Birthday by Top Critiquers Poems
#birthday
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
14th Aug 2024 9:45pm
14th Aug 2024 9:45pm
Practical Joke?
Someone handcuffed & gagged me to a chair
I believe I was drugged
I have no food & water
I'm in a room I don't recognize
I try & escape
It's no use
Someone comes into the room and yells HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!
A bunch of other people make their way into the room
They're all blowing into party favors and balloons are all around
I don't recognize any of them
It's not my birthday
One person says to another
That's not Tim
We have the wrong person
How could this be?
I believe I was drugged
I have no food & water
I'm in a room I don't recognize
I try & escape
It's no use
Someone comes into the room and yells HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!
A bunch of other people make their way into the room
They're all blowing into party favors and balloons are all around
I don't recognize any of them
It's not my birthday
One person says to another
That's not Tim
We have the wrong person
How could this be?
#birthday
#dreams
#fiction
#nightmares
#ShortStory
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8 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
5th Nov 2021 6:29pm
5th Nov 2021 6:29pm
How to do Sixty-Two!
In FULL Gratitude
of who you are!
I get asked a lot
for advice, so take it
from an old Crone:
Fearlessly face yourself
running will solve naught
paths are not escape routes
Where you go, you are*
~
of who you are!
I get asked a lot
for advice, so take it
from an old Crone:
Fearlessly face yourself
running will solve naught
paths are not escape routes
Where you go, you are*
~
#love
#birthday
#aging
#philosophical
#wisdom
1138 reads
44 Comments
TheOralizer
Poem Published
15th Jan 2021 9:29pm
15th Jan 2021 9:29pm
WHAT REALLY MATTERS IN THE END?
I have walked on all
the Continents in
the world, all 50 States,
and lost count of the
countries I have visited.
I say this not to impress
but to share what I, not
anyone else, have learned.
It hit me right between
the eyes a few years ago
as I heard what a group
of wealthy men said in the
last days in the terminal ward;
soon to face death.
They were all rich and
among the who's who
in society. In their last days
they were asked what,
when looking back really
mattered?
Was it their yachts,...
the Continents in
the world, all 50 States,
and lost count of the
countries I have visited.
I say this not to impress
but to share what I, not
anyone else, have learned.
It hit me right between
the eyes a few years ago
as I heard what a group
of wealthy men said in the
last days in the terminal ward;
soon to face death.
They were all rich and
among the who's who
in society. In their last days
they were asked what,
when looking back really
mattered?
Was it their yachts,...
#death
#birthday
#fate
#aging
#responsibility
430 reads
4 Comments
Duende
Poem Published
23rd Mar 2024 2:00pm
23rd Mar 2024 2:00pm
No Birthday
On March 22nd i
got a call from the
crematorium with
some protocols
day of cremation
of Ravi, my cat.
On March 23rd i
was called by my
mother she picked
a fight, fuck it why
begged her to stop
she didn't, i cried
no apps cards or
phonecalls for me
no birthday wishes
just a text with the
time of cremation
On March24th i
came home, box
of ashes in hands
on the bottom his
name and the day
i was born ♰ i never
...
got a call from the
crematorium with
some protocols
day of cremation
of Ravi, my cat.
On March 23rd i
was called by my
mother she picked
a fight, fuck it why
begged her to stop
she didn't, i cried
no apps cards or
phonecalls for me
no birthday wishes
just a text with the
time of cremation
On March24th i
came home, box
of ashes in hands
on the bottom his
name and the day
i was born ♰ i never
...
#death
#birthday
244 reads
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
19th Jun 2019 6:32am
19th Jun 2019 6:32am
A THONG FOR THE BEACH
#beach
#birthday
#holiday #rhyming
#holiday #rhyming
560 reads
7 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
16th May 2024 1:35am
16th May 2024 1:35am
Birthday Prose
I’m sorry I didn’t write you a verse for your birthday, because unlike pros today I chose to compose and expose my verbose prose which feels like it goes all the way up to the elbows. So, pardon my slippery delivery if it makes you feel a little quivery, but I’mma try to give you some lines that will make you crinkle your nose and maybe even curl your toes.
I didn’t get you a hallmark card ‘cause you know how hard it is for me to spit some barred rhymes in such a tight space, but you’ve seen my face and heard my grammar even though I stammer when I try to enunciate. Theoretically...
I didn’t get you a hallmark card ‘cause you know how hard it is for me to spit some barred rhymes in such a tight space, but you’ve seen my face and heard my grammar even though I stammer when I try to enunciate. Theoretically...
