Poems About Alcohol by Top Critiquers
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Poems about alcohol by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Random thoughts from the hangover hammock
#love
#alcohol
#SelfReflection
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Mingle Hells
Jingle bells, the night prevails,
the skull full of vodka sways.
Through the snow the spirits flow
in a haze of holiday craze.
Silent nights with blurry sights.
Laughter echoes in the air.
Raise a toast to the ghost
of memories we all share.
Cheers to friends and to the ends
of bottles lined in a row.
In the glow let it show.
The warmth of hearts we know.
Jingle bells, the story tells
of nights both wild and bright.
With the skull full of vodka
we toast to the festive light.
the skull full of vodka sways.
Through the snow the spirits flow
in a haze of holiday craze.
Silent nights with blurry sights.
Laughter echoes in the air.
Raise a toast to the ghost
of memories we all share.
Cheers to friends and to the ends
of bottles lined in a row.
In the glow let it show.
The warmth of hearts we know.
Jingle bells, the story tells
of nights both wild and bright.
With the skull full of vodka
we toast to the festive light.
#alcohol
#Christmas
#hell
#holiday
#lies
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Alcohol
Family is an anomaly.
Truth is always pain.
And alcohol is the only way,
My worries go down the drain.
I am not a casualty.
They try so hard to accomodate to me.
I'm a useless alcoholic brain.
I thought everytime I fell,
They'd be easy to entertain.
I tried to love, but i'm not free.
My master will not let me be.
I'm tied up;
He's still bound to me.
I wish I could have my personality.
Family is not there, you see.
All real friends become fake to me.
I'm not all I used to be. ...
Truth is always pain.
And alcohol is the only way,
My worries go down the drain.
I am not a casualty.
They try so hard to accomodate to me.
I'm a useless alcoholic brain.
I thought everytime I fell,
They'd be easy to entertain.
I tried to love, but i'm not free.
My master will not let me be.
I'm tied up;
He's still bound to me.
I wish I could have my personality.
Family is not there, you see.
All real friends become fake to me.
I'm not all I used to be. ...
#love
#alcohol
#rhyming
558 reads
10 Comments
f**k Your Fruity Beer
Seriously.
Cut it out with that
grapefruit and berry shit.
I only want beer in my beer.
And not that wussy "lite" stuff, either.
(Fizzy pee water)
I want a beer that can
match my darkest thoughts,
one that smells like sweat
and tastes like earth
and smacks me in the neurons
I want to feel it in my mouth,
(that's what she said)
metallic and heady
lingering like a bitter memory
of discipline
and dirty knees
Cut it out with that
grapefruit and berry shit.
I only want beer in my beer.
And not that wussy "lite" stuff, either.
(Fizzy pee water)
I want a beer that can
match my darkest thoughts,
one that smells like sweat
and tastes like earth
and smacks me in the neurons
I want to feel it in my mouth,
(that's what she said)
metallic and heady
lingering like a bitter memory
of discipline
and dirty knees
#anger
#alcohol
#sensual
640 reads
16 Comments
Taster’s Choice
Mm… my Black Panther King, prefers the soothing taste of my Sex On The Beach saturation all over his tongue, he swears by faith it keeps his tongue refreshed and wet
He says it’s so much more intoxicating than a shot of an old Bloody Mary anytime
Taster’s Choice
He says it’s so much more intoxicating than a shot of an old Bloody Mary anytime
Taster’s Choice
#alcohol
229 reads
Liquid Echoes Of Despair
chasing shadows lost
inside an empty shot glass
whiskey and false hope
inside an empty shot glass
whiskey and false hope
#addiction
#alcohol
#senryu #temptation
#senryu #temptation
107 reads
4 Comments
What's the occasion?...
Lost your job? Let's drink
Got a new job? Hey, let's drink
It's Monday....Let's drink
Got a new job? Hey, let's drink
It's Monday....Let's drink
#alcohol
#funny
#LifeGoals
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Traveler with words
Traveler with words
Within the seclusion of a docile mind
Hides a follower with clocks for eyes
A sellers of prose with gifted lines
The Skull knows
No end to rhyme
His beer stein half empty
His heart over full
Crashing the party
Breaking our most boring rules
He rides on three wheels
some say he looks cool
if you get on his bad side
you'll be the fool
a wordsmith, a bard
has a gift with his tongue
swoon worthy savvy
he's sired plenty of young
Pour out the bourbon ...
