Poems About Admiration Seeking Honest Critique
#admiration
Poems about admiration seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
A Bleak Reminder
Just signed on today
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The end of our site expires in 18 days, 18 hours and 56 minutes
Now every time we sign in, our eyes will be drawn to this message
A saddened community awaits for their number one poetry site to be laid to rest
So many talented artists from all over the world, I've met here
Hands down, one of the easiest places to write, communicate and navigate freely from one subject matter to another
There are many "good" poetry sites out there
But nothing comes...
A bleak message in purple at the top of my screen
The end of our site expires in 18 days, 18 hours and 56 minutes
Now every time we sign in, our eyes will be drawn to this message
A saddened community awaits for their number one poetry site to be laid to rest
So many talented artists from all over the world, I've met here
Hands down, one of the easiest places to write, communicate and navigate freely from one subject matter to another
There are many "good" poetry sites out there
But nothing comes...
#admiration
#DeepUndergroundPoetry
#respect
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9 Comments
~the cacti mirror
intensely quintessential
yet gracing in minimalistic
magnetic sanctums
ahh.. what are you..
drawing wholly
as a soulful pull
your-
(mirroring truth
.. prickly thorns in adorn
a natural salt n pepper scape
that I yearn to be in a chaos
of an adsorptive~ absorptive
abrasive immersion
drinking in
your spiced saltish succulence-
an albuminous manna .. with
an eternal nectarine, a holy yellow yolk
in an ecstatically...
yet gracing in minimalistic
magnetic sanctums
ahh.. what are you..
drawing wholly
as a soulful pull
your-
(mirroring truth
.. prickly thorns in adorn
a natural salt n pepper scape
that I yearn to be in a chaos
of an adsorptive~ absorptive
abrasive immersion
drinking in
your spiced saltish succulence-
an albuminous manna .. with
an eternal nectarine, a holy yellow yolk
in an ecstatically...
#admiration
#gratitude
#inspirational #love
#inspirational #love
90 reads
3 Comments
What's a good woman
What’s a good woman
It is no show and tell story or neon vibration of lights of attraction you see or a status caption you pistol Point with your emotionless finger emotion since you can like, but these words are not that button they won’t be like
What’s a good woman, she matters when nothing even matters, she coats herself in her worth of being human, her course is never better or greater or a standard, liken her warmth in her hands with a place that celestial beings hide their insecurities,
she can crown you connect you to her source of eternal love, which is a...
It is no show and tell story or neon vibration of lights of attraction you see or a status caption you pistol Point with your emotionless finger emotion since you can like, but these words are not that button they won’t be like
What’s a good woman, she matters when nothing even matters, she coats herself in her worth of being human, her course is never better or greater or a standard, liken her warmth in her hands with a place that celestial beings hide their insecurities,
she can crown you connect you to her source of eternal love, which is a...
#admiration
#happiness
#kindness
#love
#respect
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0 Comments
Manfestion of thoughts
They say if you can teach one, just imagine teaching a million 👏 NOW that you are a student, I want you to focus your energy, with your ability to manifest your deepest thoughts. Just concentrate your thoughts, as you inhale and exhale slowly and methodically thinking, about what is your true spiritual subconsciousness. FOR sure you have the ability for manfestion of which, you desire to see and behold through your third eye. 👁️ What are you thinking about as you stand upon the still water, beneath your feet, what do you wish for in this hypnotic atmosphere, as this is...
#admiration
#courage
#emotions
#gratitude
#strength
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Spent moon ~ Héloïse
Go back and put
where you once stood
the book on Bluebeard you held
as I hoped you would.
No-bodies else, ever going to care for his dynasty
and not now,
on how it had once a hold on you,
as you once had a hold on me.
How you carry other namesWon’t you stay for tea,
wishes a tri-seminar
on your natural plea,
sign away your limited company.
You can afford the case but not the violin.
so nigh to night; a sconce so big to hold
up a burning tree ...
where you once stood
the book on Bluebeard you held
as I hoped you would.
No-bodies else, ever going to care for his dynasty
and not now,
on how it had once a hold on you,
as you once had a hold on me.
How you carry other namesWon’t you stay for tea,
wishes a tri-seminar
on your natural plea,
sign away your limited company.
You can afford the case but not the violin.
so nigh to night; a sconce so big to hold
up a burning tree ...
