Poems About Admiration Seeking Honest Critique
#admiration
Poems about admiration seeking honest critique. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Spring On March
On march flowers incense the air
daisies create a fine poetic flair
and with ease, Nature will please
the fair time, for a vernal breeze
It is spring;the souls glean joy
while Juliets, look redly coy
their Romeos swell with love
serenade songs to their doves
Like birds, bees spin around
drones give tempting sound
in the flowering sunny orchard
grapes hung heavy, in vines
I take a light stroll uphill
faint wind seems just still
with whiff from the west
when lights fade in sunset
And March is...
daisies create a fine poetic flair
and with ease, Nature will please
the fair time, for a vernal breeze
It is spring;the souls glean joy
while Juliets, look redly coy
their Romeos swell with love
serenade songs to their doves
Like birds, bees spin around
drones give tempting sound
in the flowering sunny orchard
grapes hung heavy, in vines
I take a light stroll uphill
faint wind seems just still
with whiff from the west
when lights fade in sunset
And March is...
#kindness
#motivational
#inspirational
#admiration
#emotions
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Grocery Shopping
I’m hosting a new life within me and so it surprises me when men look approvingly at my swollen shape. This happened on Saturday while I was at the grocery store.
As I strolled down the aisle of the grocery store, I noticed a man eyeing me intently. His gaze lingered a little longer than usual, and I could feel his admiration from across the produce section.
I felt him coming closer and he said, "Excuse me, miss. I hope you don't mind me saying, but you look absolutely radiant."
I smiled politely, feeling a mix of discomfort at stately tone and...
As I strolled down the aisle of the grocery store, I noticed a man eyeing me intently. His gaze lingered a little longer than usual, and I could feel his admiration from across the produce section.
I felt him coming closer and he said, "Excuse me, miss. I hope you don't mind me saying, but you look absolutely radiant."
I smiled politely, feeling a mix of discomfort at stately tone and...
#admiration
#pregnancy
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for J.C. ( not Jesus Christ)
you grew up a good
Catholic boy
Mass, communion,
the rosary, the Virgin
Mary on Sundays
but your love of all
those holy sacraments
and saints changed when
you found dope could
fuck you better than any
high school cheerleader
and your words curled up from
the page like smoke from
a junkies cigarette
from sports to addict
to prose to poetry to
rock star
I watched a YouTube
of you reciting your
poems at St....
Catholic boy
Mass, communion,
the rosary, the Virgin
Mary on Sundays
but your love of all
those holy sacraments
and saints changed when
you found dope could
fuck you better than any
high school cheerleader
and your words curled up from
the page like smoke from
a junkies cigarette
from sports to addict
to prose to poetry to
rock star
I watched a YouTube
of you reciting your
poems at St....
#gratitude
#admiration
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7 Comments
hay fever
wish I could have invited noel coward
to dinner, but not
knowing him
he’d have probably declined
to dinner, but not
knowing him
he’d have probably declined
#admiration
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1 Comment
Come Live In The Countryside
come live in the countryside
Come live in the countryside
and sip the milk of the goat
in the clean pastures they graze
a fresh meat, and a shiny coat
Come breathe the dewy herb
the clean morning's purest time
such balm nothing may curb
the best poetry needs no rhyme
Come and cuddle a milch cow
udders hanging low with milk
too much to feed a whole town
and gives a soft skin like silk
Come with an empty pen in hand
no worry if you lack the skill ...
Come live in the countryside
and sip the milk of the goat
in the clean pastures they graze
a fresh meat, and a shiny coat
Come breathe the dewy herb
the clean morning's purest time
such balm nothing may curb
the best poetry needs no rhyme
Come and cuddle a milch cow
udders hanging low with milk
too much to feed a whole town
and gives a soft skin like silk
Come with an empty pen in hand
no worry if you lack the skill ...
#happiness
#motivational
#gratitude
#admiration
#emotions
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6 Comments
We Are the Beauty, We Are the Earth
I know women of worth
the name of human they earn
gems conceived in their fertile earth
how for their company souls yearn!
I know women of wisdom
human beings of character and spirit
for each, home is a kingdom
a wealth of beauty to inherit.
I know women of grace
the divine gift not just a feminity
It’s the merit to belong to human race
Love and compassion, their natural affinity.
I know women of endurance
exhaustion and pain ignored
their strength inspiring assurance
ever giving more...
the name of human they earn
gems conceived in their fertile earth
how for their company souls yearn!
I know women of wisdom
human beings of character and spirit
for each, home is a kingdom
a wealth of beauty to inherit.
I know women of grace
the divine gift not just a feminity
It’s the merit to belong to human race
Love and compassion, their natural affinity.
I know women of endurance
exhaustion and pain ignored
their strength inspiring assurance
ever giving more...
#women
#humankind
#WritingPoetry #admiration
#WritingPoetry #admiration
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MY BLOSSOMING HEART
Your soft arms sweetly hold it
And strong hands gently mold it
You've taken it from very lonely
To make it your one and only
Beating faster with each touch
Its thumping now, so very much.
So very more than it has ever been
You have brought it to life again
Bringing the rhythm back slowly
Like a planted seed you grow me.
Into a flower that is in full bloom
Out from my darkened ugly doom
Is now gone and proudly showing
The love inside that keeps growing
All from your tender loving care
Now I'm giving with much to share....
