Birthday by Top Critiquers Poems
#birthday
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2025 00:21am
3rd Mar 2025 00:21am
Ah-Chew
Was your mother Asian and your father a porcupine?
Happy 1st Birthday you little prick!
Love,
VOI
Happy 1st Birthday you little prick!
Love,
VOI
#birthday
#satirical
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17 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
11th Dec 2022 9:52pm
11th Dec 2022 9:52pm
optimism
I'm in my quiet time when I don't have much to say
my soul rests in the shadows let others talk today
it's my birthday and I know time says I'm old
but inside I still feel young
I reach and touch the sky and exhale
sighing into the winds
my mind turns to you
lover over my honesty
you know me true
probably better than most
I wander the day without purpose or plan
I just want to be free
drift with the energy being a part of the day
but not driving it
I escape the moment sorrow walks my way ...
my soul rests in the shadows let others talk today
it's my birthday and I know time says I'm old
but inside I still feel young
I reach and touch the sky and exhale
sighing into the winds
my mind turns to you
lover over my honesty
you know me true
probably better than most
I wander the day without purpose or plan
I just want to be free
drift with the energy being a part of the day
but not driving it
I escape the moment sorrow walks my way ...
#love
#birthday
336 reads
11 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
19th Jun 2019 6:32am
19th Jun 2019 6:32am
A THONG FOR THE BEACH
#beach
#birthday
#holiday #rhyming
#holiday #rhyming
613 reads
7 Comments
WillowsWhimsies
Poem Published
5th Oct 2024 10:17am
5th Oct 2024 10:17am
slight change of plans...
we had a plan
reservations made
in the works for months
bringing your sweetie to you
she made a bucket list
& you were at the top
a homecoming...of sorts
revisit all the old haunts
going to Morey's & get your favorite fish
those special cheeses you always used to get
A&W with New York Vanilla ice cream floats
just like the old days...in better times
before everything changed in life
we were coming...I swear
but the universe had other ideas
so we had to pivot quickly
result of...
reservations made
in the works for months
bringing your sweetie to you
she made a bucket list
& you were at the top
a homecoming...of sorts
revisit all the old haunts
going to Morey's & get your favorite fish
those special cheeses you always used to get
A&W with New York Vanilla ice cream floats
just like the old days...in better times
before everything changed in life
we were coming...I swear
but the universe had other ideas
so we had to pivot quickly
result of...
#birthday
#father
#IMissYou
257 reads
10 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
13th Apr 2025 5:32pm
13th Apr 2025 5:32pm
~:: amma
her then young married parents..
were childless for years.. they
had been religiously worshipping
fasting & doing whatever country
medicinal courses they can.. to
have a baby..
& as a sage’s saintly predictions..
a beautiful baby girl.. in all blessings
of the Tamil god, the god of knowledge
& beauty.. Skanda.. the Shanmuga, son of
Shiva.. was born as an answered boon..
her looks were as composed
& gleaming with a deep warrior
featuring.. in them.. she was
named after Shanmuga...
were childless for years.. they
had been religiously worshipping
fasting & doing whatever country
medicinal courses they can.. to
have a baby..
& as a sage’s saintly predictions..
a beautiful baby girl.. in all blessings
of the Tamil god, the god of knowledge
& beauty.. Skanda.. the Shanmuga, son of
Shiva.. was born as an answered boon..
her looks were as composed
& gleaming with a deep warrior
featuring.. in them.. she was
named after Shanmuga...
#admiration
#birthday
#love
#mother
#respect
240 reads
Duende
Poem Published
23rd Mar 2024 2:00pm
23rd Mar 2024 2:00pm
No Birthday
On March 22nd i
got a call from the
crematorium with
some protocols
day of cremation
of Ravi, my cat.
On March 23rd i
was called by my
mother she picked
a fight, fuck it why
begged her to stop
she didn't, i cried
no apps cards or
phonecalls for me
no birthday wishes
just a text with the
time of cremation
On March24th i
came home, box
of ashes in hands
on the bottom his
name and the day
i was born ♰ i never
...
got a call from the
crematorium with
some protocols
day of cremation
of Ravi, my cat.
On March 23rd i
was called by my
mother she picked
a fight, fuck it why
begged her to stop
she didn't, i cried
no apps cards or
phonecalls for me
no birthday wishes
just a text with the
time of cremation
On March24th i
came home, box
of ashes in hands
on the bottom his
name and the day
i was born ♰ i never
...
#death
#birthday
378 reads
wallyroo92
Poem Published
16th May 2024 1:35am
16th May 2024 1:35am
Birthday Prose
I’m sorry I didn’t write you a verse for your birthday, because unlike pros today I chose to compose and expose my verbose prose which feels like it goes all the way up to the elbows. So, pardon my slippery delivery if it makes you feel a little quivery, but I’mma try to give you some lines that will make you crinkle your nose and maybe even curl your toes.
