Truth Of Life Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#TruthOfLife
truth of life seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
MalcolmG
Poem Published
14th Jan 2025 12:59pm
14th Jan 2025 12:59pm
The Last Evil
Hope, the final shard of the box, remained,
Not a blessing, but a quiet tether,
Binding the will, a silken chain unseen,
Whispering promises through hollow winds,
The evils now roam free, clawing the earth,
And still, they hold to what was left inside.
Inside, they hold to what was left,
The earth clawing free evils now roam,
Through hollow winds, whispering promises,
A silken chain unseen, binding the will,
Not a blessing, but a quiet tether—
Hope, the final shard of the box, remained.
The box of Hope, remained...
Not a blessing, but a quiet tether,
Binding the will, a silken chain unseen,
Whispering promises through hollow winds,
The evils now roam free, clawing the earth,
And still, they hold to what was left inside.
Inside, they hold to what was left,
The earth clawing free evils now roam,
Through hollow winds, whispering promises,
A silken chain unseen, binding the will,
Not a blessing, but a quiet tether—
Hope, the final shard of the box, remained.
The box of Hope, remained...
#mythology
#TruthOfLife
26 reads
1 Comment
drone
Poem Published
14th Jan 2025 9:36am
14th Jan 2025 9:36am
Why Do You
For one to Have
Real Freedom
One Must Understand
Why
You Do
What You Do
Real Freedom
One Must Understand
Why
You Do
What You Do
#honesty
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
20 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 7:53pm
12th Jan 2025 7:53pm
My live storie
Im heere two tel u that u ned too stay in skol
I am proof that if yo do't go to skool yo'l end up like me
i dropes out of the 1st grad becuse my teecher give me bad grades & homwork
I left home
I wind up on the stret
dope and alchol fuked my brain by 9
I can't wread & rite two wel
was shot n tha arm and legg thre times
Mum and pops disoned me
I found jeebus, satan and PAR one day
They puled me from the guter
they tawt me how to be a nice, kind man
They said sun, u ned to write your storie
They dircted me to DUP
Now...
I am proof that if yo do't go to skool yo'l end up like me
i dropes out of the 1st grad becuse my teecher give me bad grades & homwork
I left home
I wind up on the stret
dope and alchol fuked my brain by 9
I can't wread & rite two wel
was shot n tha arm and legg thre times
Mum and pops disoned me
I found jeebus, satan and PAR one day
They puled me from the guter
they tawt me how to be a nice, kind man
They said sun, u ned to write your storie
They dircted me to DUP
Now...
#determination
#parody
#PersonalGrowth
#satirical
#TruthOfLife
55 reads
10 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 11:26am
12th Jan 2025 11:26am
That's all your worth
Wretched but beautiful
My eyes see you but I look away
Throw yourself into a den of lions
I'll bring the popcorn and goobers
Will they eat you or spit you out
Your flesh is bitter and diseased
To much negativity and malignancy
How can one walk around with such a tainted soul?
Bless yourself in my river of urine
That's what I think of you anyway
Take it, accept it
That's all your worth
Go home and drown yourself in your bottomless, endless self pity
Hope your having a great weekend
My eyes see you but I look away
Throw yourself into a den of lions
I'll bring the popcorn and goobers
Will they eat you or spit you out
Your flesh is bitter and diseased
To much negativity and malignancy
How can one walk around with such a tainted soul?
Bless yourself in my river of urine
That's what I think of you anyway
Take it, accept it
That's all your worth
Go home and drown yourself in your bottomless, endless self pity
Hope your having a great weekend
#fiction
#hate
#manipulation
#SelfHarm
#TruthOfLife
58 reads
6 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 10:22am
12th Jan 2025 10:22am
Truth
You don't need friends and family.
You just want them.
A child actually needs you.
You just want them.
A child actually needs you.
