.
She dropped her robe and flashed herself.
That's before his parents followed.
She dropped her robe and flashed herself.
That's before his parents followed.
#birthday
#family
#fiction
#home
#sex
137 reads
0 Comments
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