I didn’t get you a hallmark card ‘cause you know how hard it is for me to spit some barred rhymes in such a tight space, but you’ve seen my face and heard my grammar even though I stammer when I try to enunciate. Theoretically...
I didn’t get you a hallmark card ‘cause you know how hard it is for me to spit some barred rhymes in such a tight space, but you’ve seen my face and heard my grammar even though I stammer when I try to enunciate. Theoretically...
#birthday
#funny
#wife
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MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
27th Jan 2025 5:36am
27th Jan 2025 5:36am
My Better Angel
No femme fatale rocks a housecoat as well
as my beloved of thirty-five years,
since with it she bolstered me, truth to tell,
far beyond the phonemes of sonneteers
or any bunny in a magazine
shorn of their drapery mysterium
so notorious at setting the scene
for male gaze fever delirium...
which was always the wealth I truly craved
when often I had surplus love to spend
and she so fervent by that to be laved,
both inside and out, and at either end...
where even becoming fifty-seven
she comes across as a piece of heaven!
as my beloved of thirty-five years,
since with it she bolstered me, truth to tell,
far beyond the phonemes of sonneteers
or any bunny in a magazine
shorn of their drapery mysterium
so notorious at setting the scene
for male gaze fever delirium...
which was always the wealth I truly craved
when often I had surplus love to spend
and she so fervent by that to be laved,
both inside and out, and at either end...
where even becoming fifty-seven
she comes across as a piece of heaven!
#admiration
#birthday
#love #wife
#love #wife
190 reads
8 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
6th Nov 2024 4:01pm
6th Nov 2024 4:01pm
Equal to
My birthday has become
a time of giving and serving
It's an exchange of gratitude
for another year of living
What better way to share
than providing a home
for a rescue kitty
who needed to be loved
Isn't that true for all of us
“And, in the end
The love you take
is equal to the love you make.”
a time of giving and serving
It's an exchange of gratitude
for another year of living
What better way to share
than providing a home
for a rescue kitty
who needed to be loved
Isn't that true for all of us
“And, in the end
The love you take
is equal to the love you make.”
#animals
#birthday
#cats #love
#cats #love
381 reads
26 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
5th Feb 2025 11:02pm
5th Feb 2025 11:02pm
In This Day May I Rejoice
Yeshua, which is a Hebrew name for Jesus. The name Yeshua (ישוע) is a late form of the Biblical Hebrew name Yehoshua
"Elohim" is a Hebrew name for God, often used in the Old Testament of the Bible. The term emphasizes the majesty and sovereignty of God.
May I rejoice in this day Allah has made and for anyone who is celebrating a birthday in the month of February, I extend my heartfelt wishes and a Happy Birthday.
Love and Hugs, always
SKC🌻
"Elohim" is a Hebrew name for God, often used in the Old Testament of the Bible. The term emphasizes the majesty and sovereignty of God.
May I rejoice in this day Allah has made and for anyone who is celebrating a birthday in the month of February, I extend my heartfelt wishes and a Happy Birthday.
Love and Hugs, always
SKC🌻
#angels
#birthday
#moon
#sun
#water
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TheOralizer
Poem Published
15th Jan 2021 9:29pm
15th Jan 2021 9:29pm
WHAT REALLY MATTERS IN THE END?
I have walked on all
the Continents in
the world, all 50 States,
and lost count of the
countries I have visited.
I say this not to impress
but to share what I, not
anyone else, have learned.
It hit me right between
the eyes a few years ago
as I heard what a group
of wealthy men said in the
last days in the terminal ward;
soon to face death.
They were all rich and
among the who's who
in society. In their last days
they were asked what,
when looking back really
mattered?
Was it their yachts,...
the Continents in
the world, all 50 States,
and lost count of the
countries I have visited.
I say this not to impress
but to share what I, not
anyone else, have learned.
It hit me right between
the eyes a few years ago
as I heard what a group
of wealthy men said in the
last days in the terminal ward;
soon to face death.
They were all rich and
among the who's who
in society. In their last days
they were asked what,
when looking back really
mattered?
Was it their yachts,...
#death
#birthday
#fate
#aging
#responsibility
492 reads
4 Comments
runningturtle87
Poem Published
18th Oct 2021 8:12pm
18th Oct 2021 8:12pm
In the Sorrow of Your Arms
In the Sorrow of Your Arms
Plans are made
To be broken,
And no charms
Can break
That spell.
Our destiny
May be a token
Of those
Dreams
We know so well.
There
In the sorrow
Of your arms
I still can
Hear them tell,
Every thing
We thought
We knew
In the end
Unwound,
And at last
Oh so so fast
Became....
The echo
Of our sound.
Plans are made
To be broken,
And no charms
Can break
That spell.
Our destiny
May be a token
Of those
Dreams
We know so well.
There
In the sorrow
Of your arms
I still can
Hear them tell,
Every thing
We thought
We knew
In the end
Unwound,
And at last
Oh so so fast
Became....
The echo
Of our sound.
#marriage
#death
#birthday #anniversary
#birthday #anniversary
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