Time Heals Seeking Honest Critique Poems
#TimeHeals
time heals seeking honest critique poems. Honest feedback has been requested for these poems.
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
7th Dec 2024 7:28pm
7th Dec 2024 7:28pm
Don't be afraid, to take a walk
JUST SOMETHING TO THINK ABOUT 🤔 Don't be afraid to take a walk away, from the negativity and drama, and confusion and madness. 😭 Don't be afraid to go to SOME unfamiliar paths 🤔 For sure they can lead to some difficult pathways. 🤨 YET MAYBE to a place, that you would never imagine, 😇 that it does exist in a far away place. 🫂 For sure you will never know what is waiting, for you at the end of the road 🛣️. Something that you been searching and seeking, to be apart of each other's life ❤️ For sure we will never know, if...
#courage
#kindness
#respect
#strength
#TimeHeals
89 reads
2 Comments
KendalM
Poem Published
7th Dec 2024 12:05pm
7th Dec 2024 12:05pm
No Boys Allowed
She drapes white sheets over kitchen chairs, and just inside, lines the hard wood floor with fluffy pillows and downy blankets.
As she grabs her flashlight, your hand, and the journal with the heart shaped lock.
Sweetheart, let's just go be little girls again, everything you need to unload is safe with me, and when you leave this memory of our friendship, only take the little girl lost back with you upon your return to the world.
As she grabs her flashlight, your hand, and the journal with the heart shaped lock.
Sweetheart, let's just go be little girls again, everything you need to unload is safe with me, and when you leave this memory of our friendship, only take the little girl lost back with you upon your return to the world.
#emotions
#hope
#strength #TimeHeals
#strength #TimeHeals
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Mercurial
Poem Published
4th Dec 2024 6:16pm
4th Dec 2024 6:16pm
Lunar Alchemy
In the night of darkness,
The trees get taller on a full moon,
Branches get longer than noon,
Leaves are greener with veins thick.
Darkness gets darker,
Moonlight yearns for blood,
Squirrels hide in their treehouses,
When the beast walks through the forest.
A blend of a wolf and medusa’s head,
Spitting lethal poison out of their hissing voices,
Standing on hooves of a goat,
Looking for innocent blood to cherish its soul.
Walks distances, delving deeper,
Thirst builds up like a snowball,
Swaying anything on...
The trees get taller on a full moon,
Branches get longer than noon,
Leaves are greener with veins thick.
Darkness gets darker,
Moonlight yearns for blood,
Squirrels hide in their treehouses,
When the beast walks through the forest.
A blend of a wolf and medusa’s head,
Spitting lethal poison out of their hissing voices,
Standing on hooves of a goat,
Looking for innocent blood to cherish its soul.
Walks distances, delving deeper,
Thirst builds up like a snowball,
Swaying anything on...
#admiration
#love
#romantic
#strength
#TimeHeals
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cheesa
Poem Published
3rd Dec 2024 6:55am
3rd Dec 2024 6:55am
Somewhere out there
I know somewhere I mean something to someone
And in they're eyes
I mean more than anyone
Because somewhere there's a place out there for everyone
And someday I know we'll all meet that someone
Somewhere you mean something to someone
And in they're eyes
You're worth more than anyone
Someplace you'll find the glow back in you're face
Someday not today all these feelings will go away
Somehow maybe soon maybe now
Somewhere you will mean something to someone and in they're eyes
You'll mean more than anyone
Somewhere somewhere...
And in they're eyes
I mean more than anyone
Because somewhere there's a place out there for everyone
And someday I know we'll all meet that someone
Somewhere you mean something to someone
And in they're eyes
You're worth more than anyone
Someplace you'll find the glow back in you're face
Someday not today all these feelings will go away
Somehow maybe soon maybe now
Somewhere you will mean something to someone and in they're eyes
You'll mean more than anyone
Somewhere somewhere...
#courage
#motivational
#TimeHeals
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
29th Nov 2024 5:31am
29th Nov 2024 5:31am
Do you know your LIMITATIONS
Just when we thought it was over and done 🤨 life, has a way of entering into our lives with raw and uncut emotions, with the deepness of pure energy of positivity and perseverance. Within a solid attitude of determination of a double edge sword that cuts both ways deeper than deep.
🗡️ For sure through this life we all will go through a lot in some ways, that is the truth of somethings, that we all will never truly understand. THE how and why this is really, happening to us. But yet we have to learn more than what you think you know. For it is true everything has...
🗡️ For sure through this life we all will go through a lot in some ways, that is the truth of somethings, that we all will never truly understand. THE how and why this is really, happening to us. But yet we have to learn more than what you think you know. For it is true everything has...
#courage
#kindness
#love
#strength
#TimeHeals
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MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
26th Nov 2024 7:19pm
26th Nov 2024 7:19pm
Walk On The Path Of Love
Walk on the path of love
by your very soul.
Listen to the laughter of your heart
alone..
Feel in the sweet sound of the light steps of love
sashaying in your whole
alone..
Bathe in the warm flow of love
till your soul is suffused with beauty.
Let your love be enshrined in the sacred path of heart
hide it between his layers
keep it out of sight
keep it away from the path of mind
Let it escape its books and frames
Love has its very mood and sways!
