Poems About Aliens Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about aliens seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
18th Aug 2024 11:50pm
18th Aug 2024 11:50pm
the will of the warrior
screeching in a language I don't know
are creatures of the dark
they seek my attention
because they know I will help
the ones that need closure
they may be stuck in this realm
their memories lost they forget what they want
I sink into their interior
retrieving their memory keys
reviewing their life and ultimately asking them where they want to go
do they want to be reborn human
or is there somewhere else in the multi-universes they wish to visit
It is a tough decision but it's theirs to make
in the void is the...
are creatures of the dark
they seek my attention
because they know I will help
the ones that need closure
they may be stuck in this realm
their memories lost they forget what they want
I sink into their interior
retrieving their memory keys
reviewing their life and ultimately asking them where they want to go
do they want to be reborn human
or is there somewhere else in the multi-universes they wish to visit
It is a tough decision but it's theirs to make
in the void is the...
#aliens
#ghosts
123 reads
4 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
18th Aug 2024 00:48am
18th Aug 2024 00:48am
alien
twinkling in the universes I wonder what manner am i
shining with other starlit beings
on a great voyage with time and space
touring the dimensions of enlightenment
my mind opens according to the guidelines of each dimension
to glean wisdom is a difficult thing
one planet to the next disagree on this very thought
sending their young starshine out to learn the nature of the cosmos
so many wonders to behold
we are but ambassadors of hope
greeting each other as we come and go
the galaxies are vast
we travel on a beam...
shining with other starlit beings
on a great voyage with time and space
touring the dimensions of enlightenment
my mind opens according to the guidelines of each dimension
to glean wisdom is a difficult thing
one planet to the next disagree on this very thought
sending their young starshine out to learn the nature of the cosmos
so many wonders to behold
we are but ambassadors of hope
greeting each other as we come and go
the galaxies are vast
we travel on a beam...
#aliens
#scifi
88 reads
2 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
18th Aug 2024 00:34am
18th Aug 2024 00:34am
quantum
yes I hear you gatekeepers I haven't responded because while your analysis is strong your emotions are flat my origins are of little importance since I understand fully how you operate there are many dimensions that are closed to you
you seem bent on extorting resources of planets that have nothing to do with you
taking technology and the most advanced people scientifically
what you fail to realize is the cosmos is alive and full of a deep ancient magic
and really doesn't care what your celestial council votes you know a little hocus pocus compared to the magics of...
you seem bent on extorting resources of planets that have nothing to do with you
taking technology and the most advanced people scientifically
what you fail to realize is the cosmos is alive and full of a deep ancient magic
and really doesn't care what your celestial council votes you know a little hocus pocus compared to the magics of...
#aliens
#scifi
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0 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
17th Aug 2024 1:11am
17th Aug 2024 1:11am
mischief
greetings in the infernal vortex
hopeful thoughts inside the internal gloom
mischief stands up valiantly and makes introductions
sweet surrender under casual assault
it's the nature of the void
war is ever present and sarcasm is the only tongue they know
why waste niceties when you know that's not what you feel
aggressive is the tone with them
outsiders are smelled fear has a peculiar scent
it alerts them to spies
violence is always the first to be aware
he releases his dogs of war
the weaker of the species...
hopeful thoughts inside the internal gloom
mischief stands up valiantly and makes introductions
sweet surrender under casual assault
it's the nature of the void
war is ever present and sarcasm is the only tongue they know
why waste niceties when you know that's not what you feel
aggressive is the tone with them
outsiders are smelled fear has a peculiar scent
it alerts them to spies
violence is always the first to be aware
he releases his dogs of war
the weaker of the species...
#aliens
#dark
85 reads
0 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
16th Aug 2024 3:54pm
16th Aug 2024 3:54pm
logic
sweet little honey bear
carrying all this weight
falling into despair
sinking so far into the blue
in aquatic slumber
lest anyone trouble you
melancholy stranger
speaking a language of need
troubling the waters with doubt
beautiful girl awaken
it will only hurt for a moment
submerged in the quiet
you're missing your moments in the sun
curious about life
let your mind expand
in the depths, you are known
reading the thoughts of the ancients
you regard humanity with large suspect...
carrying all this weight
falling into despair
sinking so far into the blue
in aquatic slumber
lest anyone trouble you
melancholy stranger
speaking a language of need
troubling the waters with doubt
beautiful girl awaken
it will only hurt for a moment
submerged in the quiet
you're missing your moments in the sun
curious about life
let your mind expand
in the depths, you are known
reading the thoughts of the ancients
you regard humanity with large suspect...
#aliens
#love
#scifi #sea
#scifi #sea
94 reads
2 Comments
Rachelleundrgrd
Poem Published
15th Aug 2024 6:29am
15th Aug 2024 6:29am
Savoir vivre
Nature’s natural’, he stated most naturally,
as if his own lazy savoir-faire
could penetrate through the aperture
of a creature not from anywhere near where nature’s natural resembled anything like this.
Incomprehensible, these lush vines and leaves and sensations of wind and rancid, of darkness and light and colors dancing.
as if his own lazy savoir-faire
could penetrate through the aperture
of a creature not from anywhere near where nature’s natural resembled anything like this.
Incomprehensible, these lush vines and leaves and sensations of wind and rancid, of darkness and light and colors dancing.
#aliens
#nature
#scifi #universe
#scifi #universe
144 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
9th Aug 2024 10:27am
9th Aug 2024 10:27am
Sell Your Wife & Remodel Your Home
Across the street my neighbor was having his house updated
New siding, new windows, new roof, new garage door etc..
