Poems About Betrayal Seeking Honest Critique
#betrayal
Poems about betrayal seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
Today 8:07pm
Today 8:07pm
Leave Him Alone Or Else
#betrayal
#fiction
#friendship
#husband
#sex
20 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
Yesterday 2:52pm
Yesterday 2:52pm
That Made Her Feel Guilty About It
The film's director said "action".
Marilyn approached and slid off her robe.
John started to hump her.
But she saw Harry outside the window.
That made her feel guilty about it.
Marilyn approached and slid off her robe.
John started to hump her.
But she saw Harry outside the window.
That made her feel guilty about it.
#art
#betrayal
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
62 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
Yesterday 2:37am
Yesterday 2:37am
Made Denise Sit And Cry
Denise peeked into the bathroom.
She caught Kvin showering with rival Julia.
Made Denise sit and cry.
She caught Kvin showering with rival Julia.
Made Denise sit and cry.
#betrayal
#fiction
#friendship
#hurt
#sex
42 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
27th Jan 2025 8:50pm
27th Jan 2025 8:50pm
Gabriel Came Home From California
Gabriel came home from California.
He heard a noise in the bedroom.
Saw his wife Ellen naked.
She was also with Tony and Debbie.
They were humping while Gabriel watched them.
He heard a noise in the bedroom.
Saw his wife Ellen naked.
She was also with Tony and Debbie.
They were humping while Gabriel watched them.
#betrayal
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#sex
66 reads
4 Comments
TheQ
Poem Published
27th Jan 2025 6:58pm
27th Jan 2025 6:58pm
Been had
The depths of deception
They keep on digging
and try and outpace the damned
and they'll keep on winning
dignity is deceased
and do it while grinning
devoted liars never let up
They'll murder sleeping dogs
before whistles blow
the pups can't come running
no bone to be thrown
defend till the last day is due
and still convicted
Deny, deny
and still in the face of truth
Exposed they're composed
The narcissistic face of stillness
Protecting the ego until dying days
Don't try to be a victor
Stay the f**k...
They keep on digging
and try and outpace the damned
and they'll keep on winning
dignity is deceased
and do it while grinning
devoted liars never let up
They'll murder sleeping dogs
before whistles blow
the pups can't come running
no bone to be thrown
defend till the last day is due
and still convicted
Deny, deny
and still in the face of truth
Exposed they're composed
The narcissistic face of stillness
Protecting the ego until dying days
Don't try to be a victor
Stay the f**k...
#betrayal
#honesty
13 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2025 8:07pm
23rd Jan 2025 8:07pm
Cheating On Her Husband The Audio Way
Roberta made sure
Stephen is asleep before
stripping down, grabbing
the phone and calling Merritt
for some audio humping.
Stephen is asleep before
stripping down, grabbing
the phone and calling Merritt
for some audio humping.
#betrayal
#fiction
#home
#sex
#tanka
106 reads
0 Comments
BaldyBrown
Poem Published
23rd Jan 2025 8:29am
23rd Jan 2025 8:29am
Right By the Balls
Going on sixty-four, I've developed a dangerous penchant for change. Captain sparky would quickly point out the fact that probably 97 percent of us at this age have a steady bearing away from the same, and for obvious reasons. Indeed, my most resent plunge into uncharted waters has found me clinging to a frail piece of bark with nearly all of my earthly possessions and financial assets lost at sea. Like a repulsive shot of back-woods corn mash, I love it. My mother was smoking something when I was in the oven.
Her & I discovered that our dreams collided, so I’ve taken my...
Her & I discovered that our dreams collided, so I’ve taken my...
#betrayal
#disappointment
#gratitude
#MovingOn
#rejection
29 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2025 2:26pm
22nd Jan 2025 2:26pm
Ignore Him. It's Just An Empty Threat.
Open the
door, you cheating bitch! I
know that you are in there and letting
some jerk bang you with his rod! I am saying right
now that unless you open this door,
I am coming in with
a shotgun!
door, you cheating bitch! I
know that you are in there and letting
some jerk bang you with his rod! I am saying right
now that unless you open this door,
I am coming in with
a shotgun!
#betrayal
#dialogue
#fiction
#home
#sex
69 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
20th Jan 2025 9:40pm
20th Jan 2025 9:40pm
Only in life you'll feel this pain
Phone calls, friends, Valentine's Day cards, cats, birthday parties and the countless games that make people hurt, cry, laugh etc.
These things are hands that stick out the window and catch you and break your fall after you have thrown yourself off the roof
The sound of their voices, the pain they inflict, the games they play
The noise
The noise keeps you from going insane
It keeps your mind off your mind
Down the road in an ordinary house of the alive, there is darkness & silence
You can hear the water dripping off the roof of your skull
There's...
These things are hands that stick out the window and catch you and break your fall after you have thrown yourself off the roof
The sound of their voices, the pain they inflict, the games they play
The noise
The noise keeps you from going insane
It keeps your mind off your mind
Down the road in an ordinary house of the alive, there is darkness & silence
You can hear the water dripping off the roof of your skull
There's...
#betrayal
#friendship
#LifeStruggles
#manipulation
#suicide
76 reads
11 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
20th Jan 2025 12:43pm
20th Jan 2025 12:43pm
Be aware, look out!
A job worth doing is a job worth doing well, so they say
Efficiency and frugality are virtues at any age
You work hard for the boss
You play ball for the coach
Pull for the team
Be true to your school
Keep your eyes and ears open and your mouth shut
Look out for number one
Be strong
Strive for perfection in everything you do
People who do what they are told can be the most terrifying
Be one step ahead of your "friends" and surroundings
Look out!
Efficiency and frugality are virtues at any age
You work hard for the boss
You play ball for the coach
Pull for the team
Be true to your school
Keep your eyes and ears open and your mouth shut
Look out for number one
Be strong
Strive for perfection in everything you do
People who do what they are told can be the most terrifying
Be one step ahead of your "friends" and surroundings
Look out!
#betrayal
#lies
#philosophical #TruthOfLife
#philosophical #TruthOfLife
65 reads
16 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
20th Jan 2025 11:35am
20th Jan 2025 11:35am
I Do Not Let Myself Do Threesomes!
I was just never enough
for you! Is that it?! I know
because I found this bitch
in the closet getting ready
to strip and hump your ass!
We're supposed to share
this wonderful moment
together! I do not let
myself do threesomes!
for you! Is that it?! I know
because I found this bitch
in the closet getting ready
to strip and hump your ass!
We're supposed to share
this wonderful moment
together! I do not let
myself do threesomes!
#betrayal
#dialogue
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#sex
68 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 12:10pm
19th Jan 2025 12:10pm
Endless Night
Today I returned
Awakened
Harmony divided
In my faith
Past memories
God is who I hate
Searching the betrayal
Shadows of light
Silent Tomorrow's
Endless night's
Awakened
Harmony divided
In my faith
Past memories
God is who I hate
Searching the betrayal
Shadows of light
Silent Tomorrow's
Endless night's
#betrayal
#night
#religion
#rhyming
#spiritual
68 reads
5 Comments
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