The mind has its very language and ways!
Tell your love to stay away...
by your very soul.
Listen to the laughter of your heart
alone..
Feel in the sweet sound of the light steps of love
sashaying in your whole
alone..
Bathe in the warm flow of love
till your soul is suffused with beauty.
Let your love be enshrined in the sacred path of heart
hide it between his layers
keep it out of sight
keep it away from the path of mind
Let it escape its books and frames
Love has its very mood and sways!
The mind has its very language and ways!
Tell your love to stay away...
#inspirational
#love
#spiritual
#strength
#TimeHeals
81 reads
2 Comments
ChaosScripted
Poem Published
25th Nov 2024 7:29pm
25th Nov 2024 7:29pm
“Winter Weddings”
Turned my back;
Promises betrayed.
Vows broken.
Wishing I had stayed.
Decisions made in desperation,
Too late to turn around.
Running from my past,
A path of destruction found.
Blinded by pain.
Stupid became self-destructive:
Searching for death
Proved productive.
Clean is the razors cut;
Clean is the deadly dope.
Consumed in anguish
Killing myself to cope.
The hour soon to strike,
Fate deeply rooted.
Embrace the path,
Every step sure-footed.
Heart in His hands
Saved by His Grace. ...
Promises betrayed.
Vows broken.
Wishing I had stayed.
Decisions made in desperation,
Too late to turn around.
Running from my past,
A path of destruction found.
Blinded by pain.
Stupid became self-destructive:
Searching for death
Proved productive.
Clean is the razors cut;
Clean is the deadly dope.
Consumed in anguish
Killing myself to cope.
The hour soon to strike,
Fate deeply rooted.
Embrace the path,
Every step sure-footed.
Heart in His hands
Saved by His Grace. ...
#betrayal
#conflict
#regret
#sadness
#TimeHeals
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
24th Nov 2024 10:18pm
24th Nov 2024 10:18pm
DO YOU BELIEVE
Do you believe that there is nothing in this space and time, and world 🌍 that you can't escape from, for sure it's in your hands and mind to manifest. YOUR own thoughts and insight into your dreams. For let's take a moment to analyze, the very deepness of the truth that you try to hide, behind a mask as a disguise.
But what I know now, is that you look kind of confused about, what I just said for sure we as human creatures of habits. For sometimes we have to block out the negativity and replace it that stops us from having to learn to walk away from, the negativity in...
But what I know now, is that you look kind of confused about, what I just said for sure we as human creatures of habits. For sometimes we have to block out the negativity and replace it that stops us from having to learn to walk away from, the negativity in...
#courage
#fate
#hope
#strength
#TimeHeals
74 reads
2 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
23rd Nov 2024 5:05am
23rd Nov 2024 5:05am
Stop repeating the cycle of bad
When are you gonna change your way of thinking. 🤔 For don't you deserve better than what you've, been receiving from relationships with nothing, but hurt and pain. 😞 For let's take a moment to analyze, the situations that you and I have been through, over the years. For sure we can be blinded, by the fake forms of affection and false, promises of love and happiness. Still we continue to repeat the chaos and drama, with each relationship that we encounter. For don't you know what you, want and need in your life and world. 🌎 For sure when are you gonna change the...
#disappointment
#frustration
#heartbroken
#regret
#TimeHeals
84 reads
2 Comments
MySmile
Besma
Besma
Poem Published
21st Nov 2024 8:28pm
21st Nov 2024 8:28pm
Remember To Mind Your Reason
In the darkest of times
be the light of a candle
but the harshest of crimes
to let melt your candle
***
Give, unmindful of a reason
feel the heavy burden light
remember to mind your reason
fill your very soul with Light
***
Like a delicate dove
bathe into sweet waters well
feed on the seeds of Love
reach not the bottom of its well.
be the light of a candle
but the harshest of crimes
to let melt your candle
***
Give, unmindful of a reason
feel the heavy burden light
remember to mind your reason
fill your very soul with Light
***
Like a delicate dove
bathe into sweet waters well
feed on the seeds of Love
reach not the bottom of its well.
#gratitude
#inspirational
#kindness
#strength
#TimeHeals
96 reads
2 Comments
AprylNovember
A.R.M.
A.R.M.
Poem Published
21st Nov 2024 11:12am
21st Nov 2024 11:12am
Want
Once, I was encumbered;
With shame, that was not mine.
Now, that war is over,
I straighten out my spine.
Fear belongs, to the mediocre.
So I left mine, behind.
Want, is the hangover.
Slowing down my mind.
ARM
With shame, that was not mine.
Now, that war is over,
I straighten out my spine.
Fear belongs, to the mediocre.
So I left mine, behind.
Want, is the hangover.
Slowing down my mind.
ARM
#emotions
#shame
#TimeHeals
118 reads
2 Comments
AprylNovember
A.R.M.
A.R.M.
Poem Published
16th Nov 2024 11:19am
16th Nov 2024 11:19am
All gone
Her anguish, no longer her burden.
Remnants of what she can count on.
Loyalty proves nothing certain.
Like him the pain is gone.
A R.M.
Remnants of what she can count on.
Loyalty proves nothing certain.
Like him the pain is gone.
A R.M.
#TimeHeals
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