#admiration
#dreams
87 reads
7 Comments
It's never good bye
As long as there is life, there is death ☠️ that will follow with silent whispers, of tears ruining down people's faces saying their last good byes. For it's true it's so hard to say goodbye 🫂 to those who, have touched so many lives in so many ways, on different levels of love and support and encouragement. But yet it's a natural thing that happens in life, for sure it's necessary to truly understand that they have gone, to a better place. FOR sure they will never be forgotten, as they will always be loved 😍 in our hearts and minds. For sure death is not what we,...
#admiration
#hope
#kindness
#love
#strength
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Battle Cry
A rebellious heat
Intensified her longing
For his devotion
Shedding all inhibitions
She exhaled her battle cry
Intensified her longing
For his devotion
Shedding all inhibitions
She exhaled her battle cry
#admiration
#seductive
#sensual #tanka
#sensual #tanka
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1 Comment
Nature Speaks Poesy
Nature Speaks Poetry
Flavoured with the softest zephyr, soaked into the finest dew,, served in flowered cup of the time,
spring comes to life again, waddling in the fields, dancing with growing greens bending its shoulder
to nod assent to every willing poet.....i come entranced to bow silently to this celestial eternity,
try to pour my heart, my feelings like a liquid love into honeyed words.
i am enchanted, ever again and more inebriated,,, the perfume souvenirs come alive,
with every daisy blooming; with every beak chirping, with...
Flavoured with the softest zephyr, soaked into the finest dew,, served in flowered cup of the time,
spring comes to life again, waddling in the fields, dancing with growing greens bending its shoulder
to nod assent to every willing poet.....i come entranced to bow silently to this celestial eternity,
try to pour my heart, my feelings like a liquid love into honeyed words.
i am enchanted, ever again and more inebriated,,, the perfume souvenirs come alive,
with every daisy blooming; with every beak chirping, with...
#admiration
#emotions
#happiness #motivational
#happiness #motivational
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4 Comments
Moonlight
Aimlessly, still we seek
Moonlight, that shines
just for two
With the effects, in tune
Alone just me and you
Take a chance, while the night is new
As we, gently move
Assuring thoughts of you
Full my world, lifting up my mood
So just touch, me smooth
Calm me, gently soothe
Let’s wander to, that flame
That’s burning blue.
Star crossed, forbidden
Across the sands of time
Content, consenting
Forever you’ll be mine
Moonlight, that shines
just for two
With the effects, in tune
Alone just me and you
Take a chance, while the night is new
As we, gently move
Assuring thoughts of you
Full my world, lifting up my mood
So just touch, me smooth
Calm me, gently soothe
Let’s wander to, that flame
That’s burning blue.
Star crossed, forbidden
Across the sands of time
Content, consenting
Forever you’ll be mine
#admiration
#love
#passion
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0 Comments
It's always been just us
As we rise upon another day in our lives I lay here besides you, as I admire your skin reflecting from the glow of the morning sun. 🌞 AS you lay still sound asleep, for it's just the stillness I admire as you quietly, breathe still sleeping at peace. For sure it's times like these I have been blessed, to finally find my better half of me, someone who gets me. For I will always appreciate your support and understanding, and your encouragement to continue with the fire that burns deeper than deep in side of my heart ❤️ For sure you have become my strength and energy, and...
#admiration
#kindness
#love
#respect
#TimeHeals
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Wailing Notes And The Quiet Beyond Them
I stretch in crisp air
it’s so sharp it burns
I’m here haunting the grove
sun cutting through trees
in an elegant arc of beautiful
I watch phone-screen-zombies
lurch through the cascade of light
hunkered against the glow
as if it alone provides warmth
locks on the case pop
the first note cries out
the sax’s curves as familiar
as walking
like sex beneath my
calloused fingers
I wait in the preternatural silence
drama in the scattered...
it’s so sharp it burns
I’m here haunting the grove
sun cutting through trees
in an elegant arc of beautiful
I watch phone-screen-zombies
lurch through the cascade of light
hunkered against the glow
as if it alone provides warmth
locks on the case pop
the first note cries out
the sax’s curves as familiar
as walking
like sex beneath my
calloused fingers
I wait in the preternatural silence
drama in the scattered...
#admiration
#beauty
#crush
148 reads
6 Comments
The flight of love
They say that we all will have to learn how much our love truly matters, to us in ways that will shake us to very core of our soul. But yet it's important to remember that it's hard enough, to find that someone who gets us in ways that we can never, forget about the real deepness of the truth of our life and love. For sure we will have some disagreements and agreements, as this is life only to test your strength and perseverance. To the truth of how much you and I need and want, each other to inspire us and complete, us as one flame 🔥 that was meant to be together. as a flight...
#admiration
#happiness
#kindness
#love
#respect
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