Within the seclusion of a docile mind
Hides a follower with clocks for eyes
A sellers of prose with gifted lines
The Skull knows
No end to rhyme
His beer stein half empty
His heart over full
Crashing the party
Breaking our most boring rules
He rides on three wheels
some say he looks cool
if you get on his bad side
you'll be the fool
a wordsmith, a bard
has a gift with his tongue
swoon worthy savvy
he's sired plenty of young
Pour out the bourbon ...
#alcohol
#passion
545 reads
2 Comments
A Why In Every While
Ah, how high i am taken !
When i read about Nature
And then, terribly shaken
To read a poem of self-torture
How desperate, then i feel !
To know you are barely twenty
But the joys of life you kill
While your blessings grow plenty
Shall you some day wake up and see
Your life's been vainly wasted
Between drugs, flesh and fake poetry
Finally, alas! nothing sweetly tasted
You have the power to break the walls
No regrets of the bad life and past
When you give deaf ear to evil's calls ...
When i read about Nature
And then, terribly shaken
To read a poem of self-torture
How desperate, then i feel !
To know you are barely twenty
But the joys of life you kill
While your blessings grow plenty
Shall you some day wake up and see
Your life's been vainly wasted
Between drugs, flesh and fake poetry
Finally, alas! nothing sweetly tasted
You have the power to break the walls
No regrets of the bad life and past
When you give deaf ear to evil's calls ...
#BDSM
#money
#alcohol
#addiction
#consumerism
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0 Comments
Shotgun
When I was young the hairs on the back of my neck would stand up
But now that I'm more mature, and don't give a fuck
No matter money, sex, or weather
i stalk my prey, regardless of whether
I know you, or we use to be friends
You start screaming, "my life has just started how can it end
But we just had sex, don't you love me
There are those that are determined to call me Destiny
How did I know that you would consume smoke and drink
How did I know that you would let me think
Lay back, take it easy, let me drive for a while ...
But now that I'm more mature, and don't give a fuck
No matter money, sex, or weather
i stalk my prey, regardless of whether
I know you, or we use to be friends
You start screaming, "my life has just started how can it end
But we just had sex, don't you love me
There are those that are determined to call me Destiny
How did I know that you would consume smoke and drink
How did I know that you would let me think
Lay back, take it easy, let me drive for a while ...
#dark
#death
#alcohol #drugs
#alcohol #drugs
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2 Comments
Narcissistic Cowboys
Narcissistic cowboys
with crow feet and tattoos
a Harley and 6 pack of booze
with worn-out clutch
living in deceit
in their last rodeo
on a highway to hell
with no more...
"Boot Scootin' Boogie"
with crow feet and tattoos
a Harley and 6 pack of booze
with worn-out clutch
living in deceit
in their last rodeo
on a highway to hell
with no more...
"Boot Scootin' Boogie"
#alcohol
#denial
#emptiness
#greed
#loneliness
145 reads
8 Comments
Red Wine
Red wine
On my palate
A soft scent
Of lilac
From a candle
As I
Indulge
In the
Sensual
Ambrosia
Flavor
Of your
Intimacy
I savor
The taste
Rolling off your
Nipples
Down
To your navel
I stick my tongue
In the pool
Then drink
Till it’s empty
Yet to get my fill
I Descend
To the depths
Devour
The crest
Of a female
So blessed
Now
Let me bless
Your elegance
With my skill ...
On my palate
A soft scent
Of lilac
From a candle
As I
Indulge
In the
Sensual
Ambrosia
Flavor
Of your
Intimacy
I savor
The taste
Rolling off your
Nipples
Down
To your navel
I stick my tongue
In the pool
Then drink
Till it’s empty
Yet to get my fill
I Descend
To the depths
Devour
The crest
Of a female
So blessed
Now
Let me bless
Your elegance
With my skill ...
#erotic
#alcohol
#tobacco
#sensual
#crush
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