Poems About Alcohol by Top Critiquers
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Poems about alcohol by top critiquers. Poems written by members who have given lots of feedback to other poets this month.
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
21st Mar 2025 10:07pm
21st Mar 2025 10:07pm
One night at the bar
A man minding his own business is sitting in a bar.
Enjoying some downtime after a hard days work.
Sometime later, a drunken, loud, brash man comes stumbling in.
He's causing a raucous all around him.
He sits his ass down right near the quiet man.
This drunk stunk of sweat and booze.
The drunk fuck turned to the quiet man and said, "What's your issue? Why do you look like that? Why do you look troubled?"
The quiet man said, "No issue, just minding my own business".
The drunk didn't like that answer and continued...
Enjoying some downtime after a hard days work.
Sometime later, a drunken, loud, brash man comes stumbling in.
He's causing a raucous all around him.
He sits his ass down right near the quiet man.
This drunk stunk of sweat and booze.
The drunk fuck turned to the quiet man and said, "What's your issue? Why do you look like that? Why do you look troubled?"
The quiet man said, "No issue, just minding my own business".
The drunk didn't like that answer and continued...
#alcohol
#anger
#bullying
#ShortStory
#violence
43 reads
5 Comments
TheOralizer
Poem Published
5th Jun 2021 2:07pm
5th Jun 2021 2:07pm
THE TASTE WAS DELICIOUS
I had often
thought about
how it would
taste, what
the texture
would feel
like in my mouth;
would it be
sweet, bitter,
or maybe salty.
I thought it
over and bought
a piece of octopus
from a street vendor;
to my surprise
The taste was delicious.
Have you ever
been surprised by
a new taste?
thought about
how it would
taste, what
the texture
would feel
like in my mouth;
would it be
sweet, bitter,
or maybe salty.
I thought it
over and bought
a piece of octopus
from a street vendor;
to my surprise
The taste was delicious.
Have you ever
been surprised by
a new taste?
#alcohol
#coffee
#food #tea
#food #tea
396 reads
4 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
15th Nov 2024 6:42pm
15th Nov 2024 6:42pm
We were both married so screwing was a no go ..
That lasted about 2 drinks
Then innocence took a back seat
City Life is a meat grinder
You can tenderize and flame
Some like her well done
I took her medium with luscious pink
Bukowski was at the table in the corner
Hunter S. Thompson too
Wasted in the smokey dark heat
Comparing poetry and fright
I was at home with Sha Sha
Lou Reed stopped by to say hello
She didn't say much
Her English was a vacancy
We communicated in shy glances
Touched each other in places...
Then innocence took a back seat
City Life is a meat grinder
You can tenderize and flame
Some like her well done
I took her medium with luscious pink
Bukowski was at the table in the corner
Hunter S. Thompson too
Wasted in the smokey dark heat
Comparing poetry and fright
I was at home with Sha Sha
Lou Reed stopped by to say hello
She didn't say much
Her English was a vacancy
We communicated in shy glances
Touched each other in places...
#alcohol
#PopCulture
#risk
#temptation
#ThrillSeeking
207 reads
26 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
25th Mar 2023 9:49pm
25th Mar 2023 9:49pm
Random thoughts from the hangover hammock
#love
#alcohol
#SelfReflection
282 reads
13 Comments
Ahavati
Tams
Tams
Poem Published
18th Feb 2019 00:15am
18th Feb 2019 00:15am
Anal Cabal
Prince Nala lie back
on an abaca hammock
enjoying fresh bacca
and masala under a gossamer
cabana aside the Ganges River—
natural light seeping
through its beautiful weave—
acacia-branched shadows
moving as smoke atop the fabric.
As servants tended blains
upon the soles of his feet,
he supped while contemplating
penning an alcaic verse
for his Princess Damayanti
( having been chosen
as her wedded husband
so many years ago...
on an abaca hammock
enjoying fresh bacca
and masala under a gossamer
cabana aside the Ganges River—
natural light seeping
through its beautiful weave—
acacia-branched shadows
moving as smoke atop the fabric.
As servants tended blains
upon the soles of his feet,
he supped while contemplating
penning an alcaic verse
for his Princess Damayanti
( having been chosen
as her wedded husband
so many years ago...
#love
#alcohol
#historical
#philosophical
#morality
1331 reads
25 Comments
wallyroo92
Poem Published
4th Sep 2020 8:21am
4th Sep 2020 8:21am
The Urn
I remember making that call,
When I finally found you again,
I can still recall hearing your voice,
You broke down –
With a hallelujah and an amen.
I couldn’t believe it when I saw you,
You had turned into an old man,
But I was happy that we found you,
As you hobbled –
I didn’t really comprehend.
I had imagined you somewhat different,
As you had been thirteen years before,
But the things which happened to you,
Took away so much –
All that you loved and more.
The good word had always...
