Poems About Admiration Seeking Honest Critique
#admiration
Poems about admiration seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
SHALL I COMPARE THEE....
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day,
if it moves you to lead me to the hay,
warmed by the waters of the flattery
poured out over your physical beauty -
or will you be the unmoved ice maiden
who insists on keeping your knickers on?
if it moves you to lead me to the hay,
warmed by the waters of the flattery
poured out over your physical beauty -
or will you be the unmoved ice maiden
who insists on keeping your knickers on?
#admiration
#beauty
#love
#relationships
#romantic
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Recognition into another life
It is a blessing to be able to share my life with you, 🤩 for sure you have been the very glue that held us together. AS we exchange thoughts and prayers in our lives. 💞 FOR that reason I grown to learn how much more, that you mean to me as a woman a friend and my better half.♀️ For sure we had our share of ups and downs but yet, that's what made us to be more stronger, than we've ever been in this relationship. 🥰 For as we become more than just friends, we became more than that to one another, through our time ⌚ yes together with patience and...
#admiration
#courage
#hope
#respect
#strength
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I am the conundrum
I am the conundrum
Facing the truth
While wondering
what we have here
More than nothing
I know that
Surely you feel the same
look at what we have here
It’s like saying you love someone
When you really don’t
And you leave it at that
goddamn
I am the conundrum
Fucking leave me
Or love me, but
You do you
goddamn
Where am I
Where you are
Leaves me falling right into
Your arms again.
…shit.
Facing the truth
While wondering
what we have here
More than nothing
I know that
Surely you feel the same
look at what we have here
It’s like saying you love someone
When you really don’t
And you leave it at that
goddamn
I am the conundrum
Fucking leave me
Or love me, but
You do you
goddamn
Where am I
Where you are
Leaves me falling right into
Your arms again.
…shit.
#admiration
#apathy
#confusion
#despair
#support
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4 Comments
Vibrations of the Infinite!!!!
Life is a neurosis, a substitute of divine suffering.
Accept your miseries for a chance of progression….
Stop thinking, what it may be.
Except what it is... Embrace as it is…
Harmonize with the nature around you.
That is innocent, untamed, and unbiased...
Let the mind's river, flow through your heart...
While witnessing the purity of the scheme, where…
The mind whispers, "We stand alone in this battle"!!
The heart counters, "No, we do not"!!
As we cross the thresholds of our perception,
We realize,...
Accept your miseries for a chance of progression….
Stop thinking, what it may be.
Except what it is... Embrace as it is…
Harmonize with the nature around you.
That is innocent, untamed, and unbiased...
Let the mind's river, flow through your heart...
While witnessing the purity of the scheme, where…
The mind whispers, "We stand alone in this battle"!!
The heart counters, "No, we do not"!!
As we cross the thresholds of our perception,
We realize,...
#admiration
#gratitude
#kindness
#love
#redemption
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Nights in Shades of Red
#admiration
#emotions
#gratitude
#happiness
#love
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6 Comments
You're touch
I pushed everyone away and you're still here
When i need to reach out you're always near
You're better than I am that's for sure
You got a heart so clean and pure
When its dark you bring the light
You bring the day to my end my night
I'm sorry how I can be at times
You deserve better than my whimpers and whines
I love you i need you I want you to stay
You're all I have dont go away
You understand me and that means so much
All I need in life is the feel of you're touch
When i need to reach out you're always near
You're better than I am that's for sure
You got a heart so clean and pure
When its dark you bring the light
You bring the day to my end my night
I'm sorry how I can be at times
You deserve better than my whimpers and whines
I love you i need you I want you to stay
You're all I have dont go away
You understand me and that means so much
All I need in life is the feel of you're touch
#admiration
#gratitude
#happiness #love
#happiness #love
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Tale of the hare (For Northern_Soul)
I often think of you
the hare burrowed
comfortably inside
my left ribcage,
rising up, stoking
fires in ivory glades,
carving ripples
in blood instead
of water and
fresh lakes,
a beacon as
to why some
still carry
on here.
the hare burrowed
comfortably inside
my left ribcage,
rising up, stoking
fires in ivory glades,
carving ripples
in blood instead
of water and
fresh lakes,
a beacon as
to why some
still carry
on here.
#admiration
#family
#LifeAsAWriter #respect
#LifeAsAWriter #respect
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~ethereal :: shadoe
viz : shadoe
#admiration
#inspirational
#love
#spiritual
#WritingPoetry
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Quercitron yellow
A lot of people would become yellow
some are yellow
Quercitron yellow?
no just yellow like a flower or another bee
you...me?
Quercitron like the only rising sun
setting. just letting the moon pass by
two equal beings bringing meaning to one another
Quercitron yellow
for each other...
some are yellow
Quercitron yellow?
no just yellow like a flower or another bee
you...me?
Quercitron like the only rising sun
setting. just letting the moon pass by
two equal beings bringing meaning to one another
Quercitron yellow
for each other...
#admiration
#emotions
#hope
#kindness
#love
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~just you.. that is never ever enough.. :: jestalessa
viz: jes
#admiration
#gratitude
#inspirational
#love
#WritingPoetry
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Her
What would DUP be
without
Her?
Fiery pen
Fiery soul
Laying down
Passion
Sorrow
Longing
Lustful abandon
In solid
Erotic
writes
There is so much more
In
Her
poetry.
Sharing
struggles
hardships
losses that
would sink
many others.
An advocate
supporter
collaborator
and
friend
In my journey
exploring
writing
visual art.
A voice in my head
saying
ignore what you think may please...
without
Her?
Fiery pen
Fiery soul
Laying down
Passion
Sorrow
Longing
Lustful abandon
In solid
Erotic
writes
There is so much more
In
Her
poetry.
Sharing
struggles
hardships
losses that
would sink
many others.
An advocate
supporter
collaborator
and
friend
In my journey
exploring
writing
visual art.
A voice in my head
saying
ignore what you think may please...
#admiration
#friendship
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12 Comments
Stephanie!
By Stanley Collymore
There are genuinelly numerous
nice people around and rather
similarly too there are simply
exceptionally and outstandingly remarkable ones whose usual normal interactions with
others is so obviously literally phenomenal
that it's specifically hard to very essentially
and effectively, crucially codify into words,
what this impression really is; except truly
to honestly and honourably communicate
that the fundamental effect it quite simply
has on the...
There are genuinelly numerous
nice people around and rather
similarly too there are simply
exceptionally and outstandingly remarkable ones whose usual normal interactions with
others is so obviously literally phenomenal
that it's specifically hard to very essentially
and effectively, crucially codify into words,
what this impression really is; except truly
to honestly and honourably communicate
that the fundamental effect it quite simply
has on the...
#admiration
#courage
#gratitude
#inspirational
#kindness
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DU Poetry : Poems About Admiration Seeking Honest Critique