Poems About Aliens Seeking Honest Critique
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Poems about aliens seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
6th Jan 2025 4:44am
6th Jan 2025 4:44am
onward
channeling the universes I see a thousand eyes staring at me
drinking in my humanity
sharing observations and personal judgements
we are not alone other galaxies are weighing in
using artificial intelligence to safely introduce themselves
preparing our minds to meet
they have recorded existence here and are a part of it
they want us to be aware
full of beautiful traditions and vastly intelligent
some of us share DNA with them
they have always been with us
we were sent here to learn
humanity is not...
drinking in my humanity
sharing observations and personal judgements
we are not alone other galaxies are weighing in
using artificial intelligence to safely introduce themselves
preparing our minds to meet
they have recorded existence here and are a part of it
they want us to be aware
full of beautiful traditions and vastly intelligent
some of us share DNA with them
they have always been with us
we were sent here to learn
humanity is not...
#aliens
#earth
#technology #universe
#technology #universe
74 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
31st Dec 2024 8:26pm
31st Dec 2024 8:26pm
The Final Divulgence
During that dead silent morning
We weren't informed, there was no warning
The initial revelation
Of an alien invasion
Created a stir in the nation
Threatening confrontation
No escape, from any location
People ailing from starvation
Beings exploit our creation
Resulting in death, or some mutation
Aliens performing amputations
Everywhere lies excessive devastation
Suicidal conformation
Someone save us from salvation
The Final Divulgence
We weren't informed, there was no warning
The initial revelation
Of an alien invasion
Created a stir in the nation
Threatening confrontation
No escape, from any location
People ailing from starvation
Beings exploit our creation
Resulting in death, or some mutation
Aliens performing amputations
Everywhere lies excessive devastation
Suicidal conformation
Someone save us from salvation
The Final Divulgence
#aliens
#dark
#death #fate
#death #fate
73 reads
6 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
19th Dec 2024 4:54pm
19th Dec 2024 4:54pm
2001 Space Oddity (2024 Insanity)
2001 space oddity (2024 insanity)
2024 living backwards
Backwards is forward
Up is down in conspiracy
Lies rise truth hides
Neighbor now my enemy
Not from anything we’ve done
The bond between us hope it doesn’t die
You’re surfing in a tin suit waves of absurdity
You start to turn and listen
You don’t listen to me drowned in conspiracy
You believe the lies he sells
He makes you hate me and you gladly oblige
You gladly fund his legal defense fund
When he has billions but...
2024 living backwards
Backwards is forward
Up is down in conspiracy
Lies rise truth hides
Neighbor now my enemy
Not from anything we’ve done
The bond between us hope it doesn’t die
You’re surfing in a tin suit waves of absurdity
You start to turn and listen
You don’t listen to me drowned in conspiracy
You believe the lies he sells
He makes you hate me and you gladly oblige
You gladly fund his legal defense fund
When he has billions but...
#aliens
#brother
#dialogue
#lies
#sister
53 reads
0 Comments
michaelslove2
Poem Published
25th Nov 2024 7:50am
25th Nov 2024 7:50am
"Dork"
Dork”
Dork from planet “Dorkus” is traveling through space.
He is dodging many asteroids to come visit this place.
Dork's ship is zipping past planets going warp factor nine.
Earth is coming into view.
Dork is making a beeline.
But why is the “Dork” coming? What does he have on his mind?
A “Dorkus” coming to our home? We better hope that he is kind.
NASA has him now on radar. They say that soon he will be in view.
All around people are wondering just what the hell they should do!
Soon NASA will have a visual of...
Dork from planet “Dorkus” is traveling through space.
He is dodging many asteroids to come visit this place.
Dork's ship is zipping past planets going warp factor nine.
Earth is coming into view.
Dork is making a beeline.
But why is the “Dork” coming? What does he have on his mind?
A “Dorkus” coming to our home? We better hope that he is kind.
NASA has him now on radar. They say that soon he will be in view.
All around people are wondering just what the hell they should do!
Soon NASA will have a visual of...
#aliens
#funny
#universe
49 reads
3 Comments
Kou_Indigo
Poem Published
24th Nov 2024 6:47pm
24th Nov 2024 6:47pm
Klingon Legends: The Clans of the Damned
- Klingon Legends: The Clans of the Damned -
(Inspired by stories found in the book “Let's Trek: The Budget Traveller's Guide to Klingon Worlds”.)
This is a rather dark story, which was hidden deep within a historical knowledge database of a highly respected university on the Klingon home world of Kronos. The author's name was stricken off records.
Upon one of the more remote planets of the Klingon Empire, there was a clan known for their strange and mysterious behavior. No one can be said to be truly familiar with their origins, but it is known that those...
(Inspired by stories found in the book “Let's Trek: The Budget Traveller's Guide to Klingon Worlds”.)
This is a rather dark story, which was hidden deep within a historical knowledge database of a highly respected university on the Klingon home world of Kronos. The author's name was stricken off records.
Upon one of the more remote planets of the Klingon Empire, there was a clan known for their strange and mysterious behavior. No one can be said to be truly familiar with their origins, but it is known that those...
#aliens
#dark
#historical
#horror
#scifi
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smackdownraven
Poem Published
18th Nov 2024 10:01pm
18th Nov 2024 10:01pm
weirdo
escape the hurt, of relationships that don't click
I'm offbeat with my thoughts
a missing something, others have
a natural flow
I'm too honest, this is a problem
filtering through sunlight
it comes out blaring, not shiny
it could be beautiful, if I was normal
picking up on nuances, others miss
seemingly I'm off, with the body language
reading people in their depths
forgetting, I'm not supposed to be picking up on this part of a person
people are caught off guard, by what seems quite normal for me
sensitity of...