And strong hands gently mold it
You've taken it from very lonely
To make it your one and only
Beating faster with each touch
Its thumping now, so very much.
So very more than it has ever been
You have brought it to life again
Bringing the rhythm back slowly
Like a planted seed you grow me.
Into a flower that is in full bloom
Out from my darkened ugly doom
Is now gone and proudly showing
The love inside that keeps growing
All from your tender loving care
Now I'm giving with much to share....
#happiness
#kindness
#gratitude
#admiration
#emotions
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Of Empathy And Authenticity You Stand As A Beacon
What is to be a teacher like?
Is it to learn by heart the golden rules
use the most recent methods and tools
Lesson plans devise
constructive feedbacks provide
or on subject matters have to so much know
adapt teaching theories to have minds grow
Would all that simply suffice
to knowledge and values impart
mentor minds
hug hearts
to goals guide
and of teaching make an art
Of amazing special teachers I know one
her inner Beauty for me second to none
Mrs Jaoued, my teacher, Madam, my Lady
You I admire for...
Is it to learn by heart the golden rules
use the most recent methods and tools
Lesson plans devise
constructive feedbacks provide
or on subject matters have to so much know
adapt teaching theories to have minds grow
Would all that simply suffice
to knowledge and values impart
mentor minds
hug hearts
to goals guide
and of teaching make an art
Of amazing special teachers I know one
her inner Beauty for me second to none
Mrs Jaoued, my teacher, Madam, my Lady
You I admire for...
#school
#humankind
#WritingPoetry
#gratitude
#admiration
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A DANCING HEART
It started with our laughter
That danced inside our heart
We knew we’d become one
Right from the very start
Many years have passed us by
With changes quite a few
Those years have never changed
The deep love we felt so true
Our path hasn't always been easy
At times both have had our fill
But find our heart and look inside
The laughters dancing still…..
That danced inside our heart
We knew we’d become one
Right from the very start
Many years have passed us by
With changes quite a few
Those years have never changed
The deep love we felt so true
Our path hasn't always been easy
At times both have had our fill
But find our heart and look inside
The laughters dancing still…..
#happiness
#love
#gratitude #admiration
#gratitude #admiration
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William Windsor: the bone idle racist, white supremacist and quite witless heir!
By Stanley Collymore
Essentially, William is just as work
shy, bone idle but undoubtedly
self-entitled, as the rest of
them. Quite so in fact, that it wouldn't
surprise me in the least, if this simply
discernibly inured white supremacist
racist, essentially thinks that manual
labour is distinctly obviously, literally
undoubtedly, an immigrant to Britain
Spanish waiter. My natural solution?
Make him monarch; and effortlessly
sit back, as the Republicans then do
their thing; as they essentially did in
1649, with...
Essentially, William is just as work
shy, bone idle but undoubtedly
self-entitled, as the rest of
them. Quite so in fact, that it wouldn't
surprise me in the least, if this simply
discernibly inured white supremacist
racist, essentially thinks that manual
labour is distinctly obviously, literally
undoubtedly, an immigrant to Britain
Spanish waiter. My natural solution?
Make him monarch; and effortlessly
sit back, as the Republicans then do
their thing; as they essentially did in
1649, with...
#motivational
#inspirational
#gratitude
#redemption
#admiration
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0 Comments
From Nature With Love
i was never fated to rot inside the book
rather would i stroll in the fields of wheat
golden seas swaying in the warm Summer's heat.
sailing the fields with cicada and silent brooks
nor the one gaping into an empty void
time is poesy gleaned from far afield
or even crying out my pains on inky sheet
wasting health, glued by a silver shield
i have known Pan, crook, and so many a hook
and yellow books, decked with fine history
fairy tales, tailed with the fairest endings
and sad stories, starting with romantic...
rather would i stroll in the fields of wheat
golden seas swaying in the warm Summer's heat.
sailing the fields with cicada and silent brooks
nor the one gaping into an empty void
time is poesy gleaned from far afield
or even crying out my pains on inky sheet
wasting health, glued by a silver shield
i have known Pan, crook, and so many a hook
and yellow books, decked with fine history
fairy tales, tailed with the fairest endings
and sad stories, starting with romantic...
#kindness
#strength
#hope
#admiration
#emotions
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7 Comments
YOU MAKE ME FEEL BEAUTIFUL
My naked soul, within my naked flesh,
I am a symphony of contradictions,
A tapestry of scars, hopes, and dreams,
A kaleidoscope of all emotions.
This enchanting dance of light and shadow,
I am both vulnerable and strong,
Both fully exposed and yet protected.
My naked soul yearns for connection,
For you, my lover who sees me whole,
In our friendship, that accepts my flaws.
My naked flesh aches only your touch,
The tenderness of your silken smooth skin,
For the warmth of your...
I am a symphony of contradictions,
A tapestry of scars, hopes, and dreams,
A kaleidoscope of all emotions.
This enchanting dance of light and shadow,
I am both vulnerable and strong,
Both fully exposed and yet protected.
My naked soul yearns for connection,
For you, my lover who sees me whole,
In our friendship, that accepts my flaws.
My naked flesh aches only your touch,
The tenderness of your silken smooth skin,
For the warmth of your...
#happiness
#love
#gratitude #admiration
#gratitude #admiration
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