Poems About Admiration Seeking Honest Critique
#admiration
Poems about admiration seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Midnite's Scent
O Marri’onne, ethereal wraith,
whose name drifts soft upon my brine-kissed lips,
you linger yet in the twilight of my being,
an echo folded into the shroud of the waves.
I, Kai of the abyssal depths, born of the sea’s mournful hymn,
sing now to you, my love, my ruin,
to the memory that binds me still,
to the scent of midnight where you once walked the shores.
Beneath the obsidian dome of a moonless sky,
I dwell, a shade tethered to salt-stung tides.
The sea, my cradle, my captor, whispers your name,
a dirge woven in threads of foam...
whose name drifts soft upon my brine-kissed lips,
you linger yet in the twilight of my being,
an echo folded into the shroud of the waves.
I, Kai of the abyssal depths, born of the sea’s mournful hymn,
sing now to you, my love, my ruin,
to the memory that binds me still,
to the scent of midnight where you once walked the shores.
Beneath the obsidian dome of a moonless sky,
I dwell, a shade tethered to salt-stung tides.
The sea, my cradle, my captor, whispers your name,
a dirge woven in threads of foam...
#admiration
#gratitude
#happiness
#kindness
#love
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Third Eye
Closing my eyes so I can feel your presence
Unseeing…
So I can focus on your inner beauty
Removing the distraction of your
Outer excellence
Is
Allowing me to
Exist in your existence
My heart sees
What my eyes won’t allow me to see beyond
I need to appreciate your beauty
In all forms
Not just physically
I
Struggle to disassociate
Love from Lust
Passion from Poetry
Desire from Desirable
If I was blind
I could read your...
Unseeing…
So I can focus on your inner beauty
Removing the distraction of your
Outer excellence
Is
Allowing me to
Exist in your existence
My heart sees
What my eyes won’t allow me to see beyond
I need to appreciate your beauty
In all forms
Not just physically
I
Struggle to disassociate
Love from Lust
Passion from Poetry
Desire from Desirable
If I was blind
I could read your...
#admiration
#gratitude
#honesty
#love
#respect
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My Muse of Poetry
Not all the worlds belong to me
Not all the words set me free
What the heart loves
is of will
I just free some words
to confine its spill.
****
A time, my words
on my papers sashaying
the shape to me alluring
the tone of their steps
I hear
as they are dancing
the music they are following
the soul, in a trance, just listens
without interfering.
****
A time, along with my Muse
we keep to each other
our hearts baring
secrets sharing
silently, knowingly connecting.. ...
Not all the words set me free
What the heart loves
is of will
I just free some words
to confine its spill.
****
A time, my words
on my papers sashaying
the shape to me alluring
the tone of their steps
I hear
as they are dancing
the music they are following
the soul, in a trance, just listens
without interfering.
****
A time, along with my Muse
we keep to each other
our hearts baring
secrets sharing
silently, knowingly connecting.. ...
#admiration
#emotions
#LifeAsAWriter
#MyInspiration
#WritingPoetry
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The Sparrow
The bird camouflaged in the dust
unremarkable dun, though very bold
throws back his head
then out pours liquid gold
unremarkable dun, though very bold
throws back his head
then out pours liquid gold
#admiration
#happiness
#respect
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Song to Aioue
#admiration
#beauty
#ForbiddenLove #shadows
#ForbiddenLove #shadows
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.Meet me tonight
For it's been three years married and 11 years since we met 💕 Meet me in the garden of roses 🌹 SURROUNDED by the power of God's love, with the rosary flowers that you and I planted together. One day upon a starry night with it's perfect night of the aroma scents. THAT blows and comes out with the whispers and sounds of the birds in the tree of life. For your present is much needed to make this happen between you and I, as we shall forever remember the time ⌚of our lives. Just you and I alone in the night vibes expressing, the deepness of the love and happiness and the...