#birthday
#funny
#wife
225 reads
0 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
4th Jun 2024 7:03pm
4th Jun 2024 7:03pm
Sound Byte
This is the tame birthday party... I will have the unedited version this weekend.
Love and Hugs, always,
SKC🤎
Hers was a Harlem Night Theme. I looked hot.. that night.. She is one of my besties, my main two besties are my 007 squad they were there as well...
Love and Hugs, always,
SKC🤎
Hers was a Harlem Night Theme. I looked hot.. that night.. She is one of my besties, my main two besties are my 007 squad they were there as well...
#birthday
241 reads
MidnightSonneteer
Poem Published
2nd Sep 2022 3:59pm
2nd Sep 2022 3:59pm
Charo!
I forged for myself an iron decree
That my lady's fiftieth birthday
Would not treat her as mine did me
And that we would celebrate...as she may.
On that score I gleaned we were agreed
Because I'm the awesome sort of guy
That gives to his wife some actual heed
Unlike those wretched chaps that never try!
"Thai" was her edict for birthday cuisine,
For she knew of a lovely place to dine,
And later on when things were more serene
We marked the day with sparkling wine!
Oh, how to know, when I was young and drifty, ...
That my lady's fiftieth birthday
Would not treat her as mine did me
And that we would celebrate...as she may.
On that score I gleaned we were agreed
Because I'm the awesome sort of guy
That gives to his wife some actual heed
Unlike those wretched chaps that never try!
"Thai" was her edict for birthday cuisine,
For she knew of a lovely place to dine,
And later on when things were more serene
We marked the day with sparkling wine!
Oh, how to know, when I was young and drifty, ...
#birthday
207 reads
3 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
11th Dec 2022 9:52pm
11th Dec 2022 9:52pm
optimism
I'm in my quiet time when I don't have much to say
my soul rests in the shadows let others talk today
it's my birthday and I know time says I'm old
but inside I still feel young
I reach and touch the sky and exhale
sighing into the winds
my mind turns to you
lover over my honesty
you know me true
probably better than most
I wander the day without purpose or plan
I just want to be free
drift with the energy being a part of the day
but not driving it
I escape the moment sorrow walks my way ...
my soul rests in the shadows let others talk today
it's my birthday and I know time says I'm old
but inside I still feel young
I reach and touch the sky and exhale
sighing into the winds
my mind turns to you
lover over my honesty
you know me true
probably better than most
I wander the day without purpose or plan
I just want to be free
drift with the energy being a part of the day
but not driving it
I escape the moment sorrow walks my way ...
#love
#birthday
264 reads
11 Comments
dimpy
dimpsmoon
dimpsmoon
Poem Published
9th Apr 2024 6:29pm
9th Apr 2024 6:29pm
on my birthday...
my clitoris started singing a birthday song
his hard cock was staring at me
N the sky lit up with an explosion...
his hard cock was staring at me
N the sky lit up with an explosion...
#sex
#erotic
#birthday
416 reads
27 Comments
Phantom2426
Poem Published
7th Jun 2021 5:51am
7th Jun 2021 5:51am
Mom's B-Day
Today is my mom's
birthday she had fun
today because she
spend it with her
family talking about
the good old days
So mom this poem
goes out for you
so you may have
many more b-days
with your crazy ass
Wild Family
While having a
Life Adventure
birthday she had fun
today because she
spend it with her
family talking about
the good old days
So mom this poem
goes out for you
so you may have
many more b-days
with your crazy ass
Wild Family
While having a
Life Adventure
#love
#mother
#family
#birthday
#memories
526 reads
10 Comments
Pinkdreams
Poem Published
17th Dec 2023 7:41pm
17th Dec 2023 7:41pm
Cendra's Birthday Parties
Cendra had an unusual last name
Skin shades darker than mine
Parents years older than most.
No siblings.
She was confident and self-assured.
Additional qualities I found exotic.
I liked being around her.
Her 11th (12th?) birthday was at Gooney Golf
There was a giant dinosaur at the entrance.
The last hole was an igloo.
Even if you missed, it captured your ball at the end.
Gone.
After miniature golf, we went back to Cendra's house for cake.
At her decree, we smeared frosting on our faces.
When her...
Skin shades darker than mine
Parents years older than most.
No siblings.
She was confident and self-assured.
Additional qualities I found exotic.
I liked being around her.
Her 11th (12th?) birthday was at Gooney Golf
There was a giant dinosaur at the entrance.
The last hole was an igloo.
Even if you missed, it captured your ball at the end.
Gone.
After miniature golf, we went back to Cendra's house for cake.
At her decree, we smeared frosting on our faces.
When her...
#childhood
#friendship
#birthday
#WritingPoetry
#admiration
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