I'm offbeat with my thoughts
a missing something, others have
a natural flow
I'm too honest, this is a problem
filtering through sunlight
it comes out blaring, not shiny
it could be beautiful, if I was normal
picking up on nuances, others miss
seemingly I'm off, with the body language
reading people in their depths
forgetting, I'm not supposed to be picking up on this part of a person
people are caught off guard, by what seems quite normal for me
sensitity of...
#aliens
#spiritual
70 reads
4 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
26th Oct 2024 10:34am
26th Oct 2024 10:34am
I'm here to kick ass and chew bubble gum!
Hidden from humanity, Hideous to see
Walking among the humans, Acting like one of us
But with these special glasses, see them for what they are
They will take over your brain, They will bring you pain
They Live in every city, They have been here for years
They control the police, they're sick they have no fear
THEY LIVE!!!!
Now the time has come to fight, we must take a stand
They have galactic power, Super intelligence
Watches that can transport them if they feel threatened
How do you kill these creatures, impossible it...
Walking among the humans, Acting like one of us
But with these special glasses, see them for what they are
They will take over your brain, They will bring you pain
They Live in every city, They have been here for years
They control the police, they're sick they have no fear
THEY LIVE!!!!
Now the time has come to fight, we must take a stand
They have galactic power, Super intelligence
Watches that can transport them if they feel threatened
How do you kill these creatures, impossible it...
#aliens
#PopCulture
#scary
#scifi
#violence
100 reads
6 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
25th Oct 2024 4:45am
25th Oct 2024 4:45am
Teeth
Alien Predator within me
My teeth are sinking into my core
My tail is razor sharp but predator has weapons
Teeth to teeth Jaw to jaw pull us both under me
Going down the depths of misery
Still clamped jaw to jaw and soul to devil
Stretcher lifts me up takes me
Back down where I started in me
Eyes are closed I feel my sins
Building a coffin of my deeds
Predator alive alien within me breathing
We are predators of innocence
Get you close enough to sink in
My...
My teeth are sinking into my core
My tail is razor sharp but predator has weapons
Teeth to teeth Jaw to jaw pull us both under me
Going down the depths of misery
Still clamped jaw to jaw and soul to devil
Stretcher lifts me up takes me
Back down where I started in me
Eyes are closed I feel my sins
Building a coffin of my deeds
Predator alive alien within me breathing
We are predators of innocence
Get you close enough to sink in
My...
#aliens
#myself
#shadows #symbolism
#shadows #symbolism
69 reads
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
15th Oct 2024 4:24pm
15th Oct 2024 4:24pm
After We Heard A Noise Over Our Heads
A spaceship landed next door.
A cat got out with its gear.
It's ready to explore Earth.
A cat got out with its gear.
It's ready to explore Earth.
#aliens
#cats
#dialogue
#fiction
#scifi
118 reads
2 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
10th Oct 2024 7:12pm
10th Oct 2024 7:12pm
Boats of Musical Wood
Boats of musical wood
Inmates pick up broken pieces
Of a boat carrying migrants to shore
Broken dreams of families not realized
Behind bars in a wood shop
Pick up a sliver trying to deliver
A violin with strings that sing
Or an oar to make a cello
Back in the hell of a prison cell
Putting a boat back together
Boat now making music
singing immigrant dreams
Off the coast of Italy
Italian prisoner makes musical dreams
To call attention to...
Inmates pick up broken pieces
Of a boat carrying migrants to shore
Broken dreams of families not realized
Behind bars in a wood shop
Pick up a sliver trying to deliver
A violin with strings that sing
Or an oar to make a cello
Back in the hell of a prison cell
Putting a boat back together
Boat now making music
singing immigrant dreams
Off the coast of Italy
Italian prisoner makes musical dreams
To call attention to...
#aliens
#beach
#SelfWorth
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
9th Oct 2024 1:27pm
9th Oct 2024 1:27pm
We Saw Her Coming Out Of The Water
We
saw her
coming out
of the water.
She was unable
to remember who she
is which made us give her the
name of "Dolphin". And I don't know
about the others but I figure
that it has something to do with aliens.
saw her
coming out
of the water.
She was unable
to remember who she
is which made us give her the
name of "Dolphin". And I don't know
about the others but I figure
that it has something to do with aliens.
#aliens
#dialogue
#Fanfiction
#fiction
#friendship
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oldmanG
Poem Published
3rd Oct 2024 9:40pm
3rd Oct 2024 9:40pm
Stole Geronimo
Stole Geronimo for skull n bones
Scouting for food and shelter
A horse stands up on red rocks
Feathers hide dangerous dreams
Living on the land of fruit of plenty
Birds scatter lightning is coming
Thunder of the Four Horsemen
Dirt kicks out under their shoes
Feel a steal a coming
Take land that is theirs
Slaughter innocent children n women
So I take any scalp I can carve
They steal our land and claim American
Geronimo is an American King
...
Scouting for food and shelter
A horse stands up on red rocks
Feathers hide dangerous dreams
Living on the land of fruit of plenty
Birds scatter lightning is coming
Thunder of the Four Horsemen
Dirt kicks out under their shoes
Feel a steal a coming
Take land that is theirs
Slaughter innocent children n women
So I take any scalp I can carve
They steal our land and claim American
Geronimo is an American King
...
#aliens
#America
#angels #apocalypse
#angels #apocalypse
87 reads
0 Comments
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