#admiration
#gratitude
#happiness
#love
#respect
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Through this life
They elders say that through this one life, that you will have encounters that we may never truly understand. FOR each one will be different, than the one before it 🤔 For sure each one will have lessons, that we must learn to navigate through the next, chapter of our lives. FOR nothing in particular in life comes easy 🤨 as it will have challenges that could make you or break you, down to the point of just giving up to fight against the deepness, of that damage of the truth of your heart and spiritual soul.🙏 Your own health of your will being or it could be your mistake...
#admiration
#forgiveness
#gratitude
#kindness
#love
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Great Catch! (Lapping it up)
What a great catch,
As you fall into my lap!
It could be a trap,
But I ain't takin' that!
You're a great match,
A really amazing snatch.
Forget about that nap,
Till I've read you like a map!
We're on the right track,
Takin' up the slack,
Never goin' back -
Filling that sweet crack!
As you fall into my lap!
It could be a trap,
But I ain't takin' that!
You're a great match,
A really amazing snatch.
Forget about that nap,
Till I've read you like a map!
We're on the right track,
Takin' up the slack,
Never goin' back -
Filling that sweet crack!
#admiration
#lust
#seductive
#temptation
#romantic
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My Vulnerability I Share
I learn
No war against time and age to wage
No end of time rather many a stage
Just keep the flow of what is mundane and sage..
I learn
Not to fly high with rapture not to yield to rage
Not to erase all that is written on my page
Just embrace the tides of life and the swings of age..
I learn
No reason to theorise or advise
All the hearts and minds seem to be wise
Just my very aims and aspirations revise..
I learn
To early rise and wear of sunshine a ray
Thank God in words, deeds and pray
For...
No war against time and age to wage
No end of time rather many a stage
Just keep the flow of what is mundane and sage..
I learn
Not to fly high with rapture not to yield to rage
Not to erase all that is written on my page
Just embrace the tides of life and the swings of age..
I learn
No reason to theorise or advise
All the hearts and minds seem to be wise
Just my very aims and aspirations revise..
I learn
To early rise and wear of sunshine a ray
Thank God in words, deeds and pray
For...
#admiration
#gratitude
#learning
#love
#PersonalGrowth
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SHALL I COMPARE THEE....
Shall I compare thee to a summer's day,
if it moves you to lead me to the hay,
warmed by the waters of the flattery
poured out over your physical beauty -
or will you be the unmoved ice maiden
who insists on keeping your knickers on?
if it moves you to lead me to the hay,
warmed by the waters of the flattery
poured out over your physical beauty -
or will you be the unmoved ice maiden
who insists on keeping your knickers on?
#admiration
#beauty
#love
#relationships
#romantic
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Recognition into another life
It is a blessing to be able to share my life with you, 🤩 for sure you have been the very glue that held us together. AS we exchange thoughts and prayers in our lives. 💞 FOR that reason I grown to learn how much more, that you mean to me as a woman a friend and my better half.♀️ For sure we had our share of ups and downs but yet, that's what made us to be more stronger, than we've ever been in this relationship. 🥰 For as we become more than just friends, we became more than that to one another, through our time ⌚ yes together with patience and...
#admiration
#courage
#hope
#respect
#strength
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I am the conundrum
I am the conundrum
Facing the truth
While wondering
what we have here
More than nothing
I know that
Surely you feel the same
look at what we have here
It’s like saying you love someone
When you really don’t
And you leave it at that
goddamn
I am the conundrum
Fucking leave me
Or love me, but
You do you
goddamn
Where am I
Where you are
Leaves me falling right into
Your arms again.
…shit.
Facing the truth
While wondering
what we have here
More than nothing
I know that
Surely you feel the same
look at what we have here
It’s like saying you love someone
When you really don’t
And you leave it at that
goddamn
I am the conundrum
Fucking leave me
Or love me, but
You do you
goddamn
Where am I
Where you are
Leaves me falling right into
Your arms again.
…shit.
#admiration
#apathy
#confusion
#despair
#support
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