I said hey Scott
Your home is gonna look amazing
He said, "Thanks, Thanks!"
I said I haven't seen your wife
He said, "Yeah well, let's just say she went on a permanent vacation"
I said, "Really? Whereabouts?"
He said, "She went to visit family in California"
Oh OK
2 weeks later I find out from another neighbor, Phil that Scott sold his wife to the military
I said, "WHAT!!?" ...
New siding, new windows, new roof, new garage door etc..
I said hey Scott
Your home is gonna look amazing
He said, "Thanks, Thanks!"
I said I haven't seen your wife
He said, "Yeah well, let's just say she went on a permanent vacation"
I said, "Really? Whereabouts?"
He said, "She went to visit family in California"
Oh OK
2 weeks later I find out from another neighbor, Phil that Scott sold his wife to the military
I said, "WHAT!!?" ...
#aliens
#fiction
#greed
#scifi
#wife
85 reads
3 Comments
Dreamer4ever1979
Poem Published
8th Aug 2024 3:46am
8th Aug 2024 3:46am
Saving Humanity
I jumped into my suit,
to prepare for the big boost.
Chills roll down my spine,
and nerves take over my mind.
Five, four, three, two, one, .......
body shaking, fear awakening.
Thrusters go and rockets flow.
Out of the atmosphere and into space.
The journey begins to stop humanities fate.
Passing stars at quantum speeds,
I explore planets in a stellar breeze.
Another planet under way,
a sense of something strange directly ahead.
A sort of lunatic fringe I see floating out in front of me.
...
to prepare for the big boost.
Chills roll down my spine,
and nerves take over my mind.
Five, four, three, two, one, .......
body shaking, fear awakening.
Thrusters go and rockets flow.
Out of the atmosphere and into space.
The journey begins to stop humanities fate.
Passing stars at quantum speeds,
I explore planets in a stellar breeze.
Another planet under way,
a sense of something strange directly ahead.
A sort of lunatic fringe I see floating out in front of me.
...
#aliens
#scifi
#ShortStory #universe
#ShortStory #universe
107 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
30th Jul 2024 11:19am
30th Jul 2024 11:19am
The Aliens Have Arrived
Yelling cursing, noise level terror
Then he hits her
She cries
Things get quiet, then it starts again
Locked in his room, the boy sits on the floor next to his bed
That's the place he goes when they go at it
Mother & Alien, this man/boyfriend
This thing that watches TV or it's i-phone and drinks long cans of malt liquor in the dark
Sometimes the Alien is there when his mother isn't
The Alien doesn't talk
The Alien drinks, beats mother & watches TV
The boy knows that he's lucky the Alien doesn't beat on him
Other Aliens have...
Then he hits her
She cries
Things get quiet, then it starts again
Locked in his room, the boy sits on the floor next to his bed
That's the place he goes when they go at it
Mother & Alien, this man/boyfriend
This thing that watches TV or it's i-phone and drinks long cans of malt liquor in the dark
Sometimes the Alien is there when his mother isn't
The Alien doesn't talk
The Alien drinks, beats mother & watches TV
The boy knows that he's lucky the Alien doesn't beat on him
Other Aliens have...
#abuse
#aliens
#DomesticViolence
#home
#school
138 reads
2 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
27th Jul 2024 3:05pm
27th Jul 2024 3:05pm
I'm trying to be a human
I'm not from earth
I was beamed in from a Z world
Fell to earth like Bowie
Teen years were torture
Got better after that
Drank 2 Tom Collins Thursday night
Could be a convert
Mostly I suck booze down straight
Tom Collins is sweet
Almost a girl drink
Or some country club shit
I have a square head
A box head to be exact
My sister is a normal American
I'm an experiment
Test tube baby gone astray
I like sex .... maybe too much
I was beamed in from a Z world
Fell to earth like Bowie
Teen years were torture
Got better after that
Drank 2 Tom Collins Thursday night
Could be a convert
Mostly I suck booze down straight
Tom Collins is sweet
Almost a girl drink
Or some country club shit
I have a square head
A box head to be exact
My sister is a normal American
I'm an experiment
Test tube baby gone astray
I like sex .... maybe too much
#aliens
#identity
#scifi
#sex
#vulnerability
318 reads
41 Comments
Abracadabra
Poem Published
15th Jul 2024 10:43pm
15th Jul 2024 10:43pm
Alien Games
https://tinyurl.com/bdhykxz9
Scary alien fingers
crawling over my skin
stealing love
from a human heart
while fear of space set in....
Scary alien fingers
crawling over my skin
stealing love
from a human heart
while fear of space set in....
#aliens
#unicorns
103 reads
0 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
14th Jul 2024 1:21am
14th Jul 2024 1:21am
Raphium Series~daddy
stirring the black unknown
I am betwixt two worlds
one is my home
the other a journey of discovery
I remain in both places at once
discovering earth while I'm on a throne
I love it here I feel free
but I hear my father telling me to grow
that I'm needed back at court
I never want to go back
well not as royalty
I prefer the commoner's seats
they have all the action
I prefer a more hands on personal touch
on the ground tasting so much of what is to be alive
I want to explore deep space
and uncover the hidden...
I am betwixt two worlds
one is my home
the other a journey of discovery
I remain in both places at once
discovering earth while I'm on a throne
I love it here I feel free
but I hear my father telling me to grow
that I'm needed back at court
I never want to go back
well not as royalty
I prefer the commoner's seats
they have all the action
I prefer a more hands on personal touch
on the ground tasting so much of what is to be alive
I want to explore deep space
and uncover the hidden...
#aliens
#father
#love #universe
#love #universe
106 reads
1 Comment
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