When I finally found you again,
I can still recall hearing your voice,
You broke down –
With a hallelujah and an amen.
I couldn’t believe it when I saw you,
You had turned into an old man,
But I was happy that we found you,
As you hobbled –
I didn’t really comprehend.
I had imagined you somewhat different,
As you had been thirteen years before,
But the things which happened to you,
Took away so much –
All that you loved and more.
The good word had always...
#father
#death
#alcohol
#drugs
#addiction
549 reads
10 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
27th Nov 2022 1:42pm
27th Nov 2022 1:42pm
UNDER THE INFLUENCE
#sex
#alcohol
#rhyming
414 reads
4 Comments
WillowsWhimsies
Poem Published
1st Jan 2025 8:18pm
1st Jan 2025 8:18pm
bottlecap: troublesome waters
last time I found myself in this position
his arrogance was...unintentionally...triggered
can you believe he actually growled
where's my poem
you shoulda been thinking about me
you gotta do better
& I know what he means
I don't make demands or set terms
that's not who I am
but I don't make him guess either
I simply take a sip...(or two)...as suits my mood
& strip all inhibitions
showing him my...indecent inclinations
he's fully aware what happens when I'm in this...condition
walls drop & quiver as I shiver all...
his arrogance was...unintentionally...triggered
can you believe he actually growled
where's my poem
you shoulda been thinking about me
you gotta do better
& I know what he means
I don't make demands or set terms
that's not who I am
but I don't make him guess either
I simply take a sip...(or two)...as suits my mood
& strip all inhibitions
showing him my...indecent inclinations
he's fully aware what happens when I'm in this...condition
walls drop & quiver as I shiver all...
#alcohol
#lover
#passion
285 reads
11 Comments
Duende
Poem Published
26th Jun 2024 2:00pm
26th Jun 2024 2:00pm
Fluffy Duck
Come over here
my rock lobster
let me paloma
your paradise
dirty your bird
fluffy your duck
astro your pop
porto your flip
quick your fuck
holly your wood
nuts and berries
eye your candy
hello your kitty
test your pilot
let me be your
whiskey ginger
slippery nipple
mexican martini
sex on the beach
while red over heels
my rock lobster
let me paloma
your paradise
dirty your bird
fluffy your duck
astro your pop
porto your flip
quick your fuck
holly your wood
nuts and berries
eye your candy
hello your kitty
test your pilot
let me be your
whiskey ginger
slippery nipple
mexican martini
sex on the beach
while red over heels
#alcohol
#erotic
365 reads
14 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
9th Oct 2019 4:37am
9th Oct 2019 4:37am
Red Ride-a-Hood~with the talented HighlyFunctional
a shot for the blonde
she just giggles and looks away
on the rocks for peek-a-boo girl
underneath those black curls,
she’s still figuring out what her clit is for
be gentlemen they say
they're just barflies...
I just don't care anymore
I'll take home the next set of tits that walks in
a redhead and a wink later and I'm flying high
reserved look seals the deal
reeling her heart-shaped ass into my lap
odds are she's a screamer for all those shy looks
but even on my worst day
I'll make sure her orgasms are...
she just giggles and looks away
on the rocks for peek-a-boo girl
underneath those black curls,
she’s still figuring out what her clit is for
be gentlemen they say
they're just barflies...
I just don't care anymore
I'll take home the next set of tits that walks in
a redhead and a wink later and I'm flying high
reserved look seals the deal
reeling her heart-shaped ass into my lap
odds are she's a screamer for all those shy looks
but even on my worst day
I'll make sure her orgasms are...
#lust
#dark
#sex #alcohol
#sex #alcohol
992 reads
24 Comments
Ambjr
Poem Published
Today 00:07am
Today 00:07am
she waits for me
#addiction
#alcohol
#sensual #sexy
#sensual #sexy
65 reads
1 Comment
PAR
Poem Published
24th Nov 2024 12:46pm
24th Nov 2024 12:46pm
Mingle Hells
Jingle bells, the night prevails,
the skull full of vodka sways.
Through the snow the spirits flow
in a haze of holiday craze.
Silent nights with blurry sights.
Laughter echoes in the air.
Raise a toast to the ghost
of memories we all share.
Cheers to friends and to the ends
of bottles lined in a row.
In the glow let it show.
The warmth of hearts we know.
Jingle bells, the story tells
of nights both wild and bright.
With the skull full of vodka
we toast to the festive light.
the skull full of vodka sways.
Through the snow the spirits flow
in a haze of holiday craze.
Silent nights with blurry sights.
Laughter echoes in the air.
Raise a toast to the ghost
of memories we all share.
Cheers to friends and to the ends
of bottles lined in a row.
In the glow let it show.
The warmth of hearts we know.
Jingle bells, the story tells
of nights both wild and bright.
With the skull full of vodka
we toast to the festive light.
#alcohol
#Christmas
#hell
#holiday
#lies
116 reads
8 Comments
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