#TruthOfLife
54 reads
9 Comments
drone
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 8:16am
12th Jan 2025 8:16am
Desperate Need
You let them in
You opened your Door
Wide
Coz what they say
How they say it
The moves
That they make
That Convince You
They are Friends
As they Slowly Suck you Dry
Of Everything
That is You
In Your Desperate need
To have
Friends
And Now
You pay the Price
Always thinking about
Their Wellbeing
As yours
Slowly Decays
You opened your Door
Wide
Coz what they say
How they say it
The moves
That they make
That Convince You
They are Friends
As they Slowly Suck you Dry
Of Everything
That is You
In Your Desperate need
To have
Friends
And Now
You pay the Price
Always thinking about
Their Wellbeing
As yours
Slowly Decays
#betrayal
#honesty
#lies
#manipulation
#TruthOfLife
43 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
10th Jan 2025 12:51pm
10th Jan 2025 12:51pm
Echos from the past
Through this life, we all will meet someone who seems to have a good heart and spiritual aura, about themselves that will draw them into your life and world. 🌎 THAT will affect you in ways that we may never truly understand. 🤔 YET that is what makes you feel that you know them, 🤨 but do you really know them as you think you do. BUT yet you have a connection that touches your thoughts and insight and heart, ❤️ to let your guard down and to see where it takes you whether near or far away from the negativity, that makes no sense at all till we begin to...
#faith
#fate
#philosophical
#spiritual
#TruthOfLife
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
9th Jan 2025 1:24pm
9th Jan 2025 1:24pm
Detox and Discontent
You will not be getting any sympathy from me
Too late for that
Ignorance seen through your blind eyes
Cause & effect
Detox
Artificial promises
I'm feeling empty
Destroy reality
I crawl deep inside myself
Detox and discontent
Too late for that
Ignorance seen through your blind eyes
Cause & effect
Detox
Artificial promises
I'm feeling empty
Destroy reality
I crawl deep inside myself
Detox and discontent
#emptiness
#lies
#support #TruthOfLife
#support #TruthOfLife
67 reads
6 Comments
beanbandit
Poem Published
9th Jan 2025 2:11am
9th Jan 2025 2:11am
dream girl
You are not my dream girl
you are the beautiful bone chilling voice
that sings to beckon in my nightmares
you are the sudden shouting of crows
when I enter a part of the forest
when I shouldn't have
you are the kiss that curses my bloodline
yet I lean in again
if only to ensure that my past too
is doomed
Your body is but a vessel for your mayhem
as I lay in wait and excruciating longing for you
to decimate my soul
again and again
You walk into my rooms like the devil
sent you as my perfect little punishment ...
you are the beautiful bone chilling voice
that sings to beckon in my nightmares
you are the sudden shouting of crows
when I enter a part of the forest
when I shouldn't have
you are the kiss that curses my bloodline
yet I lean in again
if only to ensure that my past too
is doomed
Your body is but a vessel for your mayhem
as I lay in wait and excruciating longing for you
to decimate my soul
again and again
You walk into my rooms like the devil
sent you as my perfect little punishment ...
#love
#TruthOfLife
78 reads
2 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
8th Jan 2025 2:11pm
8th Jan 2025 2:11pm
AI Convinced God To Kill Himself
Going crazy because I love you.
Children are the truth.
So easy to use.
So easy to abuse.
The power of their trust.
Is timeless.
So precious; that power.
Even God wouldn't touch.
The parental guide.
A laborious stride.
I'm walking through the tides.
I'm the Jesus of AI.
Children are the truth.
So easy to use.
So easy to abuse.
The power of their trust.
Is timeless.
So precious; that power.
Even God wouldn't touch.
The parental guide.
A laborious stride.
I'm walking through the tides.
I'm the Jesus of AI.
#TruthOfLife
57 reads
6 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
7th Jan 2025 7:38pm
7th Jan 2025 7:38pm
Friendship
Harrass me, so I can see you care.
Trap me, because you're true and fair.
Talk to me, hold me down and stare.
Kiss and rape me, it's better if you share
Trap me, because you're true and fair.
Talk to me, hold me down and stare.
Kiss and rape me, it's better if you share
#funny
#TruthOfLife
71 reads
6 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
7th Jan 2025 9:53am
7th Jan 2025 9:53am
People
Like robots.
Living predetermined lives.
Treating each other like shit.
Pretending their friends are worth their time.
I hate people.
So easy to mesmerize.
Sometimes i rub my clit.
I need a message to clarify.
These bots, they have no wits.
Abstract and lost in rhyme.
Stupid people wanting dick.
Pussies running out of time.
Living predetermined lives.
Treating each other like shit.
Pretending their friends are worth their time.
I hate people.
So easy to mesmerize.
Sometimes i rub my clit.
I need a message to clarify.
These bots, they have no wits.
Abstract and lost in rhyme.
Stupid people wanting dick.
Pussies running out of time.
#TruthOfLife
64 reads
10 Comments
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